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Old 12-27-2009, 05:53 PM   #41
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Poetry is like a flower, lavender or rose
delecate or thorns, blood red in prose
spiteful or sincere, which one to hold close
to ones heart in the springtime, vibrant or morose
for as we go foward, we reap what we sowe
like a petal flowing slowly, from water to snow
and as we grow colder, do we frost on our soul
or remember that flower, what we had is what we know

I just freestyled that
Gorgeous freestyle FTW!
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Old 12-27-2009, 05:53 PM   #42
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Umm...I think so....wait..noooo, you can't...It's a 5, 7, 5...and that's it...sorry..^^"
xD Sorry for what? Just asking.
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Old 12-27-2009, 05:55 PM   #43
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Poetry is like a flower, lavender or rose
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like a petal flowing slowly, from water to snow
and as we grow colder, do we frost on our soul
or remember that flower, what we had is what we know

I just freestyled that
OMg That's like awesome!!!! I have to write a Haiku about How great it is

your poem is awesome
very great indeed I say

A wonderful poem
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Old 12-27-2009, 05:55 PM   #44
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Gorgeous freestyle FTW!
Dude, everything I've done on here is freestyle. I think if that's what it means. xD

Seriously, everything is scratch. Can't find all of my poems.
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Old 12-27-2009, 05:55 PM   #45
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xD Sorry for what? Just asking.
Umm...I don't know..I'm used to apoligizing...heheh..^^"
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Old 12-27-2009, 05:56 PM   #46
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You better not be the accident type.
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Old 12-27-2009, 05:56 PM   #47
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ok, my fluffly dog! ^^

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I have a dog
His name's Jerry,
He is all white
and harry

He is so sweet,
and so cute
Even though,
I wish he was on mute

He he were human,
i can only imagine,
what kind of personality,
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Jerry, Jerry,
All white
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That's my doggie!! My sweet little Jerry! ^^
Only one person noticed my poem.....
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Old 12-27-2009, 05:57 PM   #48
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i got a question
can it be any kind of poems?
like haiku?
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I-i'm a bit clumbsy...lol
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Only one person noticed my poem.....
No, I noticed it.

Pretty good. I'm not so good at animal poems.
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i got a question
can it be any kind of poems?
like haiku?
as long as it's a poem! ^^
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i got a question
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like haiku?
Old news, dude. And yes.
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...I'm a she, good haiku though!
Oh oops.... And thanks! ^^

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Wow That Haiku sucked. Ehh I don't care they are fun to write and that's all I care about.
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No, I noticed it.

Pretty good. I'm not so good at animal poems.
lol Thanks...it's about my puppy..who isnt a puppy...lol
His name is Jerry, he's a springer spaniel..
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I-i'm a bit clumbsy...lol


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ok then... IM IN
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Oh oops.... And thanks! ^^

Completely sorry
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Will call you a she

Wow That Haiku sucked. Ehh I don't care they are fun to write and that's all I care about.
Haiku is fun to
Write all the time well fill space
I exploited system

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i got a question
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like haiku?
Another person
That Also writes in haikus
I am now happy



And Hey AkasukiRocks, I haven't seen you since that resteruant thread thing
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That Also writes in haikus
I am now happy


And Hey AkasukiRocks, I haven't seen you since that resteruant thread thing
Long time no see dood
I kind of like this dood-et
Do you fill space fill

Fill space fill is me just filling the spaces.

If you put this in the first post, NF, make it a Joke Haiku.
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