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Old 07-05-2009, 06:19 PM   #21
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Sai bro u r a friggin genius
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contrary to popular belief, pm does not mean "private message", it means "perverted mind".

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Old 07-05-2009, 06:22 PM   #22
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Old 07-07-2009, 04:34 PM   #23
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not much people came here
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Old 07-13-2009, 09:02 PM   #24
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Part Seven:The Water bay
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....No matter! I walked to another room.. it was huge, and wonderful!
In the center was a giant plant in a lake with lilly pads surrounding it, on the walls were designs of the place. Under the water was like a maze, tunnels against the wall as the giant plant spinned so did the water. There was a few switches under the water and some baby sharks. I saw a door, and water was coming down from the roof. I walked to the door to open it...and the force from the water crushed me. I quickly jumped back. The current of the water broke my arm.
A few minutes passed and i remembered about the switch under the water. I jumped in it and tried to swin down, but it was spinning like a vortex. I tried to touch the switch but the current didnt let me touch it, I swam up for air but the current tossed me in a tunnel. It was dark in it and I hearded something...a baby shark? No its to loud for that, when I got out of the tunnel I seen a strange ball and some platforms in the water. I climbed on one, then water surrounded the ball and it made a tentacle of water. A few more came out of the water, it was a creature made out of water.
Part Eight: Invasive Action: Attack of Zikawaka
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The werid creature stood there... What was it planning on doing? I seen a door, i ran towards it but the door vanished. The water tentacle hit me and i was choking, i was in the tentacle; it slammed me against the walls and the water froze. I was trapped in the ice. .......... There's not much air in here i cant breath much....is this the end? Was i truley this foolish and idoitic to get trapped in something like this? "Crk." The ice had a crack in it!
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