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11-13-2009, 02:59 PM
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Terrible Fan fiction story example
Whats wrong=[ ]
[No grabber] I'm a cool kid. I walk into the school. "Yo homo." [no talk] "sup""nothing"I am as fast as a chetah[wrong place for idiom] I'm as happy as a lark [wrong place for similie] "mAN THE SUN IS TO HOT" [No juicy word makes it boring]. You never want your story to be like that
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11-14-2009, 01:11 AM
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Re: Terrible Fan fiction story example
y not wats wrong
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