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xD Buts thats a secret!
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"Lets make haste Hugh." Said Naraku. "Aye, aye Naraku!
" said Hugh as they entered into the element village main gates. "No fair! " said Mikomi. Ishtar stared in her direction and his faced beamed with delight and he stuck his tongue out at her. Mikomi quickly reacted to this and punched Ishtar making him fall to the ground. " ............ " Hugh replied. "I am not a nobody, Hugh. Neither do I follow you. Now please get serious. No more playing around. We need to get rid of this nuisance." Said Naraku as his shades gleamed in the moonlight. Kejon said "Well, Looks like its two against one." He said as he placed his hand on his blade, Kinbu. "Ishtar. We'll need someone to teach you how to swordplay." Said Ishtar's father. "Aww, But who?" Ishtar's father thought about this. "What about Raiku? The Taokage's assistant? He is perfect to train you in swordplay. The villages Taokage and I are actually good friends, So it should be no problem, Anyways, Let me tell you another story, But first, lets put this dangerous weapon away for now."
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the chapter was good,now i see what naraku and hugh were up to last chapter.
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Next Chapter should be tonight. Do you got any questions?
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alright cool.only one,how does kejon know hugh?in the fanfic i mean.
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Aye, That will be revealed tonight. Next chapter should shed some light on the situation. Kejon and Hugh sorta have these "problems" between each other. Both Personal and non-personal.
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I will be shown in the next chapter too?
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I wanna be the mysterious rogue who jois for some reason...lol.
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Don't worry, You will be included. I have the perfect role for you.
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good really good
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I like it man.
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"Okay fine, But I heard the story a million times." Said Ishtar as he sat down at the table where his father was. Ishtar's father, had blue eyes and brown hair, while his mother, had black hair, also with blue eyes. His father started to tell the story. "Ishtar, Do you know the elemental villages history? Of how it was first established?" Ishtar thought about this and said "Uh, no. Im not interested in boring history. Yawn!" His father then said "Well, there was this man, He came from a different country, He was ordered to invade this country, He met the love of his life in the midst of battle, His name was-" Ishtar suddenly interrupted "Boooring! Well, Im going to hit the hay, Its late, goodnight, love ya!" He said as went to his room. "Oh." Said his father. "Goodni-" Ishtar's door slammed shut. "Oh..." Said his father. Meanwhile, Kejon encountered two beings. "Hugh, Why did you defect from the village? You were my fiance." Said Kejon. Hugh replied back "Im so sorry Kejon, But I don't have to tell you anything." Kejon closed his eyes and thought about the best way to go about this situation. He opened his eyes as he pulled out a kunai attached with a smokebomb and threw it in Hugh's direction. Hugh saw this and deflected the kunai away with her hand. Hardened skin? Kejon thought as his plan unfolded when the smoke bomb attached to the kunai activated and let out a smokescreen blinding Hugh and Naraku's vision. Kejon rushed forward drawing out his blade and jumping from up above to strike down on Hugh. But Hugh had already sensed this and blocked it with her arm surprising Kejon. So she can harden her skin? Kejon thought as Hugh forms a fist and punches Kejon staggering him as she rushes forward pushing him to the ground. "Im sorry Kejon. I really am, but.....Black Hole Effe-" Hugh stops abruptly as Naraku grabs her wrist, disabling the technique of witch she was about to use. "We must keep a low profile, Hugh. We've already blown our cover. Go back to Mugendai Karuto." Naraku said. "Whatever you say Naraku
" She looked at Kejon and ran past him. "Kejon recovered as he threw a kunai toward her. "Your not getting away!" He yelled. "Mobility Control." Said Naraku. The Kunai aimed for Hugh stops in midair and drops to the ground. "What?!" He said as he turned around facing his new opponent. Kejon slowly stood up. "Who are you?" Asked Kejon. Naraku replied. "I will eliminate those who get in my way. Thats my policy." He said as he unsheathed his sword.Chapter End. Last edited by Ishtar; 07-21-2010 at 04:06 PM. |
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Chapter is up.
