Shinobi: The Saga

[Moon]

As Tenshi ran though the village to his squad he noticed he was few hours late.
When Tenshi arived at the weapon shop where they agreed to meet he was chewed out.
"why are you late sensei" said a black haired girl " Well you see I uh.. woke up late" "that isn't an excuse"said a blonde haired boy "Well to change the subject what are your names"

" I'm Nila" said the black haired girl. " I am Jinjo" said the blonde haired boy, "annd that is Denco he doesn't talk much" "Ok good now I want you to fight me so i can see you abillities"
Tenshi said.
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here is wat my squad looks like
Nila-black hair, orange skirt with white shorts under it, and an orange shirt that has a circle on it, she has piercing blue eyes, and fire chakra nature

Jinjo-blonde hair, and a zebra patterned shirt and pants, he has dull green eyes ,and water chakura nature

Denco-wears black pants and a black jacket that covers half his face,chakura nature unknown

[Viceroy]

About your squad hopping Nick, I'd gladly take your squad. I mean I was going to go for Special Jonin but I could just make that Jonin. But if not let me know. And as far as a plot tell me if guys like this or not. If you had something else in mind I'll just delete this or change it.

Chensei and Akemi walked after there students together. Bo appeared before them holding a scroll and looking gleeful. "Bo, I haven't seen you in a long time." Chensei proclaimed as the shook hands roman style. "I know I've been very busy." "Well do you want to join us for ramen a little while?" "Oh well just for a bit." The three walked on to the ramen shop catching up on lost time. When they arrived Bo's demeanor began to change. As the waited for their orders Chensei looked at Bo discerningly. "What's on your mind Bo?" Bo looked looking very worried. "There's something wrong. Very wrong." "How do you mean?" Akemi chimed in "Yeah I've felt something a little off too but I haven't had any strange visions lately." Bo nodded and continued "There was only one other time I felt this way...

FLASHBACK

Bo stopped his training to look up at the sky. It was dismal and depressing but the clouds were like none he had ever seen. He decided to call it quits since Chian didn't like him coming home wet. As started home he felt a knot in his stomach. It wasn't a hunger pain, it felt deeper. His breathing quickened and he began to feel anxious. Soon chakra was beginning to flow out him for no reason. Then he saw a figure in a tall tree staring at him. From the blue cloak he new exactly who they were. He started to run but his uneven chakra flow stumbled him. Rain began falling as he fell to the ground unable the stabilize himself. The man soon stood above him looking down with wild eyes. "Traitor" was all the man said before preparing to hack him apart with a scythe. Bo felt power leak out his body which was replaced by fear. He could do nothing but watch. The scythe fell inches from his face.

When he looked he saw Goy standing above him with his staff blocking the attack. The cloaked man jumped back surprised. "You will pay for protecting a criminal old man." They commenced in close combat with staff countering blade. Goy could not keep up with a spry younger ninja. He lost more and more ground until he was backed up against a tree. The ninja quickly disarmed Goy by swatting his staff out of his hands. As the staff fell to the ground next to Bo, Goy was mercilessly slaughtered. His limp body slumped down the tree. With that the man turned his attention to the fallen boy. Tears welled up into his eyes as he saw his mentor grab the ninjas foot and with his last strength consumed the unaware man with lightening. His body went stiff and he began bleeding out his ears. "Sensei!? Please sensei...please get up." Bo cried as grabbed the staff next to him....

END

"Only later did I learn why I was paralyzed. You see I use to be part of a militant organization called the order. I was apprentice to one of the 7 Axes or leaders. When my overseer died I inherited his responsibility. Only then did I realize that The Order planned to destroy all the villages in the Mountain Country. They had a special jutsu that required all 7 Axes to take part. When I went AWOL they had to kill me since I was a liability. When I was training that day they had tested the jutsu on a smaller village where I was near. I suspect they may have found a replacement for me and are continuing their plans. As of lately I've been feeling the same affects just not as bad. I fear they may moving this way."

