Ishtar: Origins

[puppetmaster zack]

cool so when ish the nect chapter up

[lord of puppets]

the chapter was good

[Ishtar]

Next chapter should be up sometime today. What do you think of Raiku and Sagara?

[puppetmaster zack]

i like raiku he ish so calm and will just do it and i belive he like traning by doin that would be funny

[lord of puppets]

their cool characters,i have a theory about zero the mysterious leader of mugendai karuto.i wonder how far off of a theory it is.

edit:@ zacks reply,alright will do.

[puppetmaster zack]

Originally Posted by lord of puppets

their cool characters,i have a theory about zero the mysterious leader of mugendai karuto.i wonder how far off of a theory it is.

pm me your theroy

[Raiku]

Its a really goos story and I cant wait for the next chapter to be posted.
Good Job Ishtar

[Ishtar]

"Where are we?" Said Ishtar. "These are the training grounds for this village." Raiku said. Ishtar looked around, It was just a plain looking field, with some tree's, boulders and in the forest of tree's, there was a river flowing through. There was a nice view of a large vast lake. "This is where were going to train?" Asked Ishtar. Raiku answered "Yes, of course." Ishtar looked at the man weirdly, This guy seems too nice, he thought. Raiku then said "Ishtar..." Said Raiku as he presented Ishtar with his sword, Butaiken. "Here is your sword, and remember, Use it for good, not for evil. With a dark heart, comes great power." This suddenly caught Ishtar's attention. Raiku continued "But......with a good heart, comes greater power." Ishtar then asked "How did you end up with my sword?" Raiku answered back "Well, your father is good friends with the Taokage, right? Your father, Sosuke, sent in a request so that I can train you in the way of the blade, Thats how I ended up with YOUR sword in my possession. You know, your father was the one who came up with the idea of having your own customized chakra weapon" explained Raiku. "Sweet! Gotta thank dad later" Said Ishtar. "Hey, Ishtar I just want to show you one thing, before we start training." Raiku closed his eyes, then reopened them revealing a yellow sclera with a black fuma shuriken design as his pupil. "This is the lighteye. Our villages main kekkei genkai, The user is easily capable of performing multiple elements at high levels, Improved accuracy, and able to detect movements." Explained Raiku. "THAT IS SO COOL! I want to use one and become a master at it." Raiku smiled at this ambition. Meanwhile, Lilina and Mikomi are finishing up they're mission. "Why isn't Ishtar here!" complained Mikomi. "Umm, We should just finish our mission" Said Lilina. Mikomi sighed. "Well, I've been meaning to ask you, Do you like Ishtar?" Lilina blushed "W-what are you talking about?" Lilina answered back nervously. "Oh you can't hide it you know I can tell by a mile No need to be shy, But......" She stopped. Lilina stopped blushing and said "Oh.......What is it?" Mikomi said "Ishtar likes me......But don't worry, I don't like him in that way. You also have beautiful amber eyes" Lilina was flattered by the compliment "T-thank you! You have pretty emerald eyes. That is my favorite color." Lilina said.

After a hard day of training with swords, Raiku said "Nice! I think we can call it a day" He said to Ishtar. Ishtar beamed with confidence. "By the way, Whats that dome looking building over across the lake? The white one." Asked Ishtar. "Oh, over there? Why, thats the Light Temple"

Chapter end

[sarutobi17]

nice work,it's becoming difficult to choose a favorite chapter.

[Slack 40]

good chapter

[Ishtar]

Whats your favorite quote so far? I got a couple.

[Slack 40]

Hey Ishtar did you get my PM about MK members because I need to know if any are still alive or if there is new leader for my fanfic or i can't keep writing it until u tell me

[Ishtar]

Okay, will PM you.

[Slack 40]

you just gotta tell me whose still in it and if anyone dies or leaves MK i don't need to know powers yet

[puppetmaster zack]

oh that was pretty good chapter

[Slack 40]

Chapter 8 of my fanfic is up

[Raiku]

That was a pretty good chapter.
Keep up the good work man

[Ishtar]

