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Old 09-11-2010, 03:40 PM   #1
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LOCATION:SOUL SOCIETY
distance: 50 meters
WEATHER:VERY WINDY, WITH A CHANCE OF THUNDER STORMS
TIME OF DAY:NIGHT TIME: 8:00 P.M
RULES:NO GM, IF SO REDO TURN, NO REGENERATION, AFTER TWO TURNS IT WILL BEGIN TO RAIN.
KNODLEDGE: BASIC KNOWLEDE OF HIS PAST BATTLE, NO CURRENT KNOWLEDGE.

MAKOTO WILL GO FIRST




i roam los noches, as i begin to recieve orders from my sister, the queen of hueco mundo. i slowly become excited as she tells me my orders, i have to infeltrate the soul society on a reconnesence mission, in order to gather intel. i hug my sister, as i walk through the garaganta, i emerge from the garaganta with my reiatsu concealed. as i then appear in the air, on a dark night in the soul society, i then touch down in the seritei streets. i look up, as i see black clouds form, as the sun sets. suddenly, i hear the taping of foot steps in the distance, as i slip behind a wall, i then look as i see laxeras, the captainof squad four walking down the streets of the seritei. i then pep my head in before he can see me, i then place my hand on my zanpakuto's hilt, silently, as i begin to draw it. i then release all of my reiatsu in a massive burst crushing some of the wall of the seritei around me, revealing my location, in a flashy entrence. i then soindo out of sight, as i begin my attack.




as i soindo, i create two after images, both of them appear infront of you 50 meters away, attempting to distract you, as i soindo, appearing 10 meters above, as i then point four fingers down towards you, as i say "wolf strikeing bala" suddenly, four white bala are fired from finger tip all guided with my reiatsu. if you dodge them they will follow you, these bala are very thin and sharp, enablin gthem to cut through most defences. one is guided towards your skull vertically, attempting slice your skull in half. another one is guided for the vertebra below your neck horizantally, attempting to slice you spine in half. the other two are guided towards you neck and hearta, one attempting to cut off your head, the other one attempting to pierce through your heart. suddenly, as i fire my bala i quickly, soindo 10 meters behind, while i swiftly draw my zanpakuto in a slashing motion, sending a cero that is guided with my reiatsu towards your waist, attempting to slice you in half. i then soindo, as i begin to charge two ceros on the tip of my index finger and my middle finger.





as i soindo, i appear in front of you 30 meters away, with my back turn towards you, as i place my right hand below my left arm, as i release two cero that are guided towards you with my reiatsu. one is complety orange that is guided towards your head, attempting to blow your head off, the other one is complety clear and is very hard to see and is guided towards your head attempting to pierce through your heart. suddenly, i soindo again as i begin to charge a cero in my mouth, as i await my opponents counter.
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Old 09-11-2010, 05:16 PM   #2
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On the way to the tea house the black space opens up and out of it comes only wind. No figure of any kind, or so. Two images of this wold shape like man are in front of me. I smile and then pick something else up behind me 10 meters. The words that came from you formed into white like balls of energy formed onto your finger tips. With a smile I shupo to my side and dodge them all only taking in a soft heat wave that makes only my body heat warm up. One a nick of the dime these balls are able to follow me. I point out my hand and a blast of energy is now formed. When I say " Futon Art: Balance" The shot of energy expands as it exits from my hand and over comes your balls shoving them all back into the ground making them erupt in ground sending up rocks and dirt to block parts of your ceros that you have fired after me.

I shupo 10 feet back and 20 feet into the air with ease. Taking my other arm back a blue energy is formed now. Saying Okami Braka. The blue light formed into a blast of energy that was able to equal up to your first cero. While this is done the other one made its way to be. I shupo down ward and take out my own Zanpouto sending it up into the air cutting right into the clear energy that touches the blade breaking the bonds and sending it shattering behind me. Making it harmless. With a soft sigh I shupo ten feet behind where you are with my blade pointed right at you. I send forth a small burst of energy from the tip before I shupo back once more and place the blade in my arms. " Break from the Cages, Noahs." My blade evolve into a cloud of energy that has a light based feel it making it now a sword of pure lighting. I swung up my arm and sending it down making a shot of lighting spark form the blade.

The spark made a few bird like forms morph that sends it into the your range and line of target. The birds where made to move at a high rated speed of 10 mach, they as well scream supersonic level of sound out to you able to break your bones and cause a burst of the fluid in your ear making you deaf. They come around you and in only a few short sec they blow up making a cloud of lighting that have the harm to burn as well and kill you if you are caught in the mufti foot radius. With this done I keep slashing sending more and more power into the blast that was already made. The large threads that the blast would have now are able to guide its way to you and enter into your heart lungs and head under the chin killing you if you are hit.

