Random Oneshot Stories.

Chidori of Death · 10-12-2010, 07:39 PM

I will be writing random One Shot(One Chapter(I may continue a few, and no, none of these are gonna be about ninjas.Probably.)) Stories.
Our first one begins in a dark room, whose only light is from a dim candle.

As I look up I wonder where I am, and more importantly Who I am. I hear an animal scurrying across the floor. "Wh-who's there?!" I cry out, eyes filled with terror.I find this cry was in vain, for there was no reply.I back up and trip over some lifeless being. I look closer curious and a Shriek of terror comes out of my mouth. "S-Sister!!!!!!!!!!!!!" He cries out find that it was his beautiful twin sister whom he'd been caring for since they were 12 and their parents died.He begins to shake the body thinking she might wake up, but to his dismay she does not.A small sad voice rings out from across the room."It's no use, she's dead. All else who have entered this room have suffered the same fate..."She cries out, mourning the loss of her only friend. "Wh-Who are you?!" He Cries, startled. ".....I do not have a name........" She begins to cry. He walks over to her and tries to cheer her up, and notices 2 small wings sticking out of her back. "GAH!!!" He stumbles backwards at the sight of the dark wings."Wh-who, or what are you?!?!" He cries out.She sobs "I-I don't know.I always harm those closest to me!I wish I'd just Die!" She shrieks. A thought appears in the male's head."Y-You did this to her?!?!?!"He sobs."Y-yes........I-I don't know why.My body just reacted when i smelt her delicious....juicy......blood!" She begins salivating uncontrollably and her eyes have a spark of desire in them.

To Be Continued.

Jonesy · 10-12-2010, 10:28 PM

I like it, but the text messes with my eyes. @_@

lolohwd · 10-12-2010, 11:25 PM

sounds beast

Kunoichi · 10-12-2010, 11:28 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by lolohwd

sounds beast

agreed

Chidori of Death · 10-13-2010, 05:23 AM

Sorry jonesy, I'll copy and post it in gray in a spoiler.

Thank you all for your kind words.

COLORLESS VERSION

Spoiler:

Chidori of Death · 10-13-2010, 02:32 PM

And a new story!
Again this story, like most of mine is Unnamed.
And this one will most likely be continued.Unlike most others of mine.

Spoiler:

Colorless Version!

Spoiler:

Bacon · 10-13-2010, 02:39 PM

pretty cool. &_&

Jonesy · 10-13-2010, 09:49 PM

Pretty cool shiznit, brah.

Chidori of Death · 10-14-2010, 04:54 AM

Lol thanks jonesy , and I'm going to write another chapter for the second fic today xD

Kunoichi · 10-15-2010, 05:55 PM

What happens next?!

Tucker · 10-16-2010, 02:17 AM

awesome!
but just wanna point out something on the first one, you went from first person to third person, you might wanna fix that
just friendly advice though

Chidori of Death · 11-11-2010, 12:08 AM

Spoiler:

10-12-2010, 07:39 PM	#1
Chidori of Death Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Somewhere in a galaxy far, far away.... Posts: 10,157 Rep Power: 11	Random Oneshot Stories. I will be writing random One Shot(One Chapter(I may continue a few, and no, none of these are gonna be about ninjas.Probably.)) Stories. Our first one begins in a dark room, whose only light is from a dim candle. As I look up I wonder where I am, and more importantly Who I am. I hear an animal scurrying across the floor. "Wh-who's there?!" I cry out, eyes filled with terror.I find this cry was in vain, for there was no reply.I back up and trip over some lifeless being. I look closer curious and a Shriek of terror comes out of my mouth. "S-Sister!!!!!!!!!!!!!" He cries out find that it was his beautiful twin sister whom he'd been caring for since they were 12 and their parents died.He begins to shake the body thinking she might wake up, but to his dismay she does not.A small sad voice rings out from across the room."It's no use, she's dead. All else who have entered this room have suffered the same fate..."She cries out, mourning the loss of her only friend. "Wh-Who are you?!" He Cries, startled. ".....I do not have a name........" She begins to cry. He walks over to her and tries to cheer her up, and notices 2 small wings sticking out of her back. "GAH!!!" He stumbles backwards at the sight of the dark wings."Wh-who, or what are you?!?!" He cries out.She sobs "I-I don't know.I always harm those closest to me!I wish I'd just Die!" She shrieks. A thought appears in the male's head."Y-You did this to her?!?!?!"He sobs."Y-yes........I-I don't know why.My body just reacted when i smelt her delicious....juicy......blood!" She begins salivating uncontrollably and her eyes have a spark of desire in them. To Be Continued. __________________ Spoiler: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Last edited by Chidori of Death; 10-13-2010 at 05:24 AM.

10-12-2010, 10:28 PM	#2
Jonesy likes to post-it post-it Konoha Military Force Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 36,013 Rep Power: 24	Re: Random Oneshot Stories. I like it, but the text messes with my eyes. @_@

10-12-2010, 11:25 PM	#3
lolohwd Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Apr 2009 Posts: 8,207 Rep Power: 12	Re: Random Oneshot Stories. sounds beast