Chensei furrowed his brow. "You won't have to worry about that our village could take those freaks." "Yes I know but thats not all. They an army of about 30,000 well trained soldiers along with admirals and mercenaries. Even at our best the odds are greatly against us." "Well you have to tell Lady Hokage what you think immediatly." Chensei urged.
"Thats why I'm telling you. The hokage trusts you more and she swore to the village council that if the order came anywhere near the village she would kick me out. But that won't solve the problem you need me I have advanced knowledge of The Order. Please try to reason with her." There was a long pause. "I will try." "Thank you." Bo looked at them then walked out.

Any ways I thought I would post this now but when I thought about it I figured I should post it later and let some time pass before we jump into another full blown war. If you like this let me know then we can slowly move in this direction. But I would really rather hear your ideas.

[Nick Tasogare]

i really like the plot

[Nick Tasogare]

Bo finished his ramen, and left Chinsei and Akemi, knowing they were together, he wanted to give them some time. "Akemi, you go check on your students, I'm going to go talk to The Hokage." "Ok, good luck." They hugged and said good-bye.

He arrived at the mansion, and hurried up to Lady Hokage's office. "Lady Hokage, I have some news. You probably won't like it. You see, this group called--" "The Order? Yea I know, Chinsei. We need to talk about your friend 'Bo', and what his actual name is."

[Nick Tasogare]

"Let me cut you off, My Lady. He has knowledge of them, andbelieves that they are heading here. He could be very valuable." "Chinsei, I know. That's not what I want to talk to you about. "Oh? What then?" "There is a young ninja i would like you to look after." "But I already have a squad." "I know, I'm assigning you a new setup." He looked at her surprised and confused.

"You will still be the sensei of that squad, you will just take on a new student after the Chunin Exams." "If you think that is a good idea, but on one condition. Bo will take care of my current squad while I'm away. If you can't deal with that, then I refuse." She sighed. For several minutes, the room was quiet. "Fine, but don't mention this until after the Chunin Exams. Understood?" He nodded, and left. He couldn't help but wonder who this new student would be.

[TheViolletteHeart]

Haruna smiled at the sky. "I can't wait until we're chunin! Won't it be great?"

"Sorry to break it to you, but girls aren't meant to be fighters," Isamu snorted, stepping ahead of her. "Why don't you just protect that pretty little face of yours and go into the medical field?"

"Oh, I'm not meant to be a fighter? You're one to talk, rocks-for-brains!"

"Kyou thinks Isa-san and Haru-chan will both do really well in the chunin exams... Kyou is the one who isn't fit to fight."

The kunoichi stopped walking. "Who told you that?"

"Kyou's mother told Kyou that."

The girl rolled her eyes. "You can't believe everything your parents tell you. Father tells me all the time that major details of the future can't be changed. He told sensei almost four years ago that the dragons wouldn't return for a year, but they returned only a few days after that! I think that counts as a major change."

Isamu cocked his head to the side. "Say, when can we meet your pops anyway?"

Panic overtook the turquoise-haired ninja's face. "You can't!"

Her teammates stared at her. She cleared her throat.

"I mean...Not for a while...He's terribly ill...I think I might be catching it." She fake coughed a couple times.

[Moon]

Nila said"but why you know we will lose" "Yea, you would defeat us quilkly" said Jinjo."Well you never know till you try so come at me" Tenshi said.

The three youths scattered. First was Nila with great speed came at Tenshi.Tenshi blocked all moves and jabbed one finger in her waist. Nila fell and Jinjo came at him. Jinjo hit tenshi in the face but Tenshi didn't move. Then Tenshi threw Jinjo in a bush. Denco's attack affected Tenshi. Denco roundhoused kicked Tenshi in the head.
Tenshi got up and attacked Denco in the back. Nila, Denco ,and Jinjo were down.

Then Tenshi was hit in three spots.The three squad members hit Tenshi.Nila hit Tenshi in the right side,Jinjo on the left, and Denco on the back. Then Tenshi fell and said "Well down all of you are excellant" Tenshi fell asleep.

