heres a story for you guys

[ONIMUSHA]

okay this story is getting really ****ed up

erm...i dont know
i guess...god

[ONIMUSHA]

Originally Posted by ukiyo

ok fine i'll go for the sake of it


yes i will be adding this



you decide to fight the bully get in a couple of hits before his crew show up and chase you, luckily you lost them and go home. the next day after school the bully and his crew jump you while walking home with her. she tries to stop them but the bully takes her behind the school and rapes her now dealing with the average taunting she is emotionally scared what do you do

okay i thought of something

i try to stop him from raping her, but i end up being hospitalized by the other people. they are arrested afterwards under charges of assault and rape

[ukiyo]

Originally Posted by ONIMUSHA

okay i thought of something

i try to stop him from raping her, but i end up being hospitalized by the other people. they are arrested afterwards under charges of assault and rape

im basing this stry off of what could actually happen in modern society yes it is a little effed up but hey

hmm your is a good submission.......i'll add it

[ukiyo]

ok added new part dont go into extreme detail

for people just looking into this thread go to OP and read it then submit what you would do

[ONIMUSHA]

i feel i should let someone else go, if noone does within the next hour i'll go again

[NBT]

Originally Posted by ONIMUSHA

theirs a little thing called a concience...its what makes us human

I've learned to ignore my conscience.

[ukiyo]

Originally Posted by NBT

I've learned to ignore my conscience.

hitman?

[NBT]

Say wha?

[ukiyo]

Originally Posted by NBT

Say wha?

DIE POTATO!

potato:*pulls out gun* not today

[ONIMUSHA]

erm okay...i seriously dont know how to add to this one...erm

[NBT]

nothing
walk away

[Cagalli]

Originally Posted by ukiyo

Imagine you're back in high school (some of you probably are). At your school is a girl named Sarah. She was adopted into a poor family. Her parents are abusive drunks, who spend most of their time at the bar. On top of this, Sarah is subject to being bullied and beaten up at school. You've seen this happen, but don't do anything, like everyone else. Then, one day in 4th period English (the only class you have with Sarah), the teacher has to leave class 10 minutes early. Once she'd gone, a bully picks up a pen, and stabs Sarah in the eye. Everyone just sits and watches as she cries in pain. You know she could bleed to death soon, so wat do

ADDITION: ok she was taken to the hospital but her eye couldn't be saved so she has to wear an eye patch the kids still make fun of her for it but you're the only one thats nice to her and after a month she finally decides to ask you out

what do you do now

ADDITION 2:ok you take her out on a date but make your intentions clear that you only would like to stay friends, she understands it and is cool with it. While walking home one day you see the bully that caused the mess in the first place, alone, you get the sudden urge to beat him up right there, right now. what do you do

ADDITION 3: you decide to fight the bully get in a couple of hits before his crew show up and chase you, luckily you lost them and go home. the next day after school the bully and his crew jump you while walking home with her. she tries to stop them but the bully takes her behind the school and rapes her now dealing with the average taunting she is emotionally scared what do you do

ADDITION 4: ok you try to stop her from getting raped but end up being hospitalized before even getting close to her the bully and his crew are sent to jail with assault and rape charges. you were in the hospital for a week and everyday she came to visit you. the day you can finally come home all of your friends and family including her have thrown you a welcome home party, the party lasted until 9 pm and everyone enjoyed it your parents have gone out leaving you and her alone. your watching a movie you pause it and say your going to get a soda, coming back with a can of dr.pepper you find her naked under the bed sheets motioning for you to come to her. what do you do (don't go into extreme detail on this part i don't want this to get deleted)


ima drop this off here

Is this based off an anime or something?

[Azal]

um..........um......herm
eh......um....im scared O.o

[ukiyo]

Originally Posted by Cagalli

Is this based off an anime or something?

no it is not


it is a buildup story submit what would happen and i might choose yours to add then users will have to buildup from that

[Cagalli]

Originally Posted by ukiyo

no it is not


it is a buildup story submit what would happen and i might choose yours to add then users will have to buildup from that

Then where is the picture from?

[ukiyo]

Originally Posted by Cagalli

Then where is the picture from?

dunno just some random picture that conveniently happened to have a pin in a girls eyeball

[Cagalli]

Originally Posted by ukiyo

ADDITION 4: ok you try to stop her from getting raped but end up being hospitalized before even getting close to her the bully and his crew are sent to jail with assault and rape charges. you were in the hospital for a week and everyday she came to visit you. the day you can finally come home all of your friends and family including her have thrown you a welcome home party, the party lasted until 9 pm and everyone enjoyed it your parents have gone out leaving you and her alone. your watching a movie you pause it and say your going to get a soda, coming back with a can of dr.pepper you find her naked under the bed sheets motioning for you to come to her. what do you do (don't go into extreme detail on this part i don't want this to get deleted)

You slowly back out of the room saying sorry, but you still just want to be friends.

[ukiyo]

Originally Posted by Cagalli

You slowly back out of the room saying sorry, but you still just want to be friends.

well that sucked


i think this part is better off for a guys point of view after its done you can come back and submit

[ONIMUSHA]

Originally Posted by ukiyo

well that sucked


i think this part is better off for a guys point of view after its done you can come back and submit

i dont really think a guys point of view would be that good, considering that what most guys would write would have to be censored

[ONIMUSHA]

but man...you should make a manga, or turn this into a book, ya never know it might be good