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Old 07-02-2009, 04:42 PM   #41
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...Meanwhile Nobuo is in another area of the forest stomping his foot on a log. "Dumb Enji, he always has to be right," mumbles Nobuo.

"Well, well isn't this convenient," says a bandit as he picks up Nobuo by the collar, "We were just about to decide how to attack and capture you, but then you decided to come to us."

"Yeah, but where is the other one?" asks another bandit, "It is a packaged deal."

"Let me go!" says Nobuo.

"Shut up you brat," says one of the others before he punches the boy in the gut.

"We can use this one as bait and set up a trap," suggests the one holding Nobuo.
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"Damn, they got to him before us," says Jando as he observes with his Byakugan.

"We should pull back," advises Sakura.

"What are you talking about? We have to go save him now, or else we might not have another chance," says Jando, "Besides they are only ordinary bandits, we can take them."

"I don't know Jando, there are a lot of them," replies Sakura.

"We can do it," argues Jando, "Look, I will go in first and distract them. Then you come in and get Nobuo."

"Okay, I guess that sounds like a good plan," says Sakura.
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"So how should we set up this trap," asks a small member of the bandits.

"It needs to be good, because they are ninja," says tall skinny bandit, "They won't be fooled easily."

"You got that right!" shouts Jando as he lands in the middle of the group and starts his assault.

"They found us," yells the bandit holding Nobuo captive, "Watch out for the other three!"

"Wrong, I am all alone!" announces Jando as swipes the feet from under the closest enemy, "I don't need them to take…" The tall and skinny bandit sneaks up behind Jando and chops him on the back of the neck, knocking him unconscious.

"Why didn't you just kill him?" asks the smaller bandit.

"Because now we have another hostage to use as bait," he replies.
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"Damn! Jando got captured," thinks Sakura as she hides in a tree, "I can't rescue them on my own. I need to go back and regroup with sensei and Kuroda."
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"Somebody is approaching," announces Kuroda.

"Who is it?" asks Kayo looking up to the tree he is in.

"It is Sakura," he replies, "But she is alone. Jando and Nobuo are not with her." Sakura arrives in the grove looking winded.

"What happened Sakura? Where is Jando?" asks Kayo.

"We were able to find Nobuo, but the bandits had already captured him," explains Sakura while she catches her breath, "Jando rushed in and got captured as well. I retreated back here to tell you."

"Good choice, if you didn't come back we would have been in a big jam," says Kuroda.

"So what are we going to do?" asks Sakura.

"Well if they are smart, they probably changed their location. So we have to track them down first," comments Kuroda.

"That part is easy," says Kayo.

"What do you mean sensei?" asks Sakura.

"Well since you came back here I assume you got the message I sent you," says Kayo.

"Yeah I did," says Sakura.

"I get it now," comments Kuroda.

"Get what? I don't understand," says Sakura a bit confused.

"Sakura didn't you find it a bit strange that the mechanical bird was able to find you so quickly?" asks Kuroda.

"Yeah, that was pretty lucky," admits Sakura.

"It was not luck," explains Kayo, "My device found you by keying in on your chakra. Since we are a team and will be for a long time, I took samples of your chakra and exposed each of them to a specific device. So the birds are able to track you if the team is separated."

"I get it now," exclaims Sakura, "and since the bandits captured Jando we can use a bird to track where they took him and Nobuo."

"Exactly," says Kayo, "There is a possibility that they split them up and took them to separate locations, but we will have to deal with that if it comes up."

"So what is the plan of action then sensei?" asks Kuroda.

"Well they will most likely be setting up a trap, on the basis that we will be attempting a rescue. Either that or they will attempt to trade Jando for Enji so they can get a better ransom," states Kayo.

"Why don't we just leave them both behind?" suggests Enji.

"Are you serious?" exclaims a disgusted Sakura, "You're willing to leave your brother behind with a bunch of bandits?"

"Who cares about him?" replies Enji.

"Maybe you are willing to leave a member of your own family behind, but we can't leave Jando behind," Kuroda says harshly, "Not only is he a friend, he is a member of Team 3, and a Leaf Ninja. If you can say one thing about the ninja of Konoha, it is that we don't leave our comrades behind."

"Yeah, that is right!" adds Sakura.

"Fine then, one of you go and save your friend while the other two escort me to my home," replies Enji.

Kayo squats down in front of Enji and looks at him right in the eyes, "You are angry at your brother, and with good reason. However that anger is not going to last forever. He is still your brother, and always will be. If you leave him behind now you will regret it for the rest of your life."

"I guess you are right," replies Enji.

"So how should we do this?" repeats Sakura.

"Well if they want Enji, then we will just give Enji to them," announces Kayo, "How is your transformation Jutsu Kuroda?"

"I can handle it, but what are we going to do with the real one?"

"I can hide him with my own Jutsu," replies Kayo, "Now let me explain the full plan."
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A while later Team 3 tracks the bandits to a small complex and try to make negotiate for the release of Nobuo and Jando. Kuroda and Enji are disguised as each other. "Well, well, well, we thought you might come to rescue your teammate and the boy," says a bandit as a bunch of them come out of the hideout.

"Actually we are here to make a trade," says Kayo.

"A trade? Well that is an interesting proposal," says a very short bandit, "What were you thinking?"