I stand back and with one hand I brush off some of the burns from the 600o lighting off my skin. With my other the lighting keep charging inside of the blade forming a shape of a few tigers running around inside. I wait for this foe to counter me now.
as i soindo, the cero that i have been chargeing has now finished, since i charged in the last turn, my pesquisa tracks your movements as you soindo behind me, i then release the cero towards your blast of energy, while simultaneously placeing my right arm horizantally infront of me as i then say "shaping moon sheilds" suddenly, a massive rotateing white triangle barrier forms infront of me, as or our attacks collide, leaveing me unscathed. this barrier is very similair to danku. suddenly, i see you shun-po back to your previous, asi then hear you chant, as you release your shikai. as you release your shikai, i know i cannot keep up with shikai in my base form, due to the fact that a shikai is the equivalent of the espada 1st release, i hve no choice, but to release. i then draw my zanpakuto, my zanpakuto's blade is six foot long, the hilt is completly white, i have two seperate guards on my zanpakuto, one is a white triangle, the other is a white circular shaped symbol. i then place my blade below my left arm, as i drag my finger nails, across the blade slowly, as the blade begins to glow white. suddenly, the out line of my body is enveloped in a white line, as i prepare to go into my 1st release, as you release your shikai.




BRIGHTEN THE MOON, MATUKAI OOKAMI. suddenly you hear a high pitched whining scream that is very similair to a sonic wave, that echos through your ear, attempting on impairng your movements for a momment. suddenly, a massive moon ray comes down from the moon of the soul society. envelpoeding my entire body, then suddenly a massive burst of white moon light shoots out from my location. attempting to blinding you for a moment everything is complety white. then you feel a reiatsu that send you to you knees. following that a massive shock wave of reiatsu then bursts from my location, followed by an explsion of reiatsu, that blows away your birds,as our sound attacks collide cancelinf each other out and your threads of energy are blown away as well. hopefully sending you flying back. suddenly, everything returns the way it was before as if nothing happend. i then appear fully healed and my reiatsu restored in my released form.
Starting at my head, I still have my white wolf ears. My hair has grown very long and has turned white. My eyes are orange showing my heightened vision. My entire mouth piece of hollow mask has reformed, up to my nose. Above my head is pure white halo made of reiatsu glowing with radiance. My body has changed form. I am a staggering sever foot two inches. I reveal my massive muscles, as my body has re formed into the full size of a full grown male were wolf. I have pure white fur glowing with a white radience. Deep under my fur I have a very hard and dense white hollow armor, unseen by anyone. My claws are erected and are very long. I sprout two twenty foot wings that are glowing with the intial white radience ,as the rest of my body. My feathers glow with raidience as well. My wing are surrounded by these tiny white dots. That emit a bright white light. Suddenly my I flutter my tail revealing that it is white and glowing with radience and is made of pure white reiatsu. my tail is made of reishi and reiatsu, i can restore it due that factor. also i can extend and retract my tail. behold my 1st release. suddenly, as i reveal my first release my begin to rise into air, as several of my dots(stars) off my wings begin to form together on the tip of my index finger, as i hold it up towards you.




as i rise and my dots(stars) begin to form on tip of my index finger, it forms a massive cero that has a round ball like shape at the tip, as i then say "shooting star cero" suddenly, almost imedetly, as massive white cero that is glowing with a bright white radience is released from my index finger towards you, this cero is much wider and has much more destructive force than even a gran ray, suddenly, as this cero reaches within 30 meters of your location, it then splits into thousands of smaller ceros with the same round tips as the intial ones. each one one of these ceros will explsode on contact createing a truly devestaing explsion, each individual cero only cause a minor explsion, how ever these cer are guided with my reiatsu, even if you dodge they will follow you and hit you simultaneously.




as i launch my cero, i then soindo, reaching hyper sonic speeds of mach 8.0, as i then appear 20 meters behind you, in a 35 degree angle. suddenly, my tail begins to flutter, as it then splits into two tail, then those split into four and so on, until i reach a maximun number of fifty, i then lash out twelve of my tails towards you at super sonic+ speeds, all of them aim for a specific part of your body.(my tails are very sharp and covered in super heated reiatsu, making them like blades) each of them gleming from super heated reiatsu, three are aimed towards your head, one is aimed vertically towards you skull, attempting to slice your skull in half, the other one is aimed horizantally towards your neck attempting to cut off your head, the other one is aimed towards your eye ball in a pierceing motion, attempting to pierce your skull. three more are aimed from the waist up, one is aimed for your heart in a pierceing motion attempting to pierce through your heart, the other one is aimed in a pierceing motion towards your stomache, attmepting to pierce through your stomach, causeing severe abdominail bleeding, the other one is aimed horizantally towards your waist, attempting to slice you in half. another three are aimed towards your back, two of them are aimed towards the vertebra, one is aimed towards the vertebra below your neck in a pierceing motion, attempting to severe your spine, the other one is aimed vertically towards the vertebra above your kidney, attmepting to slice your vertebra vertically, the other one is aimed horizantally towards you back, attempting to slice you in half. the last three are sent under ground, all aimed for your waist down, two are aimed in a pierceing motion towards your speeds, attempting to pierce through your feet, causeing severe bleeding, the other one is aimed horizantally towards your feet, attmepting to cut off your feet. all these tails are comeing at you simultaneously, and most of them cannot be stoped from a burst of wind, due to the fact that they are traveling at super sonic+ speeds, all of them are covered in super heated reiatsu, if you get cut at all, the super heated reiatsu will burn you from the inside out frying your oragans, the smallest cut will cause death.




