Izumi

Kiseki · 08-03-2010, 01:22 PM

I STOPPED WRITING THIS STORY. I'M SORRY!

Welcome to this thread,

This is a story about a young nymph girl, only 16 years old.
A nymph is a person who is half human, half god.
She has a whole life in front of her, parents expecting her to become something.
Being part of the most famous family in her village, Miyazagi.

She will be send to train at school and go on life threatening missions later on.
Will she be one with her team, and will she be stronger than her older brother?
A second world war is coming up and Izumi has no time to lose.
Will she save her people from danger and pain? Stay tuned!

CHAPTERS
(click on a chaptername to read)

1. The walk
2. Team Ohishi!
3. The knife cuts at both sides
NEW! 4. Power of pain

INTRO IZUMI

- Her full name is Miyazagi Izumi

- Her favourite number is 19
- She lives with her father, mother and brother Hiro
- Her best friend is Inokuma Natsuko
- She loves to talk walks, and sing to herself
- Her favourite food is Teriyaki
- She has black hair like her father, gray eyes like her mother
- She hates people who are arrogant and also girly girls

- Her favourite color is purple.

CHARACTERS

Spoiler:

BIRTHDAY LIST

Spoiler:

SKETCH OF IZUMI

Spoiler:

To the people who follow this story:
Thank you so much for your comments! Keep on posting those please!

Copyright 2010 by Kiseki @ Naruto Viz Forums.
Do not steal any character on this story.

Bacon · 08-03-2010, 01:44 PM

I will be tuned in for Moar. ^^

Kiseki · 08-03-2010, 01:46 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Bacon

I will be tuned in for Moar. ^^

Awe thank you sensei

Have any fav characters yet which you do think will kick ass? XD

gama-sennin · 08-03-2010, 01:54 PM

Do they sell this imagination thingy somewhere? Because I havent got any and I think it must be because I dont know where the damn shop is....

Shikamaru Nara · 08-03-2010, 02:06 PM

I stopped at nymphs. xD I guess I'll just check it out anyway, though. =]

Kiseki · 08-03-2010, 02:07 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by gama-sennin

Do they sell this imagination thingy somewhere? Because I havent got any and I think it must be because I dont know where the damn shop is....

Not yet, haha. I'm actually trying to publish it when it's finished.
But I only wrote like one chapter or so

Lets finish the entire story first. Im affraid its gonna be a long story o-o

VampireCat · 08-03-2010, 10:59 PM

/waiting. P:
I guess I will try to write something also. +What gama said. u.u

Hinata~ · 08-03-2010, 11:00 PM

/stalks thread

VampireCat · 08-04-2010, 01:48 AM

^ Forum daughter number two! <3
/stalks also.

Kiseki · 08-04-2010, 02:12 AM

1. The walk

She closed the door behind her in a rush, while she looked outside longing for some activity in the village. Izumi carefully moved across the corner of the house and was hoping her older brother Hiro did not notice her, who knew exactly if she was up to something mysterious. As always he would decounce it if he found out if Izumi was sneaking outside without permission to meet her friends. Her heart was pounding fast when she peeked behind the corner of the house and walked carefully to her room and closed the door behind her. Gently she undressed herself, putting off the smaller kimono and replaced it by a thicker one, wich was beautifully decorated with the pattern of blossom. On top of that she had put on a dark cloak, which helped her to stay unnoticed if she would walk into the village in the dusk. She decided for herself this was the last day of freedom and she was determined to celebrate that with her best friend.

Without a word Izumi said goodbye to her parental home, which was located at the egde of the forest. Her mom always took care of the flower garden which was at the backside of the house, divided over a large amount of land. In dusk it was even more beautiful and impressive, and with a smile she looked back at the flowers which gotten so much attention and care. Izumi recieved a similar care from her mother. The moment itself felt so good, the feeling of freedom and improvidence. Izumi dared to let it go easier now she knew more about the purpose of her existence, where her brother has told about since he temporarily came back home from a long mission. The day he came back he just couldn't stop talking about his adventures, the heavy battles he and his team had won. Izumi was slightly jealous of him. It must have been quite something, otherwise would Hiro not talk about it with such enthousiasm. Never before has she seen her brother talk so long about any subject. After that day he fell back again to his old habbit, a long lasting silence.