"i hope he isn't like this on missions" Nila said.

[Nick Tasogare]

When Chinsei found his students, he knew he couldn't tell them yet. "I want you to train 2 on 1. Gin and Sabra will fight Kin." "What, you know that the two of them will destroy me, I'm nothing without Gin." "That is what this training is for. What would you do as a Shinobi if your sister was unconcious, or worse? Would simply give up and die." He had raised his voice, not to be mean, but to get it through her head that she could act on her own. "We will start as soon as Akemi and her team get here. I want them to see your abilities." The 3 young genin got into different positions around the training field, and waited for Akemi, Haruna, Kyou and Isamu.

As i am walking to the ramen shop after a long day I see Chinsei "hey Chinsei whats up?"

[TheViolletteHeart]

Haruna was the first to enter the area, sprinting. Isamu was right behind her.

"Come on, I swear I'm not going to grab your @$$ again!" the boy shouted after her.

Akemi came in shortly after, eyes turned to the heavens. Kyou clung to the jounin's skirt.

"Kyou doesn't wanna see the scary lady! Kyou is afraid the scary lady is gonna hurt Kyou!"

"Don't be afraid of Sabra. She's really a nice girl."

Isamu stopped chasing his teammate the moment he saw Gin. He swaggered over to the blonde. "Hey there, hottie."

She got into a fighting stance. "Did you not learn your leason the last time?"

"You can kick him in the nuts if he gets outta hand," the turquoise-haired girl suggested.

The brunet ignored Haruma and scoffed. "You never would have beaten me if you didn't cheat and get me sick first. Besides, I was going easy on you."

"Last I checked, I had no idea how to make you sick when we fought and the sights and sounds were just part of my jutsu. Therefore, it was fair."

[Nick Tasogare]

"Alright, you're here now. Guys, start when you're ready." "Akemi-sensei, what are we doing here? Why does Kyou have to be here?" "You need to be more confident, Kyou, and Chinsei thought that if you saw that one of his students also wasn't a fighter, you would feel better." She had completely made that up. She knew Kin wasn't one to fight, but this was just to motivate her own students to get better. Kyou looked out on the battlefield curiously.

Kin hid in the trees. She was afraid to do this, she didn't think she had any chance to win. The only reason she had made it through the academy was Gin. Now that she had to fight her, she had no idea what to do. Even if she did get the upperhand, could she strike down her sister? Just then, a shuriken grazed her head, and cut off several strands of hair. She immediately went into battle mode.

[Sabra]

Kin hide in a 'safe' spot in the ground near a tree she'd used to hide a moment before. Sabra was keeping her moving almost constantly. She was becoming tired, and knew it would only be a few more seconds before Ruby would find her with her tracking skills. She shook herself from her worries. Gin had been going easy on her, and she knew it.

She remembered earlier that week after her sister had trapped her in a genjutsu when they spared at home. The other girl had made her think everything was normal until the last moment to take advantage of her senses. It had been a day that made her realize how much crueler her twin was then she could ever be. She knew why, she'd always known...

The ground above her shook the young woman from her memory as it was slammed and the dirt began to crumble in her tiny space. Kin used the subsitution jutsu to vacate the spot before it collapsed. Sabra saw the rocks break and give way. Her weight carried them down to where she'd been told her target lay. It was moment of realization as she saw the substituted paper wrapped box.

The symbols made her cuss as she brought her arms up to guard. The box exploded as it's surface was torn by the stones. White light, a howling sound, and stinging pain inflicted the pink haired girl with torment as she was thrown against the edge of the pit she'd created. Thin pins had penetrated much of her front. They stabbed thru her clothing and light armor like it wasn't there. Thankfully they were short and wouldn't kill, but she could fell the toxin they were coated in making her dizzy.

The girl wavered as she breathed and stared at the remains of the trap. She'd forgotten that her teammate was making her own ninja supplies. The other genin may not have been adept at most things, but her used of certian materials and tools was both inventive and powerful. She didn't settle for just good enough anymore, she had to make it herself now, so that it would be better she would always claim.

