Death......poem......5

[EmoSakura]

heres another. this one was inspired by a story i read off the internet.

Spoiler:

Bloody Revenge
As I'm walking home,
I see a familiar face.
His car pulls up to me,
At a hurried pace.
He smiles at me,
And tells me to hop in.
He says he has a surprise,
I wonder what it is.
Is he proposing,
I don't know.
As he pulls up to a lake,
And opens my door.
I'm getting excited,
Until he smirks.
He pushes me into the freezing lake,
The ice and I hurt.
He starts to scream,
In vicious rash.
"You deserve to die,
You worthless piece of trash."
As he drives away,
I start to walk home.
Crying and furious,
You can tell by my tone.
When I get home,
I get in the shower.
As my parents worry,
It's been an hour.
When they go to check,
They scream in horror.
I was bloody dead,
On the shower floor.
While he takes a shower,
I appear bloody from the drain.
With a razor in my hand,
Glaring at him in vein.
"Die," I say as I slash,
At his neck.
He falls bloody dead,
He deserved it for what,
He did.
My mom sees all the blood,
And kills herself.
And my dad is blamed for murder,
And spends his life in jail.
But I did what I did,
For revenge.
He broke me, crushed me,
His life had to end.

[sasu_girl]

woah *loved it*

[narutofan99]

Originally Posted by EmoSakura

heres another. this one was inspired by a story i read off the internet.

Spoiler:

Bloody Revenge
As I'm walking home,
I see a familiar face.
His car pulls up to me,
At a hurried pace.
He smiles at me,
And tells me to hop in.
He says he has a surprise,
I wonder what it is.
Is he proposing,
I don't know.
As he pulls up to a lake,
And opens my door.
I'm getting excited,
Until he smirks.
He pushes me into the freezing lake,
The ice and I hurt.
He starts to scream,
In vicious rash.
"You deserve to die,
You worthless piece of trash."
As he drives away,
I start to walk home.
Crying and furious,
You can tell by my tone.
When I get home,
I get in the shower.
As my parents worry,
It's been an hour.
When they go to check,
They scream in horror.
I was bloody dead,
On the shower floor.
While he takes a shower,
I appear bloody from the drain.
With a razor in my hand,
Glaring at him in vein.
"Die," I say as I slash,
At his neck.
He falls bloody dead,
He deserved it for what,
He did.
My mom sees all the blood,
And kills herself.
And my dad is blamed for murder,
And spends his life in jail.
But I did what I did,
For revenge.
He broke me, crushed me,
His life had to end.

This. Is. Awesome.

[Shikamaruz]

Woww Some Words You Got there that was awsome keep it up

[Twisterty]

that, was really sad...

[EmoSakura]

thanx u all ^^

[Bloomiful]

ah i remember this story. very good brooke.

[EmoSakura]

thanx u and yea

[Watermelon Love]

very good. :3

[EmoSakura]

^^ thanx

[BloodyKnives]

good....job.....

[EmoSakura]

^^ thanx

[EmoSakura]

bump :3

[Chibi Shika Fangirl]

Woah, good job.

[Shino Hatake]

How can i compete with this

[EmoSakura]

:3 ima not that bad........ i bet u could...... ^^

[Shino Hatake]

Feelings are mine
Love is here
Seeing all i lose the way
I saw the blood run
I feel the heart break
Know only who we break

Loseing the life
Gaining the pain
Tears that fal
Force a saddness
I love you
I hate you
ok thats all i got so far i need more

[Bunny]

Geez, you're make kids cry with these poems. O.O great...

[Time to feel Pain]

kool!!!!