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Old 06-20-2009, 07:09 PM   #1
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I gently dug my feet deeply in the endless sea of sand around me, not to mention the endless sea in front of me. I stared at the sea constantly waving around, I placed my hand on my cheek and scratched (Face cheek you pervs!) I stood up gently, and felt the sand fall off my feet and the wind press fiercely against my body. " I must find a way to get off this island!!!!!" But then a sudden feeling occured. "Oh no!" Sweat dribbled down my face as if I was a sweaty toilet. My feet could not move quick enough, this would be a close one. As the seconds past by I started to think I would not make it. With each passing moment my chances faded. Then I reached it, I pulled down my pants and peed away."Aaaaaaaaaaahhhhh, I reached my pee ditch!!" Afterwards I stared up and realized, this was why I would never leave this dang island. I always become side tracked!! The clouds grew darker and the wind grew fiecer, pushing me to the grown. A storm was heading toward me. I tried to reach for shelter but my fragile body could not fight the current. I was then lifted off the ground and carried away, but swiftly i caught a branch of a tree. I took a tight grip and would not let go no matter what. Yes I thought, if i can keep hold of it, then i will be oka-. The branch then snapped and my body was carried with the current. Then before I noticed it I was swirling in darkness. What happened?!?!?!
My body felt numb and I could not tell where I was. I could not open my eyes for some reason. The feeling of weakness engulfed me, I was then able to open my eyes. Blurriness was all I could see, a mess of colors until my sight became clear. I must have been in the heart of the island now because every where around me, were trees. I heard the crinkling of leaves and twigs and the silence would make me insane. I had to escape this place. I started to run straight, straight to where you ask? Straight into the unknown. Where would I arrive!?!?! I continued to run deeper and deeper in the trees trying to escape this silent jungle. The sound of silence is the worst of all, I grew paranoid. I started imagining blood curdling screams and demonic roars. Any normal person would have run away from then, but something attracted me to the sounds, a human yelling. I ran faster and faster, until I reached a cliff. I moved the branches out of my way and what I saw was horrific. I girl holding a Katana facing two demons. To the side I saw many people in Indian masks, chanting. The two demons were two worm like creatures, one winged worms. The left one lunged at the girl, the girl evaded the attack and sliced a chunk of flesh off. The worm made the blood curdling scream I heard from earlier. The girl then headed toward the other worm demon and yelled, "DEMON DIE!" "Demon Die" were the words screaming from the girls mouth as she aimed her katana at the worm demon. Just as she was about to take air, she was whipped by the wounded worm demon's tail. With incredible force she slammed into the tree breaking off much of the bark and denting it. She fell to the ground and the two worm demons disappeared. A man appeared as the two demons disappeared. The man was old and gray and feeble. Using a cane he slowly walked over to the wounded girl. The chantings noise the seemed to suddenly increase. The man stuck his cane in the air and it transformed into the girls katana. He then placed it gently on her neck. "Being careless will get you killed" Out of my curiousness I leaned farther, and tumbled down the cliff and fell on the ground. I looked up and all eyes were on me. "Is this a friend of yours Natalia?" questioned the old man. The girl stared up and......!?!?
