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Old 08-03-2009, 04:42 PM   #20141
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If it sucks, my excuse- I wrote it at 2:00 in the morning.


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Prologue


The start, it wasn’t fun.

Planet Quantom, Loading docks-Hangar 21C
September 24, Year 2633


“We never get anything out here. Just space rocks, and trash…” “Ahh, quit complaining marine, at least we’re not dead.” Muttered Corporal, Andy Jackson. “I’m just saying we never get anything interesting out here…” Suddenly a strange, blue-grey, bulbous ship appears out of hyperspace, near the docks. “Whoa, sir what is that?” “How should I know marine, never seen anything like it...”
“Sir, they’ve pinged us! Seems they want a transmission. Orders?” “A strange ship appears out of hyperspace and pings us… why wouldn’t we answer? Open transmission.”
An olive green skinned, alien appears on the screen. “We are sorry for the intrusion of your space, but we are hopelessly lost, and require repairs.” “Sir, what should we do?” “We invite them in. Don’t need to make enemies of them.” Replied the corporal. “Sir, yes sir!”
As the blue-grey, alien ship enters the docks, its guns begin to hum, and glow a bright red. “Sir, they’re going to fire at us!” “Well I can see that, what are they even firing?!” The atmosphere crackles with heat, as three bolts of energy arc towards the dock. “We’re screwed!” A marine yells before his section of the dock erupts in flames.
“This is the planet Quantom, requesting reinforcements. We have unknown hostiles and are severely outgunned-” “Infidels! This is merely the beginning! Your filth shall be cleansed! The Capitals shall rule.” Multiple grey drop ships fly out of the alien hangar. As they fly to the surface, many pieces of the loading docks are falling to the ground.
With the dock system destroyed the marines on the ground had no way out. It truly was the end of Quantom… but the beginning something much bigger.
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Old 08-03-2009, 04:43 PM   #20142
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Old 08-03-2009, 04:44 PM   #20143
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Old 08-03-2009, 04:47 PM   #20144
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The prologue made it WAY more interesting! So Jarod, GO GO GO!
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Old 08-03-2009, 04:49 PM   #20145
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The prologue made it WAY more interesting! So Jarod, GO GO GO!
You said show you like 1/4 of a chapter >.>
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Old 08-03-2009, 04:49 PM   #20146
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Old 08-03-2009, 04:54 PM   #20149
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Prologue is at the top.
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at the top of where?
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Hey you guys! Remember that the show is tomorrow at 1:00 western time. and 4:00 eastern time! So be there!
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he's not nexted on the list bigfoot is....*kills bigfoot*now it's his turn to die
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It isn't that bad. I really like it. Its a good story for his age...
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