Death.......poem.......6

[EmoSakura]

The Spider and The Flies

I was stolen from the streets,
I ride.
And I watch the others cry,
And die.

The man with the weapon,
In his hand.
And a mense grin,
On his head.

The kids are falling,
At my feet.
Their blood flowing,
Through them, trying to speak to me.

With all of them gone,
I'm the only one left.
The tears are now pouring,
Out of my head.

He throws his weapon,
Hitting me.
He's enjoying this,
That I'm bleeding.

Why I went,
With the stranger.
I should have been smarter,
I should have thought better.

He then cuts me down,
And throws me on the ground.
So I'm sprawled on the floor,
Where I'll never be found.

So weak and so hurt,
I can barely move.
I should have stayed home,
Than to this, I went through.

I'm going numb,
I can barely speak.
Please Mom, find me,
Please save me.

The barn is getting darker,
Or am I going blind?
Looking at the pale kids,
Who have already died.

I'm another victum,
In his world.
Like a bug caught in,
A spider's home.

He's the spider,
And we're the flies.
And now we're the ones,
Who have to die.

[Bloomiful]

wow..........
i remember that movie. its sad. xD wait i was the one who showed u it. bad memory
anyway love the poem

[EmoSakura]

lol yea. it was sad. and thanx ^^

[naruto_jock]

Nice poem ES. If I may, here's one of my dark poems.

Spoiler:

The Beast

There is something within us that make us scared,
that is willing to cripple us or make us impaired.
For it knows no limit and it has no taste,
except for greediness, and the wanting to be faced.
I know this thing and I know this creature, for the shape is unknown; it has no features.
It hides in the dark, within our soul, waiting for a chance, to take its role.
For when the body is weak, and the body burns,
it's just ready to reek, and to take turns.
This one thing cannot be cured,
but it must be endured.
For this creature doesn't want to stay,
in the bottomless pits for no one to see, but it overcomes and controls you to say,
"UNLEASH ME!"

Now it comes and now it's out,
going where ever, just going about.
Destroying you and the world,
watching your soul, huddled and curled.
Just holding it within its hand,
controlling it with any command.
I see myself turning into the creature,
that has no shape and without a feature/
It controls me and destroys me,
but when I think, I think of "we."
It's a part of me, it lives with me.
I must bow down to...
The Beast inside of me.

I hope you like it.

[EmoSakura]

ooh... i do. its very good. ^^

[naruto_jock]

Originally Posted by EmoSakura

ooh... i do. its very good. ^^

Thx , but yours was really good.

[EmoSakura]

Originally Posted by naruto_jock

Thx , but yours was really good.

*pats ur head* urs is too. xD

[Watermelon Love]

very good.... u should become a poet one day. :3
edit: u both should. :3

[naruto_jock]

Who?.......O.o

[Watermelon Love]

both of you :3

[naruto_jock]

Thank-chuuuu!!!
Here's another one then:

Spoiler:

Pain

Spoiler:

Everyone can say they feel pain,
but I feel it in the rain.
For every drop reminds me,
of the memories that won't let me be.
For every pound I feel,
it just makes a sound that is not reall.
I am sorry for my sins,
but they can longer contend,
of the rights that I am doing.

I feel pain in the rain,
for there is nothing that I can gain.
Because these memories haunt me every night.
To where I think of them as nightmares, that only I can fight.
But I want them to stop,
but I haven't reached the top.
Of the place that I need to find,
that obviously I need to bind.
Of the past and myself.

Anybody can say they feel pain,
but I feel it in the rain.
For I miss my life so much,
that it seems I can touch,
of the memories that I had, where it wasn't that bad.
But only I can feel pain in the rain

I hope you like it.

[Watermelon Love]

great poem mr. :3

[naruto_jock]

J.......Mr. NJ......Pleasure to meet you miss.

[shikamarulover18]

they were both really cool! i love rhyming poems! all my poems rhyme haha

[ItachiUchiha62]

another great poem!! sad, but good like all the others :P

[EmoSakura]

thanx yall ^^

[Shikamaruz]

Very Cool and deathly Poem ^^ I cant wait for the next one you make

[Bacon]

Don't be EMo. >< You're much to charming to think like this. T_T

[The Demon Zabuza]

Hey, I have several suggestions;

Spoiler:

YouTube:

Or you could get a knife and end it, or cheer up.

Seriously, whatever you're going through to make you emo, people, and quite possibly me, have had much worse.

[EmoSakura]

Originally Posted by The Demon Zabuza

Hey, I have several suggestions;

Spoiler:

YouTube:

Or you could get a knife and end it, or cheer up.

Seriously, whatever you're going through to make you emo, people, and quite possibly me, have had much worse.

but i didnt make it bc ima depressed >.< i made it bc i was inspired sies >.< and me's sorry u've had it worse.