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Old 11-21-2009, 07:27 PM   #1
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Default The chronicles of Teshi Uchiha

I haven't researched this alot but, I have never heard of a female member of the Uchiha clan with the sharingan. So I've decided to make a little fanfic about a female Uchiha girl that has the sharingan.

------ The Chronicles of Tenshi Uchiha----------

"Tenshi! Tenshi! wake up, todays the big day!" called her mother from downstairs. Tenshi groaned and slowly got out of bed. She swiftly put on her clothes and gave her hair a quick brush. She descended the stairs to find breakfast waiting for her. "Thanks mom" she called. Tenshi sat down and started to eat. I hope graduation goes well! Tenshi thought as she ate. Soon her mother reappeared with her waist pouch. Tenshi nodded her thanks and strapped the pouch to her waist. " Good luck, I'll see you later on!" said her mother, pride seeping into her voice. Tenshi gave her one last hug and ran out of the house, towards the Ninja Academy, towards her destiny.

( Just an idea, would anyone bother reading it if I continue?)

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Old 11-22-2009, 11:02 AM   #2
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Chapter 2
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Tenshi arrived at the Ninja Academy with seconds to spare. Her teachers ushered her inside and she took her seat. " Welcome everyone, I hope your excited to graduate!" said the head professor with enthusiasm. Tenshi took a look around, this would be here last time in the academy! " Alright everyone, follow me" said the head teacher as she walked out of the classroom and down a hallway. Everyone got up and followed. Soon they were outside at a field next to the academy.

Tenshi saw that her mother was in the crowd of parents. " Alright kids, lets show our parents what we have learned!" said the head teacher after the noise died down. Suddenly the signal was given, Tenshi made a quick hand seal and made a shadow clone of herself. Everyone around her did the same, and the crowd cheered. " Excellent work!" called all the teachers, " Now its time to get your diplomas."
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Old 11-22-2009, 01:42 PM   #3
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So far this seems to be okay. Just be aware that you are not allowed to use any characters from the Naruto series, or have any of your characters directly related to them. You may also not use the terms "Hokage" or "Leaf Village". Good luck.
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Nice story so far
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Tenshi proudly excepted her headband and diploma, signifying her graduation from the academy. This is exciting! I'll get assigned to a team soon! thought Tenshi with hope. After her classmates received there headbands, the teacher signaled for all the students to open and read their diplomas.

It read, Congratulations Tenshi Uchiha, you have been assigned to squad 7!. " I wonder who else is in squad 7" thought Tenshi aloud. " Did you say squad 7? I'm in that too!" said Rizu Inuzuka. " Cool" said Tenshi smiling, as another classmate walked up. " Squad 7 eh? I've been assigned to that aswell" replied Shimo Koori. Tenshi didn't know much about Shimo, except that he liked to hid his emotions and always appear calm, cool, and collected. " Hi there" said Tenshi trying to be friendly.

Shimo simply nodded and turned his attention back to the instructors. " Well done, all of you!" said the head master with pride. " This graduation is officially ended! please report to your new sensei as soon as possible."

( I know its kind of slow but I'm trying to get to the good stuff"
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Chapter 4
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Tenshi awoke extra early. Today was her first day of training with her new team! She got dressed super fast and had a quick bite to eat. She waved farewell to her mother and ran to the training grounds. As she arrived she noticed a shinobi that was talking with Mizu.

She continued over and suddenly Mizu gazed at her, and signaled for her to walk over. She picked up the pace and then bowed respectfully. As she stood up, she took a good look at the ninja. He had on the standard jounin uniform and prominently displayed his headband on his upper arm. He looked over Tenshi and then finally spoke. " Tenshi Uchiha, welcome to the team!"
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Chapter 5
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The man introduced himself as Rasima. Tenshi nodded and turned her focus onto the person approaching. It was shimo. He swiftly walked over and nodded to no one in particular. " Ok then, lets start our first assessment" said Rasima. " I want you all to try and get past me and reach that stream, and retrieve a blank scroll"

" I want you all to come at me with the intent to kill, If you don't, you won't be able to get past me" said Rasima with finality. He took a few steps back and then took a deep breath. " ok then, lets begin."
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Without warning Rasima charged. Tenshi quickly leaped backwards and did a dodge roll to one side. She retrieved a shuriken and let it fly. Rasima quickly deflected it and did a cartwheel. Mizu made a quick hand seal, " Ninja Art: Beast Transformation!" Mizu swiftly threw a kunai knife at Rasima. As the knife was about to make contact, it morphed into Mizu's dog, Inuta. Inuta tackled Rasima, knocking him to the ground. Inuta bit down hard on Rasima's neck, but it turned out, the dog had bit a log. Growling in frustration, Mizu called his dog back.

From behind, Rasima jumped out of a tree and dashed at Shimo. Shimo made a few hand seals, " Ice Style: Ice Senbon!" Ice needles appeared in Shimo's hand and he launched them at Rasima. Rasima jumped over them and flew at Shimo.
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