Tomorrow Forever. - Page 25

SageoftheSixPaths · 05-23-2010, 01:39 PM

My favorite character is VIC, otherwise known as Vincentinolissimo, otherwise known as ME.

Reasons why I like him:

He's me.
I'm awesome.
He's awesome.
We're awesome.
He has a scythe.
He's me.
I'm him.
We're us.
I like me.

Favorite chapter so far was either the fight against Gareth/ Michael or the most recent one where Vic is introduced.

Nothing really for me to have you improve on, save for my grammar Nazism on your few spelling/ punctuation mistakes you've got here and there. Also, if the chapters were a bit longer I'd love you, but then again that might just be because I write long chapters myself. Also, MOAR VIC.

Teddie · 05-23-2010, 02:48 PM

Interesting interesting....I may make the next one longer so I can encompass both Hydra stuffs and moar Vic!

Also, didja see mah new OP? xD

Teddie · 05-24-2010, 03:48 PM

Teddie shall be posting a new chaptair tonight.

Teddie · 05-24-2010, 05:02 PM

Teddie will not post a new chapter tonight. I lied..

Spleen Boy · 05-24-2010, 05:05 PM

You are to emotionally unstable right now! Have you been doing your breathing exercises?

Cyl · 05-25-2010, 08:51 PM

Oh my god, I love this fanfic.
It's so interesting, and descriptive.
Of course, I'm only on the third chapter, but Gareth is a beast!
I plan on being a dedicated fan. xD

Can I ask you one question? How old are you?

Hally · 05-25-2010, 09:02 PM

It gets even better as you read on into the later chapters. Its one of those storys that just keeps getting better and better. I have not found one part in it that is boring. It would make an awesome manga or anime I think. It would be up there as one of my favorites with bleach and naruto code gease and one piece.

Cyl · 05-25-2010, 09:05 PM

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Originally Posted by Tsunade Uchiha

It gets even better as you read on into the later chapters. Its one of those storys that just keeps getting better and better. I have not found one part in it that is boring. It would make an awesome manga or anime I think. It would be up there as one of my favorites with bleach and naruto code gease and one piece.

I agree, I was just thinking how this should become a manga/anime.
xD.
I would buy it, instead of actually watching it online for free. >>
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Hally · 05-25-2010, 09:08 PM

Yep I would by them as soon as they come out. I watch most anime on-line but I bye the bleaches when they come out and naruto. However if it was made into an anime show, I would hope that killy never lets 4kids get their hands on it. They would destroy it like they did with one piece.

Cyl · 05-25-2010, 09:09 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tsunade Uchiha

Yep I would by them as soon as they come out. I watch most anime on-line but I bye the bleaches when they come out and naruto. However if it was made into an anime show, I would hope that killy never lets 4kids get their hands on it. They would destroy it like they did with one piece.

Exactly. xD
This would obviously be too bloody and violent for them.
They'd destroy the whole story with edit after edit. D;

Hally · 05-25-2010, 09:11 PM

I know I shiver at the thought of what they could do to it. It would be a disaster. This is definatly not something that they should touch. I am sure if Killy became a famous manga writter he would never let such a thing happen.

Cyl · 05-25-2010, 09:17 PM

Only Adult Swim should be allowed to touch it.

Hally · 05-25-2010, 09:23 PM

And nothing about it should be changed. The characters are perfect and the plot is perfect and I like it just how it is so far. I dont have any complaints and would be very mad if I was watching the anime and something was left out. Also....no dumb fillers in the middle. Grr fillers annoy me sometimes.

Cyl · 05-25-2010, 09:24 PM

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Originally Posted by Tsunade Uchiha

And nothing about it should be changed. The characters are perfect and the plot is perfect and I like it just how it is so far. I dont have any complaints and would be very mad if I was watching the anime and something was left out. Also....no dumb fillers in the middle. Grr fillers annoy me sometimes.

Fillers really annoy me.
Well, let's stop wishing around, I have to continue my unpopular fanfic.

Hally · 05-25-2010, 09:25 PM

Yep fillers that last 2 seasons like the bounts really annoy me. Well I am off to bed.

Teddie · 05-26-2010, 03:16 AM

THATS WHAT I LIKE TO SEE
All my readers should idolize those two. The first real conversation on this thread in a whilllllle.

