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Old 06-22-2009, 08:52 AM   #61
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YAY MORE ACTION!!!! anime u r the bestest writer here!!! make a book with this!!!!
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Old 06-22-2009, 08:57 AM   #62
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I had to leave.....he was no where.....was he killed like the others? I did not know, but there was nothing else i could do....again i wandered.....still thinking of him, but i told myself to stop, i knew that in my journey i could no longer have connections like that......no ties.......it was just me..........so if he was dead?......then it was fate's decision.....his time was up i suppose....

I again was walking, it was starting to get cloudy, i smiled at the thought.....i wished another big storm would come and wash away these thoughts in my head......

As i continued on i came across a town.....there where many people and shops, all the children running around without a care......i shouldn't be here.......for all i do is bring troubles.....but i needed to rest again, so i went inside a nearby shop.........i sat in far away so i wouldn't be noticed, but so i can still hear a group of guys near by.......as the mins. flew by i heard something very interesting in their conversation...

A man was being held as a prisoner by a local group of thugs, they say they found him near the woods half dead, all bloody and yelping in pain......my eyes grew wide at the thought....................could it be him? The guys laughed when one said they're keeping him to see if someone will pay for his release.......i smirked....another adventure for me i suppose.......when the guys walked out of the shop i followed close, the guy who knew the most was right ahead.......i laughed quietly to myself and held the handle to my sword which was always hidden......so easy to take out and kill him i thought.........when the group of guys saw me behind them they all stopped and smiled a dark smile..........easy game they thought, it was evening by now and i was a girl all by myself..........they thought i was weak

I smiled as they came closer..........when they parted just a little, as in to surround me, the big mouthed guy ask me if i was lost, he smiled and said it was dangerous for a girl to be all by herself...........that's when i charged at him so quickly he couldn't defend himself, i punched his stomach and as he gasped for air i went behind him and took him by the hair and pulled my sword by his neck...............that's when i smiled and said..........you men should always keep your guard up, for us girls walking by ourselves can be the real danger..........i laughed as his friends were in shock.....i simply said........where is this man being held that you were speaking of? i smiled again as my sword inched closer to his neck..........
thanks, lol i might write a book
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I had to leave.....he was no where.....was he killed like the others? I did not know, but there was nothing else i could do....again i wandered.....still thinking of him, but i told myself to stop, i knew that in my journey i could no longer have connections like that......no ties.......it was just me..........so if he was dead?......then it was fate's decision.....his time was up i suppose....

I again was walking, it was starting to get cloudy, i smiled at the thought.....i wished another big storm would come and wash away these thoughts in my head......

As i continued on i came across a town.....there where many people and shops, all the children running around without a care......i shouldn't be here.......for all i do is bring troubles.....but i needed to rest again, so i went inside a nearby shop.........i sat in far away so i wouldn't be noticed, but so i can still hear a group of guys near by.......as the mins. flew by i heard something very interesting in their conversation...

A man was being held as a prisoner by a local group of thugs, they say they found him near the woods half dead, all bloody and yelping in pain......my eyes grew wide at the thought....................could it be him? The guys laughed when one said they're keeping him to see if someone will pay for his release.......i smirked....another adventure for me i suppose.......when the guys walked out of the shop i followed close, the guy who knew the most was right ahead.......i laughed quietly to myself and held the handle to my sword which was always hidden......so easy to take out and kill him i thought.........when the group of guys saw me behind them they all stopped and smiled a dark smile..........easy game they thought, it was evening by now and i was a girl all by myself..........they thought i was weak

I smiled as they came closer..........when they parted just a little, as in to surround me, the big mouthed guy ask me if i was lost, he smiled and said it was dangerous for a girl to be all by herself...........that's when i charged at him so quickly he couldn't defend himself, i punched his stomach and as he gasped for air i went behind him and took him by the hair and pulled my sword by his neck...............that's when i smiled and said..........you men should always keep your guard up, for us girls walking by ourselves can be the real danger..........i laughed as his friends were in shock.....i simply said........where is this man being held that you were speaking of? i smiled again as my sword inched closer to his neck..........
This story is really good, your a great writer
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Old 06-22-2009, 09:05 AM   #64
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WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
that was so COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 06-22-2009, 09:33 AM   #65
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That is sooo cool animelover! I love your stories! They're awesome!
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On a scale from one to ten. I'D GIVE YOU 100!!! AWESOME STORIES!!!
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Old 06-22-2009, 09:43 AM   #67
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on a scale from 1-10 it would be 99999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999 99999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999 99999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999 99999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999 99999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999 99999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999 9999999999999999
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Old 06-22-2009, 02:28 PM   #68
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well i like it the story actually made me feel what the character was feeling and the story is very detailed along with the fighting part tha was really impressive and deatailed... i give it a 10/10 Nice job Animelover!!!
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Thank you all!
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great story. Ill be waiting for the update.
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omg your really good at this maybe i should try to make up a story don't know if i would be good at it like you are
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never know till you give it a shot. you should try.
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Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!! Part 7?!?!
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bring it!
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YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :llol:
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PART 7!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wooooooooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwww not until later
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lol, vampire you posted all three of those 10mins apart.
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Wooowww!I can't wait for Part 7!!!
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I mean it!!!
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