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that was pretty cool so that was htere relationship
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that was their relationship in the past,was not expecting that.but the chapter was really good.
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Dude nice if you need help PM me ok.
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Kejon stared at the man. Hood, shades, black robe with flame designs. He thought as he studied him. "Kejon. Your brother. He was killed, But he was killed by me. Murdered, In cold blood. I am the man you were after your entire life. I killed your big brother, Keo. Oh yes, I can see the resemblance already. The blonde hair." Kejon stood there not knowing what to say. "You bastard!" He yelled as he threw another kunai at him. "Mobility Control." said Naraku as the kunai stopped and flew in another direction, hitting a wall. Kejon angrily performed handsigns for Firestyle: Fire ball Jutsu. A large fireball formed and headed toward Naraku. "Jutsu Absorption." Naraku said as he absorbed the flames with his hand. After the flames were absorbed. Naraku realized Kejon was missing. Naraku's shades gleamed as he looked up and saw his opponent performing a downthrust with his blade. "Mobility Control" He said as he selected the Kinbu, Kejon's blade and sent it to the side with Kejon still gripping the handle. Kejon goes flying off to the side and roughly lands on the ground. "Oh? That all you have?" Said Naraku mockingly. "Shutup." Said Kejon as he tried to stand up. Naraku walked over and placed his hand on his head. "I killed Keo, Now you. You guys looked alot alike, With blonde spiky hair and all." He said as he pierced through Kejon's back through the heart with his sword. Kejon couldn't believe he was killed by the very man who killed his big brother, Keo. He fell to the ground facedown. Naraku sheathed his sword as he left.
Outside the city gates, Hugh took out a scroll and placed her hand on it. Poof! She disappeared. Ishtar's father peeked into his son's room. "Ishtar......if only you knew about your sister......" He closed his eyes and cried. Somewhere, In a dark room with a large dining table and candles and a chandelier overhead. Hugh walks in. "Im baaaack!!!!" She said excitedly. " " replied Hugh. "Not even a drop of blood?" said Zack sitting in his chair with what looks to be a mummy wrapped in bandages on the table in front of him. "Damn! I am itching to fight someone." Said Toshiro slamming his hand on the table. At the other end of the table, In the darkness glowed two very large red pupiless eyes. "Patience is key. I'll send in Tanoth to investigate and fill me in on the situation. By the way, Where is Naraku?" Said the mysterious leader. "Still back at the village......sorry....." Hugh apologized. "What?!" Said Akio. "This is vital to us! Zero, What are you going to do with her? She keeps mucking everything up" Yelled Akio. "Calm down Akio. Hugh, Go back and finish your tasks." Said Zero in the darkness. "Akasun! More tea!." Akasun came running. "W-whatever you wish m'lord." She said as she ran out the room fetching more. "Kitsune...Since your the newest member here, Let me tell you Mugendai Karuto's Goal." Zero said. "Yeah, yeah, I know.......For real! " She exclaimed. Zero stepped out of the shadows revealing a skull dragon mask fitted on his face, An open mouthed mask slightly revealing his moving lips with a smile pattern on the mask, With sharp looking teeth and two horns. The mask's eye sockets were glowing red. He had blonde spiky hair. "Well." His voice literally echoed within the mask.Chapter end Last edited by Ishtar; 07-22-2010 at 01:26 AM. |
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that was a great chapter,the best so far.
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I edited some of it.
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amazing Ishtar I loved chapter 4. My favorite part is where some of the members of MK are introduced and I can't wait for Heaven Warriors to be introduced. I need to ask you a question for when Ishtar is introduced I think when i fight him I'm going to ask something like Ishtar you were my friend, you were supposed to join Heaven warriors what happened to you. then Ishtar will explain some thing that happened in his childhood which if its ok with you I will post a link to your fanfic and have them read a few chapters of ishtars childhood
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