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Old 06-20-2009, 04:32 PM   #21
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Okay, part 3 is in the making....
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Yor really good i wanna hear part three
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Part 3: (hope u guys like it)

I walked along the worn dirt path...the rain still hard....my hand to my sides, and only the moonlight as my guide....i walked slowly....

where was i really to go anyway?

As I kept walking my eyes were droopy, i haven't slept in a long time....as i tried to keep walking, the memories started to creep back into my mind....
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I was six....it was very late at night...i awoke to screams...my heart was beating...i looked widely around my room, trying to find the source....i opened the door just a little..and there i saw a masked man.....with a sword.....my uncle was blocking him from the other family members that were running, screaming, all scared.....
the masked man simply pushed his sword into my uncle and swung it up, slicing him in half.............his blood splattered on me.....i looked wide eyed at the scene in front of me.....i shivered with fear.....i felt sick and shaky, i wanted to leave.....i couldn't take it and quickly shut the door and hid......
hid from it all.....my head under my pillow, me closing my mouth so that the screams would not come out....i fell asleep again......and in the morning......only me and a few others were left.......i ran away.....

other memories passed me......but now i was too tired......as i came back to the present.....i passed out on the dirt rode....as the rain fell............
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This story is really good
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I walked along the worn dirt path...the rain still hard....my hand to my sides, and only the moonlight as my guide....i walked slowly....

where was i really to go anyway?

As I kept walking my eyes were droopy, i haven't slept in a long time....as i tried to keep walking, the memories started to creep back into my mind....
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I was six....it was very late at night...i awoke to screams...my heart was beating...i looked widely around my room, trying to find the source....i opened the door just a little..and there i saw a masked man.....with a sword.....my uncle was blocking him from the other family members that were running, screaming, all scared.....
the masked man simply pushed his sword into my uncle and swung it up, slicing him in half.............his blood splattered on me.....i looked wide eyed at the scene in front of me.....i shivered with fear.....i felt sick and shaky, i wanted to leave.....i couldn't take it and quickly shut the door and hid......
hid from it all.....my head under my pillow, me closing my mouth so that the screams would not come out....i fell asleep again......and in the morning......only me and a few others were left.......i ran away.....

other memories passed me......but now i was too tired......as i came back to the present.....i passed out on the dirt rode....as the rain fell............
that's omg, relly good animelover, im weiting for part 4 now lmao
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yeah,i would like to read the next part.
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WOW!!
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your a very good writer darling
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yes she is^^ she is my sister^^
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By popular demand, i will make part 4 then! Thank you for reading my story
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Part 4:

I feel hot....like i'm.....burning....i move around...i feel coldness on my forehead.....where am i?
i open my eyes partly...and see a wooden ceiling...my throat is dry.....then before i know it, water was flowing down my lips...i drank it quickly....

when my vision was better i saw him....his eyes met mine but his emotions were....odd..
he then took off the wet cloth that was laying on my head, and told me that he healed my wounds....i didn't like that....who was he? why did he take me in? i was getting up but he gently pushed me back down.........rest he said, and then he walked away...he told me he will be back with food....if i should choose to stay he wouldn't mind it until i was better.......as soon as he was gone i wanted to leave, but when i did the pain in my side was very bad...i looked to it and it was already wrapped and was no longer bleeding....

what am i to do? i'm hurt and would have no chance of living if i kept wandering in this condition.....should i stay? but who was that stranger? i made up my mind to leave, if i should stay, he will be killed by those who follow me...wanting me and those close dead as well...

i rose up, and fell back down......my fever yet again took over and i fell again into a dreamless sleep....
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Part 3: That is really sad.

Part 4: Hmm, The guys a medical ninja?
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I feel hot....like i'm.....burning....i move around...i feel coldness on my forehead.....where am i?
i open my eyes partly...and see a wooden ceiling...my throat is dry.....then before i know it, water was flowing down my lips...i drank it quickly....

when my vision was better i saw him....his eyes met mine but his emotions were....odd..
he then took off the wet cloth that was laying on my head, and told me that he healed my wounds....i didn't like that....who was he? why did he take me in? i was getting up but he gently pushed me back down.........rest he said, and then he walked away...he told me he will be back with food....if i should choose to stay he wouldn't mind it until i was better.......as soon as he was gone i wanted to leave, but when i did the pain in my side was very bad...i looked to it and it was already wrapped and was no longer bleeding....

what am i to do? i'm hurt and would have no chance of living if i kept wandering in this condition.....should i stay? but who was that stranger? i made up my mind to leave, if i should stay, he will be killed by those who follow me...wanting me and those close dead as well...

i rose up, and fell back down......my fever yet again took over and i fell again into a dreamless sleep....
omg, this is geting relly GOOD
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Should i release part 5? it has a big twist.................sorta, (you guys may have seen this comming)
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if your ready, if not, put it up tomowrow
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Part 5:

It had been several days, and my body has been healed again...i grown to trust him a little........but my guard was always up...i have learned that trust can not be eaisly given.....it was a sunny day....

i was ready to leave...he simply said to keep my health....and then....i simply left.....i was walking along the dirt path yet again...no where in mind.....only to keep walking....then i saw it.......i saw the tracks made by them.......i knew them well as i have hid and faught them long enough to know their trail.....panic grew.....the man.....i shook my head angerly regreting his kind act, but enough of that i thought, and quickly rushed to the house where i was healed by him....no trace of him....yet i knew they were near.....then that's when one of them rushed behind me, i quickly went down as his sword swung, cutting just the end tips of my hair....i pulled out my weapon and spun while on the ground to his ankles...more of them came, i was ready to fight, if i died?

What did i care? I had no one, nothing connected me to this world really, except the well being of him............as i faught them, a kunai struck me from behind, i ignored the pain and kept fighting...fighting until the blood was on the ground.....until the chunks of their skin and meat was on my sword.....in the end many had fallen.....but the rest fled.....and me? again injured but was okay, as i searched......

he was still gone....i looked at my sword....the blood and some skin on it.....i looked down at my body......bleeding.....another gash on my back.....and black and blue puffed up brusies....what now i thought? was he okay? i shook my head again....not knowing what was next.....
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It had been several days, and my body has been healed again...i grown to trust him a little........but my guard was always up...i have learned that trust can not be eaisly given.....it was a sunny day....

i was ready to leave...he simply said to keep my health....and then....i simply left.....i was walking along the dirt path yet again...no where in mind.....only to keep walking....then i saw it.......i saw the tracks made by them.......i knew them well as i have hid and faught them long enough to know their trail.....panic grew.....the man.....i shook my head angerly regreting his kind act, but enough of that i thought, and quickly rushed to the house where i was healed by him....no trace of him....yet i knew they were near.....then that's when one of them rushed behind me, i quickly went down as his sword swung, cutting just the end tips of my hair....i pulled out my weapon and spun while on the ground to his ankles...more of them came, i was ready to fight, if i died?

What did i care? I had no one, nothing connected me to this world really, except the well being of him............as i faught them, a kunai struck me from behind, i ignored the pain and kept fighting...fighting until the blood was on the ground.....until the chunks of their skin and meat was on my sword.....in the end many had fallen.....but the rest fled.....and me? again injured but was okay, as i searched......

he was still gone....i looked at my sword....the blood and some skin on it.....i looked down at my body......bleeding.....another gash on my back.....and black and blue puffed up brusies....what now i thought? was he okay? i shook my head again....not knowing what was next.....
Very epic battle animelover, very GOOD
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^^AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!love it!!!
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