"We will give you the second boy if you give us back Jando," explains Kayo.

"What? You are selling us out?" screams Nobuo in the arms of a large muscled bandit.

"Looks like you are out of luck kid," laughs his captor.

"So you are selling out your client to get one of your own back?" asks the small bandit.

"He is more important to us," comments Sakura.

"You good for nothing ninja," yells Nobuo, "My mom will have your heads for this!"

"Something seems strange about this," comments a tall skinny bandit, "I don't like it."

"Do you have another proposal then?" asks the fake Kuroda.

"Actually I do," replies the skinny bandit, "I was looking in this useful book I bought the other day, and I figured out who you are. You are Kayo Yuhi of the Leaf Village."

"Yes, what of it?" asks Kayo.

"The bounty on your head is at least double what we would get for ransoming these kids. How about we give you both of these boys in exchange for you?"

"It is a deal," she replies.

"Wait, Sensei that was not part of the plan," says Sakura.

"Sometimes you have to alter your plan," says Kayo.

"You there, the other little rich kid. You go over and tie up her hands nice and tight, then we will do the exchange," says the skinny bandit. The fake Enji follows the orders.

"What is Kuroda doing?" thinks Sakura, "I guess he caught on to sensei's plan. I will just have to trust them."
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A few moments later the 3 three people walk across to the opposing sides. The large muscular bandit puts Kayo in a bear hug and laughs, "This was a great idea. We will get a ton of money for her, and maybe we can have some fun with her first."

"Maybe another time," says Kayo smirking.

"What was that?" asks the bandit. Suddenly Kayo's body starts to disappear starting from the bottom up. Her captor tries to hold on, but her from disappears from his grasp.

"She vanished!" yells the smaller bandit.

"It is a ninja trick!" shouts the tall skinny bandit, "Get the others before they can escape!"

"Sakura, Jando, get the boys to cover!" yells Kuroda as he turns back into himself and prepares to fight.

"What the hell?" yells one of the bandits.

"What is this?" yells another.

"I can't get free!" yells the smaller bandit. Trees have start to grow behind every one of the bandits. As the trees grow the branches of the trees wrap themselves around the victims and immobilize them.

"Damn this must be one of her ninja techniques," says the tall skinny bandit as he struggles to get free like the others.

"It is called Tree Capture Death," says Kayo as the top half of her body emerges from the tree right above the bandit, "It is one of my Genjutsu techniques."

"Damn you leaf ninja!" yells the large muscular bandit towards a second Kayo who has appeared above him. In fact every bandit is trapped in a tree, and has a clone of Kayo above them. A kunai appears in all of the copies hands and they all draw back preparing to strike.

"I underestimated you," comments the tall skinny bandit.

"You seemed like the smart one. You should have known better than to take on a Leaf Ninja," says Kayo before swinging her arm down for the final strike.
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All of the bandits collapse on to the ground and then Kayo reappears next to Kuroda. "So that was all Genjutsu?" asks Kuroda, "I couldn't see anything. They all just started freaking out, and then boom they were down."

"It is just a good thing they talked for so long, otherwise I might not have been able to trap them all in it," she replies.

"Wow sensei that was amazing!" yells Sakura running over to them.

"So it was all a trick?" asks Nobuo walking over with his brother.

"You didn't really think we were going to leave you behind did you?" asks Kuroda.
"I guess not," he replies.

"Yeah you totally did," teases Enji.
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Team 3 delivers the brothers to their destination, and their mother is happy to see they are getting along.
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On the journey home Kuroda questions Kayo about her Genjutsu. He asks, "Kayo sensei I was very impressed with your Genjutsu. You took care of those bandits so easily. Could you teach us some of the basics? Because it might come in handy in battle."

"Yeah I want to learn to sensei!" adds Sakura.

Kayo says, "I doubt that you will be able to use it, because it requires a certain knack, but learning to defend against Genjutsu is an essential skill for a ninja. So I should teach you about it. We will meet tomorrow and train."
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Team 3 arrives home at the same time as Team 15 is returning from their own mission. Naoko and Rame Tsu comment to Sakura, "You are so lucky to have a female leader. Our Jonin sensei Tousen Nohana is completely incompetent, plus he is a total pervert."

Tousen greets Kayo, "Well if it isn't Kayo Yuhi. You're looking ravishing as always. I didn't realize that you had your own squad of Genin. I didn't think you wanted to teach, but I guess things change. It looks like you completed your mission successfully. I myself just completed a tough C-rank mission with my own squad. Maybe we can go out later and celebrate."

However Kayo is not paying attention and says, "I have to go make a mission report to the Koukage. I'll see all of you later for training."

"Bye sensei," replies Sakura.

Tousen gets all depressed and vows, "I will win the affection of the beautiful Kayo Yuhi."

Naoko and Rame Tsu slap their faces and say, "You're so pathetic."

"I am going to train," comments Shun as he walks off.

"Something about that guy just doesn't sit right with me," says Jando.

"You are just jealous because he was the top of the class," comments Sakura before grabbing Kuroda's hand and dragging him off.

"If you want to beat him then you have to train even harder than he does," says Kuroda.

"Not likely," says Rame Tsu, "That kid spends almost every free moment he has training."

"I'll beat Shun and you Kuroda!" vows Jando.