after i lash my tails out i flutter my wings, as they begin to glow with a bright white radience, as i then say "sun moon" suddenly, my wings emit a bright white light that is filled with super heated reiatsu, similair to a spot light, i then shine these lights on you as they attempt to burn the skin off your bones in a matter of seconds.
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Old 09-11-2010, 08:45 PM   #3
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haha, gotta hand it to you Mako, you're definitely improving! You're doing good too Shino
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Just say thanks :D lol
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* When you release I stop my charge. You have now a even messed up look than your did before. Charging this ball on your finger gave me time to shupo teen feet into the air and then shupo once more 15 feet away to your back leaving me harmless of the ceros power. Seeing as this one was as well homing like This means I have to try harder. I turn around and swing my sword down in the air sending a wave of radiation from the slash out in to the air making now speck form everywhere in front of me. These specks where meant for my charge, they each made a set of twin legs and a set of heads. Two for each one. Now formed they all looked like dogs with black and white fur around them as well as sharp teeth and dark red eyes. With a kick I send them at your cero while some go under it the others take it head on meeting it causing a explosion cloud to form inside of the air. Because my distance was so far the cloud only lommed far away from me but not the same over you. The cloud you see means that my dogs had to meet with something. When this happens energy is erupted and caused to expan out in a large ranger. The makes the atmosphere hot and changes the water inside of the air hotter forming closer making rain clouds. These rain down droplets of rain down on you acdic to the touch. However because my own element was used then it would be as harmful as regular rain. With this done you then show up behind me with tails on fire to attack. I am able to trace your actions and pary easily using only my sword since the number is so few and I happen to be faster than most reapers. 50 however means I need to added something. Seeing as I am Okami based means my reaction are quicker and more timed placed. I swing down my blade stoping one of them while I shupo back dodging the rest with ease. Only one hits me in my arm due to the numbers that I over estimated. With one hand my purple energy comes out and touches the wound. " Kaji Toruko" The light seeps into the would and makes its way around the infected organs blood veins and channels. They form a energy thread into one and then move it around sewing the wound back up and good as new. As well as subsiding the wound.

With this I then look up to see you bring your wings back. I shupo down and under you to block the rays of sun that then showed on the earth cracking it up some from the assumed heat from the rays. Under you I bring up my blade and send forth a few slashes of my energy into waves to the air. These slashes made now a form of a new larger rams that where speeding after you clocking in at Mach 9.5 speeds faster than your ceros where. If they hit you they would send a eruption of force into your ribs able to crack them and break to the shoulder blade where your wings attach to on the body. As well as this they have enough force to make the heart pump faster and block the pulmonary veins and values shutting off blood flow making the aorta bust open and kill you in twenty short secs. The first slash had two Rams seeing as I made two slashes this means four are headed to you, they are as well guided.

I stand back some and then circling images inside of my blade now touched the top of the lighting dome that was made from the command and form. I stab my blade into the ground and cracks the earth sending up a protective cube of energy around me, inside black and white twin images of tigers panthers and Lions formed. Each one was made to look just like its size. I drop the cube and show off my new animals, however as well as these the cuber was now morphing into something. A body of a Lizard formed first, next the legs of a plain white dragon, now a head of what looks like a wold and a lion mixed with red eyes as hot as fire it self. With it came a white tail with a triage tip on the end of it. Jumping on the form it reared up and set back down. My cats of prey then circled me. The lion and the tigers now mixed and formed a huge liger like shape. The patter however stayed there.

" Now then. I can stop playing around. Hondo time."

My hands came up dropping my blade on to the ground. In my right a black box formed in my right a yellow ball of energy formed as well making a spiket of some sort like shape. " Hondo #88 Hiryugekizokushintenraiho" My left hands shape was done and with those words the blast was fired out into the sky aiming right for you. The large scale of it is hard to dodge and block as well from the heat and size. With my right I said " Hondo # 90 Kurohitsugi " With this came the cube blasting out into the sky forming a black box around your with 50 feet wide and 50 feet tall, inside you would be hit with black spears that made it to where your wings and hiero would no nothing but fail to the hands of the attack. These both are strong enough to kill you with ease.

My kido attack is done and I send forth my free hand apart from 90 still up in that one and not charge a strong wave of energy into it. A larger now lighter cube some what like black coffin only it was not at wide only taller. With it done charging I push my palm up and say " Okami Brach: Compression Howl." The box is fired from my palm and was enter into the blacker box where spears and spears are be layered into you killing you if you are hit. The small speck of light then erupts and sends the box crashing down with all its force enough to break bones and shatter you hiero with ease. As well as the large scale force came a sound wave enough to tear away the skin as well as all burst ear drums that go trough he ear into the brain and send one enough to crush it as well.

With this done I only sit down and touch my chest where black light went into it and restores my energy to max levels.

