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The Asian Sensation
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Alright people, I was just wondering what you (the reader) want the series to be posted. Do you want it to be a weekly thing where the chapters will be really long? Or would you like the chapters to be posted bi-daily and short? Post your thoughts here and let's see what you guys have to say!
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Weekly and long.
Also I have one complaint. Some of the text coloring is hard to read... I think you should make it consistent.
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Well, at least make it lighter coloring and not just Consistent coloring. It would be too hard to tell from who's talking. But that's just my point of view.
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Alright, thx for your feedback and if you had to choose when the day the chapter was posted when would it be?
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Considering Monday is usually my crappiest day, I say Sunday night- Monday afternoon- It would cheer me up quite a bit.
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Alright, so I'll wait until Sunday/Monday night to post the next chapter. All I'll say is it's going to good and filled with more drama.
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Chapter 9: The Consequences of Our Mistakes
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Well here's the 9th chapter of the series. Thank you for reading if you have any questions, comments or suggestions just post them here and I'll listen to what you have to say. Thanks again!!!
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Just finished chapters 7,8 and 9 and they were good sooooo much twist and lol Nikki Blonksy? wasn't she the girl in that movie hairspray awhile back. And keep up the great work
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Yeah, it's supposed to be a "not." Curse my intellectual unawareness. T.T
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Johnny-poo-pie? Poor guy.
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Chapter 10: Negotiations
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Spoiler:
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You're welcome, Asian brotha! I've been reading your ingenious script and storyline for several months now. Ever since you first started it up. It's been amazing since the beginning. I love it man. =D
Keep working at it.
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Thank you...it means a lot to hear that from you man. Who knows? Maybe I should pitch this idea to Kishimoto-sama someday so that he could have a foot hold in American Drama and all. That would be interesting.
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Yeah, that way he can rule the media empire! xD Just get some good actors in it. =P You, for one. xD
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I like to act and all but being an actor for Kishimoto-sama? That would be huge. XDDD
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Chapter 11: Preparations of War
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That was chapter 11 everyone. I hope you enjoyed it!!!
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