Kin stood above the hole, right on the rim, Ruby was struggling in her hands. The animal was bound in sealing papers that had a special glue on the back of them. They would only come off by either being broken, ripped, or treated with a perticular soulvent. They weren't great for combat, but they had their uses for capturing a subject. The creature was deposited on the grass where it rocked back and forth unable to really move anything but it's mouth. The blond drew a kunai with an explosive tag attached.

"Sorry, can't take you both at once, so I had to get you away from her." She explained as she threw the tag and it caused the hole to collapse farther in. Sabra fell to her knees and was covered in rocks and dirt up to her waist. The poison in the needles that glinted across her arms and torso was taking effect as she looked up at her friend dazed and gave a weak smile as she let her head roll forward and the sleep take her.

"Impressive... However, you're the one cought now sissy." The cold voice ran a chill down Kin's spine. The second blond was behind her as she turned almost in slow motion. "I don't want to do this again Gin." The other genin didn't move, but her twin got the message that she wouldn't be backing down.

"Fine then," Kin sighed out, before throwing a handful of sinbon at the other ninja. As they flew thru the air she slid to the ground, slaming her hand to it. A quake under Gin's feet made her loose balance as the deadly needles sliced thru the air. A soft pop was heard as the clone disappeared. "Getting better at that Gin." "Same to you with that rumble you make." The origin of the voice was hard to determine there in the trees that she'd retreated to when she'd wanted to gain advantage with Sabra.

"Yeah I've been working on it," Kin replied as she dashed from the cover into the clearing of the main traing field. She knew she stood a better chance here. She kept a kunai in her offhand as she waited for her sister's approach. The second she suspected a Genjutsu she planed to slice a finger on the weapon, she'd found that pain was more effective for handling her sister's skills then the normal release jutsu. To use the release you had to have some concept of what was wrong, and Gin was adept at not making that easy if even possible.

The girl coughed as an attack hit her in the back, the one place she wasn't looking... The heavy smack from the blast of water had knocked the air from her and caused her to hack violently as she whirled to face the stream running quietly a few feet from her. Her twin stood on the surface of the water, her silver eyes clouded as she analysised Kin's Chakra carefully. It was like being stared at by someone without a soul, it was unnerving.

Kin took no time in flinging a kunai at the running water and sending lightning infused energy do the line. Her sister had jumped off the surface through just as the kunai broke the tension. Gin landed on the other side of the charged liquid and smiled. "I know better, after all I was the one that came up with that trick." The golden eyes of the two of them bit at the inside of her mouth as she drew her kunai back with a quick flick. She let the line hang relatively loose below her hand as she began to spin the weapon.

"I remember, trust me I do. I remember you coming up with alot of attacks that we use, both of us. I remember you designing some for me, and several for you. I know where I stand sister." Kin said as strongly as she could. Gin cocked her head to the side as if surprised. She has become so much more dominate in their relationship with each year that seeing her sibling like this was intreging. Kin used the moment of distraction in the other girl to stomp the ground hard. "But do you know where you stand?" She said as the earth below her opponet sucked the other blond in.

The look of panic in Gin's eyes was satisfying to the woman as she held her arm back ready to throw the kunai. As her limb came back she felt a hand grab it around the wrist and twist sharply. Another arm came around her waist and nested a slender hand in the center of her chest. "Yes, I do." Gin forced the breath from her twin's lungs with a forceful technique that made the other woman double forward.

As Kin was forced to reel in on herself she felt the genjutsu break and realized the hole she'd seen her sibling sink into was actually empty, not even a dummy, just an empty pit. Her arm was twisted behind her, her fingers having let the weapon she'd held fall as her pressure points where pushed. Her other arm was pinned to her body, the kunai in it also fell as she was brought to her knees gasping.

Gin held her still like that. "If their were a real fight I'd be covering her in ice at certian joints to hold her still and finish the capture." She said which looking in the direction of her sensei who nodded in approval. She noticed that Akemi had retrieved Sabra from her twin's trap and was carefully removing the pins from her. Ruby lay still taped up, and hissing in intense anger about it. Gin released her sibling and helped her to stand.

