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Old 07-14-2010, 01:12 PM   #1741
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I like it so far. Do you mind if I print it off to read while I eat lunch??
You can try, but that is a lot to print off, xD
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*shrugs* I know a little a time. I just didn't want to take it with out permission. That is just rude.
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........When Kuroda enters the room he sees Hoshi sitting up in her bed. She is frightened by his appearance and asks, "How... how did you get in here?"

He smiles and explains, "Your father was kind enough to grant me permission to see you."

She asks, "Why would my father let an enemy into see his own daughter?"

"First of all, our two villages are supposed to be allies, and second the Tsuchikage is wise enough to know I would not attempt to hurt you even if I wanted to," explains Kuroda.

Hoshi gets angry and yells, "You have already hurt me so much, so why is a little more going to make a difference?"

Kuroda calmly explains, "During our first encounter in the Forest of Lost Souls it was necessary for me to show you my true powers in order to get you to sign the blood contract. The second situation was unavoidable because it would have been suspicious if either of us forfeited the match."
Then Kuroda kindly asks, "How well are your injuries healing?"

Hoshi avoids answering and demands to know, "Just what is this contract about?"

"Well as you know by signing the contract you have put your life in my hands and must follow any order I give and if you try to resist that torturous pain will encompass your body until you obey my order," explains Kuroda, "There are some other rules such as you cannot try to attack me or kill yourself. Plus there are many benefits for yourself."

"Benefits, like what?" asks Hoshi.

"You will find out when the time is right," answers Kuroda.

'Just what do you plan to do with me? Why did you choose me? What is my purpose now? Are you going to make me betray my village?" asks Hoshi.

Kuroda explains, "I won't force you to help destroy your own village, but I will ask you to do things that are generally considered treason."

"Like what?" she asks.

"Well for starters I need your help," he says, "I want to learn that defensive barrier technique that you used in your battle with Dantoluxo. Normally I would have you teach it to me on your own, but since I will be leaving tomorrow that won't work."

Hoshi asks, "Why do you need to learn that Jutsu? You already have that ice shield Jutsu."

Kuroda explains, "In actuality I probably don't need any defensive Jutsu at all, but since I don't want anybody outside of my control knowing about my secret technique I have to have other techniques I can use in battle. And yes I do have that shield Jutsu, but you are only partially correct in your assessment of it. It is a powerful shield indeed, but it looses its true power when the weather is warm or when I am not near a water source."

"I see, the cold atmosphere combined with your chakra and a water source allows you to form and sustain a shield, but when it is to warm outside the shield becomes weak and will break after a few hits," surmises Hoshi.

"Precisely,' says Kuroda, "I knew I chose well, you have a very advanced understanding of chakra for your age."

"For my age? But aren't you only a few years older than me?" she inquires.

Kuroda smiles, "It may appear that way, but I won't be telling you the real truth until much later. Now, you are to bring me a scroll containing instructions on how to perform your barrier Jutsu."

"What makes you think there is a scroll detailing how to do it?" questions Hoshi.

"Come now, you are an intelligent young woman," says Kuroda, "Don't make comments that make you seem foolish. Now you will give it to me tomorrow at the ceremony. Good luck, I know you won't disappoint me."

He leaves the room satisfied that he accomplished everything he wanted to. "Goodbye Miss Asakura," he comments as he walks by the 3rd stage proctor, "I look forward to seeing you tomorrow." Tatsuki shutters at the thought and tries to contain herself until he leaves her presence. Once outside the hospital he senses another squad of ANBU prepared to tail him, so he sets off to lose them and then heads to his next appointment.
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Kuroda wakes up grumpily the next morning when Sakura pours cold water on his head. He asks her, "Is there some reason you did that?"

She responds, "I have been trying to wake you for a while, but you must have been having a pretty good dream."

Kuroda explains, "I wasn't dreaming, I was meditating. Sleeping is a waste of time. You can accomplish the same regenerative effects by meditating plus experience a state of deep thought."

"Wow, really? Can you teach me?" she asks.

"When we get back to our village, we can start lessons," he says.

