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|12-20-2009, 10:41 AM||#1|
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Born of death
ok i Hope you enjoy this
"dogs run in the night on a mountain covered in snow following the tracks of a known wanted criminal that was one of the most dangerous to ever walk the earth after the dogs appeared 15 heavily armed police man and another police car following them. a man and a woman were sitting in the police car the man was named Nago Shifune he was chasing the criminal for over six months the women was kikyo Hime. it was her first day in the unit she was amazed that a 15 year old boy was chased with such force
" the name of the man were in presecute after is called Kay Shifune...wait Nago Shifune now i understand why his face is so stiff they are related.Did you say anything kikyo?. "kikyo looked away"
"um...yes sir this man Kay Shifu..."he quickly interrupted her". A man? Haha ive never heard anyone call him that he is 15. "her heart filled with fear" this must be a mistake sir it says here He killed over a 100 men ! ,"i wish it was a mistake believe me that...boy is the most powerful thing you will ever meet ! i don't wish to talk about this any more you the brief somewhere in here don't you?!. "yes sir i do" she picked up the file and looked at the info:
weight: 61 kilos
blood type : B+
" A 15 year old boy stood on a mountain top covered in snow wearing a long cape that had a holl in the back center long grey pants and a tight grey shirt and big sword strapped to his back"
" so he is after me again and he brought more people with him this time i better move"
"kay instantly disappeared"
"he was my nephew ! . sir? you wanted to know his story...he was my nephew my brother's son he was a prodigy in everything he aced his way in school and finished when he was 14 the teacher's favorite when he was 6 my brother got him his first sword by the age of 10 he supersede everyone even his father that was considered to be a legend with the blade he amazed everyone until that day. his 15 birthday he recived a new sword from his father a sword that was passed down in our family from father to son he was so happy to have that honor you should have seen the look on his face. but then the happiest day of his life also become known as the Shifune massacre...
"kikyo's face become pale like she so a ghost"
th..the Shifune massacre sir ?!
you've heard of it didnt you?...yes sir i did ! .what do you know about it ?
The Shifune massacre is the most known mass murder in the land the father Mononake Shifune father of two a boy and a girl was a businessman he used a small company called "Gigatz" to take control over the gold market in the eastern land. two people who work in high positions in "Gigatz" didn't take it so lightly so they broke in to the house in the night and took the two kids father the mother and...
say it !
"kikyo felt pain i her heart"
i.. i cant sir .
then i will
and forced the girl and boy to watch there own mother burns to dust and there own father crushed by a compressor !
"kikyo broke in to tears"
"kay was standing in the snow with his eyes closed"
"well then they are so close no point of running anymore. i guess il just have to ancle Nago again wont I?"
"kikyo wasn't crying anymore"
tell me the rest !!. its not for the faint of heart you know !
kay's sister Melodi was shot in the chest and kay... kay's left arm was reaped of
when they found Melodi and Kay he was already free his sister's wound was stitched by someone and kay kay just set next to his sister holding his sword for 5 days when the police found them and took them to the hospital Melodi was in a coma and kay kay never said a word no to us not to himself he only spoke to Melodi she was 8 when all of this happened kay promised her he will come back and they will be a family once more but...those were empty words it wasn't kay anymore .
after his arm was fixed i say fixed he said replaced he just got up and left
and then the killing started he wondered the land like he was looking for something killing anyone who disturbed his search...
"kikyo yelled stop"
" a young man with white hair and a large sword strapped to his back stood when around him 15 armed policemen aimed there guns at him"
Nago and kikyo stepped out of the police car.
Nago your the most stubborn man ive ever seen. its in the family.so you think this 15 men will make any difference?
"kay pulled out his sword"
To Be Continued...
Hope you liked it if pepole respod well i will write more
|12-20-2009, 10:45 AM||#2|
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Re: Born of death
No need for color cordnating. Do you know how to use quotation marks?
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