Story by animelover - Page 7

animelover · 06-28-2009, 04:33 PM

Please tell all your friends and random people!

NaruSakufluff4ever · 06-28-2009, 04:34 PM

GROWL!! ur own little girl!

NaruSakufluff4ever · 06-28-2009, 04:34 PM

srry mispelled on

animelover · 06-28-2009, 04:47 PM

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Originally Posted by animelover

Part 8: (sorry if it's too long)

As i walked to the hideout, the guy still holding his neck with the blood slightly drying up told me to just get the man and leave.......i thought about re-slicing his neck open......i went and pushed the door open and went in the dirty and beer bottled little shack they had.....you could see the vomit and flies on the wall.......even weird liquid on the floor that i dared not to step on.....i was so angry that i just wanted to kill those thugs.......very slowly and painfully.....if they hurt that man.....even a scratch......that would be it.....all of them DEAD...

my heart was pounding as my angry surged, i walked down the hallway where a rat was nibbling on paper...i took out my sword and struck the rat dead.......i was getting heated up just thinking about how he must be right now...i waked down to the basement, the man who i sliced was still upstairs, probably trying to heal that gash....no good they'll do him since I'm going to kill him later......i almost wished that he was calling those thugs on me

I saw the man......tied up....he was still breathing, but was very bloody and very hacked up....his shirt full of old dried blood and they tied him so his arms were on the wall with the ropes around him....his head was down...did he not hear me come in? Then a chill ran down my spine....was he dead?
i gaped at the thought and ran to him, only to be stopped by a kunai almost striking my face as it hit the wall....i was so angry...it boiled.....inside it felt like a black darkness was taking over and i almost was crying of the pure madness i had to just kill.....

There was eight thugs behind me....they were smiling...some even laughed as they came in.....the last one locked the door and the one just a few feet away said "well, well well.....looks like we have a visitor..."

i was so mad, that i didn't even realize that my legs had already had me charging at him, that my hand was griped on the sword and i was ready to kill him....rip him open.....the thugs all jumped on me and had their weapons but i had already killed him....my blade to the lower side of his neck and his head was in two....i was swinging madly around just wanting to kill them all, i was getting pounded badly but at that moment i was pure anger.................

That's when i heard the door bust open and a man rush inside so fast that the sword he carried sliced three men at that instint....the other thugs stopped but had me held down....i was struggling but my eyes locked on this man......he was strong...his body was built up for killing and he had many scars.....he smiled darkly and said to the thugs "It takes THIS many to kill this girl? heh....i might just kill you slimy creeps right now....better yet....i'll slice your bodies open and just hang them to the wall and let you die slowly and painfully....what do you say?" He laughed and took his sword again......was he a friend? or another enemy?

So people can see it

Hawk · 06-28-2009, 05:06 PM

AWESOME StORY SIS KEEP GOIN KEEP GOIN!!!

Broko · 06-28-2009, 05:19 PM

hey animelover i can change this tread

animelover · 06-28-2009, 05:31 PM

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Originally Posted by Broko

hey animelover i can change this tread

you can? to what bro?

vampire Lycan · 06-28-2009, 06:25 PM

what???

Broko · 06-29-2009, 03:26 PM

hello sis

NaruSakufluff4ever · 06-29-2009, 03:31 PM

Change it to what?!

NaruSakufluff4ever · 06-29-2009, 03:31 PM

that was supposed to be in caps...

Candice Uchiha · 06-30-2009, 10:35 AM

anyway yall should go look at my story

animelover · 06-30-2009, 10:52 AM

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Originally Posted by Candice Uchiha

anyway yall should go look at my story

Stick with mine ppls

I have part 9 comming on too

Ryaque · 06-30-2009, 10:53 AM

I can't wait. Part Nine!!!!

NaruSakufluff4ever · 06-30-2009, 12:05 PM

part ninE part niNE part nINE part NINE parT NINE paRT NINE pART NINE PART NINE!!!!!!!!!!!!

animelover · 07-02-2009, 09:17 AM

I think i should just quit with my story

NaruSakufluff4ever · 07-02-2009, 09:19 AM

noooo dont quit!!!

Ryaque · 07-02-2009, 01:07 PM

Don't you dare quit!!! A good story like that should never go to waste!!! Keep writing!!!

vampire Lycan · 07-02-2009, 03:44 PM

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOoo
do not quit sister!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

animelover · 07-02-2009, 03:46 PM

Oh gosh, Okay for only my fans, I'll try and keep writing

06-28-2009, 04:33 PM	#121
animelover Jonin Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: New York. Alternatively, with Roxas in Twilight Town Posts: 6,005 Rep Power: 12 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Story by animelover Please tell all your friends and random people! __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. My boyfriend: Raiden

06-28-2009, 04:34 PM	#122
NaruSakufluff4ever Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: I somehow got stuck in the portal to Hyrule and Naruto... NOT AGAIN! Posts: 2,420 Rep Power: 9	Re: Story by animelover GROWL!! ur own little girl!

