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Hey if you guys can edit my posts to make the summary's and stuff look better you can, I don't exactly know how you guys want it to look.
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WCA Join Date: Mar 2009
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Rose's top speed was Mach 17.008, I believe.
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Sierra Mist Disciple Join Date: Apr 2009
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~Forever King Summery~
If you like the Uchiha clan a lot then basically my story is right for you. I say that very loosely though. Kana basically is the person the village leans on the most when they are in a mess. An evil organization name The Ryuusei have caused mayhem and is after 10 star host's. A civil war broke village moral and a village and up to about 5 star hosts are under their command. To branch of that org, there could be 5 potential villains that can sprout up and cause even bigger mayhem. Date Created: 8-05-09 (On going) Power level: I say the power of my verse is near Vatas, the speed level on my characters are very very fast. The lowest a character is transonic at best. There have been Medium villages+ busters (About to change very quickly) The highest reaction speed on a character has been Supersonic+ entering low hypersonic. Example : Is when Hayato been able to react very quickly to a Small village+ blast just a few feet away from him. Example of a medium village buster is Riyo in his 2nd form. His Star burst destroyed a large battlefield and half a mountain. He did that when a 3rd of his chakra was already used up.
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Anyways, I say yours is closer to Naruto the series itself, except with higher Busting Feats and the low tier characters faster than the low tier ones in Naruto/Sasuke Shippuden.
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Well I will accept summary's that are only like that then.
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Make sure to include a template in the opening post, as well as ask for evidence for the Power Level category if someone doesn't include it.
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Ok, summary template added. Thanks for the help Vat
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No need, and whoops, I made a mistake.
In my evidence part, the one with Patty being used as a bomb, it should be LARGE island, not SMALL island. xD
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OK, I fixed it, just to make sure are there any more mistakes? lol.
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No, no more, thanks. xDD
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Summary: This story is about demons that are attacking earth. The demon group is called Legion and it was said to be a lot of demons at first, but the numbers got diminished. The demons fought with the Ranpu clan (Light clan) and over time the demons numbers gradually decreased. The demons are also able to fuse together, switch bodies, and return when they are sent back to hell. But it is most likely the demons will have to wait a 100 years or so before they can come back on the planet and procure another body.
Date Created 01-14-10 (Still going) Power Level: Well the story isn't very long so the highest level of destruction is village buster. The characters are very fast, faster than the human eye, about supersonic+. Evidence: After the four main demons fuse together omnidirectional darkness extended from the body and destroyed a whole village. The characters, most preferably Makai, was seen to appear in-front of his opponent who was possibly 30 feet away, but I don't actually have enough evidence to support that most characters are supersonic or +
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Ok I will make the changes, or cyl can make them for me. lol.
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-_- Changes have been made.
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Whoops, I just did a check and calculated some things: The real speed level for his fic isn't Sonic, but Faster Than the Eye Could See(200+ MPH)
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-_- *Makes changes* Ok, before I post any further is there any more things I need to check? xD
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Nothing else.
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i just want to fix all of my spelling errors first
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