Natalia looked straight at me, her piercing glance broke my soul. I felt paralyzed, I could not feel my hands, legs or any part of my body. Her stare, it was like seeing death right before me. She then turned to the man and replied coldly, "With a human, of course not." The old man stared at me and within a blink he was in front of me and stared. "Who are you?" "My name is .....Ramen." The man grew furious and stabbed my leg, "Don't insult me with your foolish remarks" I started screaming in pain. Blood spilled over from the wound. "Tell me now, what is your name?" "RAMEN!" I yelled! His face grew amused, he stared at the crowd, the crowd stopped chanting and then roared laughter. "You are not lying, are you?" Faint from the blood flowing out of me I remember whispering no and then back into the sea of darkness. I awoke once again, my bones were weak and I felt exhausted. The wound had bandages around it, maybe they were white when they were first put on for they were now dyed fruit punch kool-aid. ( My blood for you not so smart cookies out there ) My mouth was dry, my stomach was empty and I hadn't taken a shower in like months. I felt like *The thing that comes out of a booty hole*. There in front of me stood her, Natalia. Blond hair with a couple of strands down her face, blue eyes looking very pretty. Oh yea except for the blade she held gently against my neck. "Ramen? Why are you here?" I stared at her and then answered. "I really don't know, I remember I was on a boat *T-Pain walks in with the auto-tone and starts singing but then Ayden walks in and kicks his @$$ out* and there was a storm. Next thing I knew, I was on this island. I've been here for a couple of months but never explored until I got blown away by another storm. Where am I anyway?" Gravely she stared, " Your on the island known as MooSon, the home of tribal death hunters, we hunt demons for fun, and you ruined my practice, therefore" She pressed the blade more roughly against my neck not breaking any skin though, "You die." Bullets ran down my throat, it seemed to be dryer then ever, I felt afraid. "Your gonna kill me?" She nodded disagreement and then pulled the katana away from my neck. I sighed relievement(not the bad kind) and stared back at her and whispered "Death Hunters?" She nodded again in agreement. "We hunt demons for fun, tribal death hunter's to be exact, there are many different kinds of us. As you have noticed there we practice it in a tribal fashion, hence the name" Puzzled I looked up and stared back at her pretty face. "We don't hunt humans, but if must we hurt them, just like my father stabbed your leg, he wanted your name but he didn't know it would be ridiculous." She chuckled and I stared not laughing. "My mom is a little.......not thin and enjoys that type of food!" Natalia started to laugh like crazy but then became serious again. "We must however take you off this island. Obviously it isn't exactly the safest place or where you belong either." I nodded in agreement. Her lips were ajar, " I will escort you tomorrow back to where you belong, for now sleep tight." The moon and the stars shun so brightly, so radiantly that night. I stood up before it was time to leave and walked over to Natalia's tent. It was such a small tent, I wondered how it was possible for anyone to even sleep in it, atleast you would have no room to move. I moved into the entrance and was stunned at what I saw, the area was the size of normal house. It was super roomy, I walked in and called her name. I stared around and noticed many different weapons, swords, bows, and even guns. She appeared out of nowhere and seemed very groggy, and then screamed in my ear, "WHAT!!!!" I was caught off guard and screamed, (Ayden's Note: Like a girl) and fell on my bum. "ummm I was wondering if you were ready to go?" "It's still night" she replied. "I know." She groaned in annoyance and then disappeared. She returned dressed in shorts and a tee with that katana against her waist. She then walked outside of the tent, and made a hand motion toward me.
"So you two are setting off?" the old decrepit man that was Natalia's dad. "Yes, father"(Obviously wasn't me who said that). We started to head off when something occurred, a thought swam through my head. "Wait do I get a weapon? I mean what if we get attacked by those worm demons!" Natalia chuckled and then explained that they were summonings, no actual demons were on this island, unless if they escaped hell and made it all the way to earth. But not to worry, she would be protecting me the whole time. She also explained how she was human, just more "advanced" for the regular laws of physics did not apply to death hunters, (explaining the tent). She explained that they consider themselves half angel and half man. I asked what made them this way? She looked like any other human, no mutations or anything. She then told me, "It's our heart." I was so puzzled. "What do you mean?" She gave me a stern look, all death hunters believe that there is something in out hearts that is pumped through our whole body's that made it this way. "That's an odd way to see it!" "No its only odd to you because you are so narrow minded, and think nothing beyond your comprehension is real to you." I then felt drained of my blood , white as snow. I think I offended her. And she holds my life in her hands. We finally took off into the jungle, the sound of leaves and beetles crunching under our feet could be heard. We continued like this for quiet some time. The sun hadn't even been up when we left, and by the time we rested, the sun had to have been down for at least a couple hours. My feet were sore, so when I sat down, I felt amazed. However Natalia stood on a rock, not one hint of weariness. I laid down and fell asleep. The next thing that woke me up was a blood