My Poems

Yoshi-Chan · 06-26-2009, 04:13 PM

okay well I like writing, and i like peoples comments about my poems. So here are some of my poems!:

The Outcasts

All alone,
No one there,
By themselves,
Plotting,
Always plotting,
Pretentious seconds,
Ticking away,
Needless to nobody,
Needn't to care.
If you showed a speck of kindness,
Maybe you'd be spared,
For tonight the Outcasts take revenge,
Taking your souls,
Because you made them like this,
Uselessly beaten,
Horridly picked on,
Tonight the Outcasts take your life.

Welcome to My Land of Missfits. ( i spelled misfits wrong)

Welcome to my land of missfits,
where everyone is welcome to stay,
Come to the missfit town,
Listen to the Missfit band play,
Welcome to my land of missfits,
You can be the Mayor of this little town,
throw a ball,
and dance round and round,
or be alone and dont make a sound,
The choice is yours in this land,
In the meadows the fawns lay,
And the bunnies may,
eat the lush greens,
If you catch one,
Sure you can brush him,
Or go to the rivers,
and take a swim,
For you see in this town,
In this land,
You can be free,
To run in the breeze,
Or sit on your nees,
So now my friend,
I welcome you to my land of missfits.

(this one is about a vampire, its kinda older than the others) So Alone...

I am so alone
No one's there
Day after day
Night after night
Always by myself
Why dont they like me
No one does
I am so alone
On the run from everything
For they shun me
For what He made me
And so for that I am so alone
But one day
I wish I could find u
And maybe we could be
...Friends?

okay thats all im gonna post for now, so tell me what u think!

Mini · 06-26-2009, 04:15 PM

.Great Poems I Write Some Two.

Kuroda Taishi · 06-26-2009, 04:16 PM

I would ask a mod to move this over to the Fan Forge section Yoshi-Chan

mangagirl · 06-26-2009, 04:16 PM

great and cool!!

Yoshi-Chan · 06-26-2009, 04:25 PM

thankx

Lou!e · 06-26-2009, 04:26 PM

*Points at yoshi* You are an outcasters!

LOL me too.

Anbu-Phoenix · 06-26-2009, 04:28 PM

those were great you are very talented

Life AKA Death · 06-26-2009, 04:28 PM

i like writing poems to but mine urs i think r a little better

Yoshi-Chan · 06-26-2009, 04:29 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Anbu-Phoenix

those were great you are very talented

thanks, i try to be.^_^

Spark · 06-26-2009, 04:33 PM

awesome poems

Yoshi-Chan · 06-26-2009, 04:37 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lewis4

*Points at yoshi* You are an outcasters!

LOL me too.

yeah, i am!

Yoshi-Chan · 06-26-2009, 04:37 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Spark

awesome poems

thankz

Yoshi-Chan · 06-26-2009, 04:55 PM

okay this one i wrote when i was extremely bored

Over the Rainbow

There is a land they say,
Some where way over that rainbow,
But have u ever heard of anyone who's been there?

One day,
I hope we will find that place,
But I hope there is no chace,
Or race,
But peace,

At least,
Have people to share,
Those things over that rainbow,

But we arrive back at the one major problem,
How the heck do we get over the fricken rainbow?

Lou!e · 06-26-2009, 06:09 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Yoshi-Chan

okay this one i wrote when i was extremely bored

Over the Rainbow

There is a land they say,
Some where way over that rainbow,
But have u ever heard of anyone who's been there?

One day,
I hope we will find that place,
But I hope there is no chace,
Or race,
But peace,

At least,
Have people to share,
Those things over that rainbow,

But we arrive back at the one major problem,
How the heck do we get over the fricken rainbow?

I like rainbows.

Yoshi-Chan · 06-26-2009, 06:38 PM

me too.

Lou!e · 06-26-2009, 06:57 PM

Gay rainbows!

animelover · 06-27-2009, 08:24 AM

nice poems, i may write one too

Anbu-Phoenix · 06-27-2009, 08:27 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Yoshi-Chan

okay this one i wrote when i was extremely bored

Over the Rainbow

There is a land they say,
Some where way over that rainbow,
But have u ever heard of anyone who's been there?

One day,
I hope we will find that place,
But I hope there is no chace,
Or race,
But peace,

At least,
Have people to share,
Those things over that rainbow,

But we arrive back at the one major problem,
How the heck do we get over the fricken rainbow?

thats really good

madara' · 06-27-2009, 08:34 AM

Awesome.

Yoshi-Chan · 06-27-2009, 09:28 AM

thankz

06-26-2009, 04:13 PM	#1
Yoshi-Chan Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: May 2009 Location: Far away. Posts: 2,216 Rep Power: 9	My Poems okay well I like writing, and i like peoples comments about my poems. So here are some of my poems!: The Outcasts All alone, No one there, By themselves, Plotting, Always plotting, Pretentious seconds, Ticking away, Needless to nobody, Needn't to care. If you showed a speck of kindness, Maybe you'd be spared, For tonight the Outcasts take revenge, Taking your souls, Because you made them like this, Uselessly beaten, Horridly picked on, Tonight the Outcasts take your life. Welcome to My Land of Missfits. ( i spelled misfits wrong) Welcome to my land of missfits, where everyone is welcome to stay, Come to the missfit town, Listen to the Missfit band play, Welcome to my land of missfits, You can be the Mayor of this little town, throw a ball, and dance round and round, or be alone and dont make a sound, The choice is yours in this land, In the meadows the fawns lay, And the bunnies may, eat the lush greens, If you catch one, Sure you can brush him, Or go to the rivers, and take a swim, For you see in this town, In this land, You can be free, To run in the breeze, Or sit on your nees, So now my friend, I welcome you to my land of missfits. (this one is about a vampire, its kinda older than the others) So Alone... I am so alone No one's there Day after day Night after night Always by myself Why dont they like me No one does I am so alone On the run from everything For they shun me For what He made me And so for that I am so alone But one day I wish I could find u And maybe we could be ...Friends? okay thats all im gonna post for now, so tell me what u think! __________________ "I won't give up on us, Even if the skies get rough, I'm giving you all my love, I'm still looking up.."

06-26-2009, 04:15 PM	#2
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06-26-2009, 04:16 PM	#3
Kuroda Taishi Banned Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: In the Shadows Posts: 12,154 Rep Power: 0	Re: My Poems I would ask a mod to move this over to the Fan Forge section Yoshi-Chan

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06-26-2009, 04:28 PM	#8
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06-26-2009, 04:55 PM	#13
Yoshi-Chan Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: May 2009 Location: Far away. Posts: 2,216 Rep Power: 9	Re: My Poems okay this one i wrote when i was extremely bored Over the Rainbow There is a land they say, Some where way over that rainbow, But have u ever heard of anyone who's been there? One day, I hope we will find that place, But I hope there is no chace, Or race, But peace, At least, Have people to share, Those things over that rainbow, But we arrive back at the one major problem, How the heck do we get over the fricken rainbow? __________________ "I won't give up on us, Even if the skies get rough, I'm giving you all my love, I'm still looking up.."

06-26-2009, 06:38 PM	#15
Yoshi-Chan Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: May 2009 Location: Far away. Posts: 2,216 Rep Power: 9	Re: My Poems me too. __________________ "I won't give up on us, Even if the skies get rough, I'm giving you all my love, I'm still looking up.."

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