" I am of the MD corp I am able to resort my energy where ever I please. As well as this I can heal my self.
i watch in awe as you dodge and parry all of my attacks, i begin to dought my self, as you heal the only wound you got from my barrage. suddenly, as you dodge my sun moon attack you shun-po below lauching these waves of energy that are extremly deadly. as you shun-po i focus my reiatsu in the pupils abd the iris within my eyes, suddenly my eyes fade to a orange color, activating my wolf sense(wolf sense is a technique that allows me to sync up with my animal instincts, which allows me to sense attacks within a 30 meter radius, it gives me a 360 degree line of sight, it also hightens all of my senses.) as you shun-po below i easily track your movements, as you begin to slash, i relize i need time to do this, i then advance soindo back wards, reaching hyper sonic speeds of mach 9.6, which is my peak in first release, i then see your attacks coming, i am a little faster than so would still be able to keep them at bay for a momment, as i place my right arm infront of my chest making an A formation, as my right arm begins to emit a bright white radience, as i then say "ultima moon scythe" suddenly, i lash out my right arm, as brilliant scthe comes forth in my hand. it's hilt following up to the blade is completly white, the blade is pitch black, both palces have white and black dots within the color. as my scythe appears, i swing my scythe wildly, as i say "moon light slash" suddenly, four massive waves of white glowing reiatsu are released from my scythe blades, similair to ichigo's getsuga tenshou, out attacks collide creating a massive explosion, i then howl, releaseing massive sound wave that collides with your sound wave of your energy waves canceling each other out, as i then stop 3 miles away from your location.





suddenly, i feel this rain drop down upon me, i then create a sheild of reiatsu around my hierro, as i then say "ha i have the stringest hierro in the espada, the only hierro that surpasses mine is my sister" suddenly, concentrate my hightened vision on your location, i then all these animals and one strange create that looks like a liger. suddenly, i hear you say somei=thing about kido, suddenly, i see this massive blast of electricity coming towards me, suddenly, i place my index finger towards it as i say "full moon cero" suddenly, a massive white cero with a glowing white out line is fired from my index finger towards your hado 88, they both collide creating a massive explsion, as i am unharmed due to the fact that im far away, due advanced reiatsu control i can fire my base cero's with ease. suddenly, i bring in all of my limbs and wings, as a massive amount of reiatsu begin to buided around my body, as my hierro begins to glow with a bright white radience, suddenly, as your hado 90 is forming around me, there is a intervel to how long it takes to form that massive box, i then use this opportunity to howl and lash out all of my limbs as well as my wings, in a massive burst of white glowing energy that is 200 feet in lenght and width, it destroys your kido before it can form around me, it will last for 30 seconds, it also sends out a massive sound wave when i howled, sebsequently stoping your compression howl attacks sound wave.





suddenly, as my burst of energy shatter and destroys both of your attacks, the white halo hovering above my head begins to glow with a white bright radience, suddenly, massive bright beam of white energy is fired into the sky, distorting some of the clouds above me, as the moon light shines down upon me, my sheild of reiatsu protects me from the rains, as well as my heirro. suddenly, i point my head down upon as, my halo begins to glow from the moon,as a cero has already been charging in the middle of my halo when i lauched the beam into the air, i then say "full moon rotation" suddenly, massive rotational white glowing cero beam is fired from my halo towards your chest, at super sonic+ speeds of mach 7.5. the tip od rotating a high speeds like a drill which will pierce your chest and explsode on contact if hit. it is guided with my reiatsu.





suddenly, as i fire my cero i then place my scythe and my arm down by my side, as i erect my left arm out, as i say "cresent moons" suddenly, 10 very sharp crest shaped white gloing barrier blades form in front of me and behind me and one is my hand. they levetate beside me these are made of a barrier and they are just like blades. i then advance soindo, reaching hyper sonic+ speeds of mach 9.0, i then appear 15 meters above you as i swing my left arm sending the first cresent moon out towards you, the other around me follow,as i throw the intial one, they are all guided with my reieatsu and will slice you to pieces if hit. three are guided, horizantally towrads your skull, attempting to slice your skull into 3 pieces. one is guided vertically, towards your spine, attempting to slice you have vertically, the other are guided towards you body attmepting to slice you in different places. i then advnace soindo. reaching hyper sonic speeds of 9.0, as i appear 2 miles away from you, as my crsent moons then re form around me and one in my hands. as i await my opponents counter.
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Old 09-12-2010, 10:54 AM   #6
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Superheated sp........have you been reading my fights mako. Thats your sisters signature move I do hope you know. You can use it though but only cause you are my little bro and cause I can help you perfect it if you want. I have some pretty bad as superheated sp moves.
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Why did you put Gray around part of my move?
i didnt even notice. sorry.
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*sigh* halo 3 on legendary is hard. i was to busy playing halo 3 ODST, i didnt get the chance to play halo 3 on legendary, heh well halo reach comes out the day after tommorw, so excited.
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It's fine.

I need to do a Charter Analysis Sheet for homework. Then I will counter.

