Remember hope - Page 6

Reala · 02-03-2010, 10:01 AM

Hanataro sighed and followed after Kameko and Shiori; stopping to apologise to everyone they rudely shoved out of the way.
It was freezing in Yukikagakure; Hanataro had left without her coat unfortunately; and she hurried after the others with her small hands tucked as far as they could go up the too long sleeves of her pale red kimono.
"W-w-WAIT!!" Hanataro yelled pathetically as the two girls bolted round the corner.
Hanataro darted round the corner; bumping into a taller girl.
She slipped and fell; grabbing onto the girl's arm; but only to bring her down as well.
"WHAT DID YOU DO THAT FOR?!!" The girl screamed; her eyes wide and furious.
"I-I'm S-sorry!!" Hanataro whined quietly, "I s-slipped,"
"I DON'T CARE!!" The girl screamed again.
The girl opened her mouth to speak again. Instead; she was cut off and sent flying into the brick wall of the house next to them.
Kameko dusted her fist off; they wiped it on the snow, mumuring "Stupid Aki germs.."
Hanataro sat in the snow; gaping at what Kameko had just done.
Shiori growled under her breath, "I told you they were evil,"
The other girl began to screech a reply at Shiori; but again; was cut short by Kameko.
"STOP ASSULTING MY FRIENDS WITH YOUR USELESS JABBER!!!" Kameko yelled.
Hanataro still sat shocked on the icy ground; the snow and ice soaking through her kimono. She stumbled to her feet; steadied by a grinning Kameko.
Kameko stretched and sighed happily; "Mm I really needed that; thanks Hana-what was your name?" She laughed.
"H-" Hanataro began quietly.
"Hanataro" Shiori cut in boldly.
"Heh; i guess we're a team then?" Kameko grinned; her arms crossed behind her head.
Hanataro nodded; shivering quietly.

yondaime · 02-03-2010, 06:20 PM

Well, here is how you could change the Title. You could move it to the Off-Topic section, then when you remove it back here you could change the title.

1st move it by clicking here.

Then, choose where you want to put it. In this case Off-Topic.

Finally, change the name here.

This is the risky part. I don't know IF you can remove it back to here, but if you can just do the whole thing over AGAIN, but send it back here with changed name.

cherryflower · 02-04-2010, 04:12 AM

Ok thanks. I'll try that.

cherryflower · 02-04-2010, 04:16 AM

IT WORKED! Thanks!

yondaime · 02-04-2010, 06:07 PM

No prob. just REMEMBER not to do it again. xD

cherryflower · 02-04-2010, 06:12 PM

I'll remember xD

KIBAFAN321 · 02-06-2010, 02:04 PM

Nice chapter, Reala. 8D
And thanks yondaime! ^^

Reala · 02-07-2010, 09:34 AM

Thanks KIBA

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02-03-2010, 10:01 AM	#101
Reala Chunin Exam Proctor Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: You know when i said i wouldn't come your house when you weren't there anymore? I LIED Posts: 1,645 Rep Power: 8	Re: Rember hope Hanataro sighed and followed after Kameko and Shiori; stopping to apologise to everyone they rudely shoved out of the way. It was freezing in Yukikagakure; Hanataro had left without her coat unfortunately; and she hurried after the others with her small hands tucked as far as they could go up the too long sleeves of her pale red kimono. "W-w-WAIT!!" Hanataro yelled pathetically as the two girls bolted round the corner. Hanataro darted round the corner; bumping into a taller girl. She slipped and fell; grabbing onto the girl's arm; but only to bring her down as well. "WHAT DID YOU DO THAT FOR?!!" The girl screamed; her eyes wide and furious. "I-I'm S-sorry!!" Hanataro whined quietly, "I s-slipped," "I DON'T CARE!!" The girl screamed again. The girl opened her mouth to speak again. Instead; she was cut off and sent flying into the brick wall of the house next to them. Kameko dusted her fist off; they wiped it on the snow, mumuring "Stupid Aki germs.." Hanataro sat in the snow; gaping at what Kameko had just done. Shiori growled under her breath, "I told you they were evil," The other girl began to screech a reply at Shiori; but again; was cut short by Kameko. "STOP ASSULTING MY FRIENDS WITH YOUR USELESS JABBER!!!" Kameko yelled. Hanataro still sat shocked on the icy ground; the snow and ice soaking through her kimono. She stumbled to her feet; steadied by a grinning Kameko. Kameko stretched and sighed happily; "Mm I really needed that; thanks Hana-what was your name?" She laughed. "H-" Hanataro began quietly. "Hanataro" Shiori cut in boldly. "Heh; i guess we're a team then?" Kameko grinned; her arms crossed behind her head. Hanataro nodded; shivering quietly. __________________ ☾☾☾☾☾☾☾ Village Hidden In The Moonlight KIBAFAN321 is epic! To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Believers NEVER Die!

02-03-2010, 06:20 PM	#102
yondaime Jonin Join Date: Apr 2009 Posts: 4,681 Rep Power: 9	Re: Rember hope Well, here is how you could change the Title. You could move it to the Off-Topic section, then when you remove it back here you could change the title. 1st move it by clicking here. Then, choose where you want to put it. In this case Off-Topic. Finally, change the name here. This is the risky part. I don't know IF you can remove it back to here, but if you can just do the whole thing over AGAIN, but send it back here with changed name.

02-04-2010, 04:12 AM	#103
cherryflower Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Haveing a blast :D Posts: 5,305 Rep Power: 9	Re: Rember hope Ok thanks. I'll try that. __________________ <33 This is where awesomeness occurs: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. SASUKEXLEE SUPPORTER Saucely

02-04-2010, 04:16 AM	#104
cherryflower Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Haveing a blast :D Posts: 5,305 Rep Power: 9	Re: Remember hope IT WORKED! Thanks! __________________ <33 This is where awesomeness occurs: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. SASUKEXLEE SUPPORTER Saucely

02-04-2010, 06:07 PM	#105
yondaime Jonin Join Date: Apr 2009 Posts: 4,681 Rep Power: 9	Re: Remember hope No prob. just REMEMBER not to do it again. xD

02-04-2010, 06:12 PM	#106
cherryflower Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Haveing a blast :D Posts: 5,305 Rep Power: 9	Re: Remember hope I'll remember xD __________________ <33 This is where awesomeness occurs: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. SASUKEXLEE SUPPORTER Saucely

02-06-2010, 02:04 PM	#107
KIBAFAN321 Madame Spams-Alot Join Date: May 2009 Location: Over the rainbow with Mo Mo Posts: 2,477 Rep Power: 9	Re: Remember hope Nice chapter, Reala. 8D And thanks yondaime! ^^ __________________ ☾ Summer of 09- Awesome Reala PWNs -SHIKIBAME-

02-07-2010, 09:34 AM	#108
Reala Chunin Exam Proctor Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: You know when i said i wouldn't come your house when you weren't there anymore? I LIED Posts: 1,645 Rep Power: 8	Re: Remember hope Thanks KIBA __________________ ☾☾☾☾☾☾☾ Village Hidden In The Moonlight KIBAFAN321 is epic! To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Believers NEVER Die!

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