curdling scream. I awoke and saw Natalia being engulfed in a giant skeleton of what seemed to be a shark/ lion creature. It was shaped like a shark, had the tail and legs of a lion with the mane. It was completely black with streaks of gray. The next thing I knew Natalia was engulfed by the demon. It gave one more blood curdling scream, "RAAAWWWWWWWWWWW". I was frozen in my spot, I did't know what to do. I was helpless, no match against this demon, "Sionk". (Lion + Shark= Sionk W T H ?????) The sionk bent it's legs down getting ready to prance on me when I noticed a Natalia's weapon bag. I reached for it and looked inside, what would I choose the kunai or the pistol? Would this even be enough? I picked up the bag and tied it to my waist and then I charged the demon.Charging toward the beast, I ripped the bag open and placing the kunai in my mouth and the pistol in my left. The Sionk pranced and the oddest pheneomen happend, it jumped over me toward the village. "Oh no!" I screamed in horror. Before I knew it, it was out of my sight. I stared toward the way I was heading and thought, should I just leave. I looked toward the village and thought I should help them, but what good would I be, just a burden.Souls, Souls, souls, souls! The only thought running threw my head. I kept running straight but it felt as if the Death Hunters village was not getting any closer. I then felt a sharp pain in my back. Making a eye recede to my spine I saw a spear in me. I was in the death hunter's village. I roared in pain, causing force to break many of the tents around. Before I knew it was was surrounded by many, over fifty death hunters. Each carrying a personalized weapon, except for an old man wearing no shirt, tribal skirt and holding no weapon. He then cracked his knuckles and placed his arm in the air, and yelled at me, " I am Chief Nole , and this is my village, you have no right here!" I roared with laughter and stared at the old man with murderous intent. "I am Mayne and I am here to devour your souls." I clutched the kunai and looked at the ripped bag, it read Nata-Lia and under her name was imprinted Nol-E. I looked up at the sky and thought, Natalia Nole. I then knew what I had to do, I placed the pistol in my back pocket and the kunai in my mouth and charged straight forward......I was hear, yet I wasn't. I reached the village but it didn't look anything like the village, it was ruins. I saw the a grizzly scene of an attack and bodies every where, decaying abnormally fast and weapons turning to dust. I slid down the cliff into the village and searched around, then I heard a man scream in pain. I ran as fast as I could and I saw the old chief fight the Sionk. I was amazed of how wel the chief fought, but the Sionk was a lot better. The old man was evade many attacks but not every attack for he took many of them to the chest. It was then the sionk was about to finish the man. I ran forward without a second thought, and pulled the gun out and shot a bullet, it was no normal bullet, for the shot was a huge blast of green ,arrow typed shape. The force pushed me back roughly into the cliff side and I remember nothing more. Swimming in darkness was becoming a scheduled thing.I awoke on the hardend ground, my back was sore from hitting it. Standing up took a lot of energy, I felt odd, I was in darkness. There was blood everywhere and I saw the tail of the Sionk, but that was all that was left. I walked around to look but found nothing, the tribal village was in ruins and I was wounded. There was no one left here, I looked up hoping to her Natalia call my name so I could return to her. But nothing called me. I then heard moaning and grunting, I ran toward it and found her, Natalia bleeding on the ground. How was she still alive? I held a crystal sphere in my hand, searching into it, scrutinizing the field. I found ruins of a village, Mayne had succeeded. The tribal death hunters were dead. But to my surprise, that boy had killed Mayne, to think how was this possible? Mayne was no pushover, yet this boy who I have never seen before killed him? And even more interesting, Natalia Nole is still alive? My only possible explanation is that a weapon infused with spirit energy, can not harm it's source. I stood up and stared at the boy, Oh Ramen, you are an interesting boy. Maybe that storm that occurred and landed you on that island was no accident, maybe it was destiny? Oh well, you'll die sooner or later. MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!! I slid next to her and placed my hand under her and picked her up in my lap. " Natalia!!" She groaned some more and coughed up blood, splattering all over me, I moaned in disgust and then returned to staring at her. She asked weakly how was it she survived. I only nodded and said I didn't know how, but her and I seemed to be the only two. She started to cry but then went silent, I stared at her and held her close to my chest, and I screamed at the top of my lungs.I had the dirt half way up her body, she was almost completely covered in dirt, when I noticed she was blinking. I was puzzled, "Natalia?" She woke up slowly and stared around, "why am I being buried?" "I thought you were dead!" She turned red as the nasty blood she coughed on me and with her brutal manly man strength she jumped out of the dirt and punched me right in the face causing me to fly across half of the island straight into a tree, denting it. After seeing Ramen fly away, I laughed and then appeared next to him and pulled him out of the tree dent and carried him away. "You know we still need to get you home!," He answered me with a ugggghhhhhhh. I laughed but I knew what he was asking. I know you have questions, and we will get to them but we need to leave, this island is no longer safe.So you don't know how you survived?
