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Old 06-14-2011, 04:17 PM   #1
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I made this for my English Final in school, But I'm really proud of it, So I'll post it here. It's from Sebastians point of view.


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I, Sebastian Michaelis, am here to serve my master
You See, I am the "Black Butler"
For no one serves my Master Faster
Because I'm one hell of a Butler

My Master Phantomhive, Ciel
I'll make him a dessert with a hint of pine
He accepted the demon's deal
When he's dead, his soul shall be mine

May master be happy with Lizzy
May he be happy until that faithful day
Master and Lizzy shall dance until they're dizzy
May my Master be happy until that dark day

My Master must be served now
Until the contract is broken
I won't exit without a graceful bow
Until his orders to me have been spoken

Master's Dessert today shall be Creme Brulet
I shall stand by his side forever
I am in the Phantomhive Estate to stay
Let my Master be hurt, I can never

I'm one hell of a Butler, you see
I'll protect Ciel with my life neverending
I serve the Lone Phantomhive with Glee
The end of his life still pending

In this world, I have many names
A Devil, A Demon, A Spirit, and more
I'll always love a good old game
Now let me tell you of the Phantomhive lore

The tragedy occured three years back
The Phantomhive Mansion burnt down, down the to ground
Because of this, happiness my master lacks
I shall serve him until his revenge has been found

There are only two kinds of people whom exsist in this world
Those who steal, and those who are stolen from
The misfortune and sadness is scattered, and swirled
Yet I still serve my master with a gleeful hum

If it's his wish, I will follow him everywhere
Even if his throne crumbles, and his shiny crown starts to rust
Even if bodies pile up endlessly, with a corpses cold, lonely glare
I shall be with him until his soul turns to dust

Beside him as he lies down softly, I shall be
Until I hear his soft voice say "Check" and "Mate"
The one I'd do anything for Is He
For until death strikes, His best mate shall be me

He took the forbidden fruit
Now my service to him is our magical bond
I'll be the best butler, from head to boot
If I couldn't, what kind of butler would I be?

Dogs are a nuisance, I much prefer cats
By Master's orders, I will do it
I will help him extinguish London's rats
Before the fan is hit with sh!t

I Serve my Master, my Beloved Master
I, Sebastian Michaelis, The Black Butler
No one can serve my Master Faster
For I'm a devil of a butler!
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Old 06-14-2011, 04:21 PM   #2
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I like it, although I prefer freeverse.
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Old 06-14-2011, 04:25 PM   #3
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what you got on the Final?
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Old 06-14-2011, 04:27 PM   #4
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Nice I really like it, how long did it take to write?
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Old 06-14-2011, 04:50 PM   #5
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Looks good, though maybe you could expand on your vocabulary. With a bunch of awesome words, this would be even better!
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Old 06-14-2011, 05:50 PM   #6
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I agree with shikamaru with the vocab. but other then that nice ^^
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Old 06-15-2011, 11:56 AM   #7
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Very nice job, but I would also think about what Shikamaru said.
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very nice, i liked it alot ^^
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