Story by jeremy uchiha

Sephiroth · 06-28-2009, 04:54 PM

here guys im going to try this out

part 1
.......One day i was walk though my village checking on things...all of a sudden 3 ninja appear in front of me requesting me to go to the kage...i took their request with extreme catution i didnt know what would happen.......so i went to the kage and he told me to team up with a new guy and go to a scentific faciltiy......i took the genin under my wing and we went....as we got to the faclility i walked in and was greeted by the other ninjas i looked at what they was doing they was trying to make super soilders r ninja......i walked by a place that had a name that i knew but from where.....i went back to the mansion and read every book and scrool we had y did i know the name......as me and the new ninja go back to the village 3 rogue ninja came out of no where and attacked us with out warning......i tried to fight but some how they parayzed me but what did they want ....they took the kid....

Sai's brother · 06-28-2009, 04:55 PM

Good bro ^^

Hawk · 06-28-2009, 04:56 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Jeremy Uchiha

here guys im going to try this out

part 1
.......One day i was walk though my village checking on things...all of a sudden 3 ninja appear in front of me requesting me to go to the kage...i took their request with extreme catution i didnt know what would happen.......so i went to the kage and he told me to team up with a new guy and go to a scentific faciltiy......i took the genin under my wing and we went....as we got to the faclility i walked in and was greeted by the other ninjas i looked at what they was doing they was trying to make super soilders r ninja......i walked by a place that had a name that i knew but from where.....i went back to the mansion and read every book and scrool we had y did i know the name......as me and the new ninja go back to the village 3 rogue ninja came out of no where and attacked us with out warning......i tried to fight but some how they parayzed me but what did they want ....they took the kid....

I like it, this is gonna be a good story

Raiden · 06-28-2009, 04:56 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Jeremy Uchiha

here guys im going to try this out

part 1
.......One day i was walk though my village checking on things...all of a sudden 3 ninja appear in front of me requesting me to go to the kage...i took their request with extreme catution i didnt know what would happen.......so i went to the kage and he told me to team up with a new guy and go to a scentific faciltiy......i took the genin under my wing and we went....as we got to the faclility i walked in and was greeted by the other ninjas i looked at what they was doing they was trying to make super soilders r ninja......i walked by a place that had a name that i knew but from where.....i went back to the mansion and read every book and scrool we had y did i know the name......as me and the new ninja go back to the village 3 rogue ninja came out of no where and attacked us with out warning......i tried to fight but some how they parayzed me but what did they want ....they took the kid....

relly good and cool brother

Sephiroth · 06-28-2009, 04:59 PM

thank u all

animelover · 06-28-2009, 04:59 PM

I like it too

nice!

Sephiroth · 06-28-2009, 05:17 PM

thnak u when u want part 2??

Sai's brother · 06-28-2009, 05:20 PM

soon, maybe today ^^

Sephiroth · 06-28-2009, 05:20 PM

lster tonight then

Sai's brother · 06-28-2009, 05:21 PM

ok ^^

dogboy22 · 06-28-2009, 05:24 PM

good story

Zeek Uchiha · 06-28-2009, 06:42 PM

Nice bro good story

Sephiroth · 06-28-2009, 06:52 PM

thanks

Sephiroth · 06-28-2009, 08:15 PM

2nd part......
.....as i stand there not able to move i ask my self y did they take him..........i look back thought my mind tring to make everthing come together........finally i was able to move i had to get after them fast to save my comrad.....as i closly followed the ninja that took the kid....i remerbered something the book i read about the ninja that was being created had his name in it.......colud it be he was the first one to be made....no i would of beentold wouldnt of i.....while i was focusing on my mind the ninja set a trap for me and i was right in the middel of an ambush....one of the ninja came out of no where and attacked me and kicked me to the ground....as i got up i start to laught but y was i laughting.........the rogue ninja wasnted to kill me but i laught at him but y......he attacked again with a dragon jutsu it hit me and i didnt feel a think......i quickly charges at him and used 128 palms on him....as he begged for his life i told him to tell me everythin......as he spoke he said the boy was the first and u was......before he was finshed i cut his thoat.....i knew i had to find him at a ll cost....

