Ishtar: Origins - Page 13

Ishtar · 08-16-2010, 10:53 AM

Another chapter and a list of Part 2 arcs should be up whenever.

Sasukegal · 08-16-2010, 12:32 PM

Yes! Another chapter! XD

tanoth · 08-20-2010, 10:35 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ishtar

"Im not telling you that. That information stays hidden. I will make sure it stays that way too. Where ever there is light, there is always darkness and shadows crawling and creeping about, where ever there is darkness, there is always a hint of light. Light and darkness are two sides of the same coin. One cannot exist without the other. No one knows who I truly am. Not even me." said Tanoth as he phased into the ground.

OH...MY...GOD...OH MY GOD OHMYGODOHMYGODOHMYGOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i cant wait to see how this unfolds!

Raiku · 08-21-2010, 05:58 AM

Great chapters Ishtar! Sorry I havent been on in forever. Kai is working on the drawings. School just started and we've been really busy but we'll give them to you as soon as possible.

Ishtar · 08-21-2010, 06:01 AM

Expext a chapter later on today and one tomorrow.

Sasukegal · 08-21-2010, 06:37 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ishtar

expext a chapter later on today and one tomorrow.

wewt! :3

Ishtar · 08-25-2010, 01:25 PM

Okay, since I do not have my story layout with me for another day or two. (Everything is stored inside an old laptop.) I'm going to attempt to memorize it and write the next chapter soon. Kthxbai!

Kiseki · 08-25-2010, 01:30 PM

Ish, awesome. Cant wait for more :3

Ishtar · 08-30-2010, 02:52 PM

I quit. :P

Slack 40 · 08-30-2010, 02:58 PM

oh darn no giddy for me

Ishtar · 09-01-2010, 08:59 AM

Psyche!
I'm actually currently writing Arc 3. <xD

Slack 40 · 09-01-2010, 12:38 PM

I just had a baby spazm

Ishtar · 09-09-2010, 11:55 PM

"I have a question Tanoth. How did you know I was part fursona and that nature is my kind of thing?" asked Kitsune. Tanoth, who was looking toward the stars, answered "Naraku files in reports and information directly to me and Zero. Naraku and I are the most trustworthy in the cult. We have files on everyone here. I am not going to say more." Kitsune walked over to Tanoth's side looking up at the stars with him. "Your a quiet person. Why don't you talk often? You always seem to not say anything, why is that?" asked Kitsune. ".............." Tanoth was silent. "Strong silent type, huh? Well you seem...I mean, the way your looking at the stars, what are you thinking about at this exact moment?" asked Kitsune. "..........I am waiting...to make....a wish upon a shooting star." said Tanoth. "A shooting star? I've always wanted to make a wish, but I have never seen a shooting star before.

" said Kitsune. "Never huh...........well......there was this one time...when I was a kid, just before I joined the Mugendai Karuto...I saw one soaring across the sky. I made a wish......." explained Tanoth. "Did...your wish true?" asked Kitsune. "Unfortunately.....its true what they say................be careful what you wish for." he said in a cold voice. There was a long pause, then Kitsune broke the silence saying "If you don't mind, but what was your wish about?" she asked. "I am afraid I cannot tell you that. It isn't any of your business." said Tanoth coldly. ".........Tanoth......are you trying to take back your wish by wishing it away upon another shooting star?" asked Kitsune curiously. "...............................Did you not here me? I don't want to have to repeat myself....." said Tanoth. Kitsune sighed and finally said "Well now I know why your out here every single night, I've always wanted to wish upon a star too, I don't care what you say. I'm coming out here every single night and if were lucky.......there will be two shooting stars sailing across the night. goodnight Tanoth." said Kitsune as she dismissed herself.
"Someones here." said Kejon alarmed. "Ishtar, Mikomi, Lilina! Were being ambushed! Watch yourselves!" said Kejon. Kejon unsheathed his sword and he closed his eyes, trying to sense where the enemy was. Over there! He threw a kunai into the next tree. Clang! Someone had deflected it. "Emina Kami." said Kejon. "Kejon." said Emina in the darkness, behind the leaves. Kejon stood up from his position and said "Emina, I think I can guess as to why you keep tailing us." said Kejon, by this time, Mikomi was fully awake and Lilina was trying to wake Ishtar up. "Wake up Ishtar-kun....wake up!"