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well its looking like it just to let u no
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Kuroda what is up with the clothes and slave contract thing?? And why are they all girls??!! Oh wait I forgot it was you I was talking to; oh well. Good story just try to cut down on the slave part okay?
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"Good, it seems like the team is doing well," says the 8th after being briefed by Kayo Yuhi about Team 3's latest mission, "Their progression is about in with the other teams from their class."

"After they saw me use some of my abilities they asked if I could teach them more about Genjutsu," reveals Kayo, "Do you think I should begin lessons on that subject?"

"I don't see why not," replies the Koukage leaning back in her chair, "I don't believe they will advance very far, considering their chakra types, but it would be beneficial to learn the basics. Go ahead and do as you see fit."

"Understood, is that all for now?" asks Kayo.

"Actually there is," replies the leader of the village, "Are you familiar with the incident concerning Kuroda after the death of the 7th?"

The Genjutsu specializing Jonin recalls, "When he disappeared into the forest for a few days without any scent or trace, and then reappeared the day of the Genin team assignments?"

"Yes, that is correct," responds the Koukage, "I am still concerned about that and the situation that occurred when Raj was assessing their capabilities. I would like you to use your special Jutsu to see if you can find out what actually happened in both circumstances."

"You want me to use that Jutsu on a Genin?" asks Kayo a little bit puzzled.

"Do you have any problems with that?" replies the Koukage in a commanding tone.

"No my lady, it will be done," submits Kayo.

"Good," says the Koukage satisfied, "That is all, you are dismissed."
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"Welcome," greets the dark haired Jonin when Team 3 arrives at her residence for their first lesson in Genjutsu.

"Hello sensei," replies Kuroda.

"Please sit down," says Kayo pointing to the mats on the floor in the center of the room.

"So you are really going to teach us Genjutsu sensei?" asks Sakura as she takes her place, obviously excited about learning. Kayo takes her place in front of the three students on the largest mat.

"Yes, we will be starting with the basics today," she replies.

"Awesome, let's get started then," says Jando. Kuroda remains quiet, but eager for more knowledge on the subject.

"Before you actually begin attempting Genjutsu you must first understand what it is," says their teacher.

"Why do we have to do that?" complains Jando.

"You should always understand concepts before you attempt practical application," comments Kuroda.

"Precisely, now there are three essential parts that something must have in order to be considered human. Those are the mind, the body, and the spirit," says Kayo.

"What in the world does that have to do with anything?" asks Jando.

"Why don't you let her finish before interrupting," says Sakura, "Continue please sensei."

"Thank you, now as I was saying to be human you must have a mind, a body, and a spirit. As a ninja you have an additional part, and that is chakra. Jutsu are the tools that we use to manipulate our chakra," she explains.

"Oh, I get it now," comments Jando.

Kayo continues, "As you know there are 3 types of Jutsu and as some of you may have realized, each one relates to one of those 3 essential parts."

"I'm not sure I understand," says Sakura.

"I will elaborate then," says Kayo, "First there is Taijutsu, this is where a ninja focuses chakra throughout their entire body in order to increase their hand to hand combat abilities. Then we have Ninjutsu, this is where we extend our spirit using our chakra and tap into the natural elements of the world. By forming special seals with our hands we can manipulate the earth, water, fire, wind, and lightning elements. Then finally we have Genjutsu, this is where we use our chakra to affect the mind."

"I see now," says Sakura, "Taijutsu relates to the body, Ninjutsu relates to the spirit, and Genjutsu relates to the mind."

"That makes sense," says Jando.

"As planned, we will be focusing on Genjutsu today," states Kayo, "A Genjutsu works by extending the chakra flow through the cerebral nervous system of the opponent to control their minds chakra, thereby affecting their five senses. The opponent then becomes trapped in an illusion in which the mental pain and suffering is just as deadly as physical pain."

"So it is not real?" inquires Sakura.

"No, but it seems real to the victim," adds Kuroda.

"Yes, your attacker takes partial control of your mind, and your senses tell you that the illusions are real," reveals Kayo, "However in order to use Genjutsu you must have superb chakra control. From what I have observed none of you have the level of control required to be masters of Genjutsu, however you may be able to learn some simpler Genjutsu that can buy you a short amount of time. But we are not going to focus on that yet, instead I will start teaching you how to defend against Genjutsu attacks."

"I don't need defense, I want to attack!" exclaims Jando.

"If you don't want to learn what I am teaching then you are free to leave Jando," says Kayo.

"Fine," says Jando folding to her authority.

"Okay so we will be starting with Genjutsu defense, but before you can defend against it you must know a little more about how it works," says Kayo, "Now I said it affects all five of your sense, which means it can be induced by any one of those senses and it will affect all of them. The most common sense to attack is vision, the caster can activate the Jutsu when the opponent looks at a certain portion of their body. This type has the most variety of techniques, and also the advanced techniques are the most powerful Genjutsu. Next is sound, where the caster creates a certain tone. Then there is smell, the caster makes a distinctive smell that affects the opponent. This type is easy to use, but its power level is the weakest of all of them. Then comes touch, this type is very hard to use because the caster is required to touch the victim's body in order to induce the illusion. Genjutsu induced by touch are the second strongest type. This type has also been adapted for a defensive use. It can be sealed into an object, so that when someone touches the object they are instantly trapped in the Genjutsu. Finally there is taste this is the hardest Genjutsu because it requires the victim to eat something. It is very easy to detect, so most people do not use it, but it can be useful on assassination missions."

