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Ninja Academy Student
Join Date: Sep 2010
Location: Havelock, NC
Posts: 43
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Name: Yuki Mori ("Snow, Forest") Birthdate: December 12th Zodiac Sign: Sagittarius Academy Graduation Age: 17Rank: Genin Chakra Nature(s): Ice (A mix of Wind and Water) Age: 17 years old Gender: Male Skin Color: White Hair Color: Silver, like Riku in Kingdom Hearts. Keeps it short and somewhat spiky. Eye Color: Blue Height: 5'10" Blood Type: B Hobbies: Training, Tending to his White Lily flowers, Looking at the stars at night Likes: Training, White Lily flowers, Eating, Exploring, Meeting new friends, Photo of his mother and father before they died Dislikes: Seeing people cry especially Hinata, Wars, Cats Favorite foods: Rice and chicken with gravy Dreams/Goals: To go to other worlds Weapon: Uses Taijutsu Nindo: "To always help someone in need, whatever it be a family member, a friend, or a complete stranger, that is my Nindo, my ninja way." Personality: When he was little, Yuki was a shy and quite timid boy. As he grew up, He became more courageous and confident, always going out on a adventure. He's also kind-hearted and cheerful, always ready to help someone. Despite this, he can be over confident and cocky, and a bit impatient. He is also protective of Hinata Hyūga. Family: Kōri Mori ~ Father ~ Deceased Mizu Mori ~ Mother ~ Decased History: Yuki Mori grew up in a isolated cabin in a snow covered forest a few miles away from a small village. Yuki's parents were poor but kind, making sure their only son was happy. However, Yuki's father had a dark secret: He was a werewolf, and this trait had pasted down to Yuki. Because of this, Yuki's parents tired their best to keep it a secret whenever they went to the village. It was all for naught, and the village soon found out. So, one night, the villagers broke into the house. Yuki's father tired the best he could to fend them off the best he could but was killed. Before she was killed, Yuki's mother told Yuki to run as fast he can into the woods. Before he did, she kissed him the forehead and said, "The only thing I regret is to not see you grow up to become a brave, handsome young man." Yuki hugged his mom for the last time, and ran as fast as he could into the dark forest. When he got far enough, Yuki collapsed on the snow-covered ground and cried. He was all alone, a 6 year old boy who had nothing except a photo of him and his parents. When he looked up, he saw a white wolf. "I saw what happened." It said. "Come with me little one. You will be safer with us." As the years past, Yuki learned how to use his powers thanked to the wolf pack he was with. He also made a self-taught martial art. When he became 17, the wolf pack he traveled with decided that it would be best that he would go out and see the world. When he was ready to leave, the white wolf that save him years ago said to him, "Go to the Village hidden in the Leafs. There, you will be safe." Yuki said goodbye to his second family and headed straight to Konoha. Powers/Abilities: Wolf's smell: Yuki's sense of smell is beyond that of the Inuzuka clan, so much so that he can even smell when someone is telling the truth or not and can even smell emotions. Wolf's bite: Yuki's bite has a PSI power of 4 tons. His fangs also secrete a poison that causes a person's blood to slowly boil. Wolf's speech: Allows Yuki to talk and understand wolfs and dogs. Martial arts: Yuki has taught himself Taijutsu and created several attacks. Here are just a few of them: Power Wave: A projectile of energy that runs along the ground. Kohou: A rising uppercut. Burn Knuckle: Uses charka to increase the power of a punch to that of one that can send someone flying backwards. Zanretsuken: Uses charka to increase the speed of his punches of one arm and ends the combo with either a punch to the chest or a uppercut with the other arm. Wolf Fang Fist: A powerful attack that has a aura of power around the user's fist and a image of a wolf comes next to the user. When the user runs, the wolf runs and if the user hits, the wolf lunges forward. Upon contact, a explosion of energy hits the target, blasting them away. Werewolf: Yuki is a Werewolf. However, unlike most Werewolf of fiction, Yuki does not need the moon to transform. There are 3 forms and they are: First form Spoiler:
Power = Naruto's 3 tailed form Second form Spoiler:
Power = Naruto's 6 tail form Final form Spoiler:
^ Just like this but just as big and tall as the 9 tail Demon Fox. Power = The 9 tail Demon Fox Appearance: Spoiler:
^ Just get rid of the hat and bandanna and replace the hazel eyes with blue ones. Last edited by nunubx; 10-25-2010 at 04:28 PM. |
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Jonin
Join Date: Apr 2009
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Nice character. I like the different forms.
