Tarnished Tranqulity (Complete) [Book 1] - Page 5

Maikeru D. Shinigami · 07-09-2009, 08:32 PM

Crap I made a small mistake that I'm going to fix Mrs. Pragmer is supposed to say Ms. Pragmer, not something that messes up the story too bad, but still a mistake.

Maikeru D. Shinigami · 07-09-2009, 08:35 PM

Okay the newest post and the original have been fixed with a couple things I noticed.

Maikeru D. Shinigami · 07-10-2009, 09:10 AM

Just want everyone to know, the title of the thread is now changed, and I probably won't be adding another chapter today.

Maikeru D. Shinigami · 07-10-2009, 10:26 AM

Spelling errors have been fixed in the original post (according to spell check), and a couple of spots were I noticed I missing a spacing between "paragraphs" has been fixed as well.

hotaru uzumaki · 07-10-2009, 10:32 AM

yo maikeru

Maikeru D. Shinigami · 07-10-2009, 10:47 AM

Hey hotaru

hotaru uzumaki · 07-10-2009, 10:48 AM

im about to write ch 4 of my novel

Maikeru D. Shinigami · 07-10-2009, 10:49 AM

Cool, I'll check it out later after you're done.

hotaru uzumaki · 07-10-2009, 10:52 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Maikeru Shinigami

Cool, I'll check it out later after you're done.

cool,i just got sone watching some urusei yatsura,wierd show

Maikeru D. Shinigami · 07-10-2009, 04:34 PM

The next week or two I may only get one or two chapters up, my best friend has a week off from the Marines now that Boot Camp is over. So now we will probably be hanging out a lot next week.

Maikeru D. Shinigami · 07-24-2009, 02:27 PM

Chapter 9 is now complete I just have to type it up!

Maikeru D. Shinigami · 07-24-2009, 04:32 PM

Chapter proofread.

NaruSakufluff4ever · 07-25-2009, 08:07 AM

ooh, cool!this is great and freaky O.O he can use magic???my head is hurting...

Maikeru D. Shinigami · 07-25-2009, 11:57 AM

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Originally Posted by NaruSakufluff4ever

ooh, cool!this is great and freaky O.O he can use magic???my head is hurting...

Haha yeah basically, Larry's father knew magic, and Larry was training with Kevin to learn magic, and finally finished a spell after 6 months.

NaruSakufluff4ever · 07-26-2009, 05:54 PM

dont u mean kevin was training larry?

Maikeru D. Shinigami · 07-26-2009, 06:01 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by NaruSakufluff4ever

dont u mean kevin was training larry?

Ughh ... Yeah ^_^ that's what I meant.

NaruSakufluff4ever · 07-26-2009, 06:10 PM

see, thats why my head was hurting ^.^

Maikeru D. Shinigami · 07-27-2009, 03:10 AM

I have a habit of confusing people.

NaruSakufluff4ever · 07-27-2009, 10:35 AM

yup and RYAQUE IS LEAVING GO TO THE RYAQUE IS AWESOME IN OFF TOPIC TO VOTE FOR HER TO STAY

Bacon · 12-09-2009, 11:22 AM

subscribed

07-09-2009, 08:32 PM	#81
Maikeru D. Shinigami The Grand Vizier Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Funhouse Posts: 43,432 Rep Power: 44 Member's Picture Albums	Re: My Writing (Fairly Long Read) Crap I made a small mistake that I'm going to fix Mrs. Pragmer is supposed to say Ms. Pragmer, not something that messes up the story too bad, but still a mistake. __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. YouTube:

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Maikeru D. Shinigami The Grand Vizier Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Funhouse Posts: 43,432 Rep Power: 44 Member's Picture Albums	Re: My Writing (Fairly Long Read) Okay the newest post and the original have been fixed with a couple things I noticed. __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. YouTube: Last edited by Maikeru D. Shinigami; 07-09-2009 at 08:38 PM.

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Maikeru D. Shinigami The Grand Vizier Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Funhouse Posts: 43,432 Rep Power: 44 Member's Picture Albums	Re: The Reaper Just want everyone to know, the title of the thread is now changed, and I probably won't be adding another chapter today. __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. YouTube:

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Maikeru D. Shinigami The Grand Vizier Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Funhouse Posts: 43,432 Rep Power: 44 Member's Picture Albums	Re: The Reaper Spelling errors have been fixed in the original post (according to spell check), and a couple of spots were I noticed I missing a spacing between "paragraphs" has been fixed as well. __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. YouTube:

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hotaru uzumaki Genin Elite Join Date: May 2009 Location: austin texas Posts: 472 Rep Power: 0	Re: The Reaper im about to write ch 4 of my novel

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Maikeru D. Shinigami The Grand Vizier Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Funhouse Posts: 43,432 Rep Power: 44 Member's Picture Albums	Re: The Reaper The next week or two I may only get one or two chapters up, my best friend has a week off from the Marines now that Boot Camp is over. So now we will probably be hanging out a lot next week. __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. YouTube:

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