What is the temp of the SP? It takes 2456.F to out do my combo of the # 90 and the Okami.
same tempeture as super heated sp. some where around 2800, how ever due to the burst i would have to say 2850.
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In a pratcial assume the attacks where stoped with a higher power scaling energy based move. Now that the Okami was done as well as the Black Coffin something comes from your mouth. A large drill of some sort comes over you arm, with a flash your send it after me hopping to hit my chest and com bust it. One huge leg how ever meet with your drill and smashes the energy around it sending the force of the impact down on your arm now, this should break your bones and up to the neck part where it snaps part of the bone that contests the shoulder to the neck. However because of the high rotation as well the leg would have a large cut over it and then land limping before the smash sends you flying back a ways away from my. The words that came from you now formed something of white reshi that have sharpness to them, they form around you and hover there. I pick my blade up and hitting my foot onto my beast it starts to move crushing parts of the ground around it. Transferring energy trough my feet into the contacted channel around the beast made it easier to control and move. This means I am allowed to shupo with the beast under my feet at high speed. The attacks where meant to be missed so easily other wise they would not have hit the air and then arched to find me. I stop my shupo and put both hands out saying " Okami Brach: Narshi Black Void." which triggers a evolving energy around my palms that forms a black orb in the center. This orb then grows as the rest of my hands take over this energy and open it up to look as if it was a gap in the space time barrier. However it was not, the slashes hit where my body should have been yet they did not hit my actual body only my void that sucks in the energy and reduces it to nothing.

Stopping your attack I shut off mine and then stands there looking at you with a cocky grin. I shake my head before picking up my left foot and sends my beast shupoing everywhere. I shupo in a pattern of left right left left to appear 10m behind you with the same black and white boxes made into my palms. However they where not the same with one, I pressed it to the air breaking the seal on top sending it shattering into a rain of needles that have a white beam firing in the middle making it look like a whole beam. The other I slammed on to the ground where it breaks up and sends a few beams of black energy around which then en larges into a full cage around you with purple energy that takes in heat waves so super heated energy will not work. The needles hit the cage that homes in on you and sinks in combustion the formation sending super hot waves everywhere around you threatening to burn you winds and hiero that is claimed to be the strongest.

Arching back I take my blade and tip it down on the beast before shupoing once more now 200 m back. With this I held it in my hands and said. " BANKAI, Okami Noahes." The purple that was around my blades takes over my body and hit my back making a set of four wings pop out. One was black and had a ravens shape, one was white and took the form of a eagles, the other side on the top was the same as the first yet the second it has the same shade of white only it was not feather based but a bat like. With these wings as well came the blades full form of a set of twin spears that took the energy from the lighting to my chest where a plate like brace was on with a dogs head, a helm like head picice that looks like a tigers head on the top, and a set of black arm braces.

With my Bankai I swing down on of my spears and send a jolt of energy inside of the beast, it opens up its mouth charging a blast of energy particles to form into a ball. I swing up and then lean back touching the fur on the beast making the blast fire out sending the rocks and earth everywhere hitting speeds of a Mach 9.0 blast, this blast is guided and stands a massive 12x 35, if it hits your body tears apart and leaves you with nothing left but ash.

" Taking it slow now."
i watch as you counter all of my moves, i then contemplate my current situation, as you release your bankai. suddenly, i hold up my scythe in the air, as my reiatsu sky rockets, as i prepare to go into my 2nd release.




REVEAL THE DARKNESS WITHIN THE LIGHT, HANGAKU MATSUKAI OOKAMI. SUDDENLY MY LEFT WING, AS WELL AS THE ENTIRE LEFT SIDE OF MY IS ENVELOPED IN A OMINIOUS PITCH BLACK AURA, AS THE INTIAL WHITE FUR BEGINS TO FADE TO BLACK, ALMOST IMEDETLY AFTER, A SWIRLING WHITE AND BLACK AURA ERUPTS ALL AROUND ME AS IT BEGINS TO ROTATE AROUND ME, SUDDENLY, I BEGIN TO RISE UP. AS I REACH A HIGHT 10 METERS I STOP, AS I STOP THE AURA EXPLODES OUT WARDS, SENDING A MASSIVE SHOCK WAVE and explsion of reiatsu that will obliterate anything init's path, AS IT OBLITERATES YOUR CAGE, YOUR NEEDLES, AND YOUR BALL OF ENERGY, OUR REIATSU'S COLLIDE CANCELING EACHOTHER OUT. AS THE SMOKE CLEARS YOU SEE ME STANDING THIER IN MY 2ND RELEASE.


MY ETIRE BODY HAS MORPHED AND CHANGED IN STRUCTURE AND APPEARANCE. MY FACE HAS REFORMED AND LOOKS EXACTLY LIKE A WERE WOLF. I STAND A STAGGERING 12 FOOT 2 INCHES TALL, I HAVE SPROUTED SIX ARMS, THE ENTIRE LEFT HALF OF MY BODY, WING, AND TAILS HACE FADED TO A BLACK COLOR. MY ARMS AS WELL. MY SCYTHE HAS NOT CHANGED AT ALL, IT IS SURROUNED BY A BLACKISH AURA. BEHOLD MY 2ND RELEASE.