"Light temple?" Asked Ishtar. "Yes, It is a holy place, but at the same time, a dark one. That temple is off limits. It is forbidden to go inside. It has long been abandoned." Raiku said. "Why?" Asked Ishtar again. "Because that is where the legendary sword, the Yottsuishikiken is. Just call it yottsu for short, now, I don't when this was, but I can guess this temple was built thousands of years ago." Raiku explained. "Whoa! That long!?" Ishtar exclaimed. "Yes, thousands of years ago, They're were two warriors. Tuskur and Pelinal Whitestrake. One had a dark heart, the other, a good heart. They were equal in every way possible. They had the battle of the milleneum. But, Pelinal Whitestrake's good heart, had prevailed over Tuskur's evil heart. With a dark heart, comes great power, but with a good heart comes even greater power." Said Raiku. "Why are you telling me random stories now?" Asked Ishtar. "Hmm...There not random Pelinal and Tuskur had they're final battle in that temple. Pelinal Whitestrake did the finishing blow to Tuskur. Was that enough? Yes, because normal weapons couldn't harm Tuskur. The legendary genjutsu sword, yottsu, was wielded by Pelinal Whitestrake himself Though that temple wasn't there when this battle occured. The people who had witnessed this battle, came forth and cheered for the victor, as for Tuskur, he was caught in a genjutsu for all eternity. But......Pelinal fell to the ground. He exchanged a few last words before he passed on. After that, the people built that temple on the very grounds of where the battle occured. Rumors have it, the sword, yottsu, is still placed in a pedestal on top of what looks to be a sealed casket with 10 different colored gems decorating it." Raiku explained. "Well, nice story, but I gotta go home now. Bye Raiku. Thanks again, I have learned alot." Ishtar said as he went off home. "Bye!" Raiku said.

"Im back......with Naraku this time." Said Hugh as Naraku walked toward Zero's side. "Excellent, Hugh, I have another job for you. It requires you to follow Ishtar undetected." Said Zero. "What!?! Do you know how hard that is for me?" Whined Hugh. "Orders are orders. I suggest you follow them, I need you to follow Ishtar on his missions. I've heard word from Tanoth that Ishtar will be going out on an already prepared mission, a few days from now. Oh, this could give you some free time to "collect bodies", if you find any, that is worthy enough. Sagara.....preparing Ishtar for the inevitable is foolish to begin with, Oh and Hugh, your going alone. Now out of my sight please." Said Zero with his glowing red eye sockets. "Again? and alone? Fine!" Said Hugh as she left the dark throne room sulking. "Zero, What about the yottsu blade?" Asked Naraku. "Oh, I'll need you for that, Your perfect for the job, the yottsu blade will be taken from the pedestal of Tuskur's coffin. Afterall, Only the chosen one may take it from its resting place, and it is your job to MAKE the "chosen one" wield it." Zero explained.

Chapter end

[Ishtar]

The next day, Ishtar walked back over to the training field. He was prepared for more training. He looked at the temple across the lake and wondered how fierce the battle was between the legendary Pelinal Whitestrake and Tuskur. "Hey Nice afternoon, is it not?" a voice came out of nowhere. Ishtar looked in the direction the voice came from. "Raiku!" He yelled, but he wondered who the boy was that was standing beside him. "Who's the kid?" Asked Ishtar. Raiku replied "He is my little bro, Kai. I am also preparing him for the chunin exams. He is quite skilled with the way of the blade and has learned to activate his lighteye, the very first state." Ishtar stared jealously at Kai. Kai, who had short messy black hair and red eyes spoke "Whats this kids name? He asked Raiku. "Ishtar, I am training him how to play with swords, He's also going to the chunin exams. you know, it is getting quite close. Kai, I believe that you already are chunin leveled, I forgot to mention, the lighteye improves your swordsmanship quite considerably." Raiku said as Kai smirked at Ishtar. Ishtar did not like this kid. "Well, Lets start training!"

Somewhere, in a murky limestone cavern, There stood nine shadowy figures in the dark. "Whats the news about Sagara this time?" Asked Zero. "Well......he is suspecting the earth village.......as planned........Such a naive kage.......Well......I heard that they're about to have a kage meeting.....Its going to happen soon......Shall we invade?" Said Tanoth. Queen suddenly blurted out "Yeaaahhh!!!!!! We should just waltz right into the meeting and kill every single kage, All ten." Zero replied to Queen's response. "No Queen, We are not rushing here, patience is key." Said Zero as his eye sockets kept dimming into darkness and glowing red over and over again. "Fine." said Queen. Akio spoke out "Ah, So there are trust issues with in the circle of kage's, right?" Zack then answered for Zero. "Why yes, There were many incidents between all the kage's." Akio replied "Yes, I just wish that I can harvest them into puppets, All of them, They are so worthy, Plus, I sort of have this grudge against my kage." Said Akio. "Shutup, Both of you, no one cares about your puppets!" Said a voice. "Calm down, Toshiro." Said Zero. "We must proceed into the next phase soon, Lets wait it out until Hugh gets back." Said Naraku. Kitsune spoke out saying "Yes Mugendai Karuto for the win!" Zero replied to this. "Yes, For the win indeed, Feel the power of Mugen." finished Zero.

Chapter end

[lord of puppets]

chapter 9 is the best so far.