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Old 07-03-2009, 01:25 PM   #1
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Hi everyone, please check out this new series I’ve written called Spirit Warriors. It’s an action/comedy series about martial arts. I’m business partners with the composer of DBZ and we’re trying to give fans the next great animated series.

We just launched a website containing a free online comic and tons of other material. I’d really appreciate anyone who checks out the site and would love to hear any comments or suggestions you have on the series.


SPIRITWARRIORSTV.COM

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Um, okay...?
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ya...............huh?

wheres the linky?
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ya...............huh?

wheres the linky?
in the fist post. Well, there is no link, but the address is there.
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Old 07-03-2009, 11:24 PM   #5
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Sorry, here's the direct link. http://www.spiritwarriorstv.com/

If anyone has any feedback on the comic I'd really appreciate it.
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Sorry, here's the direct link. http://www.spiritwarriorstv.com/

If anyone has any feedback on the comic I'd really appreciate it.
I haven't read much of the comic, but I approve of your site layout and design. I also appreciate you coming back to ask for input as opposed to just spamming. I do hope your web designer makes the switch from transitional to strict soon as I always love sites that validate strict n the W3c validator. The comic appears well colored. That's all I can say at a glance after being up for 40 hours. Well that and thanks for not having an oppressive donation link on the front page!
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rofl ha ha ha, poor tino
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Old 07-04-2009, 07:23 AM   #8
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I'm sorry... I grew out of Muscle- men a few years ago... congrats on almost achieving youngest person to write a TV show. I hope you get picked up by CN or sumthin.
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Hey! That's pretty cool!

I read some of the comic. Though it doesn't beat Naruto, it is pretty cool!
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Old 07-04-2009, 12:56 PM   #10
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Hey! That's pretty cool!

I read some of the comic. Though it doesn't beat Naruto, it is pretty cool!
Thanks, I like Naruto too...but give Spirit Warriors time, what's on the website is just the tip of the iceberg.
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Thanks, I like Naruto too...but give Spirit Warriors time, what's on the website is just the tip of the iceberg.
i like it.
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hey good luck
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its true you just need time
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Thanks, I like Naruto too...but give Spirit Warriors time, what's on the website is just the tip of the iceberg.
And what I can't wait for is when it gets more in depth!
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Lol I like the part where the guy gets a single, he drinks the juice and pees in his pants, the girl comes in and says she only dates boys who are potty trained, then he pulls down his pants to check his boxers and she comes in... "God hates me"
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I actually liked it.Keep up the good work.
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Thanks for all the feedback everyone, I really appreciate it.
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I wish I knew what it feels like to do what you're doing right now... I mean, I draw and stuff... Short stories, not good drawings...

But in real life, I'm a heck of a writer. I can do whatever I want, and not those simulated roleplays.

Guess you have that advantage... And good drawing skills. Keep. It. Up.
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That is a comic, not an anime lol
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I wish I knew what it feels like to do what you're doing right now... I mean, I draw and stuff... Short stories, not good drawings...

But in real life, I'm a heck of a writer. I can do whatever I want, and not those simulated roleplays.

Guess you have that advantage... And good drawing skills. Keep. It. Up.
I'm actually not the artist, I'm just the creator/writer. I hired 2 artists to follow my instructions for the comic. If I could draw I'd have 300 pages done by now instead of just 30.
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