For a moment it was almost like her heart stopped pounding. Izumi heard other nymphs comming closer towards her, who where probably on their way to the center of the village to celebrate with their children. Tomorrow all young nymphs had to gather in the west of the village to start their first day at school. Izumi was also one of those young nymphs who wouldn't see their home for at least a month after tomorrow. In a rush she ran into the forest and hid herself behind a large tree. She even was too affraid to breathe, every sound could draw their attention. When the sounds of talk and laughter did not face she decided to run somewhat deeper in the forest and after running for a while she stopped and looked around, shifted. Izumi thought she heard a sound from another creature. All the sudden a shock went through her body when felt that somebody's eyes were staring right at her back.

VampireCat · 08-04-2010, 02:47 AM

Seems pretty nice actually. o.o

Quote:

Her mom always took care of the flower garden wich was at the backside of the house

You wrote "wich" instead of "which" but other than that, I didn't see anything... um... bothersome? :P
Ah, whatever. Keep up. (:

Kiseki · 08-04-2010, 02:34 PM

Updated first chapter and first post.

Quote:

You wrote "wich" instead of "which" but other than that, I didn't see anything... um... bothersome? :P
Ah, whatever. Keep up. (:

Thanks babe, for helping me out with the english.
It was a tyo I guess, I was in a rush haha.

gama-sennin · 08-04-2010, 04:00 PM

1st paragraph 6th line. You should have explained in details.

But I like the rest.

Hinata~ · 08-04-2010, 04:11 PM

I can't wait to see what happens next!
Is Izumi gonna die?

Kiseki · 08-04-2010, 04:13 PM

Haha, gama you dork

thank you :3

Thanks hinata-chan. It just started, so I vote for her to not die yet

VampireCat · 08-05-2010, 03:41 AM

Someones eyes are gonna eat her and she will die.
/sarcastic laugh.

Kiseki · 08-05-2010, 01:17 PM

The walk pt. 2

"Miyazagi... why go into the forest all by yourself?" said a voice which she knew that she had heard it a couple of times before. Izumi turned around quickly and in a few seconds she felt a little shockwave going through her body. Slowly she realized that she knew this young nypmh all along. "Katzuyuki-san, I... didn't mean to..." she said on a nervous tone, while she moved slowly a step backwards as her eyes were rolling down looking at the ground. In a flash he reached out his arm to her face, which slowly pushed her chin up so he could stare right into her face. The moonlight was swimming in her gray eyes which were now almost pitch dark as the night itself. He gazed into those eyes for a moment and then he pulled back his hand again.

They heard an owl nearby, which was probably out for the hunt to feed itself with mice. On this moment the silence looked like a deafening sound for Izumi. What did he wanted from her? Right before she could ask him she noticed that he was smiling shortly and that he looked down for a second and then looked at her again. "Does Hiro know you're outside?" he asked directly. She didn't saw this comming and was confused for a moment. Deep inside she had the tendency to hit him in his face and to make an end to this meeting. He wasn't interested in her at all, so why all the sudden this attention? Izumi realized that it wouldn't help if she would hit him, so she walked in a large bow around him and looked strictly into his eyes. "Do not underestimate me..."

Her black hair were blown elegantly by the wind, which was still raging through the forest. She looked straight forward now towards the lights of the village. Izumi knew this moment would come, but still it felt unexpected. Katzuyuki was in her brothers team and the first time they had met she was very impressed by him. His mother was a Kori nymph, which was rare in these times. Katzuyuki had inherited all her powers when he was born and so he was ensured of a succesfull role in this village. The Kori were specialists in ice and after the big war they lived in small groups in another part of the world. His father met his mom in the Kori during a mission and they moved to this village when the war ended.

