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Old 05-07-2010, 02:44 PM   #1
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It was stormy and pitch black, I couldn't see anything, my heart was pumping, beats so loud I couldn't hear myself think.
I suddenly awoke, bursting out of a horrible dream, I once had before.
The window wooshed open revealing a cold gust of air in the begining summer heat.
I was very dizzy, everything had two of itself. Out of nowhere, a girl appeared, goth she looked, blood striking red rose stringed to her long black hair that nearly reached her ankles, dressed in an all black dress with dark open handgloves, only to be holding a teddy bear she glared.
I quickly grabbed at the pillow in search of something that should be there. It is gone, my contract, is gone.
The girl swiftly arose her hand, sending spiky needles into me. I flew back, hitting the bed post.
I couldn't move my body at all, I laid dead silent, watching the figure come closer I squeezed my eyes shut, closer she came, and then disapeared.
I was waiting for the worst when nothing came, I reopened my eyes only to find nothing there. I could now move my body, the sunrise was in contact with my window.

The nightmares are back.



Hehehe, bored :P

Glossary:
Contract: A contract is when you link your soul with a beast or magical creature from the Lower levels of Hell.

Illegal Contract: An illegal contract is a contract that has not been approved by one of the 4 household leaders. Also has many affects on the person and beat that are linked together, a mark appears and once it reachs a certain level the contractor and beast will be sent to the lower deepth of hell.

Legal Contract: A contract that is totally safe, approved by the four main households.


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Raysign Family:

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Name: Adoshi Raysign
Age: 11 years
Birthday: September 21st 1998
Height" 4 "11"
Weight: 98.5 Lbs.
Type: Illegal Contract
Description: Adoshi belongs to the Raysign family, One of the main households of the country very rich and powerful, full of skilled martial artist, and is a loner, the only people she really enjoys to hangout with is Hiro, her servant, they both share the same age, her younger sister, who is only 4, and her contractor, Araceli.
She very well hates her step mother and half brother, due to the fact, her half brother is 9, that means father had cheated on her mother. After her mother was gone her father and that women married.
Many in all her mansions say she is an odd one, isn't a real girly girly, more tomboish that is. Adoshi's step mother often calls her crude names from being jelous of something, Adoshi isn't sure yet.
This girl is very powerful, holding Araceli, the tiger contract, being skilled in swords and martial arts, and all in all her sweet defense of playing like a little rich girl.
The odd thing about her is that her eyes change color from blue to stingy golden brown, no one is sure of this or why this happens.


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Regular:

Name: Arokido Raysign
Age: 4 years
Birthday: December 7th 2006
Height: 3"8"
Weight: 56 lbs
Type: Legal Contract
Description:
Arokido is the youngest child in the main Raysign family. She seems to be very shy and only hangs out with Hiro, her Onee-San ( Adoshi), Onii-Sama ( Roboshi), Kiki ( Young Saynight familes daughter), and her contractor, Bunni. Less information is known about her, she is very bookwormish and nothing like her sister or brother. Like Adoshi, Arokido's eyes change from blue to golden brown.
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Chapter one:
Unwanting invite ( Intro may be boring but it will be exciting next chapter)

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It was a good ol summer day, I walked along with my little sister in our family garden. I am Adoshi Raysign, one of the daughters of the main household of Citation Society. My sister, who is 4, and I were helping ourselves around our family mansion. Father is never around and mother died when Arokido was born, or as they say.

My servant, Hiro, a fellow 11 year old was sitting on the bench, reading over a book.

Thing are about as normal as they can get. Atleast that is what I thought till the ceremony arrived.

This ceremony was to test about my courage, bravery, and all that kind of stuff. Afterwards I will be considered an adult, for all though I have mastered the martial arts of Ju kwon doe, Tae kwon doe, and more.

Arokido was holding my hand tightly, she nervously began to talk
" O-Onee-San... W-when do I get to play with swords?" She questioned me as we walked along the maze shaped garden with me as the leader.
" Well, I will teach you when you are old enough like me. You know older brother taught me. You should really ask him about it.." I replied as confidence was building up in me, I was hoping her reponse would be " but Onee-San is better then Onii-Sama.. " I was stuck wrong as she said what she said.
" Onee-san, that means you suck.. I will ask big brother after all. " Arokido smiled and looked forward as she squeezed my hand pulling forward.

I was shaking in shock as she told me that. I felt like sulking in a corner.
" My little sister do-doesn't beleive I can teach her.." I mumbled to myself as tears welled up.

Hiro noticed the sad look on my face. I caught him chuckling as he held his head up from his book, which seemed to be sherlock homes.
" Well, Young Lady Arokido, your older sister is very skilled, maybe even more skilled then Roboshi, your older brother. Heck, Lady Adoshi is better then I am. " Hiro spoke trying to revive my confidence.
" Alright! I will give Onee-San one chance, if she screws up Roboshi is my new teacher. " After Arokido annouced that important fact she skipped off happily inside, running past one of the maids.

" Sniff, s-she doesn't beleive in me. " I was now hudled in a corner, sniffing into my pants.
Hiro walked over to me and patted my back, he tried to refrain from laughing.
" Don't worry. She loves you more."

I cheered up, coming back on my feet, and I pushed over Hiro. Affter joking around with him for a while we left and walked back into the large mansion.

" Hello Lady Adoshi. " I young maid bowed when I approched. Hiro looked is Aw as he watched the love of his life, Madarka , one of the 13 year old maids pass by after bowing.
Hearts were litteraly popping out of his eyes.
" Get a hang of yourself" I rolled my eyes, slapped his head, and ran off to get changed for the ceremony.
I went into my room, only to find Arokido sitting on my bed in her short dress, her short brown hair down and a blue bow in it.
I walked over to her, patted her head, then walked into my closet. It was rather large, bigger then Arokido's room.
I figured as the lady of the mansion I have to wear a dress, which I hated. Either way, I picked out something.
It was something simple my mother used to have, a long, flat white dress, with no sleeves and just up my street.
Arokido was in amazment once I walked out and asked her how I looked. Continuing all this, we left out the room. I began to walk, holding Arokidos hand.
" Lady Adoshi " Hiro started to speak as he Looked at me in worry.
" It seems, Lady ... Raysign, and Master Raysign are coming ... to this.. mansion.. with young Master kin.. "
I grasped my hands tight, looking down, I began to speak
" O-Okay. What an honor to have these filth in my mansion. " I Grabbed Arokido and turned away as I walked.
Hiro followed us, still worried because he knows how much I despise these people.
" I know what you mean. Your step brother, Young Master Raysign, is a monster.. a freak... I hate him.. " Hiro knew only he could talk to me about this, because if he told anyone else, he will be locked up and beaten till he learns the right way to speak to his master. Good thing Hiro and I are best friends.
" I know exactly what you mean. Kin is just a wierdo... He is also way to powerful for a 9 year old. Nevermind that, he upset Arokido and made her cry one time. " I said totally rejecting the invite of them coming.
" Nothing we can do about it. " Hiro shrugged and pulled off.
" Well there is one thing." I smirked behind a smile as I planned an idea.
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Omg o.o
y-your so good at writing....
Aww I believe in her

keep it up Kiko-saaan :3
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Omg o.o
y-your so good at writing....
Aww I believe in her

keep it up Kiko-saaan :3
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