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Super | ɹoʇɐɹǝpoW
Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: New York
Posts: 43,782
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Wow, you're incredibly talented. XD
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Ninja Academy Student
Join Date: Sep 2010
Location: Havelock, NC
Posts: 43
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Naw, I'm not really talented, I just have a active imagination.
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Apprentice Genin
Join Date: Aug 2010
Location: California
Posts: 114
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Wow! The character is at perfect width and size is proportional!
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Freshmen Academy Student
Join Date: Sep 2010
Location: Somewhere under the sun.
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W.O.W. that is amazing... better than i could ever come up with
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That Sexy Koala
Join Date: Jun 2010
Location: Where you live. Obviously.
Posts: 13,438
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I love this. Amazing character, very likable!
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Special Jonin Candidate
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i like him,him and my fan character are alot alike
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SakuraGirl-Once I hid in your Shadows,but now I will fight for the both of you My Character Miyo Ai Member of the Village hidden in the Moonlight I'm a Christian and don't care what everyone else thinks about me. If you feel the same, copy and paster this into your sig. put this on your siggy if you love Taker . -I give Rep,May you give it back. |
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Ninja Academy Student
Join Date: Sep 2010
Location: Havelock, NC
Posts: 43
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Thanks for all the praise guys
He's actually inspired by your character SakuraGirl.
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Proud Dub Lover Our Ninja Way Proud Member of the NaruHina Supporters United Patiently waiting for the release of The King of Fighters XIII My Fan character: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. My Fan Villain: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. GT: nunubx Feel free to add me. |
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Special Jonin Candidate
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He's actually inspired by your character SakuraGirl.[/QUOTE]
aww really that cool
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SakuraGirl-Once I hid in your Shadows,but now I will fight for the both of you My Character Miyo Ai Member of the Village hidden in the Moonlight I'm a Christian and don't care what everyone else thinks about me. If you feel the same, copy and paster this into your sig. put this on your siggy if you love Taker . -I give Rep,May you give it back. |
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Ninja Academy Student
Join Date: Sep 2010
Location: Havelock, NC
Posts: 43
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I just thought up of a Shippuden version of my character and will put it in this post.
Age: 20 Hair: Grew it to almost waist length, now keeps it in a pony tail Rank: Genin Height: 6' Personality: Over the time skip, Yuki has become a bit more serious. Other than that, he's still the same Yuki. History: After failing to bring Sasuke in after he defected and failing his promise to Hinata to make sure that Naruto is not harmed, Yuki decided that will go around the world to train. Powers/Abilities: EX moves: By using extra charka, Yuki can make any of his special moves into EX moves. What EX moves do is add special properties such as adding more hits, increasing the speed or adding invincibility. When he does a EX move, he gives off a blue hue. Desperation Move: Desperation Moves, or DM, are powerful attacks. Those attacks are: Power Geyser: Yuki slams his fist into the ground and a geyser of energy comes out. Ryuuko Ranbu: A fury of punches and kicks that's ends with a powerful Kohou. Wolf Fang Fist: Because of the amount of charka used, Yuki has named this a DM. Other than that, there are no changes to the move. EX Desperation Move: By using extra charka, Yuki can upgrade his DMs into EXDMs. When he does a EXDM, he gives off a red hue. They are: Triple Power Geyser: Does three Power Geysers in secession. Super Ryuuko Ranbu: A fury of punches and kicks that's follows up with a Kohou, followed by a forearm smash and ends it with a weak version of the Wolf Fang Fist. Double Wolf Fang Fist: Has a Wolf Fang Fist on both arms instead of one. Trinity Geyser: Yuki slams both fists into the ground and a wave of massive energy comes out. Hyper Drive Mode: When ever Yuki fights, he gains a special energy, separate to that of charka. When the energy is at it's limit, Yuki can enter Hyper Drive Mode, or HD Mode. He glows while in this state. What it does is that Yuki can cancel any of his moves into others, like canceling the Burn Knuckle into the Kohou or canceling the Power Wave into the Power Geyser. He can enter this state mid-combo. It can also allow him to cancel his DM or EXDM into the Trinity Geyser. However, there is a time limit to HD Mode and whenever he tries to cancel his moves, the time limit goes by faster. Fighter's Charge: Whenever Yuki deals or takes damage, he gains small amounts of charka.