"Since I'm on a team with your brother you became a concern to me indirectly... Izumi." Slowly her rage gotten bigger and it seemed like her stomach was making a rotation and he only made it worse by saying those words to her. "Nonsense... !" she yelled and the silence in the forest of moments ago was gone completely. The wind razed again with a whispering sound, as if the forest tried to calm her down. But Izumi was everything but calm thanks to the words he said, as if he knew the situation that good. She was determined not to talk any more and walked back to the village. "Don't do any stupid things Izumi, you're unaware of it all at this moment, but you will find out soon enough" said Katzuyuki, smiling a for a bit while he stood there watching her leaving.

Suddenly Izumi felt her body was getting heavy and it felt like she couldn't move a leg. In shock she almost tripped over a few small stones. Quickly she recovered and managed to stay up, but her eyes were wide open and for some reason she kept staring in the distance. A flashback of her brother comming back home slowly played itself like a movie in her mind, but on the other side it looked like everthing stood still. What happend during the missions with their team and why she had this feeling that Hiro didn't told her everything if her parents asked him about it. "Katzuyuki-san... follow me."

VampireCat · 08-05-2010, 01:56 PM

Typo: You wrote blach hair, instead of black.
Loved the chapter. :3

Kiseki · 08-06-2010, 01:50 AM

Thanks <3 Haha, that's just a new color. Didn't you know? XDDD
Nah thank you once again babe! You are my ultimate double check person

Hinata~ · 08-06-2010, 01:54 AM

That boy sound like a stalker!!! XD
Is Izumi gonna date him?

08-03-2010, 01:22 PM	#1
Kiseki That Sexy Koala Join Date: Jun 2010 Location: Where you live. Obviously. Posts: 13,438 Rep Power: 25 Member's Picture Albums	Izumi Miyazagi I STOPPED WRITING THIS STORY. I'M SORRY! Welcome to this thread, This is a story about a young nymph girl, only 16 years old. A nymph is a person who is half human, half god. She has a whole life in front of her, parents expecting her to become something. Being part of the most famous family in her village, Miyazagi. She will be send to train at school and go on life threatening missions later on. Will she be one with her team, and will she be stronger than her older brother? A second world war is coming up and Izumi has no time to lose. Will she save her people from danger and pain? Stay tuned! CHAPTERS (click on a chaptername to read) 1. The walk 2. Team Ohishi! 3. The knife cuts at both sides NEW! 4. Power of pain INTRO IZUMI - Her full name is Miyazagi Izumi - Her favourite number is 19 - She lives with her father, mother and brother Hiro - Her best friend is Inokuma Natsuko - She loves to talk walks, and sing to herself - Her favourite food is Teriyaki - She has black hair like her father, gray eyes like her mother - She hates people who are arrogant and also girly girls - Her favourite color is purple. CHARACTERS Spoiler: BIRTHDAY LIST Spoiler: Izumi: June, 12 Mitsuya: January, 19 Natsuko: April, 18 Gennai: December, 22 Hiro: March, 4 Ayame: September, 15 Katzuyuki: August, 11 Yui: Februari, 7 SKETCH OF IZUMI Spoiler: To the people who follow this story: Thank you so much for your comments! Keep on posting those please! Copyright 2010 by Kiseki @ Naruto Viz Forums. Do not steal any character on this story. __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Luna Pink Hikari & Kiseki are the sexy Quad-force <3 Last edited by Kiseki; 11-01-2010 at 04:08 AM.