"Who taught you how to meditate?" asks Kayo as she appears in the doorway.

"No one," he responds, "I was able to figure it out on my own. It is not like it is that hard."

"No doubt you did. Well now that you're up, we need to get going. The ceremony will begin in less than two hours," she says.

"Is it that late already?" he questions, "I guess I lost track of the time."

"You sure you weren't sleeping?" jokes Kayo.
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They quickly make their way to the appropriate building and are directed into a large room with a long table at the end. When Kuroda walks in he notices that almost everyone from the final rounds is their along with their teammates and some higher ranking ninjas from the respective villages. They walk over towards Jando who is talking to Shun and Ichimaru. They don't really talk, but just wait around for a while.

Then Hoshi walks through the door, Kuroda tells Kayo and Sakura, "You two stay here, I have some business to attend to."


To be continued....

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Old 07-14-2010, 04:45 PM   #1744
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Old 07-14-2010, 04:57 PM   #1745
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Ninja Rapist. But I like it alot Kuroda reminds me of Sasuke .The fight scenes are good too.Not to mention Kuroda sounds se.....cute.
lol. Yeah is is a little like Sasuke. I've worked really hard on improving the fights.

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This is good .... you surely planned this out pretty well you have lots of characters and lots of arcs as I can see ..... I would love to help anyway I can
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Nice chapter, shorter than the usual ones, but good. Looking forward to seeing what will happen in the ceremony.
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Well if you want to help you could tell your friends, xD. Other than that, you can look over stuff when I post and tell me if you see and spelling or grammar errors. Also if you are an artist I am always looking for people to draw my characters.
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Nice chapter, shorter than the usual ones, but good. Looking forward to seeing what will happen in the ceremony.
Yeah I was gonna post more, but this seemed like the best spot to break it off.
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KT, if Kuroda doesn't sleep, then why does it say that he woke up grumpily?
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Yep I have most of it planned out before I start writing.

Well if you want to help you could tell your friends, xD. Other than that, you can look over stuff when I post any tell me if you see and spelling or grammar errors. Also if you are an artist I am always looking for people to draw my characters.

Yeah I was gonna post more, but this seemed like the best spot to break it off.
Fixed that for ya pal.xD Nice chapter, but I was counting the ceremony being this chapter.

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KT, if Kuroda doesn't sleep, then why does it say that he woke up grumpily?
It is a mystery! xP
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Who lies about sleeping and says he's meditating?
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Nice chapter, but I was counting the ceremony being this chapter.
Yeah it will start next time. Depending on how I feel like seperating stiff there should be 2-3 parts until the Chunin exams Arc is over.

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Maybe he was sleep meditating, xD
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Yeah it will start next time. Depending on how I feel like seperating stiff there should be 2-3 parts until the Chunin exams Arc is over.


Maybe he was sleep meditating, xD
Cool, I like how your Chunin Exam Arc is pretty long. Mine was short.

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Cool, I like how your Chunin Exam Arc is pretty long. Mine was short.

He reached a state of deep meditation where he was able to meditate even while sleep.
I get it now. xD
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Thanks, I just wanted to make it like the major part of this early stage in the story.
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Thanks, I just wanted to make it like the major part of this early stage in the story.
No problem. You know what I'm really waiting for? For Kuroda to get his ass kicked.xD Right now, he seems untouchable so someone taking him down(without Kuroda letting them)would be pretty amazing, and I'm sure if Kuroda was going to be defeated by someone, the fight leading to Kuroda's defeat would be epic.
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No problem. You know what I'm really waiting for? For Kuroda to get his ass kicked.xD Right now, he seems untouchable so someone taking him down(without Kuroda letting them)would be pretty amazing, and I'm sure if Kuroda was going to be defeated by someone, the fight leading to Kuroda's defeat would be epic.
I want to give you a response, but it would ruin some of the surprises I have in store.
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When you say "it would ruin some of the surprises I have in store", that meakes me believe I guessed right or I'm close. Or maybe you're just tricking me. Either way, since you have surprises in "store" is it possible to buy them?
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