Describe the character above you in a haiku

lolitaninja · 11-21-2010, 06:41 PM

I'm sure most of you are familiar with haiku, right? If not, then allow me to explain: A haiku is a poem consisting of 3 lines. The 1st and 3rd lines contain 5 syllables and the 2nd line contains 7 syllables. For example, maybe Naruto would be:

A boy from the Leaf
With a demon inside him
Wants to be the best.

Simple, huh? I'll say the name of a character and the next person must describe the character in a haiku. Then that person must say another character for the next person to describe in a haiku and so on and so forth.

Let's start with, uh...Jiraiya!

narutoobsession · 11-28-2010, 10:11 AM

Funny but strong, he's
A Sannin killed too early.
For long, he'll be missed.

Sasuke

Uchiha Raimaru · 12-02-2010, 07:01 AM

The last Uchiha
Corrupt and dark is his heart
But there is still hope.

Since this isn't a popular thread (due to haikus being tough?) I'll do a well-known character:

Kakashi

deidara330 · 12-02-2010, 10:33 AM

Hmmm, can I write two?

As he was dying
My best friend gave me a gift
The gift of new sight

My friend let me see
Not just with new eyes, but with
A new view of life

Next, Madara Uchiha. He shouldn't be too hard.

thekilleranna · 12-02-2010, 06:58 PM

I'm thought to be dead--
I'm hidden behind my mask
and I'm called Tobi.

Shino. Cuz he's awesome

Uchiha Raimaru · 12-02-2010, 07:49 PM

Why am I left out?
I am important as well.
But really, I'm not.

Hinata? (This is fun!!)

Xibitz360 · 12-02-2010, 08:06 PM

This is very good. Let's put our creativity to the test!

I never give up
to always practice and try
is my ninja way!

The "copy" ninja Kakashi Hatake

lolohwd · 12-02-2010, 08:10 PM

eyes of history
flash of the hand end comes soon
sadness flows through?

minato

Xibitz360 · 12-02-2010, 08:15 PM

Minato's the name
thought they saw me but all it
was a yellow flash!!

Gaara

Uchiha Raimaru · 12-03-2010, 06:57 AM

Once I saw darkness
But a friend showed me the way
Now I see the light

Sakura?

thekilleranna · 12-03-2010, 01:39 PM

Forever Loyal,
I'll be waiting for you while
I become stronger.

Naruto. I didn't see anyone do him yet o.o I might have missed it though

(EDIT: nevermind, it was the first post ^^")

Orochimaru737 · 12-06-2010, 03:45 PM

naruto was the first one. though i guess i'll do a goofy one for him.
i love my ramen
stalked by konohamaru
i will reach my goals.

Orochimaru737 · 12-06-2010, 03:46 PM

oh yeah, next one: kabuto

Uchiha Raimaru · 12-06-2010, 06:46 PM

I lost my purpose
But after finding new strength
I will rule the world

(don't judge, third line was tough! >.<)

Itachi?

Orochimaru737 · 12-07-2010, 01:43 PM

i killed my family
and i was killed by sasuke
i am a failure

Orochimaru737 · 12-07-2010, 01:43 PM

next one is hidan

Xibitz360 · 12-07-2010, 06:31 PM

Killing is my joy
and if you hold a grudge then
you will get destroyed!

Pervy Sage

11-21-2010, 06:41 PM	#1
lolitaninja Veteran Chunin Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 1,403 Rep Power: 8	Describe the character above you in a haiku I'm sure most of you are familiar with haiku, right? If not, then allow me to explain: A haiku is a poem consisting of 3 lines. The 1st and 3rd lines contain 5 syllables and the 2nd line contains 7 syllables. For example, maybe Naruto would be: A boy from the Leaf With a demon inside him Wants to be the best. Simple, huh? I'll say the name of a character and the next person must describe the character in a haiku. Then that person must say another character for the next person to describe in a haiku and so on and so forth. Let's start with, uh...Jiraiya! __________________ Kankuro's #1 fan! Because real men wear make-up...and play with dolls! To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

11-28-2010, 10:11 AM	#2
narutoobsession Ninja Academy Student Join Date: Jun 2010 Location: Konoha. Or, at least I wish I was there. Posts: 54 Rep Power: 0	Re: Describe the character above you in a haiku Funny but strong, he's A Sannin killed too early. For long, he'll be missed. Sasuke __________________ Spoiler: Hi.

