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Old 05-20-2010, 03:27 PM   #1
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Kitsune Yumi...


Name: Kitsune Yumi
Age: 16
Height: 5"4
Weight: 118lbs
Gender: Female
Alignment: Good
Birth Country: The Land Of Fire
Village: The Village Hidden in The Leaves
Occupation: Medical Ninja, Chunin Exam Proctor

Rank: Chunin

Weapons:
  • Senbon x 9
  • Scalpel x 2
  • Soldier Pill x 2
  • Smoke Bomb x 2
Personality:

Kitsune is a somewhat Strong Willed Person. She is very level headed and anyatical when is comes to battle. She is polite and mannerly and generally speaks with honorifics such as "kun" or "sama" to show her respect to the one she is talking to.
She is almost always friendly and comforting to have by your side, and will always try to help her friends in anyway she can. Happily putting their lives before her own.

She is also quite a curious person, always wanting to know the little details and ins and outs of almost everything.This can make her talkative, loud and sometimes outspoken.

Despite her Intelligence,bravery and Kindness. She has a foul temper, which is in some ways is a burden in battle. Meaning she can rush in and attack without thinking sensibly. Generally though, when not in an enraged state she is useful and effective.

Her interests lie in Medical Ninjutsu, hoping that if she learns powerful healing abilites, she will be of use to her friends and loved ones. She isnt overly keen at the thought of training but does what she can to improve.Kitsune always tries her best and criticizes herself constantly for not being helpful enough ,thus making her stronger by pushing herself to the limit.




Appearance:
Kitsune likes to dress in style, though barely gets to spend on time on fashion because of her medical studies ,and even more so whenever she has to act as proctor of the Chunin Exams. When she was younger,Kitsunes appearance was never exactly noticed due to her poor background.But as she got older,she became increasing beautiful.

She wears a see-through netted top which is covered by a short,sleeveless Kimono which is pink in colour.She uses a strand of thin purple rope to keep her Kimono wrapped around her. The strand of rope is similar to that of what her mother wore. Underneath the Kimono; Kitsune wears tight purple shorts which only extend about 15cm past her waist.The shorts are however more or less covered by her Kimono which falls down just past her waist.

Just below her purple shorts,she wears purple Boots which extend from a few cm above her knees down to her feet.The tips of the boots however reveal her toes. This footwear is quite stylish and unusual as it appears to be a mixture of traditional village sandals and more unique boots

Kitsune has long brown hair,however chooses to tie some of it up in a bun. While some of her brown hair is tied up in a bun,most of it falls past her shoulders and reaches half way down her back.She has wide,brown eyes with a tint of yellow in them. They always seem to sparkle wonderfully.


History:
As a child Kitsune was shy,quiet and lonely. She always felt as though no one wanted her around. As if she was uncared for, unneeded in this world. Her mother always told her that she shouldnt think such things. That she was a bundle of Hope and Joy. This always cheered up, and at times she tried to use her mothers words to help her talk to children at the academy, but always seemed to fail hopelessly.

As time went on, Kitsune started to talk to others more. And began to enjoy her time in school. If even a little, however this all changed. One funfortunate Kitsune was invited to a party by one of her classmates. She thought that maybe she had a shot of making friends , only to be egged and laughed at as soon as she entered the doors of the party .

She ran home in an upset and crying manner urging to jump into her mothers arms. As she ran through the wodden doors of her house with tears running down her pale cheeks she heard the voice of her drunken father laughing. Her mother was screaming and a smashing noise was heard. "Mother!?" Kitsune called out,in a confused tone. She ran into the kitchen only to find her dear mother with a smashed beer bottle lodged into her stomach.

"Mommy!?MOMMY!" Kitsune burst into an even bigger crying fit than she already was and tried to run over to her wounded mother only to be pushed over by her hysterical Father . He lifted a knife off the Kitchen table and walked over to his daughter aiming the knife at her now, shock strucken face. Kitsune curled up in the corner with her hands over her head whispering "make it stop..make it stop..make it stop.." when her father was only a few meters away ; she screamed to the extent that neighbors began to become curious. And in her last and final scream,something curious happened.

Suddenly her father stopped in his tracks and fell over. As he fell to the ground it was noticble that a Senbon had been lodged in his head. Her father ..was dead. Behind the corpe stood Kitsunes dying mother, Aya. "Mother !" Aya had spat senbon at her husbands head to kill him and protect her daughter.Aya then fell to the ground spluttering the red thick ,substance that was her blood .

