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Old 08-14-2010, 03:38 AM   #1
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Default What does it take to love?

What does it take to love?
Are there always down times along the way?
What does it take to love?
Does it mean working hard every single day?

With our hearts connected, I feel at peace.
And in my heart, my love will only increase.
The longing for your voice, those beautiful eyes.
Everything you do, makes my love for you rise.

I know that I can't be perfect.
But as long as our hearts connect.
That perfection, is for what I will strive.
Baby, you make me feel so alive.

There's nothing that I'd love more.
Than to have you as my sweet girl.
When I think about you, there's no doubt you're the best.
So, just lay down tonight, and I will do the rest.

I'll do it for you, to make you smile.
And I'll hold you in my arms all the while.
With you, I believe.
That there's nothing we can't achieve.

I don't know everything, but I do know this.
I'm glad to know, that our love exists.
It may require patience, but all in due time.
I'll climb any mountain that I have to climb.

What does it take to love?
I know what it takes to love.
A mutual connection of heart and soul.
And with you, I want to play that role.

When I go to sleep at night.
Know it's you I dream of holding tight.
It's just the way that you love.
You're an angel from above.


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Old 08-14-2010, 04:19 AM   #2
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No comments. =/
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Old 08-14-2010, 04:30 AM   #3
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It's Saturday morning, what do you expect?
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Old 08-14-2010, 04:30 AM   #4
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what is the name of that song? O_O
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Old 08-14-2010, 04:31 AM   #5
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Comments. [o.o]

It's not a song, I wrote it. O.o
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Old 08-14-2010, 04:37 AM   #6
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Here's a more relevant comment, it seems competent and well written, but I am not the judge of such things. You will need song writers and poetry buffs to determine if it is any good.
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Old 08-14-2010, 04:39 AM   #7
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And if you are looking for a critique from that crowd, then you ought to move this to the fanfic section, like you said.
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/does that

Thanks for the feedback Wooster. =]
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Old 08-14-2010, 04:55 AM   #9
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There's nothing that I'd love more.
Than to have you as my sweet girl.
When I think about you, there's no doubt you're the best.
So, just lay down tonight, and I will do the rest.
Any hidden meaning? o_O

Its good but the verse right below this one has a little mismatch of rhymes/length.......
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It's not a song, I wrote it. O.o
oh wow, i thinkk its pretty good
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Hidden Meaning?

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Of course not, there's no hidden meaning.
I mean, it's not like people who write poetry put hidden meaning into stuff.
Also not like this is written for someone in particular.

No, it's just a random poem, definitely nothing suspicious.
Why would you think it has hidden meaning?
It's obviously just a poem.


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FINE, it does have hidden meaning meaning. >.>

I wrote it for someone special. >.>

Yeah, a she, a girl, she's special. >.>

Very special. =]
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Old 08-14-2010, 03:33 PM   #12
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Nice poem, Maik. I knew it was for a special person. xD Although I'm not an expert on poems and such, I can tell that this is a very good poem.
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That's a very good poem! ^^ I could never write anything like that! Well maybe!
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awahh~ that's so sweet. Any girl would love to have something like that written for her. (>.> <-teh sulk face at lack of poetry written for her.-> >.>) xD

Critic-wise I'm not exactly savvy on poetry per say, but i feel like the rhythm is weak in places. but then, i seriously don't know much about poetry. =p
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