Nope, I thought my soul had been devoured by that demon, we can't die Ramen! It's one of the reasons we think we are divine.
You think you guys are divine?
Yup! Heart's of Divinity, that is the exact name we call our hearts, same as yours but a lot better!
How old are you exactly?
Hmmmm, last time I saw the outside world, I met a nice man named Adam and his wife Eve, but that was a long time ago.
WHOAAAA YOUR ANCIENT! I was then shot off her back into the air, very high, thinking I might burn up in the atmosphere.


What I would like to know how all your weapons work?
Oh thats simple, we make these items, like I said we arent restricted by laws or anything, and then we simply infuse our own spirit energy in them. However strong of a spirit we contain in ourselves is how strong our weapons are.
So basically our will!?
Sorta. Hmm we are reaching the end of the island, we camping here.

The sun was barely rising, I had not slept at all, placing my fingertips under my eyes I could feel the indention's in my skin, the dark rings under my eyes. I continued to stare up at the sky as the birds flew by, I would finally go back to my family. I clutched my heart and stared back at the birds.
Ready to go? Yeah! I grabbed him roughly and placed him back on my back and took off at my slowest pace, but still pretty fast for him. I figured this much by the worried look in his eyes. We reached the ocean and I stopped. You told me we would not run into any demons, well we did, and the one demon killed so many. These words wounded me, my fathers soul and the whole pop. They were lost forever. I stared back at Ramen, turned around and continued to walk to the ocean. I felt dumb for asking, I knew I hurt her. She continued at her unbelievable fast pace and continued at it even though we were heading straight for the water, I was then frightened!!!!WHAT ARE YOU DOING!!!! She remained quiet and continued at the pace. She took her first step in the water, and before I knew it we were running on water. I told you, laws of physics don't apply to me. She was running on water, it was unbelievable. I then noticed many dark shadows in the water approaching us. "Uhm Natalia!" " I noticed!"

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"5/5!!! NOW GIMME MY MEDS!!!!" - The crazy old lady who has 500000 cats and lives down the street.

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I awoke once again, my bones were weak and I felt exhausted. The wound had bandages around it, maybe they were white when they were first put on for they were now dyed fruit punch kool-aid. ( My blood for you not so smart cookies out there ) My mouth was dry, my stomach was empty and I hadn't taken a shower in like months. I felt like *The thing that comes out of a booty hole*. There in front of me stood her, Natalia. Blond hair with a couple of strands down her face, blue eyes looking very pretty. Oh yea except for the blade she held gently against my neck. "Ramen? Why are you here?" I stared at her and then answered. "I really don't know, I remember I was on a boat *T-Pain walks in with the auto-tone and starts singing but then Ayden walks in and kicks his @$$ out* and there was a storm. Next thing I knew, I was on this island. I've been here for a couple of months but never explored until I got blown away by another storm. Where am I anyway?"

Gravely she stared, " Your on the island known as MooSon, the home of tribal death hunters, we hunt demons for fun, and you ruined my practice, therefore" She pressed the blade more roughly against my neck not breaking any skin though, "You die."


Next Chapter : 6 : The True Beginning
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