SUDDENLY, I PLACE MY SCYTHE IN MY TOP RIGHT HAND, AS I POINT MY INDEX FINGER OF MY BOTTOM LEFT HAND TOWARDS YOU, AS I BEGIN TO CHARGE AN OMINIOUS BLACK CERO WITH A WHITE OUTLINE. SUDDENLY, I ADVANCE SOINDO, REACHING HYPER SONIC+ SPEEDS OF MACH 10, LEAVINJG BEHING TEN AFTER IMAGES, ATTEMPTING TO DISTRACT YOU, AS I ALMOST INSTANTLY APPEAR 20 METERS ABOVE YOU, AS I SIMULTANEOUSLY LASH OUT ALL 50 OF MY TAILS,(WHITE AND BLACK) TOWARDS YOU AT HYPER SONIC SPEEDS OF MACH 9.5, ALL AIMED TOWARDS A SPECIFIC SPOT OF MY CHOOSEING. THE WHITE TAILS(25 IN NUMBER) ARE FILLED WITH SUPER HEATED REIATSU, THE SMALLEST CUT WILL YOU. THE BLACK ONES ARE NORMAL, 5 WHITE TAILS ARE AIMED FROM YOUR NECK UP, ONE IS AIM HORIZANTALLY TOWARDS YOUR NECK, ATTEMPTING TO CUT OFF YOUR HEAD. ANOTHER ONE IS AIMED VERTICALLY TOWARDS YOUR FORE HEAD, ATTEMPTING TO SLICE YOU SKULL IN HALF. ANOTHER ONE IS AIMED VERTICALLY TOWARDS YOUR SKULL, ATTEMPTING TO SLICE YOUR SKULL IN HALF, THE OTHER TOW ARE AIM IN A PIERCEING MOTION TOWARDS THE CROWN OF YOUR HEAD, ATEMPTING TO PIERCE YOUR SKULL. 5 MORE OF MY WHITE TAILS ARE AIMED FROM THE WAIST UP, ONE IS AIM IN AN PIERCEING MOTION TOWARDS YOUR HEART ATTEMPTING TO PIERCE THROUGH YOUR HEART. ANOTHER ONE AIMED TOWARDS HORIZANTALLY TOWARDS YOUR WAIST, ATTEMPTING TO SLICE YOU IN HALF. TWO ARE AIMED IN A PIERCING MOTION FOR A HEAD ON COLLISION TOWARDS THE MIDDLE OF YOUR NECK, THE CLASH OF SUPER HEATED REIATSU WILL CAUSE A SMALL EXPLSION, ATTEMPTING TO BLOW YOUR HEAD OFF. THE OTHER ONE IS AIMED IN A PIERCEING MOTION TOWARDS YOUR ABDOMEN, ATTEMPTING TO PIERCE YOU THROUGH THE STOMACHE AND CAUSE SEVERE AND PERFUE BLEEDING. TEN MORE OF MY WHITE TAILS ARE AIMED FOR YOUR SPINE. NINE OF THEM ARE AIMED IN A PIERCEING MOTION TOWARDS YOUR ENTIRE SPINEAL CORDS AND SPINE, ATTEMPTING TO PIERCE AND SEVER YOUR SPINE IN NINE DIFFERENT PLACES. THE OTHER ONE IS AIMED, IN PIERCEING MOTION TOWARDS YOUR CHEST ATTEMPTING TO PIERCE YOUR CHEST. ALL THE OTHER REMAINING WHITE TAILS AND BLACK TAIL ARE AIMED ALL AROUND YOU, FROM ALL ANGLES, ATTEMPTING TO CUT YOU ALL OVER. ALL OF THESE TAILS ARE COMING AT YOU SIMULTANEOUSLY, MAKING IT VERY HARD TO EVADE. THE SMALLEST CUT BY MY WHITE TAILS IS DEATH, THE SUPER HEATED REIATSU WILL ENTER YOUR BODY AND FRY YOUR ORGANS FROM THE INSIDE OUT..





AS I LASH OUT ALL OF MY TAILS, I THEN ADVANCE SOINDO, REACHING HYPER SONIC+ SPEEDS OF MACH 10.0, AS I ALMOST INSTANTLY APPEAR TEN METERS BEHIND YOU, WITH MY CERO FULLY CHARGED, AS I SAY "CERO OSCUROUS" SUDDENLY, I RELEASE A MASSIVE BLACK CERO WITH A WHITE OUTLINE TOWARDS YOU AT POINT BLANK RANGE, ATTEMPTING TO CAUSE SEVERE BURNS ALL OVER YOUR BODY AND PIERCE THROUGH YOUR CHEST. AS I THEN INSTANT SOINDO, REACHING HYPER SONIC+ SPEEDS OF MACH 10.0, I THEN STOP 5 MILES AWAY, AS MY CLAWS OF MY SIX WHITE ARMS AND BLACK ARMS BEGIN TO GLOW WITH BRIGHT WHITE RADIENCE.(INSTANT SOINDO IS A TECHNIQUE THAT CAN ONLY BE ACHEIVED IN 2ND RELEASE, BY ME AND MY SISTER, IT IS SO FAST IT SEEMS LIEK YOU APPEAR IN AN INSTANT.)
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With effort and your release you dodge all moves done to you. Even the large mass ball that Astop has even fired out. Now with a prep on your finger a mass of energy comes around my hand as well under the palm pointing up to the sky. Once you appear above me the mass of the energy comes out of my palm.This mass was a assimilated particles of reshi that was being stored for each Okami Brach move that was made. The white ball shape that fired out in a beam blocks all the tails and gathers the reshi inside of them cooling it as soon as it enerters the ball. The ball has your reshi and now is even bigger to aim right at you to tear you to nothing if you are hit. This gives you lil time to sondio and almost get hit by the small waves of heat that was released from the ball due to your own reshi getting sucked in.