"Interesting, I knew that Genjutsu was complex, but I really didn't know just how intricate it was," comments Kuroda.

"I guess that is why there are so few Genjutsu specialists," says Sakura.

"There are a lot more than you think Sakura," warns the raven haired woman, "And there are many ninja who don't specialize in it, but can still use it to great effect."

"Well then we can just defeat them when you teach us the defense methods," says Jando.

"Yes, back on topic," says Kayo, "Now if you have a Genjutsu cast on you there are only four ways to defend against it."

"Only four?" inquires the curious pink haired student.

"Yes, only four," confirms Kayo, "If you are skilled in Genjutsu you can counter attacks, but if you are not a specialist it is best to use one of the defensive methods."

"Okay so what are they?" asks Jando.

"The first option is for the ninja to stop the flow of chakra in their body, and then apply an even stronger power to disrupt the flow of the casters chakra. That may sound like it easy, but you will see that it can be very difficult depending on the level of the Genjutsu. The second option is to have an outside ninja unaffected by the Genjutsu make body contact, and use their chakra to disrupt the casters flow. The third option is to have an outside ninja unaffected by the Genjutsu force the opponent to break the Genjutsu. This is the easiest way to deal with Genjutsu, but if the caster has an ally protecting him then it is smarter to resort to the second option. The fourth option is only to be used when you have no backup to assist you with the second and third options, and when you cannot successfully use the first option. The reason for you lack of success will most likely be that you are low on chakra, or their technique is so advanced that you cannot deal with it. The fourth option is to cause yourself physical pain or injury. This includes causing yourself to bleed by possibly stabbing yourself or breaking a bone. By injuring yourself you change the condition of your mind, since your mental status has internally change the Genjutsu is disrupted and no longer affects you. Now remember, this is a last resort option only. If you use it you must immediately retreat, because it cannot be used two times in a row."

"Good to know," comments Kuroda.

"Now today you will be practicing the first defensive technique I mentioned," announces Kayo, "I will use a low level Jutsu on you, and we will see how well you can do against."

"Okay I will try my best," declares Sakura.

"Yeah, let's do this!" pronounces Jando.

"Are you ready as well Kuroda?" asks Kayo.

"I am prepared," verifies Kuroda.

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ohh, i already have over 200+ pages written out. I just dont want to post it all. I want to space it out. I might post some more today though to give people more of a taste
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Well if i told you why that would spoil the whole story. There is a reason, i didnt just put it in because i am a perv, lol
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I like this alot. It's better written and has a better plot (from what you've revealed) than most of these fanfic's. The only thing I can think of is whether or not you want the main character to be relatable to or not. Is he going to go through alot of character development, or is he going to consistently stay as a rape all, serious ninja?
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I like this alot. It's better written and has a better plot (from what you've revealed) than most of these fanfic's. The only thing I can think of is whether or not you want the main character to be relatable to or not. Is he going to go through alot of character development, or is he going to consistently stay as a rape all, serious ninja?
There is character development, but it might take a while.

Also Gama, your pretty smart, so you probably will figure it out sooner than others will, so don't spoil it for them
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"Very well then, now step into the realm of serpents," utters Kayo after two quick hand signs.
A hissing sound fills the room and Kuroda looks around to find that hundreds of snakes have abruptly appeared to surround him. Their tongues slip out of their mouths and flicker at him, the animals poised to strike. Many of the snakes have also climbed their way onto his sensei. They cover her voluptuous form, giving her an appearance that would seduce most men. The snakes seem to move with her, declaring her their queen. Kuroda is entranced by her, but then remembers that it is all an illusion. He focuses his thoughts on the task explained to him only a few minutes earlier.

"First I have to gain control by stopping the flow of chakra in my body," Kuroda speaks out loud while performing the action, "Then I have to release enough chakra to disrupt the attacker's chakra." His hands come together and he gathers chakra and then it explodes into a large outward burst when he shouts, "Release!" The snakes vanish and the room returns to its original state.

"Well that was very surprising Kuroda," comments Kayo, "You almost made me release my hold on Jando and Sakura."

"Did you put a separate Genjutsu on each of us?" he inquires.

"That is correct," she replies, "Excellent analysis."

"So what now?" he asks.

"Now we wait and see if the others can get themselves out," says Kayo, "In the meantime you can practice on focusing your chakra and directing it. You were able to free yourself, but a lot of your chakra was wasted because you made it go off in random directions."

"I will refine my technique sensei," replies Kuroda. Sakura has to try harder but eventually does it, but Jando fails miserably and Kayo lets him out after a while.
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"Well that was interesting," says Kayo, "Kuroda you can leave and come back in a few hours. I want to try using more powerful Jutsu on you and see how you fare, but we cannot do that with the other two here."

"Why does he get private lessons?" complains Jando.

"Because not only was he able to escape the Genjutsu on his own, he was able to do it after only a few minutes," reveals Kayo.

"Really is that true Kuroda?" asks Sakura.

