my story-a rouge ninja

seannfma · 06-20-2009, 05:27 PM

I was running...I don't know from what but I knew what I just left behind....I didnt bother to look behind because if I did I was as good as dead.....As i arrived in a dark forest......A dark figure was heading toward me.....I didnt know what to think.....It kept aproching....gaining more speed heading toward me...As it was approching me it kept yelling "Come back"......Then as the dark figure drew closer I....

------Part2------------
I pulled a Kunai immediently....knowing I had the village after me.....I was thinking so many things....Who was this dark figure....I didnt have time for thoughts it approaced....I quickly without thought stabbed the figure...The figure was bleeding....I quickly looked down....He was taking his last breaths....I soon relized this figure was...

-------Part 3-----------
My eyes shocked of the sight.....How could I kill him.....I coudnt put this all together but I had just killed.....My younger brother....."You've always been like this" My brother said coughing up blood......I looked down at him....Tears started falling down my eyes.....I coudnt believe it......I killed my brother.
-------Part 4------------
I looked down at my brother......He was'nt crying but it looked as if......he was happy....He tried despretly to gasp his last words......But he could only say one sentece it was....."You've always been like this, we never did get along, do me one last favor, don't die."......Then he died.....I then knew what laid ahead of me....a journey...

seannfma · 06-20-2009, 05:36 PM

ok come on guys its not that bad.

animelover · 06-20-2009, 06:04 PM

what??? Put more into it Sean! lol, i wanna read more

Raiden · 06-20-2009, 06:08 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by seannfma

I was running...I don't know from what but I knew what I just left behind....I didnt bother to look behind because if I did I was as good as dead.....As i arrived in a dark forest......A dark figure was heading toward me.....I didnt know what to think.....It kept aproching....gaining more speed heading toward me...As it was approching me it kept yelling "Come back"......Then as the dark figure drew closer I....

Part 2 coming soon

are you not fighting me.........fine then, i understand you dont want to lose

seannfma · 06-20-2009, 06:10 PM

Raiden I will fight you 2maro.

seannfma · 06-21-2009, 08:55 AM

Who wants part 2?

seannfma · 06-21-2009, 09:15 AM

------Part2------------
I pulled a Kunai immediently....knowing I had the village after me.....I was thinking so many things....Who was this dark figure....I didnt have time for thoughts it approaced....I quickly without thought stabbed the figure...The figure was bleeding....I quickly looked down....He was taking his last breaths....I soon relized this figure was...

animelover · 06-21-2009, 09:59 AM

hmm action story huh? lol, who was the figure? >_>

god of puppets · 06-21-2009, 10:03 AM

heh... not bad, im interested. make the new one soon

seannfma · 06-21-2009, 10:07 AM

I'll make part 3 soon the big reaveal!

seannfma · 06-22-2009, 12:33 PM

-------Part 3-----------
My eyes shocked of the sight.....How could I kill him.....I coudnt put this all together but I had just killed.....My younger brother....."You've always been like this" My brother said coughing up blood......I looked down at him....Tears started falling down my eyes.....I coudnt believe it......I killed my brother.

Ayden · 06-22-2009, 01:19 PM

this is getting good!!!!

seannfma · 06-22-2009, 01:44 PM

Thanks Ayden. Who wants part 4?

seannfma · 06-24-2009, 12:13 PM

-------Part 4------------
I looked down at my brother......He was'nt crying but it looked as if......he was happy....He tried despretly to gasp his last words......But he could only say one sentece it was....."You've always been like this, we never did get along, do me one last favor, don't die."......Then he died.....I then knew what laid ahead of me....a journey...

Gamabunta · 06-24-2009, 12:46 PM

lmao, I love Toma RNK.

Space Cowboy Sasori · 06-24-2009, 01:16 PM

Gama, that's clever.

Silentkiller · 06-24-2009, 01:55 PM

I like it!

shino 4 · 06-24-2009, 01:55 PM

Good story.

animelover · 11-13-2009, 03:40 PM

Whoah really grave digging now...

Ace adventurer · 11-13-2009, 03:42 PM

Love it

06-20-2009, 05:27 PM	#1
seannfma Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: NH Posts: 3,217 Rep Power: 9	my story-a rouge ninja I was running...I don't know from what but I knew what I just left behind....I didnt bother to look behind because if I did I was as good as dead.....As i arrived in a dark forest......A dark figure was heading toward me.....I didnt know what to think.....It kept aproching....gaining more speed heading toward me...As it was approching me it kept yelling "Come back"......Then as the dark figure drew closer I.... ------Part2------------ I pulled a Kunai immediently....knowing I had the village after me.....I was thinking so many things....Who was this dark figure....I didnt have time for thoughts it approaced....I quickly without thought stabbed the figure...The figure was bleeding....I quickly looked down....He was taking his last breaths....I soon relized this figure was... -------Part 3----------- My eyes shocked of the sight.....How could I kill him.....I coudnt put this all together but I had just killed.....My younger brother....."You've always been like this" My brother said coughing up blood......I looked down at him....Tears started falling down my eyes.....I coudnt believe it......I killed my brother. -------Part 4------------ I looked down at my brother......He was'nt crying but it looked as if......he was happy....He tried despretly to gasp his last words......But he could only say one sentece it was....."You've always been like this, we never did get along, do me one last favor, don't die."......Then he died.....I then knew what laid ahead of me....a journey... __________________ GF: Yoshi-chan Close Friends: animelover, shinobi665, 2hyper4u, mangagirl, SakuraGirl "The ones who didnt do anything are to blame the most"-me "I made a promise to her, thats the most precious memory I have left!"-Sora-Kingdom hearts Last edited by seannfma; 06-24-2009 at 12:14 PM. Reason: added new parts.

