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Old 06-29-2009, 10:02 AM   #1
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Default poem: sasuke's curse mark.

Sasuke's curse mark
where do I start
he's got all the power
he makes everyone cower
he's got those crazy black eyes
If you see him your about to die
look at those wacked up wings
they make you wanna sing
he looks so cool
if your a fool
you'll take on his might
and in the end you'll lose the fight
you will soon see
that you should have chose to flee
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Old 06-29-2009, 11:14 AM   #2
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this is awsome clap clap clap .
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Old 06-29-2009, 11:18 AM   #3
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Great poem. Two thumbs up.
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Old 06-29-2009, 11:20 AM   #4
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awsome poem clap clap clap
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Wow! That's a great poem! I sure do hate Sasuke and from my point of veiw, it makes Sasuke sound like a dork. Sasuke is a dork. LOL!
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*claps* I liked it. :3
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Old 06-29-2009, 12:39 PM   #7
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U heart Sasuke dont you?
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Old 06-29-2009, 12:40 PM   #8
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i likes the poem its good
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I do not. I am not gay
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.*Claps* Great Poem.
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Sounded almost like a rap. Nice
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That was very good (:
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