Ishtar was a hard sleeper, fast asleep and exhausted from all that training.....he was dreaming....a nightmare. Deep in the depths of his mind, he was chasing something....or was he running from something? He wasn't sure, and he stopped, his face went pale. There was the man with shades again, but.......this time, he did not take them off, no'r did he attempt to take his strange black robe off. He just stood there, and he tilted his head and he pointed behind Ishtar. Ishtar spun around, there was nothing there. He looked back toward the previous direction and saw the man leaving. He gave chase, but his heart had stopped out of pure fear. What was that? What was that thing trailing behind him? A tail? It looked like a spine, a spinal tail with what seemed to look like a beating heart at the end of it!
Ishtar's eyes immediately opened revealing the lighteye. He was awake.

Chapter end

tanoth · 09-10-2010, 03:21 AM

dude! is tanoth gonna get a kitsune lover?? That would be an awesome twist!

Ishtar · 09-10-2010, 03:41 AM

XD!
Did you like it though? :P

tanoth · 09-10-2010, 04:05 AM

oh i loved it! all the other characters had some background you knew, but tanoth was that guy you knew absolutely nothing about. Now we are starting to see who he truly is...and maybe who he will be, or what...

Ishtar · 09-10-2010, 01:46 PM

Well it is the weekends now, so I'll be finishing up this arc. Three chapters shouldn't take long. It's no sweat when you got everything right before you. It's the planning that swamps you. Do you think there should be a weekly release of chapters?

Shikamaru Nara · 09-10-2010, 01:50 PM

Wow, haven't seen this. Looks pretty good.

tanoth · 09-10-2010, 01:54 PM

its up to you. i would just go with the flow. let what comes to mind come out of your fingers. make it good, thats what really does it

Ishtar · 09-10-2010, 01:55 PM

It's a decent story, awesome might be pushing it? I'm not sure, because I feel doubful of my own story if its any good or not, but I guess that's natural to think so? I don't know, but if you have the time now or whenever, it'll only take a good 20 minutes to read it up to the current chapter of 17? If you do so, leave a comment.

Kthnx.

08-16-2010, 10:53 AM	#241
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08-21-2010, 05:58 AM	#244
Raiku Chunin Exam Proctor Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: The Shadows. Posts: 1,938 Rep Power: 8	Re: Ishtar Great chapters Ishtar! Sorry I havent been on in forever. Kai is working on the drawings. School just started and we've been really busy but we'll give them to you as soon as possible. __________________ Sing your death song and die like a hero, going home. I'm not asking you to win..I'm asking you not to give up.

08-21-2010, 06:01 AM	#245
Ishtar Banned Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 9,955 Rep Power: 0	Re: Ishtar Expext a chapter later on today and one tomorrow.

08-25-2010, 01:25 PM	#247
Ishtar Banned Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 9,955 Rep Power: 0	Re: Ishtar Okay, since I do not have my story layout with me for another day or two. (Everything is stored inside an old laptop.) I'm going to attempt to memorize it and write the next chapter soon. Kthxbai!

08-25-2010, 01:30 PM	#248
Kiseki That Sexy Koala Join Date: Jun 2010 Location: Where you live. Obviously. Posts: 13,438 Rep Power: 25 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Ishtar Ish, awesome. Cant wait for more :3 __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Luna Pink Hikari & Kiseki are the sexy Quad-force <3

08-30-2010, 02:52 PM	#249
Ishtar Banned Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 9,955 Rep Power: 0	Re: Ishtar I quit. :P

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Slack 40 Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Off and on Posts: 2,162 Rep Power: 7	Re: Ishtar oh darn no giddy for me __________________ /l/l/l (^-^) My sword will eat your chakra!! /_!_\ Put this on your siggy if you love Kisame <^^^^> < ( 油 ) > </(/`_`\)\> v/o\ v /o\v *To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.* Swinging a sword at a hot pirate's basically first base

09-01-2010, 08:59 AM	#251
Ishtar Banned Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 9,955 Rep Power: 0	Re: Ishtar Psyche! I'm actually currently writing Arc 3. <xD

