Naruto Shippuden

Naruto Discussion Forum
Who should win? Be sure to nominate who will reign supreme for this month's Member of the Month!

Go Back   Naruto Discussion Forum > The Great Off-Topica > Creative Corner

Creative Corner Fanfiction? Check. Fan Art? Check. Anything else you can imagine creating? Check, check, check. Just keep those pesky forum rules in mind!

Thread Tools
Old 11-25-2009, 04:29 PM   #1
KaiokenX5 Karo
Chunin Exam Proctor
Join Date: Mar 2009
Location: In your backyard O.o
Posts: 1,543
Rep Power: 0
KaiokenX5 Karo is just chillin' in the village doing D-ranks at this point
Send a message via AIM to KaiokenX5 Karo Send a message via Skype™ to KaiokenX5 Karo
Default Lone Factor

Chapter 1: Meet the crew.
"Alright maggots," Said the General. "this is your first day in the 700, The most elitearmy task force in this part of space, now you'll notice how little numbers we have,that is because there are 5 section to this army, in five different parts of this galaxy. We are the Lone Factor the ones who do the dirty work, the combat force, the solar systems last resort. The reason you are here is because you are of the upperclass, durring your tests we analysed your skill strenghts and weaknesses and decided which section you would be asigned to and only the lucky one got to get in and the even luckier one didn't get into this section. Any questions?"
The squad stood silent. "Good now remember, you fail, we die understood?"
"Yes sir!" Answered the squad.
"Dismissed!" Said the general. Everyone left.
"Alright so uhhh we go to the mess hall now?" Asked Private Benjamin Sjogren.
"I guess so." Answerd his friend Captain Dwane Martin.
"Okay then."

They walk to the giant mess hall with... alot of people inside it.
"Wooooooooaaaaah." they both awed at the giant room.
"Soo uhh I guess your my superior." Ben mutterd.
"Yup!" Dwane answerd.
"HEY!" Someone sitting at a table with 17 other people sitting at it yelled. "Come here!" He yelled. The two shrugged and walked over to the table.
"So you the captain huh?" The man asked.
"Yeah Dwane Martin, you are?"
"Your subbordinate Bond, James Bond. Just kidding James Carter." He answerd holding out his hand. Dwnae reachedout to shake James' hand.
"HI I'M RACHEL, RACHEL JONES!" A woman interrupted. "What's your name?" She asked Ben.
"Ben Sjogren, nice to meet you."
"Heheh you're weird."
"I know."

This is just the slow begining part, trust me it'll get better.
My email:
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

Shika'sgurl: Spectacular GF
They call me, Ben...

To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

Originally Posted by Me
Originally Posted by You
I'm okay with that
KaiokenX5 Karo is offline   Reply With Quote

Currently Active Users Viewing This Thread: 1 (0 members and 1 guests)
Thread Tools

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off

Forum Jump

All times are GMT -7. The time now is 12:37 PM.

Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.2
Copyright ©2000 - 2014, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.