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| View Poll Results: Are you enjoying the story? How can it improve? (Click all that apply) | |||
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| Needs longer chapters |
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2 | 28.57% |
| Needs to be more descriptive |
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1 | 14.29% |
| Needs better fight scenes |
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0 | 0% |
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1 | 14.29% |
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The Smiling Assassin
Konoha Historian Join Date: Dec 2009
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/Bump
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Pretty good. I read the fist half of the first chapter. If I wasn't so busy right now I'd read the rest.
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The Smiling Assassin
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Thanks, I might have to dig up the plans I had for the rest of the story xDD
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That would be good.
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The Smiling Assassin
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Cool ^^ it's about half done, and the plot really starts taking over soon, so far the plot has kinda been in the background, there have been bits and pieces of it, but they all start to make sense soon
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i haven't read your fanfic in a while i just caught up it gotten better kanki shows his skills
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"Guy-sensei is the coolest! He practically glows with cool" Spoiler:
"So I was not born with whole lot of natural talent-not gifted like Neji.But I work all hard and I never gave up.That is my gift.That is my ninja way." words from rock lee |
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The Smiling Assassin
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Oh, hi there ^_^
I haven't written any for a while, but I will soon, just need to wait til after my exams this week >.>
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The story is really good but it's too long...
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The Smiling Assassin
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Thanks
Lol, it's not even close to finished, it's maybe half done xD
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The Smiling Assassin
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Ok, I'm actually going to finish writing this, I've re-formatted the first five chapters and the prologue to make it easier to read. I'll do the other chapters in a bit.
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thanks man
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"Guy-sensei is the coolest! He practically glows with cool" Spoiler:
"So I was not born with whole lot of natural talent-not gifted like Neji.But I work all hard and I never gave up.That is my gift.That is my ninja way." words from rock lee |
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