To Reach the Sky...

[george hyuga]

i wants more!!

epic chapter dude, just epic /thumbs up

[Abe-Uzumaki]

Awesome story. I'm on chapter four and I'm loving it. Great job.

[Rasen_Chidori]

Thanks Abe, george

[george hyuga]

#$%#&

[Throw Rasen-Shuriken]

C6.

Rasen and Hikari worked their way through the waste district. Rasen, leading her by the hand, keeping her close in case of Kaijuu attack. The whole time, he wondered about the wings on her back, what where they for? Why couldn't she talk? So many questions that he could think of no real answer for.

there

were

Rasen and Hikari, entered a large room, as they slowly made their way accross it, Rasen heard a slight clicking noise.

across

"Listen, there are some things, you would be happier not knowing, forget you ever met me, and forget you ever met, a girl with wings." She then turned her attantio to Hikari. "Here, come with me child."

attention

Rasen looks uncertainly at Hikari, she give him a little nod.

gives or gave

Would be better in there.

"The brass doesn't like excuses Maikeru, find the cargo, and get rid of it. No matter what 'it' looks like, get rid of it....permanently."

brass? I think that's suppose to be boss?


C7.

"We've reached the waste districts' town." Tempest spoke as the group walked through the makeshift houses that where built around the piles of trash.

were

As they continued on, Rasen heard an rushing noise and a loud horn, he span and ws blinded by the light of a freight lifts' head light as it pulled into the station. As Rasen watched, three people stepped off, last of them was Maikeru.

a

spun

was

There ^_^ I spell checked again, LOL.

I read through all three, though couldn't find any errors within the last Chapter.

Though, in all, I can see the story developing and it is getting interesting, so overall, it is going well ^_^.

[Rasen_Chidori]

Thanks ^_^

I think 'their' is right, as in their apple, their home, etc

As for brass

Keep looking for me while you read plz, I always miss things

[Throw Rasen-Shuriken]

Originally Posted by Rasen_Chidori

Thanks ^_^

I think 'their' is right, as in their apple, their home, etc

As for brass

Keep looking for me while you read plz, I always miss things

'Kay. Sorry ... I was just going off generally speaking, though, I should have known that brass was to do with that, though didn't, both my brothers were in the army at one point ... so I should have realized.

[Rikudo Sennin]

Im sorry Rasen, I haven't read the latest chapters.
Anyway, was the assassins already mentioned?
(Crackfat, SageMaster and I)

[Rasen_Chidori]

@TRS - It's cool ^_^ I appreciate you spell checking for me.

@RS - Not yet

[UnDeAd Hikari]

lolz...I finally appeared xD

O.o nice....bloodlust...are we killing Maik off early then xD

[Rasen_Chidori]

@Undead - Maybe, maybe not xD

[UnDeAd Hikari]

*whispers* down with Maik! down with Maik!

[Rasen_Chidori]

Next chapter will be up soon

[UnDeAd Hikari]

ooh, *goes to find glasses*

[Rasen_Chidori]

Chapter Nine - Unleashed

Rasens' entire body trembled, his skin visibly began to quiver and ripple, his hair stood on end and turned pure white, horns grew on his head and his entire body became covered in blue and red scales, he grew claws and his muscles bulged with incredible strength. Maikeru looked on in shock as this occured right in front of him.

Tempest, taking advantage of the distraction, dashed out from between the two rangers covering her and grabbed Hikaris' arm, dragging her away from Rasen and any possible danger, she crouched by the frieght tracks, protecting Hikari from danger.

Rasens body finally stopped trembling and he straightened up, he felt different, detatched, as if he was dreaming, anger and power coursed through him. The two rangers ran at him, swinging their blades at his scaled skin, their blades clanged off harmlessly, Rasen turned, his red eyes gleaming in the semi-darkness.

He swiped with his claws, knocking one of the rangers flying into a wall, where his head connected harshly with the stone and he slid down onto the floor, out cold. The other ranger tried to strike at Rasen again, Rasen caught his blade in one of his clawed hands, he gripped it, snapping it in two, he then held out his hand and a blast of pure red energy fired from it and struck the ranger in the chest, sending him sailing across the room and onto the floor.

Maikeru began striking at Rasen wildly, his rapier clanging and bouncing off of Rasens scales, leaving no damage or marks at all. "How is this possible?" Maikeru couldn't understand what was happening. "How did he transform into this...this monster?!"

Rasen struck Maikeru in the chest, sending him into the wall behind him and he too slid down to the floor, un-moving.

Rasen felt his anger slowly subsiding, his body was now covered in light flames. After a minute, Rasen stood in the centre of the freight station, his body returned to normal, he dazedly looked around, spotting Hikari, trying to run over to him, Tempest, holding her back, fear and astonishment on her face.

Rasens' vision blurred, he felt dizzy, his legs suddenly gave way and he dropped to the floor and his vision started to fade. Tempest now causiously approached.

"What was that?" She wondered, "Where did that power come from? Is this...ranger even human?"

Hikari rushed over, crouching down by Rasen, worry on her face. Rasen felt the last slivers of conciousness leaving his body, his vision continued to fade, the lights in his eyes slowly going out. As he lost conciousness, one final thought entered his mind.

"Who am I?"

[UnDeAd Hikari]

dammit, you didnt kill him

[Rasen_Chidori]

xDDD

Nah, he can't die yet xD

[UnDeAd Hikari]

damn.... -_-

[Rasen_Chidori]

Lol

I might do the next chapter now, I'm bored, so it'll give me something to do xD

[UnDeAd Hikari]

and here I was thinking I would go eat breakfast