The story of the outcast

Rogue Priestess · 07-05-2009, 09:07 PM

Chapter 1 : the beggining of the end

It's been many years since all the great villages destroyed eachother in war, the one that lasted the longest was THAT village, the village with the will of burning passion. Yes, they did last long, but in the end it was their own over confidence that destroyed them, ever since their last kage died they haven't been up to their full potential. I heard their kage was a strong warrior, he was strong enough to control the demon within him, but one day he was murdered, nobody knew who did it, but they must've been powerful ninjas. That time is over now, there aren't anymore villages or clans, anyone who knew jutsus were immediately killed, so all ninjas hid from the outside world, there were few who dared to walk among regular people. I am one of those few.

I'm bored so I'm making this in case they don't let me in "Shinobi: The Saga". I'm looking for some people that are willing to participate here, it's kinda like "Shinobi: The Saga" in their members, and like them, I need you to send me a writing sample.

Rogue Priestess · 07-05-2009, 11:07 PM

Well, I guess I should introduce my character first and see if anyone likes it. Here's my character's profile:

Name: Kade Kyouzame
Gender: Male
Eye Color: Brown
Height: 5 "6
Weight: 115
Age:15
Hair Color: White
Elements: Wind, Water
Preferred Weapon: Desert Eagle Magnum
Description: A scar on his left eye that goes all the way down his cheek, hair that goes down covering his left eye, black T'shirt, leather jaket and black loose pants.
Personality: Quiet and antisocial. (That's pretty much it)

I may have forgotten to mention this, but this is in the future, where they have guns, cities, street crimes, etc. It's basically like inserting Naruto into New York city.

<Aurega?> · 07-06-2009, 06:35 AM

I think you actually need to avoid naming the places in the show explicitly because of copyright issues. Yes, it is stupid, but it's the US and they have all these kind of stupid laws.

vampire Lycan · 07-06-2009, 06:50 AM

wow. a NINJA HAS A GUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!RUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

NaruSakufluff4ever · 07-06-2009, 10:14 AM

agreed with VL!!!gosh a ninja with a gun...RUN AWAY!

Rogue Priestess · 07-06-2009, 08:31 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Aurega

I think you actually need to avoid naming the places in the show explicitly because of copyright issues. Yes, it is stupid, but it's the US and they have all these kind of stupid laws.

Okay, but I'm still going to inderectly state that's the hidden leaf.

takuya · 07-06-2009, 10:13 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by NaruSakufluff4ever

agreed with VL!!!gosh a ninja with a gun...RUN AWAY!

yep imagine naruto with rasenshuriken and a machine gun he would kill everyone and i could see hidan going scarface on someone
hidan:SAY HELLO TO MY LITTLE FRIEND MOTHER*******
i added the last part to make it seem more like something hidan would say

Rogue Priestess · 07-06-2009, 10:19 PM

Well, I'm trying to fit naruto in our world.

NaruSakufluff4ever · 07-07-2009, 10:42 AM

takuya lol i completely agree with u and uve done a good job to make us imagine things so far im about to laugh nvm i just started cause of takuya's comment lol keep writing!!

07-05-2009, 09:07 PM	#1
Rogue Priestess Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: If my status is online, then I'm online, duh! xD Posts: 4,130 Rep Power: 0	The story of the outcasts Chapter 1 : the beggining of the end It's been many years since all the great villages destroyed eachother in war, the one that lasted the longest was THAT village, the village with the will of burning passion. Yes, they did last long, but in the end it was their own over confidence that destroyed them, ever since their last kage died they haven't been up to their full potential. I heard their kage was a strong warrior, he was strong enough to control the demon within him, but one day he was murdered, nobody knew who did it, but they must've been powerful ninjas. That time is over now, there aren't anymore villages or clans, anyone who knew jutsus were immediately killed, so all ninjas hid from the outside world, there were few who dared to walk among regular people. I am one of those few. I'm bored so I'm making this in case they don't let me in "Shinobi: The Saga". I'm looking for some people that are willing to participate here, it's kinda like "Shinobi: The Saga" in their members, and like them, I need you to send me a writing sample. __________________ I'm the original antagonist of the forums, the first to create an organization of rogues, possibly the person who's had the most names ever on the forum. I have left and now I'm back, why not have a welcome back party? For I shall cause more chaos once more... To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Last edited by Rogue Priestess; 07-06-2009 at 08:34 PM.

07-05-2009, 11:07 PM	#2
Rogue Priestess Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: If my status is online, then I'm online, duh! xD Posts: 4,130 Rep Power: 0	Re: The story of the outcast Well, I guess I should introduce my character first and see if anyone likes it. Here's my character's profile: Name: Kade Kyouzame Gender: Male Eye Color: Brown Height: 5 "6 Weight: 115 Age:15 Hair Color: White Elements: Wind, Water Preferred Weapon: Desert Eagle Magnum Description: A scar on his left eye that goes all the way down his cheek, hair that goes down covering his left eye, black T'shirt, leather jaket and black loose pants. Personality: Quiet and antisocial. (That's pretty much it) I may have forgotten to mention this, but this is in the future, where they have guns, cities, street crimes, etc. It's basically like inserting Naruto into New York city. __________________ I'm the original antagonist of the forums, the first to create an organization of rogues, possibly the person who's had the most names ever on the forum. I have left and now I'm back, why not have a welcome back party? For I shall cause more chaos once more... To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

07-06-2009, 06:50 AM	#4
vampire Lycan Chunin Exam Proctor Join Date: May 2009 Location: I live at home Posts: 1,662 Rep Power: 0	Re: The story of the outcast wow. a NINJA HAS A GUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!RUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

07-06-2009, 10:14 AM	#5
NaruSakufluff4ever Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: I somehow got stuck in the portal to Hyrule and Naruto... NOT AGAIN! Posts: 2,420 Rep Power: 9	Re: The story of the outcast agreed with VL!!!gosh a ninja with a gun...RUN AWAY!

07-06-2009, 10:19 PM	#8
Rogue Priestess Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: If my status is online, then I'm online, duh! xD Posts: 4,130 Rep Power: 0	Re: The story of the outcast Well, I'm trying to fit naruto in our world. __________________ I'm the original antagonist of the forums, the first to create an organization of rogues, possibly the person who's had the most names ever on the forum. I have left and now I'm back, why not have a welcome back party? For I shall cause more chaos once more... To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

07-07-2009, 10:42 AM	#9
NaruSakufluff4ever Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: I somehow got stuck in the portal to Hyrule and Naruto... NOT AGAIN! Posts: 2,420 Rep Power: 9	Re: The story of the outcast takuya lol i completely agree with u and uve done a good job to make us imagine things so far im about to laugh nvm i just started cause of takuya's comment lol keep writing!!

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