Kuroda nods as he stands to leave, "I will see you later then sensei."
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Kuroda decides to do some research about Genjutsu at the library while the others practice.
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He returns a few hours later and greets Sakura on her way out. "So how did it go?" asks Kuroda.
"I think I really got the hang of it," replies Sakura, "But Jando was still as terrible as when we started."

"That is not a shocker," he replies.

"Well I am beat, I am going to go home and take a long rest. Good luck with your training," she says before running off.
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Kuroda does not see Jando on his way in, and finds his sensei in the same room as earlier. "Welcome back," greets Kayo, "I was surprised at how easily you dispelled the Genjutsu earlier, even if it was just a low level one. If you are ready I would like to test your capabilities more extensively."

"I am ready whenever you are," he replies. "I thought you would say that," she smiles, "Then let us begin. I am going to skip up a few levels instead of going step by step. You might recognize this Jutsu from our recent mission. Body Freeze Jutsu!"

Suddenly Kuroda's entire body feels like it is tightly bound. He tries to shift position, but is unable to.
"I can't move," he asserts.

"I am aware," states Kayo as she sits across from him sipping a cup of tea.

"Is that part of the Jutsu?" he asks.

"No, I was merely feeling a bit parched," she replies with a giggle, "The purpose of this Jutsu is restraint, as you have pointed out. Usually it is not meant for long team incapacitation. The idea is to throw the enemy off, and then strike while they are confused. However for our training purposes it will do just fine. Now you need to focus, before I told you to practice on making all your dispersing chakra go in one direction. Now you also need to learn to detect just exactly how much chakra I have used in my Jutsu. You don't need to overwhelm me; all you have to do is match the amount of chakra I put in. It is wasteful and stupid to use all your chakra when you only need a certain amount to escape. Now focus."

"Why?" asks Kuroda reaching forward to get the extra teacup she had places in front of her, "Oh, you don't mind do you? I was also a little parched and I just assumed the second cup was for me."

"When did you…?" questions Kayo, clearly astonished that he had escaped the Jutsu already.

"Right when you explained I only had to put an equal amount of my own chakra into my dispersal," reveals Kuroda, "I was just going to put a bunch in, but when you said that I suddenly became aware of the exact amount I needed to use. It was very strange."

"Well this is very odd," remarks Kayo, "I can usually tell when a person is more suited to Genjutsu, but I guess everyone is wrong sometimes."

"About the tea…?" he inquires.

"The tea can wait. We need to continue exploring your abilities," she says as she begins to weave hand signs, "This next technique is a lot more advanced than the previous one. Demonic Illusion: Hell Viewing Technique!"
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And so the process repeats, Kayo starts using stronger and stronger techniques on Kuroda, but he is able to dispel them all. Finally she decides to drastically increase the level of her Jutsu, and use her Mind Interrogation Technique on him. A misty haze surrounds the skilled boy and shadow monsters encircle and attack him. Caught in the fantasy Kuroda charges forward and combats the monsters.
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While Kuroda tries to deal with the illusions, Kayo walks the pathways of his mind trying to learn his secrets. His mind is setup as many crisscrossing hallways, each with many doors. Kayo is freely able to search throughout Kuroda's mind, opening many doors and seeing the memories of his youth. However the doors are in no particular order and the memory fragments are scattered all over the place. She walks around examining things until she encounters a mind barrier unlike any that she has seen before.

She tries to pass through it halts when a yellow electrified field appears. First she attempts to disable the barrier with a few techniques, but is unsuccessful. Then she reaches out her hand to touch the barrier in order to understand it better. Then suddenly Kuroda walks out from behind the obstruction.
"I wouldn't do that if I were you Sensei," he warns walking towards her. She backs away from him nervously allowing him to fully pass on to her side of the yellow static wall. "It is impossible to break though," he says, "And you could cause serious damage to yourself if you attempt to get past."

"Impossible, how are you here?" questions Kayo, "That Jutsu is one of my most advanced Genjutsu, there is no way a Genin could get past it."

"Yet here I stand," replies Kuroda.

Kayo looks at him suspiciously and then returns her attention to the barrier, "What is that barrier and how was it created?"

Kuroda replies, "Impressive isn't it? How about we strike a deal? I will grant you access to all the information you wants if you will sign a contract, but you are not allowed to read before signing it."

Kayo is at first excited, but then after thinking about it she sees, "I could end up in the same situation as Sakura, but I still don't know what that is exactly. I was there when Jando explained to the Hokage that Kuroda said something about following his orders. Yet both Kuroda and Sakura claimed it was a joke. If I sign the contract I could be putting my life at stake. However I would learn all the information that the Hokage seeks, and I can learn what that barrier is and make one in my own mind. I have never seen anything like that barrier, or even something remotely similar. With all my encounters with elite ninja, not one of them has possessed something like it when I entered their mind through the Mind Interrogation Technique."

After debating for a while she decides that it would be worth it to learn how the barrier was made, so she could make her own. "Ok I will agree to sign your contract," she says to the figure in front of her.

"Well then I will meet out there," replies Kuroda.
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She exits Kuroda's mind and returns to her own. When she opens her eyes he is in holding the contract in front of him. "Let me get a pen then," she says.

"Sorry sensei, that will not work," says Kuroda, "You have to sign it in blood."

"A blood contract?" she thinks, "Just what am I getting myself into?" After hesitating she pricks her thumb with one of her teeth and signs at the bottom of the contract in her blood.

