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Apprentice Genin
Join Date: Jun 2009
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thnx so now u know were i got my curse mark from well ill be on l8ter like 2:00 ok bye
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Apprentice Genin
Join Date: Jun 2009
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Pt 6.
*walking thru the forest**looks up at the sky*hmmmm something doesn't feel rit*keeps on walking*bushes rustle*who goes there?!?!suddenly my mother and father appear*they both yell It's candice ooh our little grl and hug me then they stab me and look at me surprised they say.i turn into mud....and reappears on a tree hmmm,so sensei got ahold of u?hmmmm it doesn't matter im rogue now,nothing matters...2 me anymore... Last edited by Candice Uchiha; 07-14-2009 at 10:53 AM. |
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Apprentice Genin
Join Date: Jun 2009
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Pt 7.
*i meld off the tree and jump onto a branch and stood there*mother,father.....let me show u something*closes eyes then reopens them*sharingan*they both gasp*hmph surprised*jumps down*they look at me ur wanted evrywhere were taking u 2 jail!i don't think so u gotta kill me first,dont be foolish candice!we r ur Parents come with us!*i smile*no im not coming like i said youll have to kill me first....fine candice if that's the way u want 2 be then fine we have 2 kill u....try me....(to be continued last chapter next) |
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Apprentice Genin
Join Date: Jun 2009
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The Last Chapter-The Final Battle
*takes out giant sword*bring it.they jump up and throw kunai at me*that won't work!*moves giant sword blocking the kunai and i put the sword back in it's slot*they keep[ coming 4 me and each throw a punch at me i catch them with my hands i kick my sword out of it's slot and catch it in my teeth*now DIE!i move my mouth slicing their stomachs*they fall to the ground**gasp my mom heals my dad and herself*i forgot u were a medical leader in the sound village*puts sword back in slot**jumps down great heel drop they quickly move out the way barely dodging it*striking shadow snakes!snakes grab them and pulls them towards me*gets hand in fist and punches their face 2 gether making them crash into the ground*is that enough? Last edited by Candice Uchiha; 07-14-2009 at 10:55 AM. |
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Apprentice Genin
Join Date: Jun 2009
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no they say*they disappear and reappear on two branches*weve been training 4 this our whole lives!they each grab 10 kunai from their pocket and throw them one kunai hit each tree around me*what is this jutsu?something we made 2geteher!ninja art string attachment!strings come on all the kunai*wat?!?! NO NOT THIS JUTSU!*they pull the strings tight and the strings hold me against a tree*NOOO!!!i cnt let this happen!NOOOO!!*i start breaking the strings by moving around*oh no u dnt they put chakra on the strings to rebulid the lost ones and hold me tighter against the tree*NOOO!were ready now!they jump on the same branch*NOW!NOOOO!!!!i scream FIRE STYLE-MOTHER FATHER COMBO!NOOOO!*they blow fire out of their mouths and its heading straight 4 me*i gotta get out of here wait....snakes come up from underground and start tearing the strings apart*finally im free*two yrds away from my face the fire was takes out sword and stabs it into the ground and makes hand signs 1 yrd,its here i finish my hand seals and my sword multiplies and blocks the fire.hmph*the fire stops*is she dead?*i laugh nope *i appears bhind my moms back and kick her to the ground braking her back,and i punch my dad in the face breaking his nose*i stare at them from the tree branch now DIE!i throw shuriken with paper bomb and senbon around them and it makes the face of a skull and my mom and dad r each in one if it's eyes*ba-bye it xplodes and i jump up dodging the xplosion i fal to the ground and start e at their dead bodies*hmph*eyes turn back 2 normal*smiles picks up sword and put it back in it's slot and walks away*srry mom and dad but i had 2
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Special Jonin Candidate
Join Date: Apr 2009
Location: I somehow got stuck in the portal to Hyrule and Naruto... NOT AGAIN!
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Thats it?? Write more!!
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Apprentice Genin
Join Date: Jun 2009
Posts: 149
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will u leave me alone that my story heres an idea...write your own story!
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Special Jonin Candidate
Join Date: Apr 2009
Location: I somehow got stuck in the portal to Hyrule and Naruto... NOT AGAIN!
Posts: 2,420
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okay...
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