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Cradle Robber
Join Date: May 2009
Location: In front of a closet waiting for Vat to get out.
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Songbird - Theme Song
Prolouge Advance, and never halt, for advancing is perfection. Advance and do not fear the thorns in the path, for they draw only corrupt blood. Crash! The kick connected right into his face. He fell to the ground and some strange figure held a revolver to his face. "Please don't kill me." The man on the on the floor said. "Sorry. You must die you killed to many people this is your way of repenting. But feel lucky you are blessed for this shall be my last kill under the organazation of Express. So when you die everyone will know that you played my game I hope your bullet holes become mouths that say my name. I am Songbird" He said. Songbird walked into the Express headquaters. "Hello Mr. Songbird should I ..." Said the guard. "Plow." Songbird blew the headoff of he guard. Songbird walked towards the elavator killing people nonchalant with his revolver. He presses 36 on the elavator. He walks out and continues killing people. He opens a big door. "Crown I quit I don't think you can help me achieve perfection." Songbird said while Shooting him in the head point blank. Story Characters Chapter 1 Chapter 2 Chapter 3 Chapter 4 Chapter 5 Chapter 6 Chapter 7 Chapter 8 plz comment
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Has Surpassed Outdoor Activities
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i like it keep it up.
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Cradle Robber
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Thanks
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has a farm...
WCA Join Date: Mar 2009
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As of now, Songbird sounds like a sociopath.
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Cradle Robber
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lol. He changes though.
And I wrote this when i was mad
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has a farm...
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That must sucked for the guy that Songbird killed.
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Cradle Robber
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Yea but he was killing...
I don't want to reveal to much but he deserved it.
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has a farm...
WCA Join Date: Mar 2009
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I have an idea, so I can see so.
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Cradle Robber
Join Date: May 2009
Location: In front of a closet waiting for Vat to get out.
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Chapter 1
Forget not that the earth delights to feel your bare feet and the winds long to play with your hair. 6 years later "Hey." A woman said. "There's a rumor that Songbird is coming by this town, are you by any chance him. "No of course not." He said in a whimpy voice. "My name is Jin. I simply came to the country side because I like the earth on my feet and the wind playing with my long hair. "Oh." The women said. "I own an Inn a mile away from here would you like to stay there." "Sure." Jin said. "But I originally just planned on sleeping on the floor." "Your weird, but i suppose that's your style." She said. "By the way my name is Symph." Jin continued on walking nonchalant towards the inn. He began to daydream about how he had changed from since he was younger. He walked into the inn and stayed in a nice room with a country side view. He then layed on the bed thinking. Not thinking about anything specific, just thinking. The door opened. It was Symph. "You have some visitors here." She said. Two guys in suits with an E on their back came in the room. Jin hopped off the bed ran towards them and then started hitting them with a barrage of kicks and punches. He then took out a revolver. And then blew their heads off. They hten let out a terrifying screem.
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Cradle Robber
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has a farm...
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So much about making friends with Symph for Jin.
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Cradle Robber
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Yea but he'll find a way around it.
Symph is also main character just a little hint.
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Cradle Robber
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So vat what do you think of the story so far
what did you like and what could I have improved upon
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Quote:
Oh, that so?
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And I based his personality off of black cat and rurouni kenshin
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Cradle Robber
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I might make a new chapter today if I'm not to lazy
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Cradle Robber
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Chapter 2
No man can reveal to you nothing but that which already lies half-asleep in the dawning of your knowledge. "What the hell just happened." Exclaimed Symph looking at the two dead people on the floor. Jin swiftly moved toward Symph. He picked up a cloth and then put it on her mouth sufficating her. "Wha wha where am I." Murmered Symph. "Your on a boat with me, Jin." He said. "Ahh get me out of here you sociopath." Symph screemed. "You killed all those people what the hell is wrong with you, and you tied me up. Help help. " "What are you doing, you should be thanking me." He said. "They were about to kill you and I. They worked for Organazation Express. As did I. My name was Songbird because every time I killed someone they let out a loud cry for help. I was their number one assasin. I thought it would help people repent for their sins but I found out I was the one who needed to repent. I killed so many people even though they did bad stuff I didn't have to kill them. Though it was immportant that i killed those express workers because they would not stop hunting us down and they would kill everyone there. I was very corrupted back then all I wanted was power. Until I met some hermit. He never did tell me his name. But let me untie you." "Wow so you are Songbird." She said as he untied her. "Yep. Well thats it your finished being untied." He said. "Why did you tie me up any way." She asked. "Well...because it was fun hahaha." Jin chuckled "Whaaaaat." Symph screemed. There they were an ex assassin and an inn keeper starting the journey of a life time.
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Cradle Robber
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new chapter
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has a farm...
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You spelled some stuff wrong and "sociopath" isn't necessary an insult. xD
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Cradle Robber
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what did I spell wrong
and i know i couldnt think of anything and you called him a sociopath
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