"Very good," says Kuroda as he rolls up the contract and places it in his pouch, "Now take off your clothes." She hesitates and a surging pain ripples through her body. If time was slowed and chakra was visible a miniature wave of purple lightning would be seen passing through the woman's body. Kuroda informs her, "That pain you are feeling right now will happen every time you do not follow my instructions. It is not fatal, but it hurts a lot and you cannot stop it." Unable to bear the torture Kayo is forced to strip her clothes off. "All of them sensei," he orders when she stops with her undergarments still on. She takes the rest of them off.

"Lie down on your back please," he requests. She quickly complies, and he walks over to her. He kneels down over her body, and then takes his right hand and scans over her searching for some strange invisible point. He quickly seems to find the correct spot just above her navel. Kuroda takes out a kunai and carves a strange symbol into her flesh. Then he makes a few hand signs and pours some of his chakra into the mark. After a minute the mark dims and soon is no longer visible. "You are to tell no one what has just occurred today," orders Kuroda as he stands up, "Oh and you can put your clothes back on."

"What have you done to me? What was that contract, and what was that ritual you just preformed?" asks Kayo angrily as she redresses herself.

"I will explain it all in due time, but first we have a few more things to go over," he replies.
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Kuroda sets more advanced rules in place for what Kayo can and cannot say and do. After that he decides that he wants to learn some more Genjutsu, so Kuroda spends the rest of the night learning some basic Genjutsu attacks.
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The next day Kayo reports to the 8th that there was nothing unusual in Kuroda's mind, and the scroll Sakura signed was only about doing some chores and Jando over exaggerated. Life moves on with more missions and more training form Team 3.

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A few weeks later Jando is training hard somewhere in the woods. Kuroda is sitting high up in the branches of a nearby tree watching the training and munching on an apple. "The technique overall is not that complicated," thinks Kuroda as he spies, "However without the Byakugan I would have no idea at all what effect I am having on the enemy. I was thinking I might add it to my repertoire, but there is really no point if I can't use it effectively." He lies back and starts to stare up at the clouds when he hears two girls talking very loudly. The girls seem to be unaware that anyone else is in the area.

"These are great flowers," says a young blond girl.

"Yeah they are perfect," says her red head companion.

"Do you think he will like them?" asks the first girl.

"Oh yeah, totally," assures the second. Jando tries to ignore their voices and focus on his training. Kuroda still lays up in the tree branch deep in thought. The girls keep up their conversation becoming louder as they get closer. Jando becomes more and more irritated, but tries to keep his concentration.

The girls are now extremely close by when the blond one comments, “I just love Shun so much. He is so talented and so cool.”

“I just know he will love your flowers,” says the red head, “He will definitely go out with you.”

“I know it is going to be amazing. He is the most talented Genin in the village,” replies the blonde, “No other Genin even comes close!”

“Damn that guy getting all the glory and praise,” says Jando in frustration, “He has it so easy because he is naturally gifted. He doesn’t have to work half as hard as I do!” He angrily moves into a complex set of moves, making the sweat drip more profusely from his forehead. He attempts another step, but his feet trip up and he falls on his face. He gets up to his knees and pounds his fist on the ground in frustration.

Some more voices start coming through the woods from the opposite direction. As they get closer Jando starts to recognize them and when they step into the open space he sees they are coming from Yui Yamanaka and Shun Kashi. In his anger Jando stands up and yells, “Hey Shun get over here I challenge you to a match!”

Surprised by the sudden challenge Shun responds, “Look I’m not really in the mood to fight today and besides I am pretty busy at the moment.”

“Get over here you coward!” yells Jando.

“What did you say?” responds Shun angrily heading closer.

“I called you a coward!” says Jando walking to meet him, “Now fight me!”

Kuroda drops down from the tree and lands in between them. “Stop this Jando, you are not strong enough to take on Shun yet,” he says.

“Kuroda when did you get here?” questions Yui.

“He has been here the whole time,” comments Shun.

“Get out of my way Kuroda,” orders Jando, “I am going to take this guy down!”

“I don’t have any interest in fighting someone of your level,” states Shun, “You should listen to your teammate and challenge me when you get stronger. Come on Yui let’s get out of here.” He and Yui turn and start to walk away.

“Don’t walk away from me!” yells Jando as he pushes past Kuroda and takes a kunai out and throws it at the back of Shun’s head. Shun quickly turns and easily catches the kunai in between his fingers.

He twirls it around and hurls it back at Jando saying, “You should be more careful with that. If you just throw it around you could hit someone like Yui on accident. Now listen to Kuroda’s advice and step down.”

The tone of Shun’s voice pushes Jando to the edge. He activates his Byakugan and charges as Shun turns around again. He lunges forward with his right hand, Shun senses the attack and tries to turn around but Jando ends up landing a few strikes to his chest. Shun lowers his level and lands a lightning fast shot to the gut. Then immediately follows it up with a heel kick that connects right into Jando’s chin and sends him flying. Jando hits the ground and tumbles backwards a bit until he regains his composure and is stabilize himself in a three point stance.

In the meantime Shun has been making hand signs for a Jutsu. “You wanted a fight with me, then I will show you a real fight,” says Shun, “Leaf Tornado Jutsu!” Kuroda leaps back up into the trees sensing the incoming attack. As he does some of the leaves begin to drift away from their branches float towards Jando.