Sai's brother · 06-28-2009, 08:17 PM

very good

Sephiroth · 06-28-2009, 08:18 PM

thank u bro am i leaving u in suspense

Sai's brother · 06-28-2009, 08:18 PM

yep ^^

Broko · 06-28-2009, 08:36 PM

i can edit this tread cool huh but only under for a special reason

Sephiroth · 06-28-2009, 08:37 PM

dude dont ruin it man come on

Zeek Uchiha · 06-28-2009, 09:03 PM

Nice bro

06-28-2009, 04:54 PM	#1
Sephiroth Lord of Darkness Vault Disciple Join Date: May 2009 Location: Trying to fix the emptiness within me Posts: 23,137 Rep Power: 18 Member's Picture Albums	Story by jeremy uchiha here guys im going to try this out part 1 .......One day i was walk though my village checking on things...all of a sudden 3 ninja appear in front of me requesting me to go to the kage...i took their request with extreme catution i didnt know what would happen.......so i went to the kage and he told me to team up with a new guy and go to a scentific faciltiy......i took the genin under my wing and we went....as we got to the faclility i walked in and was greeted by the other ninjas i looked at what they was doing they was trying to make super soilders r ninja......i walked by a place that had a name that i knew but from where.....i went back to the mansion and read every book and scrool we had y did i know the name......as me and the new ninja go back to the village 3 rogue ninja came out of no where and attacked us with out warning......i tried to fight but some how they parayzed me but what did they want ....they took the kid.... __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

06-28-2009, 04:55 PM	#2
Sai's brother Jonin Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: I live with you. We share beds remember D: Posts: 17,172 Rep Power: 16 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Story by jeremy uchiha Good bro ^^

06-28-2009, 04:59 PM	#5
Sephiroth Lord of Darkness Vault Disciple Join Date: May 2009 Location: Trying to fix the emptiness within me Posts: 23,137 Rep Power: 18 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Story by jeremy uchiha thank u all __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

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animelover Jonin Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: New York. Alternatively, with Roxas in Twilight Town Posts: 6,005 Rep Power: 12 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Story by jeremy uchiha I like it too nice! __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. My boyfriend: Raiden

06-28-2009, 05:17 PM	#7
Sephiroth Lord of Darkness Vault Disciple Join Date: May 2009 Location: Trying to fix the emptiness within me Posts: 23,137 Rep Power: 18 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Story by jeremy uchiha thnak u when u want part 2?? __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

06-28-2009, 05:20 PM	#8
Sai's brother Jonin Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: I live with you. We share beds remember D: Posts: 17,172 Rep Power: 16 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Story by jeremy uchiha soon, maybe today ^^

06-28-2009, 05:20 PM	#9
Sephiroth Lord of Darkness Vault Disciple Join Date: May 2009 Location: Trying to fix the emptiness within me Posts: 23,137 Rep Power: 18 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Story by jeremy uchiha lster tonight then __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

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Sai's brother Jonin Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: I live with you. We share beds remember D: Posts: 17,172 Rep Power: 16 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Story by jeremy uchiha ok ^^

06-28-2009, 05:24 PM	#11
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06-28-2009, 06:42 PM	#12
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06-28-2009, 06:52 PM	#13
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06-28-2009, 08:15 PM	#14
Sephiroth Lord of Darkness Vault Disciple Join Date: May 2009 Location: Trying to fix the emptiness within me Posts: 23,137 Rep Power: 18 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Story by jeremy uchiha 2nd part...... .....as i stand there not able to move i ask my self y did they take him..........i look back thought my mind tring to make everthing come together........finally i was able to move i had to get after them fast to save my comrad.....as i closly followed the ninja that took the kid....i remerbered something the book i read about the ninja that was being created had his name in it.......colud it be he was the first one to be made....no i would of beentold wouldnt of i.....while i was focusing on my mind the ninja set a trap for me and i was right in the middel of an ambush....one of the ninja came out of no where and attacked me and kicked me to the ground....as i got up i start to laught but y was i laughting.........the rogue ninja wasnted to kill me but i laught at him but y......he attacked again with a dragon jutsu it hit me and i didnt feel a think......i quickly charges at him and used 128 palms on him....as he begged for his life i told him to tell me everythin......as he spoke he said the boy was the first and u was......before he was finshed i cut his thoat.....i knew i had to find him at a ll cost.... __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

06-28-2009, 08:17 PM	#15
Sai's brother Jonin Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: I live with you. We share beds remember D: Posts: 17,172 Rep Power: 16 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Story by jeremy uchiha very good

06-28-2009, 08:18 PM	#16
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Sai's brother Jonin Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: I live with you. We share beds remember D: Posts: 17,172 Rep Power: 16 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Story by jeremy uchiha yep ^^

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