With you ten meters behind you I spin around and lash my spear out in a thrust, a eruption of black energy was fired out in a small beam and then spread into a swarm of black lines that fill up around the cero your fired. These threads then take the form of a swarm of leaches that suck up all the reshi around the cero making it decrease in size, enough for only me to wave my spear and block the rest sending it away from me. On my beast a flash happens and then you appear away from my five miles. I step from my beast and on to the ground. While there my beast looks and then starts to form into its four animals that it was made up from. The large orange tan like Lion stargers over me while then small lizard stand there on all fours. The legs of the tiger forms in to the black and white stripes that lays down to make it look like a block.

A white and black like circle forms around my feet to make boots of some sort of dear like skin. The circles fade as I smile and say " " Yahsri Trigo" White lines form over my legs now as my body then glitches as well as my animals I appear above you and point my hand out where my spear spins around and gathers some energy, the yellow tint of it sparks with some kid of lighting. The lighting comes around the circle making a cone up to the tip of the blade all the way around to the base of the shaft. With a thrust my cone fires a large Mach 9.0 blast of energy that shatters the ground up to the location of you small shape compared to the 45 x 45 blast that happens. As it gets near you the blast breaks up into 9x9 threads that all are guided for you en case you move out of the way.

I stop my spin and land on the air with this odd beam that runs behind me, the beam forms more and more in a set of 5x5 each, the form stops and shows the mid size gate that lays behind me and has some off circle and then a comb like shape start to form. The form stops and in the air a set of three gates where formed. " Gate of Basing Tiger, Gate of Turtles Shell , Gate of Sparking Eagle." All of them form up and make a cage around me and my animals.

" This cage last for two turns and my Astop had to be broken up"
i stand 5 miles away from your location, as i track your every movement with my highten senses, suddenly your legs and body are enveloped in ominious white lines, then suddenly, i sense your movemnts above me as you point ypur spear towards me creating sparks of lighting, i then focus my reiatsu around my tails, as my tails are then restored to normal, with my hightened senses i see you fire a powerful blast of energy towards me while riding your strange animals, i then lash all 50 of my white and black tails towards your threads in a pierceing motion, i guided my tails with my reiatsu towards you threads, whilie at the same time i begin to dash backs while extending my tails at hyper sonic+ speeds of mach 9.2. my tails and your threads collide and creates a small explsion due to the sp clash. as i reach within a safe distance away fromthe explsion of 30 meters. suddenly, i see you behind me creating three different types of gates, i then dash backwards, while i fluctuate the reiatsu wityhin my tails, as they then return to normal, suddenly i abrubtly stop 20 meters away from your location as a dangerous amount of sp begins to build around my entire body, while at the same time a swirling white and black aura begins to emit from both sides of my body, my white fur emits a bright white radience, my black fur on my left side emits, a black aura, as they both swirl around me at high speeds. suddenly you feel the sp build as it becomes very dangerous, i then bring in my arms, legs, and wings, suddenly, the minute they all retract i almost, instintaneously, extendmy limbs and wings in a massive burst. as i do so a massive orb of white and black sp surrounds me, it is 300 feet lenght and width, suddenly, i i begin to rotate mt body at super sonic+ speeds of mach7.5, as my orb rotates at the same speeds as my body, while at the same emits a white and black aura, as i rotate my orb extends out wards at super sonic speeds of mach 5.0, grinding up the ground benith me, this orb will eat away at your body in amatter of seconds if hit do to the high roation, as i attempt to destroy you and your gates.





as i am rotating, i begin to slow down, as my orb retracts back almost nothing, my orb then dissapates as the smoke begin to fade. suddenly, i use my hightend vision and senses to locate you if your still alive, i then instant soindo, reaching hyper sonic+ speeds of mach 10.0, as i then almost instintaneously appear ten meters above, my a massive amount of you sp begins to build within my mouth, suddenly, i open my mouth as it shimmers, releaseing a super sonic sound wave down upon you at super sonic+ speeds of mach 7.5, the sebsequent bombartenment of this sound wave will force your body to the ground creating a small crater, suddenly, i back flip to the ground ten meters behind you, as my white claws and my black claws begin to glow white, as i then instant soindo, reaching hyper sonic+ speeds of mach 10.0. i then point my claws down towards you body in the crater if there was one made, as i then say "raining star" suddenly, my claws release hundreds of white cero needles, at hyper sonic speeds of mach 8.5, these cero needles are very special, if two of them hit you body or any reishi or sp based substance the cero's intial energy will corrode causeing mini explsion from any pair of two, attempting to blow off chunks of flesh and bone, the sames goes for sheilds. i then front flip, 15 meters infront of you, as i then instant soindo back wards, reaching hyper sonic+ speeds of mach 10.0, as i reach 3 miles away fromyou location, as my needles threaten to kill you.
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As your attack starts to go down the Yellow gate stars to glow a dark gold color. The gold then started to turn into a dark black. The black jumps from out of the gate and forms into a Wall of a black and white like Panda that sucks up air around us to make it grow. At such this rate it was large enough to block the incoming blast that was supposed to hit my gates. Doing so it then faded back into the gate and formed its golden color once more. Above me you send down something that looks like a Sound wave. Now the red gate starts to hum and out of it comes a Tiger head. fangs and all it opens up its mouth and out comes a dark red blast that screams trough the air overpowering you sound wave and making mine stronger. Doing so meant the attack that would have spawned after words would have failed such as the needles that cae after me. If not eh green gate then pops out and forms all around the other two making all three 50% stronger and be able to reflect your needles back after you with 2x the speed. This means not only do you have to counter the sound wave but the needles as well.