“What kind of Jutsu is this?” questions Jando as his Byakugan allows him to see the chakra start gathering around him. With Jando as the central point the leaves start to swirl around him, moving faster and faster while constricting. Kuroda observes as leaves become so fast that there is a tornado of green from the leaves and white from Jando’s clothes. Then a deep red color is added to the mix before all of the leaves suddenly drop harmlessly to the ground. Jando is revealed and his clothes are torn to shreds and his body is covered in blood.

He starts to fall to the ground, but Kuroda steps in catches him before he falls down. Yui shrieks, looks at Shun in disgust, and then runs off. “You went too far this time Shun,” says Kuroda as he checks for a pulse.

“I was just teaching him a lesson,” replies Shun, “He should not attack a stronger ninja especially if he spares him in the first place.”

“Still you could have just ruffed him up a bit, you didn’t have to go this far,” says Kuroda.

“This was faster and more effective,” states Shun, “Besides I didn’t even use the full power of the Jutsu.” Shun sticks his hands back in his pockets and walks off.

“Not full power? Very interesting,” thinks Kuroda as he picks up Jando and starts to carry him to the Hanabira hospital.
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“Woah what happened to him?” exclaims a nurse when Kuroda walks through the hospital entrance.

“It was a training accident,” explains Kuroda, “Luckily I was close by and found him only a short while after it happened. But he does need immediate care.”

“Put him on this stretcher,” orders another nurse running up, “We will treat him right away.” Two more nurses rush up and after Kuroda lays Jando on the stretcher they start to take him away.

One of the nurses jumps onto the stretcher and kneels on top of Jando saying, “Mystical Palm Technique!” Kuroda observes as a green aura surrounds her hand and then she places it near a cut in his chest and it starts to heal.
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Kuroda is leaning up against one of the walls on the second level of the Hanabira Hospital waiting for a certain woman to come by. He has already memorized her daily route and knows that she will be passing by in a few moments unless some medical emergency occurs. "Just as expected," he thinks as he sees the woman approaching.

She is a very plain looking young woman in her early twenties. She has her brown hair in tied up in a neat ponytail, and wears a standard formfitting white nurse’s uniform. Kuroda pretends to be reading an old romance novel as she approaches. "Excuse me miss, I was wondering if I could speak to you for a moment," says Kuroda politely as she passes by.

"Oh did you need something?" she inquires as she turns to face him with a smile.

"Well I've been feeling a little strange lately, and I have developed a strange rash in an umm... private area," he explains pretending to be shy, "It is kind of embarrassing and I don't want anybody to find out. So I was wondering if you could examine me in a discrete manor."

"Oh yes I understand completely," she says becoming a little red in the face.

"So are you free right now? Is there some place nearby where you could take a look at my rash?" asks Kuroda.

"Oh yes, there is a room right down the hall that we can use. Follow me please," says the nurse as she begins to lead the way.

"Perfect, she is even headed to the room that I predicted," thinks Kuroda as he silently follows. As they walk the hallway seems to be completely empty save for them. Kuroda glances out the open windows and comments, "It is a wonderful day outside isn't it?"

"Yes I'll be going out for a picnic lunch with some of the other nurses later," she replies cheerfully.

"Well that sounds pleasant, it is always good to take a break from work and enjoy the nice weather," he responds.

"Yes it is," she says. They make it to the end of the hallway and then turn right into a small corridor. They walk a bit and then the nurse opens the last door on the left. "In here please," she requests. Kuroda walks inside and looks at the glass sliding door with a large smirk. The nurse closes and locks the door and then walks over to close the drapes. "A little more privacy is needed I think," she says, "If you will please disrobe so I can take a look at the rash..."
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"Uhh, what happened?" says the nurse as she slowly opens her eyes and puts her hand up to her throbbing head. When her vision becomes clear she sees the young man from earlier standing in front of her, but she is confused because they seem to be outside now. Suddenly the ground drops out from under her and then her mind becomes sharp again and she is able to take in her full surroundings. She is hovering over the middle of a large canyon. She is being held out in the air by only the collar of her dress. The person holding her is standing on the long branch of a tree that sticks out to the middle of the canyon. He is dressed in black and seems to be contemplating something.

"Well that was slightly convenient, but unexpected," thinks Kuroda, "She passed out for a while after I got her here. I guess her body wasn't able to handle that many consecutive transferences with almost no stopping time. Either that or......anyways I'll do some testing later with Sakura, but for now I will take care not to do it for safety reasons."

"Do you know who I am?" asks Kuroda, finally seeming to remember that he is holding the nurse in his hand.

"You're........the boy from the hospital," she says in a frightened tone.

"Not the answer I was looking for, but it will do," Kuroda comments, "Now what is your name?" The nurse is too scared to give a response. A heavy gust of wind blows and violently ruffles the nurse's dress. Her hat is blown from her head, but Kuroda easily plucks it out of the air with his left hand before it falls out of reach. He tucks it into the back of his pants and says, "I don't know if you have noticed yet, but it is a long way down to the bottom of this canyon and on the bottom sit a thousand jagged rocks. Even if you were a skilled Jonin it would be nearly impossible to survive such a fall. Now I am strong, but even I have my limits. The more time you waste by not answering my questions the more the chances of me accidently dropping you. So please tell me, what is your name?"

