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Old 12-18-2009, 05:51 PM   #1
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Chapter 1-just the beginning
I was walking around through my house doing my daily chores.Watering the flowers,sweeping the house,mopping,doing laundry,doing dishes,vacuming,and taking out the trash.All of a sudden i heard screaming from the other room.I thought it was my Sister,Mimi,having a bad dream again so i just ignored it.But then i heard a more manly scream.
I got nervous so i went to check on everyone.Mimi and my older,brother,Hora were asleep.I checked my mom and dad's room and there was a weird smell of onions and garlic.I looked down and my feet were covered in a bright red liquid.I looked on my parents bed and found a yellowish colored note that read.
Dear Whats your name,
I killed your parents and your next
signed,
Anonymous
I looked down to find my mom and dad's dead corpse on the floor covered in blood.i wanted to scream but the noise couldn't come out.my throat burned,my eyes watered and i could not get the sight out of my mind.my eyes turned red and that was just the beginning
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Old 12-19-2009, 06:56 AM   #2
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Old 12-19-2009, 11:52 AM   #3
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I'm a girl though O.o anyways thanks
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i likes it...
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its really good vino love it
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Old 12-19-2009, 12:51 PM   #6
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yo thats a cool story
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Aww Thanks Guys ^^
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