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Old 08-06-2010, 03:54 PM   #1
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Default Yoshitsune Nue [_Chapter 1_]

Explanation of KKG
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Bloodline Name: Jigo Rai

Clan Classification: Bloodline Limit, loosely affiliated clan.

Kekkei Genkai: Innate

Element: N/A

Description: The Jigo Rai’un is a kekkei genkai that seemingly transcends relations and blood, being spread out over a very large geographical area. This has led to the rise of several different branches spread over the elemental countries.

Dress: None, but members tend to have a badge or mark in the form of a thundercloud sending out a lightning bolt to denote themselves as bearing the Jigo Rai’un.

Unique Insignia: N/A

Traditions: Being very spread out, the bearers of the Jigo Rai’un tend to group together in small compounds all over the world. Each compound is willing to house a bearer of the Jigo Rai’un that has not slain any other bearers, despite the fact that each compound is fiercely loyal to the village they reside in. This is because there seems to be some kind of genetic camaraderie between each bearer of the bloodline. This is indeed strange as the bloodline itself seems to just occur, most of the time only happening in one person of a family, sometimes in all. The specific traditions tend to vary quite a lot between each branch, signifying the difference between each founder. These are the current villages with a branch within them: Kumogakure, Konohagakure, Iwagakure, Amegakure, and Takigakure.

Clan History: No one knows what it was that caused newborn children to start developing the Jigo Rai’un, but the first recorded case of this bloodline occurring is dated to 50 years ago when a child born to shinobi parents without bloodlines started showing signs at the age of 3. That child eventually grew to be the founder of the Kumo branch of the Jigo Rai’un. Within the next 30 years, branches had started popping up all over the elemental countries.

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The kekkei genkai seems to work by creating a sort of field around the bearer that allows them to sense bio-electric signatures. It is possible to know when one has entered such a field as it will create a brief feeling of the hair in the back of your neck standing on end. This feeling is very brief and it only occurs when entering the field. Here are the specifications for this kekkei genkai:
  • Stage 1 - The basic stage - what you start with.
    • The ability to sense the bio-electric signature of anything with a nervous system within a radius of 500 meters 1 kilometers away if the sense is focused like a narrow cone (the cone being a maximum of 50 meters wide at the farthest point.
    • Sense everything that happens within the limits of the 10 meter radius spherical field that surrounds them. The knowledge is presented as a sort of 3d-map that is "felt", for a lack of better words. Strong electrical interference may cause this field to be almost completely put out of play.
    • Weakly improved reaction speed due to a slightly superior nervous system, giving the ability to react quicker.
    • Mildly manipulate ones own nervous systems to, for example, dampen pain and create/enhance pleasure. This can be likened to a temporary +1 boost to constitution against pain only. The post must detail that the nervous impulses are suppressed or enhanced for this ability to work.
  • Stage 2 - the intermediate stage
    • The ability to sense the bio-electric signature of anything with a nervous system within a radius of 1500 meters, or 2500 meters away if the sense is focused like a narrow cone (the cone being a maximum of 100 meters wide at the farthest point.
    • Sense everything that happens within the limits of the 20 meter radius spherical field that surrounds them. The knowledge is presented as a sort of 3d-map that is "felt", for a lack of better words. Strong electrical interference may cause this field to become very fuzzy, meaning small animals and such things might pass through unnoticed.
    • moderately improved reaction speed due to a superior nervous system, giving the ability to react much quicker.
    • Moderately manipulate ones own nervous systems to, for example, dampen pain and create/enhance pleasure. This can be likened to a temporary +2 boost to constitution against pain only. The post must detail that the nervous impulses are suppressed or enhanced for this ability to work.
  • Stage 3 - The Final Stage
    • The ability to sense the bio-electric signature of anything with a nervous system within a radius of 3000 meters.
    • Sense everything that happens within the limits of the 30 meter radius spherical field that surrounds them. The knowledge is presented as a sort of 3d-map that is "felt", for a lack of better words. Strong electrical interference may cause this field to become very fuzzy, meaning metals and such things might pass through unnoticed.
    • Improved reaction speed due to a vastly superior nervous system gives them the ability to react at a mere moments notice.
    • Greatly manipulate ones own nervous systems to, for example, dampen pain and create/enhance pleasure. This can be likened to a temporary +3 boost to constitution against pain only. The post must detail that the nervous impulses are suppressed or enhanced for this ability to work.
Limitations: The muscle of those that possesses this kkg seems to build more to speed while seemingly sacrificing strength. That might have something to do with how the nervous system is built but this is so far unknown. Strong electrical activity (an ordinary lightning strike, etc) can disrupt the field at higher stages and almost completely take the field out of function on lower levels.
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Default Re: Yoshitsune Nue [_Chapter 1_]

Chapter 1: Introduction To The First Mission
He was standing on top of the Amegakure gates. He felt the warm breeze on his shirt and knew something was not right about that day. He jumped back doing a few backflips in the most elegant way he could and landed facing the kage’s office. He started running for it to talk to the kage. He is running to go to the kage’s office because he got word from the kage’s messenger that the kage needed to talk with him. He ran up all of the 5 floors of the kage's mansion and opened the door to find that there was 2 other Anbus in the room with the kage already talking with them. Zaichi, the Anbu on the right and Daichi, the Anbu on the left. They are Uzumaki brothers.
"Ah, nice of you to join us."
"Well, you know how slow the news travels, so what's up"
"Well, as we were informed by the kage, apparently all we have to do on this mission is guide a highly wanted man to Takigakure." Yoshitsune shifted on to lean on his arms. "Please get off the table, I work hard to keep it clean." "I'm sorry" Yoshitsune shifted off the table and leaned in closer to listen.

-Forward in time about 15 minutes-
"Here are your 3 walkie talkies for the mission. Take them and be off" All 3 of the Anbu took the talking devices and dissapeared due to ther speed they were out of the window and at the gate in less than 2 minutes. They met with the man they were supposed to take to Takigakure, his name was Nushi. "You dudes get somewhere real fast 'ya know that?" "Sir, we are here to do a mission and we will complete it without delay so if we can get going that would be perfect." "OK, geez you think you would be happy to have an easy mission" As soon as that last sentence was finished they were off. It is not about night time and everyone is getting tired. "We should set up a camp soon." "Good idea bro." They set up camp with a roaring fire going. "It's time for me to hit the sack you guys." "Night" , they all said. *TWITCH* Yoshitsune's ear twitched. He quickly moved his right hand into his weapon's pouch and pulled out a kunai. He threw the kunai at the place he heard the motion. The other 2 Anbu got alarmed and stood up ready to fight.
"You have pretty good senses Yoshitsune" A mysterious voice said 20 feet from the 3 Anbu's position. They looked at the place where they heard the voice and say 2 shadows. "Who are you?"
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