"My name is.......Emi," she stutters.

"See now wasn't that easy?" he replies, "I am Kuroda it is nice to meet you Emi. How are you feeling?"

"Scared," she stutters.

"The natural reaction. It means you have regained full consciousness and don't seem to be suffering any mental damage," says Kuroda.

"Why are you doing this?" Emi asks.

"Ahh, the exact thing I was going to talk about next," he says, "You Emi have something I need."

"Something you need?" she questions.

"Do you value your life?" Kuroda inquires.

"I don't want to die," she pleads, "I haven't done anything to you. Please, why are you doing this?"

"You have something that I need. When I determine that I need something I will do nearly anything in order to get it," he says.

"What do you need?" she asks, "I'm not very wealthy and I don't have many possessions, what could I possibly have that you need?"

"You misunderstand. I don't want any object you have, I want your skill. I was the one who brought in the Hyuga boy earlier this week and I watched as the staff healed all of those nasty cuts," explains Kuroda, "I was watching very carefully the entire time and I noticed that while you weren’t the or the best healer you were very talented. In order to achieve my goal I may need medical treatment and thus I determined that I needed your abilities."

"So you have some sort of Jutsu to steal my abilities away from me?" she asks.

"Again you misunderstand," he says, "I don't want to take your abilities away from you; I want you to use them for me. I will undoubtedly get into situations where I will be injured and need to conceal my injuries from the the elders of the village. Thus I will require someone who can competently and discreetly heal any wounds I sustain. And that person I am hoping will be you."

"I don't understand, why are you doing all of this then? You could have just asked me," she says.

"Don't be so simple minded. I can't simply rely on the ability of even my most trusted friend to not tell the elders what I am up to. Additionally I can't count on anyone’s ability to resist the village interrogation unit. The only way for absolute secrecy is to get my allies to sign over their lives to me," he explains.

"I don't understand," says Emi.

"I will put it in simple terms then," says Kuroda, "There is a contract in my back pocket. Either sign it or I will let go and you will fall to your death."

"Please no," she pleads, "I am just...." Kuroda lets her clothes slip a bit out of his hands, but makes sure not to let go completely.

"Next time I won't hold on," he warns, "Choose now: Live or die!"

"I want to live!" she screams, "I'll do anything you want."

"Hold out your right palm," he orders. She hesitantly complies, but when she does Kuroda takes out a kunai with his left hand and in a lightning fast motion creates a small cut on her palm that starts to leak blood.

She winces from the pain, but doesn't make a sound. Kuroda stores his kunai away and then reaches into his back pocket to get out the contract scroll. He unrolls it in front of her and orders, "Sign your name at the bottom." Emi curls her hand into a fist and then reaches out with a bloody finger to sign her name. As soon as she is finished another heavy gust of wind comes along and threatens to tear the contract and her out of Kuroda's hands. He is able to hold on until the wind subsides and quickly rolls up the contract and tucks it back into his back pocket.

"Take my hand," he says reaching out towards her. She hastily grabs hold and he yanks her back on to the tree branch. Then he picks her up by knocking her knees out from under her and runs the length of the tree branch before jumping down to the ground and setting her down.

"So what happens now?" she asks warily.

"Now you will need to disrobe," he says. Knowing that her life now belongs to him Emi silently reaches down and pulls her dress up over her head. "I appreciate that you are being so cooperative. It really is a smart thing to do as I don't you will want to experience what happens of you don't comply," says Kuroda, "Oh and remember to take everything off and when you are done please lay your back down on the grass."

Emi silently follows the instructions and once she is on the grass Kuroda kneels next to her. He places his hands a few inches above her body and begins to concentrate. He quickly finds the spot he is looking for right below her belly button and takes out a kunai. "Please lay still this will only hurt a bit," he orders. He lightly cuts into her skin and carefully carves a special seal into her body.

Once the process is complete he stores his kunai away, makes hand signs, and starts funneling chakra into the seal. The seal glows a deep yellow color and then dims until it becomes invisible and it looks like no cutting ever occurred. Kuroda stands and says, "You may redress now."

Emi runs a hand over her belly looking astonished and comments, "I have never seen that kind of healing Jutsu before."

"It is not a healing jutsu it is just a convenient side effect of the seal," explains Kuroda, "Please hurry and redress we will need to return to the hospital quickly so as not to arouse suspicion. Ohh and heal the cut on your palm." Emi slips back into her nurse outfit and then heals her cut.

When finished Kuroda has her wipe the blood on her dress before she tidies up her hair. As he hands her back her hat he says, "If anyone asks the blood is from the rash of mine you were looking at."

"Okay I got it," she replies.

"Now if you will please do me the honor of giving me a hug," he requests. She slowly walks over and embraces him. "Hold on tight and take a deep breath," he says as he grips her securely and looks for the special kunai he left in a tree near the forest line. He uses his Flying Thunder God Technique to retrace his leaps from his carefully placed kunai so they arrive back in the small hospital room they came from.

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Default Re: Kuroda Taishi

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Originally Posted by Kuroda Taishi View Post
Tomorrow, I promise
awwehhh =(...okayyy
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