08-03-2010, 01:44 PM	#2
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08-04-2010, 01:48 AM	#9
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08-04-2010, 02:12 AM	#10
Kiseki That Sexy Koala Join Date: Jun 2010 Location: Where you live. Obviously. Posts: 13,438 Rep Power: 25 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Izumi 1. The walk She closed the door behind her in a rush, while she looked outside longing for some activity in the village. Izumi carefully moved across the corner of the house and was hoping her older brother Hiro did not notice her, who knew exactly if she was up to something mysterious. As always he would decounce it if he found out if Izumi was sneaking outside without permission to meet her friends. Her heart was pounding fast when she peeked behind the corner of the house and walked carefully to her room and closed the door behind her. Gently she undressed herself, putting off the smaller kimono and replaced it by a thicker one, wich was beautifully decorated with the pattern of blossom. On top of that she had put on a dark cloak, which helped her to stay unnoticed if she would walk into the village in the dusk. She decided for herself this was the last day of freedom and she was determined to celebrate that with her best friend. Without a word Izumi said goodbye to her parental home, which was located at the egde of the forest. Her mom always took care of the flower garden which was at the backside of the house, divided over a large amount of land. In dusk it was even more beautiful and impressive, and with a smile she looked back at the flowers which gotten so much attention and care. Izumi recieved a similar care from her mother. The moment itself felt so good, the feeling of freedom and improvidence. Izumi dared to let it go easier now she knew more about the purpose of her existence, where her brother has told about since he temporarily came back home from a long mission. The day he came back he just couldn't stop talking about his adventures, the heavy battles he and his team had won. Izumi was slightly jealous of him. It must have been quite something, otherwise would Hiro not talk about it with such enthousiasm. Never before has she seen her brother talk so long about any subject. After that day he fell back again to his old habbit, a long lasting silence. For a moment it was almost like her heart stopped pounding. Izumi heard other nymphs comming closer towards her, who where probably on their way to the center of the village to celebrate with their children. Tomorrow all young nymphs had to gather in the west of the village to start their first day at school. Izumi was also one of those young nymphs who wouldn't see their home for at least a month after tomorrow. In a rush she ran into the forest and hid herself behind a large tree. She even was too affraid to breathe, every sound could draw their attention. When the sounds of talk and laughter did not face she decided to run somewhat deeper in the forest and after running for a while she stopped and looked around, shifted. Izumi thought she heard a sound from another creature. All the sudden a shock went through her body when felt that somebody's eyes were staring right at her back. __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Luna Pink Hikari & Kiseki are the sexy Quad-force <3 Last edited by Kiseki; 08-05-2010 at 12:55 PM.

08-04-2010, 04:11 PM	#14
Hinata~ Chunin Exam Participant Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: under your bed Posts: 751 Rep Power: 7	Re: Izumi I can't wait to see what happens next! Is Izumi gonna die? __________________ I lovee fisher price [804325005]! My big sis: HINATA91 <3 I Love my family Even though its full of IDIOTS Wanna see me? Sorry you can't pedobear! EmoSakura's Fishy taps alge on glass I'm BACK!!

08-04-2010, 04:13 PM	#15
Kiseki That Sexy Koala Join Date: Jun 2010 Location: Where you live. Obviously. Posts: 13,438 Rep Power: 25 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Izumi Haha, gama you dork thank you :3 Thanks hinata-chan. It just started, so I vote for her to not die yet __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Luna Pink Hikari & Kiseki are the sexy Quad-force <3

08-05-2010, 03:41 AM	#16
VampireCat Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: You tell me. ;p Posts: 3,615 Rep Power: 7	Re: Izumi Someones eyes are gonna eat her and she will die. /sarcastic laugh.

