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Old 12-27-2009, 07:12 AM   #1
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Name: Ace Akihito
Age: 10
Description: Ace is a detective, and even though hr's only 10, people call him for the job. He's pretty smart for his age, and already has his own buisness. It is offcial. He will take on any case, and give the client[s], the bill when th case is closed.

Nmae: Cayden
Age: 8
Desription: Cayden is Ace's partner in agency. He is always doing survellience, and is very smart in computers.

Name: Simon Morter
Age: 20
Desription: He is the police cheif, and called Ace for a case. He recenty, has a link, with a gang of criminals, and is trying o get rid of Ace's buisness

Name: Lily Hoki
Age: 9
Desription: Even though she is 10, she passed karate class, in japan, and moved here. She can beat up a 20 year old. She got hired, and is now part of Ace's Team. She fights, protecting them from harm.

Name: Garu Hoki
age: 9
Description: Even though he is 10, he passed karate class, in japan, and moved here. he can beat up a 20 year old. he got hired, and is now part of Ace's Team. he fights, protecting them from harm.

Skye
Age:12
Description: She is short, has long light brown hair, and blue eyes.
She is usually cheerful, shy. Skye Likes Bunnys, books, exspecialy mystery books. She dislikes snakes, Clowns, sand (cause she thinks there is snakes in every place there is sand) and rats. She stands out because she is extremly shy so she talks in a soft, quiet voice. always looks down by the ground especially when talking to someone. she also gets embaressed easily. She joined Ace's team, when she heard that they needed recon. Since she's so shy, she is great at hiding!
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Old 12-27-2009, 07:12 AM   #2
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It was a dark night, and I was snoozing in my seat at my detective office. I looked out the window, to see Tentropilis still awake. My buisness, Ace's Cases agency, was one of the ten main buildings. I am a detective. I'm only 10, but I have my very own buisness. BUZZ! "Let the client in!" I ordered. "Okay." Cayden, my partner, said. The door opened.

A man, about the age of twenty, walked in. "I have a case. There was a crime. I need o know who did it." He said, slapping both hands on my desk. "Name, any clues you can give me now?" I asked. "My Name is Simon Morter. I only have one clue. The crime happened at Zach's Shack." He noted. I nodded, "I'm on it."

After Simon left, I called Cayden into the room. "We got a case, so gear up." I commanded. I got out of my chair, and headed, for the closet. I changed, and put on my detective gear. "Leet us go now!" I said, as I casually opened the door.

When we got to the shack, it was raining hard, and people were rushing out the shack. Me, and Cayden strolled in. Two kids, looking the age of 9, were in a wrestlig cube, beating up wrestlers. "Wow! Speak about quirks." I exclaimed queitly. Ding! "Garu, and Lily Hoki, are the winners!" he annoucer boomed, into the microphones.

I walked up to the counter, where Zach, a man with big muscles, and a beard, was working. "Hey Zach, any crimes happened lately?" I questioned. He nodded, "Yes. A gang of thuds, about ten of them, tried to steal the furniture. I don't know why, but I had to call all of the police in tentropilis." He explained, handing me a milkshake.

I glimsped at the two winners of the fight. "Maybe I can get them on my team." I thought. I got up, and walked to the two fighters. "Hi! I'm Ace Akihito. I own an agency, and I would like to hire you to. Will you accept?" I said. They nodded, and in unision they told me, "We've been looking for a job to make money. Too bad you got to be 14 to work in other places. We expect to be paid 50 dollars an hour." I nodded, "Fine!"

I walked to Cayden, who was eating chocolate mousse. "Come on. Let's go." I ordered. He got up, gobbiling the mousse. We all left, and headed back for the building.

When we got their, it was about midnight, and I kicked open the door. A girl was looking at the ground. She had short, light brown hair. She was wearing a black tee shirt, and black shorts. "Hi. I'm Skye, and I'm looking for a job." She said, timidly. "You good at spying?" I asked. She nodded.

"Your hired!" I told her, "We got a case. You work tommorow!" She nodded, still looking down.

The next day, we all met at the building. "Okay Team. We head out the the police station." I said. As we left, I noticed Skye was reading a book. I walked over to her. "What book you reading?" I asked. "Uh... Half-Moon-investigations." She stammered.
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Old 12-27-2009, 05:37 PM   #3
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Very gppd story
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Old 12-27-2009, 06:13 PM   #4
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great stuff, but it reminds me of case closed I.E. detective conan
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Good, can you please continue, I want to see what happens next.
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Old 12-27-2009, 06:31 PM   #8
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Yay! Thanks, I really like mystery stories!
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Yay! I now feel like reading a mystery book while I wait

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