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Proud Dub Lover Our Ninja Way Proud Member of the NaruHina Supporters United Patiently waiting for the release of The King of Fighters XIII My Fan character: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. My Fan Villain: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. GT: nunubx Feel free to add me. Last edited by nunubx; 09-07-2010 at 07:28 AM. |
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Special Jonin Candidate
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really cool,so want you like about my character?
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SakuraGirl-Once I hid in your Shadows,but now I will fight for the both of you My Character Miyo Ai Member of the Village hidden in the Moonlight I'm a Christian and don't care what everyone else thinks about me. If you feel the same, copy and paster this into your sig. put this on your siggy if you love Taker . -I give Rep,May you give it back. |
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Ninja Academy Student
Join Date: Sep 2010
Location: Havelock, NC
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I like how she is very well thought and fleshed out and extremely likable.
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Proud Dub Lover Our Ninja Way Proud Member of the NaruHina Supporters United Patiently waiting for the release of The King of Fighters XIII My Fan character: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. My Fan Villain: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. GT: nunubx Feel free to add me. |
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Special Jonin Candidate
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Wow Thanks so you want to roleplay together sometime?
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SakuraGirl-Once I hid in your Shadows,but now I will fight for the both of you My Character Miyo Ai Member of the Village hidden in the Moonlight I'm a Christian and don't care what everyone else thinks about me. If you feel the same, copy and paster this into your sig. put this on your siggy if you love Taker . -I give Rep,May you give it back. |
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Ninja Academy Student
Join Date: Sep 2010
Location: Havelock, NC
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Well, I don't really know how to roleplay.
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Proud Dub Lover Our Ninja Way Proud Member of the NaruHina Supporters United Patiently waiting for the release of The King of Fighters XIII My Fan character: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. My Fan Villain: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. GT: nunubx Feel free to add me. |
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likes to post-it post-it
Konoha Military Force Join Date: Dec 2009
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Nice character!
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Special Jonin Candidate
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SakuraGirl-Once I hid in your Shadows,but now I will fight for the both of you My Character Miyo Ai Member of the Village hidden in the Moonlight I'm a Christian and don't care what everyone else thinks about me. If you feel the same, copy and paster this into your sig. put this on your siggy if you love Taker . -I give Rep,May you give it back. |
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Ninja Academy Student
Join Date: Sep 2010
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Like I don't know if I would stay in character because I might say stuff that might look OOC. Also, alot of times, people's fan characters might break my flow by saying random crap and I wouldn't know how to respond. I mean, if you want roleplay, okay but keep the stuff I said in mind.
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SakuraGirl-Once I hid in your Shadows,but now I will fight for the both of you My Character Miyo Ai Member of the Village hidden in the Moonlight I'm a Christian and don't care what everyone else thinks about me. If you feel the same, copy and paster this into your sig. put this on your siggy if you love Taker . -I give Rep,May you give it back. |
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