06-20-2009, 05:36 PM	#2
seannfma Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: NH Posts: 3,217 Rep Power: 9	Re: my story-a rouge ninja ok come on guys its not that bad. __________________ GF: Yoshi-chan Close Friends: animelover, shinobi665, 2hyper4u, mangagirl, SakuraGirl "The ones who didnt do anything are to blame the most"-me "I made a promise to her, thats the most precious memory I have left!"-Sora-Kingdom hearts

06-20-2009, 06:04 PM	#3
animelover Jonin Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: New York. Alternatively, with Roxas in Twilight Town Posts: 6,005 Rep Power: 12 Member's Picture Albums	Re: my story-a rouge ninja what??? Put more into it Sean! lol, i wanna read more __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. My boyfriend: Raiden

06-20-2009, 06:10 PM	#5
seannfma Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: NH Posts: 3,217 Rep Power: 9	Re: my story-a rouge ninja Raiden I will fight you 2maro. __________________ GF: Yoshi-chan Close Friends: animelover, shinobi665, 2hyper4u, mangagirl, SakuraGirl "The ones who didnt do anything are to blame the most"-me "I made a promise to her, thats the most precious memory I have left!"-Sora-Kingdom hearts

06-21-2009, 08:55 AM	#6
seannfma Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: NH Posts: 3,217 Rep Power: 9	Re: my story-a rouge ninja Who wants part 2? __________________ GF: Yoshi-chan Close Friends: animelover, shinobi665, 2hyper4u, mangagirl, SakuraGirl "The ones who didnt do anything are to blame the most"-me "I made a promise to her, thats the most precious memory I have left!"-Sora-Kingdom hearts

06-21-2009, 09:15 AM	#7
seannfma Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: NH Posts: 3,217 Rep Power: 9	Re: my story-a rouge ninja ------Part2------------ I pulled a Kunai immediently....knowing I had the village after me.....I was thinking so many things....Who was this dark figure....I didnt have time for thoughts it approaced....I quickly without thought stabbed the figure...The figure was bleeding....I quickly looked down....He was taking his last breaths....I soon relized this figure was... __________________ GF: Yoshi-chan Close Friends: animelover, shinobi665, 2hyper4u, mangagirl, SakuraGirl "The ones who didnt do anything are to blame the most"-me "I made a promise to her, thats the most precious memory I have left!"-Sora-Kingdom hearts Last edited by seannfma; 06-22-2009 at 06:21 PM.

06-21-2009, 09:59 AM	#8
animelover Jonin Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: New York. Alternatively, with Roxas in Twilight Town Posts: 6,005 Rep Power: 12 Member's Picture Albums	Re: my story-a rouge ninja hmm action story huh? lol, who was the figure? >_> __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. My boyfriend: Raiden

06-21-2009, 10:03 AM	#9
god of puppets Chunin Exam Participant Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: under ur bed! Posts: 752 Rep Power: 0	Re: my story-a rouge ninja heh... not bad, im interested. make the new one soon

06-21-2009, 10:07 AM	#10
seannfma Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: NH Posts: 3,217 Rep Power: 9	Re: my story-a rouge ninja I'll make part 3 soon the big reaveal! __________________ GF: Yoshi-chan Close Friends: animelover, shinobi665, 2hyper4u, mangagirl, SakuraGirl "The ones who didnt do anything are to blame the most"-me "I made a promise to her, thats the most precious memory I have left!"-Sora-Kingdom hearts

06-22-2009, 12:33 PM	#11
seannfma Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: NH Posts: 3,217 Rep Power: 9	Re: my story-a rouge ninja -------Part 3----------- My eyes shocked of the sight.....How could I kill him.....I coudnt put this all together but I had just killed.....My younger brother....."You've always been like this" My brother said coughing up blood......I looked down at him....Tears started falling down my eyes.....I coudnt believe it......I killed my brother. __________________ GF: Yoshi-chan Close Friends: animelover, shinobi665, 2hyper4u, mangagirl, SakuraGirl "The ones who didnt do anything are to blame the most"-me "I made a promise to her, thats the most precious memory I have left!"-Sora-Kingdom hearts Last edited by seannfma; 06-22-2009 at 06:22 PM.

06-22-2009, 01:19 PM	#12
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06-22-2009, 01:44 PM	#13
seannfma Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: NH Posts: 3,217 Rep Power: 9	Re: my story-a rouge ninja Thanks Ayden. Who wants part 4? __________________ GF: Yoshi-chan Close Friends: animelover, shinobi665, 2hyper4u, mangagirl, SakuraGirl "The ones who didnt do anything are to blame the most"-me "I made a promise to her, thats the most precious memory I have left!"-Sora-Kingdom hearts

06-24-2009, 12:13 PM	#14
seannfma Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: NH Posts: 3,217 Rep Power: 9	Re: my story-a rouge ninja -------Part 4------------ I looked down at my brother......He was'nt crying but it looked as if......he was happy....He tried despretly to gasp his last words......But he could only say one sentece it was....."You've always been like this, we never did get along, do me one last favor, don't die."......Then he died.....I then knew what laid ahead of me....a journey... __________________ GF: Yoshi-chan Close Friends: animelover, shinobi665, 2hyper4u, mangagirl, SakuraGirl "The ones who didnt do anything are to blame the most"-me "I made a promise to her, thats the most precious memory I have left!"-Sora-Kingdom hearts

06-24-2009, 12:46 PM	#15
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