Inside of my three gates a dark red sphere comes around me. It forms on to my Bankai and then starts to alter the form, my head starts to glow a dark blue and a bone and metal like form starts. Eyes first then a huge smile with a red check while the chin had black on it. The mask gave the sphere a more darkish color now. The sphere faded after the mask was full and then the gates started to now form down. With it started a break of the earth. With on finger I hit the Yellow one and all of them SLAMED down on the ground sending out waves and waves of dust and pressure. Now with them I hand my hand already out with one spear in the other both pointed at you. A yellow and purple like energy formed into the point of a ball and then with one jerk it fired out in a beam that expans to the point of width not being the answer to block it the height would have as well because of the dual force of it.

Aimed for you head it would blow it off if it hit you. The small bit of energy that was still on the point of the spear started to charge something else now and that formed around the blade part it self. With a swing the energy then caped over the side of my body and then released in a wave. " Armadra " The wave then increase as the words come and lets lose a swarm of what looks like birds and large raptors as well. This comes over the area and would over come you i maters of secs. It hits then the large amount of force would not only kill you put the heat and amount of pricing pain would as well.*

Yawns. To easy.
meanwhile, tow miles away, i watch with my hightend senses, as you counter all of my moves. suddenly, you send all of my cero needles and my sound wave back towards me at 2 times the speed. with my hightenes senses i see the attack coming in time, i raise my mouth towards the sky, as i massive amount of sp begin to build, no only in my mouth, but around me entire body. suddenly, i howl at the top of my lungs, sending out a massive super sonic sound waves around my body and in many directions. it cancels out my intial sound wave due to the number and the power of the secondary sound waves. it also repels all of my needles. as my howl echos through out a radius of 2 miles. i then bring my head down, as i use my hightned vision to zoom in on your location, isee your flashy light show as you reveal your vizard mask. my eyes widen with anxziety when i see your vizard mask. suddenly, as i lay eyes on your vizard mask i extend out both my wings, as the white wing emits a bright white radience, while the other emits a blackish aura. suddenly, the cresent discs from before reform and levatate around my wings and body. several of them begin to rotate at hyper sonic speeds of mach 8.0. suddenly, i scatter every single one as they go in different di rection, i control they tradectory and speeds with my sp. suddenly, as you point your trident at me you release a very wide beam of energy. i guide all of my cresent disc's towards your beam, they then slash through your beam in many different directions and down the middle as it reachs half way towards my location, sliceing your beam into many many pieces and down the middle. suddenly, i instant soindo back wards, reaching hyper sonic speeds of mach 10.0, as i remain a safe distance away, aproximetly, 2 miles. suddenly the pieces of you beam hit the ground, as it causes a massive wide spread explsion. it then destroy's some of your animals, as i remain 4 miles away from your location. suddenly, i have enough time to raise my hand as a massive white square envelpoes the area that your area is around, i then snap my fingers as massive white box of energy form around your animals trapping them.








i then focus on the sp around me body as my cresent disc's refrom and levetate around me. as i then instant soindo, reaching hyper sonic+ speeds of mach 10.0, as i then soindo, as i appear 15 meters above you, as i then lash out all 50 of my white and black tails towards you in every angle, in a pierceing motion towards your body at hyper sonic speeds of mach 8.0 simultaneously, attempting to pierce your body in every angle. each of these tails is guided with my sp towards you, even if you dodge them they will follow. each one of these tails is filled with super heated sp, the smallest cut will inject you with it and it will fry your organs from the inside out. mean while, i had created a sp clone, he looks exactly like me in every way although he has not recieved enough sp to do devestaing attack, he can perform lashin out his tails and melee attacks. he then dash's towards our location at great speed. i then rotate my cresent disc's at hyper sonic speeds of mach 8.0, as i then scatter them in most directions, i guide them with my sp. i then force them towards your body in every angle at super sonic+ speeds of mach 7.5., attempting to slice your body into many pieces. my clone then arrives at the momment i send my disc's towards you. he then leaps into the air, as he then lash out all of his taisl towards you, at normal speeds, due to the fact he is a clone, attempting pierce through your body from every angle. i then retract all of my tails as i then instant soindo back wards, reaching hyper sonic+ speeds of mach 10.0, as i then soindo, as i appear 1 mile away. i then raise my hands a large circular shaped white light glow benieth your feet. suddenly, you are surround by a 20ft white cylinder barrier, this barrier is gilled with super heated sp, if so much as touch it it will burn the skin off your bones in a matter of seconds. as i remani safely away, as i watch with my hightened vision.
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