06-28-2009, 04:34 PM	#123
NaruSakufluff4ever Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: I somehow got stuck in the portal to Hyrule and Naruto... NOT AGAIN! Posts: 2,420 Rep Power: 9	Re: Story by animelover srry mispelled on

06-28-2009, 05:06 PM	#125
Hawk Chunin Exam Proctor Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Village hidden in the fire Posts: 1,950 Rep Power: 0	Re: Story by animelover AWESOME StORY SIS KEEP GOIN KEEP GOIN!!! __________________ Village= Village hidden in the Fire Awesome girlfriend= Brothers= Thenagan, DragonAngel Naruto & Hinata TentenForever-Wrath Ulmo lord of waters Naruto/Fan Boy Windking Shika Sasruto Sisters= Animelover, C-C, Hinata♥Hyuga Mai Vino Jenny kibaxino4ever234 Cousins= Cade Madara danboy Spoiler: White txt=Human Blue txt=White Wolf Spoiler: My wolf form To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. 7/16/2009 = Chidori Hell, NEVER FORGET

06-28-2009, 05:19 PM	#126
Broko Chunin Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Everywere Posts: 1,093 Rep Power: 0	Re: Story by animelover hey animelover i can change this tread __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Spoiler: ~((Rogue Ninja))~ Demon Of Darkness

06-28-2009, 06:25 PM	#128
vampire Lycan Chunin Exam Proctor Join Date: May 2009 Location: I live at home Posts: 1,662 Rep Power: 0	Re: Story by animelover what???

06-29-2009, 03:26 PM	#129
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06-29-2009, 03:31 PM	#130
NaruSakufluff4ever Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: I somehow got stuck in the portal to Hyrule and Naruto... NOT AGAIN! Posts: 2,420 Rep Power: 9	Re: Story by animelover Change it to what?!

06-29-2009, 03:31 PM	#131
NaruSakufluff4ever Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: I somehow got stuck in the portal to Hyrule and Naruto... NOT AGAIN! Posts: 2,420 Rep Power: 9	Re: Story by animelover that was supposed to be in caps...

06-30-2009, 10:35 AM	#132
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06-30-2009, 10:53 AM	#134
Ryaque Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: May 2009 Location: Falling down...down...down...deeper into the darkness... Posts: 5,407 Rep Power: 10 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Story by animelover I can't wait. Part Nine!!!! __________________ Song to describe my mood: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. "So long, my luckless romance. My back is turned on you. Should've known you'd bring me heartache. Almost lovers always do..." ~Almost Lover, A Fine Frenzy Spoiler: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

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NaruSakufluff4ever Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: I somehow got stuck in the portal to Hyrule and Naruto... NOT AGAIN! Posts: 2,420 Rep Power: 9	Re: Story by animelover part ninE part niNE part nINE part NINE parT NINE paRT NINE pART NINE PART NINE!!!!!!!!!!!!

07-02-2009, 09:17 AM	#136
animelover Jonin Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: New York. Alternatively, with Roxas in Twilight Town Posts: 6,005 Rep Power: 12 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Story by animelover I think i should just quit with my story __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. My boyfriend: Raiden

07-02-2009, 09:19 AM	#137
NaruSakufluff4ever Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: I somehow got stuck in the portal to Hyrule and Naruto... NOT AGAIN! Posts: 2,420 Rep Power: 9	Re: Story by animelover noooo dont quit!!!

07-02-2009, 01:07 PM	#138
Ryaque Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: May 2009 Location: Falling down...down...down...deeper into the darkness... Posts: 5,407 Rep Power: 10 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Story by animelover Don't you dare quit!!! A good story like that should never go to waste!!! Keep writing!!! __________________ Song to describe my mood: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. "So long, my luckless romance. My back is turned on you. Should've known you'd bring me heartache. Almost lovers always do..." ~Almost Lover, A Fine Frenzy Spoiler: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

07-02-2009, 03:44 PM	#139
vampire Lycan Chunin Exam Proctor Join Date: May 2009 Location: I live at home Posts: 1,662 Rep Power: 0	Re: Story by animelover NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOoo do not quit sister!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

07-02-2009, 03:46 PM	#140
animelover Jonin Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: New York. Alternatively, with Roxas in Twilight Town Posts: 6,005 Rep Power: 12 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Story by animelover Oh gosh, Okay for only my fans, I'll try and keep writing __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. My boyfriend: Raiden

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