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09-09-2010, 11:55 PM	#253
Ishtar Banned Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 9,955 Rep Power: 0	Chaper 17 "I have a question Tanoth. How did you know I was part fursona and that nature is my kind of thing?" asked Kitsune. Tanoth, who was looking toward the stars, answered "Naraku files in reports and information directly to me and Zero. Naraku and I are the most trustworthy in the cult. We have files on everyone here. I am not going to say more." Kitsune walked over to Tanoth's side looking up at the stars with him. "Your a quiet person. Why don't you talk often? You always seem to not say anything, why is that?" asked Kitsune. ".............." Tanoth was silent. "Strong silent type, huh? Well you seem...I mean, the way your looking at the stars, what are you thinking about at this exact moment?" asked Kitsune. "..........I am waiting...to make....a wish upon a shooting star." said Tanoth. "A shooting star? I've always wanted to make a wish, but I have never seen a shooting star before." said Kitsune. "Never huh...........well......there was this one time...when I was a kid, just before I joined the Mugendai Karuto...I saw one soaring across the sky. I made a wish......." explained Tanoth. "Did...your wish true?" asked Kitsune. "Unfortunately.....its true what they say................be careful what you wish for." he said in a cold voice. There was a long pause, then Kitsune broke the silence saying "If you don't mind, but what was your wish about?" she asked. "I am afraid I cannot tell you that. It isn't any of your business." said Tanoth coldly. ".........Tanoth......are you trying to take back your wish by wishing it away upon another shooting star?" asked Kitsune curiously. "...............................Did you not here me? I don't want to have to repeat myself....." said Tanoth. Kitsune sighed and finally said "Well now I know why your out here every single night, I've always wanted to wish upon a star too, I don't care what you say. I'm coming out here every single night and if were lucky.......there will be two shooting stars sailing across the night. goodnight Tanoth." said Kitsune as she dismissed herself. "Someones here." said Kejon alarmed. "Ishtar, Mikomi, Lilina! Were being ambushed! Watch yourselves!" said Kejon. Kejon unsheathed his sword and he closed his eyes, trying to sense where the enemy was. Over there! He threw a kunai into the next tree. Clang! Someone had deflected it. "Emina Kami." said Kejon. "Kejon." said Emina in the darkness, behind the leaves. Kejon stood up from his position and said "Emina, I think I can guess as to why you keep tailing us." said Kejon, by this time, Mikomi was fully awake and Lilina was trying to wake Ishtar up. "Wake up Ishtar-kun....wake up!" Ishtar was a hard sleeper, fast asleep and exhausted from all that training.....he was dreaming....a nightmare. Deep in the depths of his mind, he was chasing something....or was he running from something? He wasn't sure, and he stopped, his face went pale. There was the man with shades again, but.......this time, he did not take them off, no'r did he attempt to take his strange black robe off. He just stood there, and he tilted his head and he pointed behind Ishtar. Ishtar spun around, there was nothing there. He looked back toward the previous direction and saw the man leaving. He gave chase, but his heart had stopped out of pure fear. What was that? What was that thing trailing behind him? A tail? It looked like a spine, a spinal tail with what seemed to look like a beating heart at the end of it! Ishtar's eyes immediately opened revealing the lighteye. He was awake. Chapter end Last edited by Ishtar; 09-10-2010 at 03:42 AM.

09-10-2010, 03:21 AM	#254
tanoth Banned Join Date: May 2010 Location: At a pond. Pondering about life. Posts: 372 Rep Power: 0	Re: Ishtar dude! is tanoth gonna get a kitsune lover?? That would be an awesome twist!

09-10-2010, 03:41 AM	#255
Ishtar Banned Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 9,955 Rep Power: 0	Re: Ishtar XD! Did you like it though? :P

09-10-2010, 04:05 AM	#256
tanoth Banned Join Date: May 2010 Location: At a pond. Pondering about life. Posts: 372 Rep Power: 0	Re: Ishtar oh i loved it! all the other characters had some background you knew, but tanoth was that guy you knew absolutely nothing about. Now we are starting to see who he truly is...and maybe who he will be, or what...

09-10-2010, 01:46 PM	#257
Ishtar Banned Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 9,955 Rep Power: 0	Re: Ishtar Well it is the weekends now, so I'll be finishing up this arc. Three chapters shouldn't take long. It's no sweat when you got everything right before you. It's the planning that swamps you. Do you think there should be a weekly release of chapters?

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Shikamaru Nara Super \| ɹoʇɐɹǝpoW Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: New York Posts: 43,782 Rep Power: 41 Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1 Total Points: 4	Re: Ishtar Wow, haven't seen this. Looks pretty good. __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

09-10-2010, 01:54 PM	#259
tanoth Banned Join Date: May 2010 Location: At a pond. Pondering about life. Posts: 372 Rep Power: 0	Re: Ishtar its up to you. i would just go with the flow. let what comes to mind come out of your fingers. make it good, thats what really does it

09-10-2010, 01:55 PM	#260
Ishtar Banned Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 9,955 Rep Power: 0	Re: Ishtar It's a decent story, awesome might be pushing it? I'm not sure, because I feel doubful of my own story if its any good or not, but I guess that's natural to think so? I don't know, but if you have the time now or whenever, it'll only take a good 20 minutes to read it up to the current chapter of 17? If you do so, leave a comment. Kthnx. Last edited by Ishtar; 09-10-2010 at 02:01 PM.

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