The two exchanged an unreadable look, then they turned from one another. Gin walking toward the audiance, while Kin closed her eyes and began trying to figure out when she'd been cought up in the illusion. It was always so fast, so subtle when they fought. It wasn't till all other moves were exploited that Gin would ever let enough strangeness into the imagery for someone to know it, at least that's what she did to her sister.

The two knew eachother so well. She was sure that Gin could predict her every breath much less jutsu, which ment a flawless mimic of what was supposed to happen could be made. That ment that her sister's attacks on her were perticularly well thought out and powerful compared to anyone else. Gin's skill with the type of power that the mind was affected by was good anyway, but having been essentually side by side for nearly every moment of their lives left Kin at just too much a disadvantage.

Tears rolled down the blond's face as she heard footsteps behind her. "I don't want to heard it sensei! I know. Sweet lord how I know..." Kin didn't wait for words as she ran off away from the training ground. She knew the exams were starting in a week. She knew that she couldn't fight well on her own. Having gotten Sabra had been just a matter of baiting someone who she knew more about then most. If the other girl had used something other then fists to break into her hiding spot she wouldn't of even pulled that off.

Gin watched her sister's retreating form as she knelt by Sabra and helped to remove the last pins, before applying a grey liquid from a small vial to the seaing paper around Ruby. She didn't say a word during either task. "You must excuse me now." She finally spoke, not to anyone in perticular, but as the ninja pet shook it's fur out the blond vanished from sight.

Sabra took a few more minutes to awaken, when she did she could hear the other genin talking around her, their teachers as well. She sat up and held her head as her eyes focused. She looked over to Akemi, who was first to acknowledge her consious state. "Who won?" She questioned as she rubbed her temples. "Gin did, but they both ran off." The pink haired girl nodded and looked the remaining people over.

The boy who she'd fought seemed to lean out of veiw as much as he could, as if hiding from her. "What?" Sabra demanded from him sharply as he had stared at her. "Kyou sorry, Kyou will be good." He said hastily before ducking behind Akemi. Sabra's minty colored eyes rolled slowly as she looked up at her friend's face. "You have to tell me later, what is wrong with him... Beyond that, did the twins say where they were going?"

Chinsei was looking her over with scrutiny, but answered, "No." Sabra nodded, then grabbed her head at the motion. "Oh she makes some strong stuff..." she murmured as she made a note to have her teammate show her how to make the drug that had been on those needles. "Sensei, I think she'll be okay in the exam..." she said suddenly. "I think we all will be. Kin just needs a push. She's been the weakest of use three for a while now. She needs someone to show her how she really is special." Sabra stared meaningfully at her teacher then. She'd already tried making the other girl understand her own potential, but she honestly didn't think that Kin would listen to anyone about just how good she could be.

[TheViolletteHeart]

Haruna got up and started to get into position in the training ground. "Let me guess...It's Kyou's turn to fight me and rocks-for-brains."

Akemi thought it over for a minute. "You know, that's actually not a bad idea. Kyou, you need to learn to stand up for yourself. Haruna and Isamu, you two need to learn to work together."

"So what are you slow pokes waiting for? Let's fight!"

The two male genin made their way over to the kunoichi. Kyou stood ten feet back. Isamu took a place right by the green-eyed girl's side, making her inch away.

"Ready?" The female jounin glanced around. "Fight!"

Isamu and Haruna started their handsigns in unison. The boy finished his set first and knelt to the ground to begin making his armor. Seconds later, the turquoise-haired girl was bringing water into the area, this time allowing it to fill to the combatants' waists. Then she melted to water, the same way as when she fought Kin.

Knowing the technique well, Kyou spun around and threw needles in every direction. The purple-haired genin stopped twirling and released the genjutsu. Isamu blocked the needles with a smirk. Haruna...was no where to be seen.