12-02-2010, 07:01 AM	#3
Uchiha Raimaru Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: Zanarkand Posts: 2,220 Rep Power: 6	Re: Describe the character above you in a haiku The last Uchiha Corrupt and dark is his heart But there is still hope. Since this isn't a popular thread (due to haikus being tough?) I'll do a well-known character: Kakashi __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

12-02-2010, 10:33 AM	#4
deidara330 Mr. Serious Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Everywhere and Nowhere. Posts: 14,489 Rep Power: 14	Re: Describe the character above you in a haiku Hmmm, can I write two? As he was dying My best friend gave me a gift The gift of new sight My friend let me see Not just with new eyes, but with A new view of life Next, Madara Uchiha. He shouldn't be too hard.

12-02-2010, 06:58 PM	#5
thekilleranna Ninja Academy Student Join Date: Dec 2010 Location: in a basement Posts: 34 Rep Power: 6	Re: Describe the character above you in a haiku I'm thought to be dead-- I'm hidden behind my mask and I'm called Tobi. Shino. Cuz he's awesome

12-02-2010, 07:49 PM	#6
Uchiha Raimaru Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: Zanarkand Posts: 2,220 Rep Power: 6	Re: Describe the character above you in a haiku Why am I left out? I am important as well. But really, I'm not. Hinata? (This is fun!!) __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

12-02-2010, 08:06 PM	#7
Xibitz360 The Legendary Master X Join Date: Oct 2010 Location: V & X Private Dimension <3 Posts: 12,233 Rep Power: 23 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Describe the character above you in a haiku This is very good. Let's put our creativity to the test! I never give up to always practice and try is my ninja way! The "copy" ninja Kakashi Hatake __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. ❤ "Neither the Angels in heaven above, nor the Demons down under the sea, can ever dissever my soul from the soul of the beautiful Annabel Vee" Ich Liebe Dich So Sehr Mein Konigin!! ❤ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Last edited by Xibitz360; 12-02-2010 at 08:10 PM.

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lolohwd Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Apr 2009 Posts: 8,207 Rep Power: 12	Re: Describe the character above you in a haiku eyes of history flash of the hand end comes soon sadness flows through? minato

12-02-2010, 08:15 PM	#9
Xibitz360 The Legendary Master X Join Date: Oct 2010 Location: V & X Private Dimension <3 Posts: 12,233 Rep Power: 23 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Describe the character above you in a haiku Minato's the name thought they saw me but all it was a yellow flash!! Gaara __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. ❤ "Neither the Angels in heaven above, nor the Demons down under the sea, can ever dissever my soul from the soul of the beautiful Annabel Vee" Ich Liebe Dich So Sehr Mein Konigin!! ❤ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

12-03-2010, 06:57 AM	#10
Uchiha Raimaru Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: Zanarkand Posts: 2,220 Rep Power: 6	Re: Describe the character above you in a haiku Once I saw darkness But a friend showed me the way Now I see the light Sakura? __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

12-03-2010, 01:39 PM	#11
thekilleranna Ninja Academy Student Join Date: Dec 2010 Location: in a basement Posts: 34 Rep Power: 6	Re: Describe the character above you in a haiku Forever Loyal, I'll be waiting for you while I become stronger. Naruto. I didn't see anyone do him yet o.o I might have missed it though (EDIT: nevermind, it was the first post ^^") Last edited by thekilleranna; 12-03-2010 at 01:46 PM.

12-06-2010, 06:46 PM	#14
Uchiha Raimaru Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: Zanarkand Posts: 2,220 Rep Power: 6	Re: Describe the character above you in a haiku I lost my purpose But after finding new strength I will rule the world (don't judge, third line was tough! >.<) Itachi? __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

12-07-2010, 06:31 PM	#17
Xibitz360 The Legendary Master X Join Date: Oct 2010 Location: V & X Private Dimension <3 Posts: 12,233 Rep Power: 23 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Describe the character above you in a haiku Killing is my joy and if you hold a grudge then you will get destroyed! Pervy Sage __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. ❤ "Neither the Angels in heaven above, nor the Demons down under the sea, can ever dissever my soul from the soul of the beautiful Annabel Vee" Ich Liebe Dich So Sehr Mein Konigin!! ❤ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

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