10-13-2010, 05:23 AM	#5
Chidori of Death Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Somewhere in a galaxy far, far away.... Posts: 10,157 Rep Power: 11	Random Oneshot Stories. Sorry jonesy, I'll copy and post it in gray in a spoiler. Thank you all for your kind words. COLORLESS VERSION Spoiler: As I look up I wonder where I am, and more importantly Who I am. I hear an animal scurrying across the floor. "Wh-who's there?!" I cry out, eyes filled with terror.I find this cry was in vain, for there was no reply.I back up and trip over some lifeless being. I look closer curious and a Shriek of terror comes out of my mouth. "S-Sister!!!!!!!!!!!!!" He cries out find that it was his beautiful twin sister whom he'd been caring for since they were 12 and their parents died.He begins to shake the body thinking she might wake up, but to his dismay she does not.A small sad voice rings out from across the room."It's no use, she's dead. All else who have entered this room have suffered the same fate..."She cries out, mourning the loss of her only friend. "Wh-Who are you?!" He Cries, startled. ".....I do not have a name........" She begins to cry. He walks over to her and tries to cheer her up, and notices 2 small wings sticking out of her back. "GAH!!!" He stumbles backwards at the sight of the dark wings."Wh-who, or what are you?!?!" He cries out.She sobs "I-I don't know.I always harm those closest to me!I wish I'd just Die!" She shrieks. A thought appears in the male's head."Y-You did this to her?!?!?!"He sobs."Y-yes........I-I don't know why.My body just reacted when i smelt her delicious....juicy......blood!" She begins salivating uncontrollably and her eyes have a spark of desire in them. __________________ Spoiler: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Last edited by yondaime; 10-15-2010 at 06:18 PM. Reason: Not necessary for two posts.

10-13-2010, 02:32 PM	#6
Chidori of Death Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Somewhere in a galaxy far, far away.... Posts: 10,157 Rep Power: 11	Re: Random Oneshot Stories. And a new story! Again this story, like most of mine is Unnamed. And this one will most likely be continued.Unlike most others of mine. Spoiler: As I walk down a long, dark corridor whose only source of light is coming from candles on the wall, I see the glimmer of a door handle and reach for it. As I try to open it, the handle breaks off from years of corrosion. "Damn..." I mumble, frustrated. I search my surroundings for another door, and see a pale little black haired girl, who looked to be around 8 years old, dressed in a white robe. She was hunched over something in a corner. "What's wrong, little girl?" I ask her.She looked up to me with Pleading Brown eyes and replied. "It's Mommy, She won't wake up!" She says in between crying gasp.I peer over her shoulder and see a beautiful woman, her face fixed in a position that looks as though she was screaming in terror as she died.She was dressed in a long, elegant black robe. The child shook he, crying out in between pleading gasp,"Mommy, Mommy, please wake up!" As tears rolled down this angelic child's cheeks, I had to fight off the urge to cry myself. I put my hand on her shoulder and tried to comfort her, "Hey, there, it's okay, everything's gonna be alright..." Even though my heart told me otherwise. To Be Continued... Colorless Version! Spoiler: As I walk down a long, dark corridor whose only source of light is coming from candles on the wall, I see the glimmer of a door handle and reach for it. As I try to open it, the handle breaks off from years of corrosion. "Damn..." I mumble, frustrated. I search my surroundings for another door, and see a pale little black haired girl, who looked to be around 8 years old, dressed in a white robe. She was hunched over something in a corner. "What's wrong, little girl?" I ask her.She looked up to me with Pleading Brown eyes and replied. "It's Mommy, She won't wake up!" She says in between crying gasp.I peer over her shoulder and see a beautiful woman, her face fixed in a position that looks as though she was screaming in terror as she died.She was dressed in a long, elegant black robe. The child shook he, crying out in between pleading gasp,"Mommy, Mommy, please wake up!" As tears rolled down this angelic child's cheeks, I had to fight off the urge to cry myself. I put my hand on her shoulder and tried to comfort her, "Hey, there, it's okay, everything's gonna be alright..." Even though my heart told me otherwise. To Be Continued... __________________ Spoiler: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Last edited by Chidori of Death; 10-13-2010 at 02:43 PM.

10-13-2010, 02:39 PM	#7
Bacon Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Walkin' through the candy-lane with Tifa.~ -.- Posts: 30,051 Rep Power: 28 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Random Oneshot Stories. pretty cool. &_& __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

10-13-2010, 09:49 PM	#8
Jonesy likes to post-it post-it Konoha Military Force Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 36,013 Rep Power: 24	Re: Random Oneshot Stories. Pretty cool shiznit, brah.

10-14-2010, 04:54 AM	#9
Chidori of Death Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Somewhere in a galaxy far, far away.... Posts: 10,157 Rep Power: 11	Re: Random Oneshot Stories. Lol thanks jonesy , and I'm going to write another chapter for the second fic today xD __________________ Spoiler: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

10-15-2010, 05:55 PM	#10
Kunoichi Easily Bribed Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: Forward-Down-Forward-Y Posts: 11,685 Rep Power: 17	Re: Random Oneshot Stories. What happens next?! __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Spoiler: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

10-16-2010, 02:17 AM	#11
Tucker Banned Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: with Colonel Mustard, in the study, with the gun Posts: 1,194 Rep Power: 0	Re: Random Oneshot Stories. awesome! but just wanna point out something on the first one, you went from first person to third person, you might wanna fix that just friendly advice though

11-11-2010, 12:08 AM	#12
Chidori of Death Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Somewhere in a galaxy far, far away.... Posts: 10,157 Rep Power: 11	Re: Random Oneshot Stories. Spoiler: I look back at the child's mother and gasp in horror.The body was deteriorating at an alarming rate!Gaping, horrified by the sight,wishing to turn away. Yet, my mind was so mystified , I couldn't bring myself to look away.I look to the child, seeing a small, sad smile, and feel at peace. YES I KNOW THIS ONE WAS SHORT! __________________ Spoiler: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

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