He felt the kick before he heard the splash. The timid boy fell face-first into the water. He flipped over and threw a fist full of needles at the girl. She was replaced by a rock dummie. And by that, I mean Isamu.

The brunet sputtered. "How dare you use me in a substitution!"

"It made sense," his teammate shot back. "We're supposed to be working together, and you have better defense than I do."

Kyou looked up to see the kunoichi sitting on what looked like a geiser. She pulled out a few throwing stars, took aim carefully, and tossed them in the green-eyed boy. He used wind to redirect the attack. Haruna slid down the collumn of water in time for the weapons to miss her. When she reached the ground again, the geiser splashed back into the lake quickly, making a wave big enough to push Kyou back. Isamu's rocks weighed him down enough that the wave didn't move him.

The turquoise-haired girl rushed to her ally. "Come on! Use your rock powers and give me some flint. I'll start a fire, and while he's trying to keep me away, you can hit him when he's not looking."

The onyx-eyed boy rolled his eyes and placed a hard hand on the ground bellow the water. He brought up a dark gray stone. Haruna took it from him and dried it off. Then she used a kunai to cut off a few inches of her hair. She brought one knee up to use as a table and placed the haire on an exposed piece of skin. The psychic's daughter struck the flint and the kunai together until the hair caught fire. Then, she picked up the flaming ball.

"Hey Kyou, look what I've got!"

The wind chakra user looked toward the girl. The moment he noticed the fire, he began to panic. "Keep it away from Kyou!"

"It's only a tiny fire," the kunoichi prodded, stepping towards her opponent.

"Kyou said, KEEP IT AWAY FROM KYOU!!!"

He sent a large current of air in Haruna's direction, knocking her back into a tree. The green-eyed girl hit her head on a branch and went unconscious. Isamu noticed his opening and snuck behind the crossdresser. Then the earth chakra user whacked him hard on the head, knocking him out.

[Nick Tasogare]

Akemi rushed over to Haruna, making sure she was ok. As she came to, she looked at Kyou, with shock in her face. She had no idea that in the year since they became genin, that he had so much power in that shell of his.

"Good, that's enough for today, you guys were good, and surprisingly have good teamwork." "Absolutely. Why didn't you guys use that on our missions?" Akemi chimed in when she had reached Kyou. they smiled and looked toward the ground. "Ok, I'm going to take Sabra home. All of you rest. You have just a few short days until the Chunin Exams." With that, he vanished, carrying Sabra in his arms.

As he carried her home, she said something. "Sensei. I think you should work with Kin alone before the Exams. She could use some confidence." He looked down at his student. She may seem like a total animal at times, but inside, she was still the sweet little girl he had met several years ago. "I think you're right. I'll search for her after I get you home." She smiled, and passed out from fatigue.

[TheViolletteHeart]

Pretty good...One problem I have is that I don't think Haruna would be surprised. She thinks everything out, and knows the full extent of her teammates. She knew perfectly well that Kyou might hurt her, but if it gave Isamu an opening, she didn't think it was that big of a deal.

[Nick Tasogare]

But because it came from Kyou, the "weak" one ya know. It adds to him and her

[TheViolletteHeart]

Well, she knows he's weak internally, but she also knows he's stronger than he looks on the outside. After all, she was the one trying to convince him he'd do well in the chunin exams. She wasn't just trying to comfort him.

[Nick Tasogare]

Chinsei searched for Kin. He finally found her training. This surprised him, but also made him happy. She had decided to go on. "Kin, come here, I want to show you something. I know you think that you are nothing without your sister, but I'm gong to help you develop your ability so that you don't need to rely on your sister. I want to show you an ability of mine. Ryouchigan!" Chinsei's eyes changed. They became green, and Kin was amazed by them. "Wow!"

knowing=ryouchi

[Moon]

As Tenshi walked though the village he saw Denco. "Hey Denco" Tenshi said. Denco looked up but didn't say a word. "How about me and you have a quik spar no holding back" Then Denco said " fine"
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[Nick Tasogare]

no nobody knows about ryouchigan and im training kin alone moon k? sorry