"Mother!Mother Let me help you!!!" cried Kitsune "Oh Kitsune, your being as helpful as always" said Aya as blood leaked from her mouth and stomach. "Mother...are you..going to die?" .A moments silence filled the room. "Dont be silly Kitsune.Ill be fine, go and play with this pretty pendant of mine" Aya removed a golden locket from her neck and gave it Kitsune."Mother....." Kitsune muttered under her breathe
As the two held hands as Aya gave her daughter her ancient pendant ,she smiled at her one last time. Before slowly closing her eyes ,forever.

"Mother!?Mother!?MOTHER!" As Kitsune kneeled beside her dead parents, she felt helpless . As she shivered and cried,she huddled underneath her dead mothers arms and fell asleep...

From that day. Kitsune vowed never to be helpless again. To be able to aid her friends and family. To be able to heal their wounds, treat their illnesses and most importanty protect them with her life.This is probably why Kitsune is so focused on Medical Ninjutsu, so she may never be able to watch a loved one die in front of her again.

Years later,upon becoming a Genin,Kitsune began to realise that she had potential as young ninja. She began to train herself long hours, eventually becoming a Chunin after displaying exceptional talent and bravery healing a squad, and fighting off attackers-while on an A Rank mission which she had been sent on by her Kage. Weeks later, Kitsune was appointed as a Chunn Exam Proctor, and since; she has respected her title greatly.



Jutsu

Medical:

Ninja Art: Corrosive Gas
Rank: C
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: The user expels a burst of corrosive acid from their mouth.
Description: The user gathers chakra in their stomach, and spews out of their mouth in form of an acidic gas. This gas can easily corrode the skin upon contact and proves difficult to avoid. It is however, easily blown away by a Fuuton Technique.



Bond Slicer
Rank: C
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: The user causes a fracture or break in the patients bone.

Description: The user envelops their palm in white medical chakra, and form it into a small but precise blade. This blade can easily pierce through bones and most small projectiles such as shuriken and senbon.


Killing Hands
Rank: B
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: The user degenerates and kills cells in the patients body.
Description: The user sends a very dark green medical chakra around their palms and hold to the opponents skin. This chakra steadily kills and degenerates the cells on the inflicted area, the target cannot feel any pain and thus are fooled into thinking it it a regular healing jutsu



Poison Degeneration
Rank: A
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: The user slows and stops the effect of a disease, toxin, or poison in the patients body.

Description: The user holds their palms to a poisoned wound, focusing a light purple to chakra to them. This chakra slows and eventually stops the effects of poison on a patients body by turning it into harmless protein.
This Jutsu takes at least 10 minutes to take effect, making it difficult to use in battle.



Seeing Eyes
Rank: C
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: The user gains the ability to see inside small portions of the patient’s body.
Description: The user forms the hand seal, holding the rat seal and holding it in between their eye. The user focuses chakra into a lens on either side, allowing them to see inside their patient’s body in a small area. The user can perceive the chakra circulatory system as well as the inner systems of the body when looking through this lens.



Thin Barrier Chakra
Rank: B
Skill : Ninjutsu

Effect: With supreme chakra control, the user coats themselves in a thin layer of chakra for protection.

Description:
The user concentrates a thin layer of precise chakra around their body, this blue chakra coats their body and protects them from physical attacks and projectiles such as shuriken and senbon. This technique is very draining however, and can only be used for 5 minutes at any one time.

Palm Healing Jutsu
Rank: A
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: The user heals any phyiscal damage caused to the body.
Description: The user coats their hands in a light green chakra,

and hold their palms to a wound.The chakra then speeds up the
rate at which cell division happens in the selected area, thus healing
and repairing all damage to that area.


Sound Style:
Green Serenade
Rank: C
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Rapid healing to multiple allies through a love song

Description: The user plays the love song named 'Green Serenade' on
their flute. They infuse medical chakra with the notes in which they produce
while playing the song, thus slowly healing small cuts and injuries of anyone he
or she wishes within a 20m radius.


Genjutsu

Sudden Growth
Rank: C
Skill: Genjutsu
Effect: Makes the user appear to have grown into a 20ft tall version of themselves
Description: The user forms the rat handsign and makes all those in the surrouding
area believe that the user has grown 20ft tall. This Jutsu cannot actually vause any
damage however, and is only used to scare off enemies.





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Old 05-20-2010, 03:31 PM   #2
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wow i like her were you get the pic at?
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Found her on le internet
I changed the colours and stuff a little though :o
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Wow, I really enjoyed reading that. ^_^
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