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Old 06-28-2009, 04:33 PM   #121
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Please tell all your friends and random people!
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Old 06-28-2009, 04:34 PM   #122
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GROWL!! ur own little girl!
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Old 06-28-2009, 04:34 PM   #123
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Old 06-28-2009, 04:47 PM   #124
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As i walked to the hideout, the guy still holding his neck with the blood slightly drying up told me to just get the man and leave.......i thought about re-slicing his neck open......i went and pushed the door open and went in the dirty and beer bottled little shack they had.....you could see the vomit and flies on the wall.......even weird liquid on the floor that i dared not to step on.....i was so angry that i just wanted to kill those thugs.......very slowly and painfully.....if they hurt that man.....even a scratch......that would be it.....all of them DEAD...

my heart was pounding as my angry surged, i walked down the hallway where a rat was nibbling on paper...i took out my sword and struck the rat dead.......i was getting heated up just thinking about how he must be right now...i waked down to the basement, the man who i sliced was still upstairs, probably trying to heal that gash....no good they'll do him since I'm going to kill him later......i almost wished that he was calling those thugs on me

I saw the man......tied up....he was still breathing, but was very bloody and very hacked up....his shirt full of old dried blood and they tied him so his arms were on the wall with the ropes around him....his head was down...did he not hear me come in? Then a chill ran down my spine....was he dead?
i gaped at the thought and ran to him, only to be stopped by a kunai almost striking my face as it hit the wall....i was so angry...it boiled.....inside it felt like a black darkness was taking over and i almost was crying of the pure madness i had to just kill.....

There was eight thugs behind me....they were smiling...some even laughed as they came in.....the last one locked the door and the one just a few feet away said "well, well well.....looks like we have a visitor..."

i was so mad, that i didn't even realize that my legs had already had me charging at him, that my hand was griped on the sword and i was ready to kill him....rip him open.....the thugs all jumped on me and had their weapons but i had already killed him....my blade to the lower side of his neck and his head was in two....i was swinging madly around just wanting to kill them all, i was getting pounded badly but at that moment i was pure anger.................

That's when i heard the door bust open and a man rush inside so fast that the sword he carried sliced three men at that instint....the other thugs stopped but had me held down....i was struggling but my eyes locked on this man......he was strong...his body was built up for killing and he had many scars.....he smiled darkly and said to the thugs "It takes THIS many to kill this girl? heh....i might just kill you slimy creeps right now....better yet....i'll slice your bodies open and just hang them to the wall and let you die slowly and painfully....what do you say?" He laughed and took his sword again......was he a friend? or another enemy?
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Old 06-28-2009, 05:06 PM   #125
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AWESOME StORY SIS KEEP GOIN KEEP GOIN!!!
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Old 06-28-2009, 05:19 PM   #126
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hey animelover i can change this tread
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Old 06-28-2009, 05:31 PM   #127
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hey animelover i can change this tread
you can? to what bro?
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Old 06-28-2009, 06:25 PM   #128
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what???
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Old 06-29-2009, 03:26 PM   #129
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hello sis
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Old 06-29-2009, 03:31 PM   #130
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Change it to what?!
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Old 06-29-2009, 03:31 PM   #131
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that was supposed to be in caps...
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Old 06-30-2009, 10:35 AM   #132
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anyway yall should go look at my story
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Old 06-30-2009, 10:52 AM   #133
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anyway yall should go look at my story
Stick with mine ppls

I have part 9 comming on too
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Old 06-30-2009, 10:53 AM   #134
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I can't wait. Part Nine!!!!
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Old 06-30-2009, 12:05 PM   #135
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part ninE part niNE part nINE part NINE parT NINE paRT NINE pART NINE PART NINE!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I think i should just quit with my story
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Old 07-02-2009, 09:19 AM   #137
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noooo dont quit!!!
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Don't you dare quit!!! A good story like that should never go to waste!!! Keep writing!!!
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOoo
do not quit sister!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Oh gosh, Okay for only my fans, I'll try and keep writing
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