And to answer your question, 15 xD
I know, right?
And another Gareth lover, eh? Well, we'll see how that goes down as you get further.

Cyl · 05-26-2010, 10:02 PM

I'm only up to chapter 7, but I'm still hooked. This is so interesting. xD
Yes, I'm another Gareth Lover.
Find it kind of weird he drunk their blood. >>

Teddie · 05-27-2010, 03:27 AM

Psh, nonsense. Its what all great people do.

Hally · 05-27-2010, 03:15 PM

Yep Gareth is definatly an awesome character.

Teddie · 06-05-2010, 06:31 PM

New Chapter TONIGHT!
Have it written, just holding it off for suspense purposes xD

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05-23-2010, 01:39 PM	#481
SageoftheSixPaths NOTHING FISH?! Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Where you live Posts: 10,696 Rep Power: 12	Re: Tomorrow Forever. My favorite character is VIC, otherwise known as Vincentinolissimo, otherwise known as ME. Reasons why I like him: He's me. I'm awesome. He's awesome. We're awesome. He has a scythe. He's me. I'm him. We're us. I like me. Favorite chapter so far was either the fight against Gareth/ Michael or the most recent one where Vic is introduced. Nothing really for me to have you improve on, save for my grammar Nazism on your few spelling/ punctuation mistakes you've got here and there. Also, if the chapters were a bit longer I'd love you, but then again that might just be because I write long chapters myself. Also, MOAR VIC. __________________ Signature currently offline

05-23-2010, 02:48 PM	#482
Teddie Sage of Raw Honey Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: Inside your television! Posts: 2,702 Rep Power: 8	Re: Tomorrow Forever. Interesting interesting....I may make the next one longer so I can encompass both Hydra stuffs and moar Vic! Also, didja see mah new OP? xD __________________ Spoiler: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Teddie isn't here anymore. Goodbye.

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05-25-2010, 08:51 PM	#486
Cyl Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: In the shadows Posts: 13,510 Rep Power: 13	Re: Tomorrow Forever. Oh my god, I love this fanfic. It's so interesting, and descriptive. Of course, I'm only on the third chapter, but Gareth is a beast! I plan on being a dedicated fan. xD Can I ask you one question? How old are you? __________________ YouTube: soft dalek, warm dalek. little ball of hate. happy dalek, sleepy dalek. EX-TER-MI-NATE!!!

05-25-2010, 09:17 PM	#492
Cyl Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: In the shadows Posts: 13,510 Rep Power: 13	Re: Tomorrow Forever. Only Adult Swim should be allowed to touch it. __________________ YouTube: soft dalek, warm dalek. little ball of hate. happy dalek, sleepy dalek. EX-TER-MI-NATE!!!

05-26-2010, 03:16 AM	#496
Teddie Sage of Raw Honey Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: Inside your television! Posts: 2,702 Rep Power: 8	Re: Tomorrow Forever. THATS WHAT I LIKE TO SEE All my readers should idolize those two. The first real conversation on this thread in a whilllllle. And to answer your question, 15 xD I know, right? And another Gareth lover, eh? Well, we'll see how that goes down as you get further. __________________ Spoiler: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Teddie isn't here anymore. Goodbye. Last edited by Teddie; 05-26-2010 at 03:19 AM.

05-26-2010, 10:02 PM	#497
Cyl Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: In the shadows Posts: 13,510 Rep Power: 13	Re: Tomorrow Forever. I'm only up to chapter 7, but I'm still hooked. This is so interesting. xD Yes, I'm another Gareth Lover. Find it kind of weird he drunk their blood. >> __________________ YouTube: soft dalek, warm dalek. little ball of hate. happy dalek, sleepy dalek. EX-TER-MI-NATE!!!

05-27-2010, 03:27 AM	#498
Teddie Sage of Raw Honey Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: Inside your television! Posts: 2,702 Rep Power: 8	Re: Tomorrow Forever. Psh, nonsense. Its what all great people do. __________________ Spoiler: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Teddie isn't here anymore. Goodbye.

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Teddie Sage of Raw Honey Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: Inside your television! Posts: 2,702 Rep Power: 8	Re: Tomorrow Forever. New Chapter TONIGHT! Have it written, just holding it off for suspense purposes xD __________________ Spoiler: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Teddie isn't here anymore. Goodbye.

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