08-05-2010, 01:17 PM	#17
Kiseki That Sexy Koala Join Date: Jun 2010 Location: Where you live. Obviously. Posts: 13,438 Rep Power: 25 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Izumi The walk pt. 2 "Miyazagi... why go into the forest all by yourself?" said a voice which she knew that she had heard it a couple of times before. Izumi turned around quickly and in a few seconds she felt a little shockwave going through her body. Slowly she realized that she knew this young nypmh all along. "Katzuyuki-san, I... didn't mean to..." she said on a nervous tone, while she moved slowly a step backwards as her eyes were rolling down looking at the ground. In a flash he reached out his arm to her face, which slowly pushed her chin up so he could stare right into her face. The moonlight was swimming in her gray eyes which were now almost pitch dark as the night itself. He gazed into those eyes for a moment and then he pulled back his hand again. They heard an owl nearby, which was probably out for the hunt to feed itself with mice. On this moment the silence looked like a deafening sound for Izumi. What did he wanted from her? Right before she could ask him she noticed that he was smiling shortly and that he looked down for a second and then looked at her again. "Does Hiro know you're outside?" he asked directly. She didn't saw this comming and was confused for a moment. Deep inside she had the tendency to hit him in his face and to make an end to this meeting. He wasn't interested in her at all, so why all the sudden this attention? Izumi realized that it wouldn't help if she would hit him, so she walked in a large bow around him and looked strictly into his eyes. "Do not underestimate me..." Her black hair were blown elegantly by the wind, which was still raging through the forest. She looked straight forward now towards the lights of the village. Izumi knew this moment would come, but still it felt unexpected. Katzuyuki was in her brothers team and the first time they had met she was very impressed by him. His mother was a Kori nymph, which was rare in these times. Katzuyuki had inherited all her powers when he was born and so he was ensured of a succesfull role in this village. The Kori were specialists in ice and after the big war they lived in small groups in another part of the world. His father met his mom in the Kori during a mission and they moved to this village when the war ended. "Since I'm on a team with your brother you became a concern to me indirectly... Izumi." Slowly her rage gotten bigger and it seemed like her stomach was making a rotation and he only made it worse by saying those words to her. "Nonsense... !" she yelled and the silence in the forest of moments ago was gone completely. The wind razed again with a whispering sound, as if the forest tried to calm her down. But Izumi was everything but calm thanks to the words he said, as if he knew the situation that good. She was determined not to talk any more and walked back to the village. "Don't do any stupid things Izumi, you're unaware of it all at this moment, but you will find out soon enough" said Katzuyuki, smiling a for a bit while he stood there watching her leaving. Suddenly Izumi felt her body was getting heavy and it felt like she couldn't move a leg. In shock she almost tripped over a few small stones. Quickly she recovered and managed to stay up, but her eyes were wide open and for some reason she kept staring in the distance. A flashback of her brother comming back home slowly played itself like a movie in her mind, but on the other side it looked like everthing stood still. What happend during the missions with their team and why she had this feeling that Hiro didn't told her everything if her parents asked him about it. "Katzuyuki-san... follow me." __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Luna Pink Hikari & Kiseki are the sexy Quad-force <3 Last edited by Kiseki; 08-06-2010 at 01:49 AM.

08-05-2010, 01:56 PM	#18
VampireCat Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: You tell me. ;p Posts: 3,615 Rep Power: 7	Re: Izumi Typo: You wrote blach hair, instead of black. Loved the chapter. :3

08-06-2010, 01:50 AM	#19
Kiseki That Sexy Koala Join Date: Jun 2010 Location: Where you live. Obviously. Posts: 13,438 Rep Power: 25 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Izumi Thanks <3 Haha, that's just a new color. Didn't you know? XDDD Nah thank you once again babe! You are my ultimate double check person __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Luna Pink Hikari & Kiseki are the sexy Quad-force <3

08-06-2010, 01:54 AM	#20
Hinata~ Chunin Exam Participant Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: under your bed Posts: 751 Rep Power: 7	Re: Izumi That boy sound like a stalker!!! XD Is Izumi gonna date him? __________________ I lovee fisher price [804325005]! My big sis: HINATA91 <3 I Love my family Even though its full of IDIOTS Wanna see me? Sorry you can't pedobear! EmoSakura's Fishy taps alge on glass I'm BACK!!

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