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07-23-2012, 08:34 PM
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Keep Me Free introduction
Actually this is a story I started and its the only introduction I liked
so tell me how you think cause from today onwards I'm writing parts on the forum hehe! Well if you like it??... I will do a part twice a week lol so yeah! ... Two twins, destined to be one. A long time ago in midages of Japan, lived a beautiful priestess that beheld the universe, kind and generous, she controlled a special power. All of a sudden, a great war came across two strong clans and many people were killed, she was sadden with misery as each and everyone she loved was killed. Angry, she mistified Yin and Yang to form a piece between the clans, splitting her up and killing her... the villagers were saddened of her death and worshipped her, as they did so, they came across the priestess's infant that beforehand she gave birth... and took care of her. 1000's of years later, the family line gave birth to twins, Emily and Lillian Watson, the destined twins to represent evil and good, Yin and Yang... Emily soft hearted, Lillian mischievious, they formed one to create the ancestor of the great priestess of long before, Miyuki Chiasa. What will these girls do as they become challenged and indebt by the end of the world appearing as a dangerous god from the debts of hell, luring the dead souls into the lively human beings and turning against the girls?! Find out in "Keep Me Free"!!!
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07-23-2012, 09:35 PM
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Re: Keep Me Free introduction
I like it so far i look forward to your next post containing part 2.
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07-23-2012, 10:27 PM
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Re: Keep Me Free introduction
actually it is just the introduction
Ima post the prologue next before I actually start star XD
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07-23-2012, 11:44 PM
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Re: Keep Me Free introduction
Oh ya I knew it was the introduction.xd I just didn't put prologue like I should have,either way it was a good intro to your story.nice work!
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07-23-2012, 11:46 PM
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Re: Keep Me Free introduction
thanks! (:
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07-23-2012, 11:55 PM
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Re: Keep Me Free introduction
Your welcome!
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07-24-2012, 07:06 AM
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Re: Keep Me Free introduction
Hey, keep it up. I'm liking it so far.
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07-24-2012, 08:26 AM
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Re: Keep Me Free introduction
haha thanks for liking my introduction x3
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01-29-2013, 07:24 PM
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Re: Keep Me Free introduction
Keep it up! :3 THAT'S PRETTY GREAT!
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