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Old 12-24-2009, 08:36 PM   #1
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Default Poem Club/ Poem thread

This is the poem club! Here you can talk about poems, make your own, and have fun! Here's mine! I'll post the other member's poems when they make them. :P

My poems
Spoiler:

Poem 1
Spoiler:
Our love is special,
Our mind is one,
you are my life.
You've seen everything I've done

I love your smile,
It's show pure joy
You love me so,
not because of toys.

You are my everything,
Today and beyond,
I remember when we met,
Near that little pond.

You are my love,
I hope that'll stay,
I love you too,
Every single day.

you are mine,
as I am yours
My special someone,
Forever more...
Yeah...got it wrong on the last row...>.<

Poem 2
Spoiler:
Your see my heart,
for what it is,
you know me well
What is this?

You say you care,
I am confused
So far I've seen
That I've been used

You say I'm loved?
But by who,
I don't know why
But I trust you

You see I'm sad
I saw confort
Now what is life?
For it's so short.

You say I'm loved
Again, who is it
I wait for you
I see just grit...

You say that...
God loves me?
But, I'm nothing
can't you see?

Now I see hope,
when I was down
I see the light,
I won't ever frown

You see me,
as something,
for that I will
Continue living.


Poem 3...
Spoiler:

I feel down
I feel pain,
I cause so much
I'm going insane

I see what happened
I hurt my friends
I shall never
See this to thee end

It follows me
Like a monster
Causeing sarrow
I move faster

It doesn't help
I can't run away
I feel this pain
Every single day

I hurt you bad
It hurts me too
I broke everyone
now...I don't want to break you

Stay away,
I'm a curse
Your to innocent
I will leave the universe

I leave for it
To keep you safe
All I want is
To see your smileing face


Poem 4
Spoiler:

Love is great,
So is like,
I see you happy
To my delight!

You say hello,
I say it back,
You tell me,
the things I lack

You are something special,
I can't tell what,
For some reason,
you understand that.

I found the word,
it fits you just right,
You are my friend,
For everyday and night

I think I'm needed,
cause you say so,
I'll stay with you forever,
now lets go


Poem 5
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Today is now,
tomorrow is if,
Yesturday is past
present is a gift.

I find it hard
to forget the past
because of the pain
that I make last

It's hard to see,
tomorrow and beyond,
because right now
is what i'm fond.

Today is now,
and it'll stay,
Because of the life.
We have every day

Present is of joy,
or of surprises and fun
because now is when
you remember everyone.


Haiku 1
Spoiler:

so many people
That I have become friends with
I shall cherise them

Haiku 2
Spoiler:
This is my nindo
to forever love my God
I shall stay follow

NF12:This sounds good to me.^^

Poem 6(this one is not the happiest...XP)
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My eyes show sarrow
my heart feels pain
my friends forgot me
My life is in vain

Today is the day
NarutoFan12 left
No one else cared
I am a immortal mess

I feel just pain
in my broken heart
I will not say
how it all start

They left me
They forgot My life
They will never know
that it stabs me like a knife

I'm done with pain
I'm done with sarrow
I shall start anew
first thing tomorrow.
Haiku 3
Spoiler:
Today is new years
Tomorrow is a new day
2010 here!

NF12: New years haiku! ^^

Haiku 4
Spoiler:

Cherry my dear friend
you're a great poet of,
Haiku and more too!

Haiku 5
Spoiler:

I now wait for it
the answer to my question
I continue to.

NF12:waiting haiku...cause that's what I'm doing.^^

I got the reply,
for my idea for chabox,
sadly disapproved.

NF12:They didn't approve my idea, all well...


ThePurpleChidori's poems!(now dubbed the jokeing poet!/ Co-manager of this thread!)
Spoiler:
Poem 1
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~Bad Bus~

I step into the bus
Paper airplanes everywhere
I don't wanna be stared
Like I really want to care

Big kids listening to iPods
Little kids eating some Dods (or is it Dots, ya little kids?)
People gonna steal your lunch money
Like I really think that's funny

How do I know all this
I hear them talk their dissy plan
And then there's this kid named Gus
But how would I know, because I DON'T RIDE THE BUS!

Poem 2
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~Laziness is good. Work is bad.~

*Codename for "puke" xD

Work, I hate work
It makes me want to bork*
In my own roasted pork
While I read Mr. Spork

Lazy, I love Lazy
It get things done for me
Eating my own sweet beans
Lazing around the T.V. (hold out the V if you sing this. xDDDD)

Work, I hate work
It never gets things done
Well, sometimes, but not right now
Because I'm too busy bowing to Mr. Pow

Lazy, I love Lazy,
I get to hang with Daisy
Complete some Maze-y
Wait, is this why I got an F...?

Work, I think I understand it
But it still kinda sucks either way. xDDD

joke Haiku 1
Spoiler:
Haiku is fun to
Write all the time well fill space
I exploited system

joke Haiku 2
Spoiler:
Long time no see dood
I kind of like this dood-et
Do you fill space fill

Haiku 1
Spoiler:

Don't let this thread die
Because I really like it
Please keep it alive

Haiku 2
Spoiler:

I am so greatful
For my so wonderful life
Isn't that right guys?

Haiku 3
Spoiler:

Life is so awesome
The Beautiful Flowers
So Greatful for life



cherryflower's poems!(I dubbed now the Haiku Girl! ^^)
Spoiler:

Haiku 1
Spoiler:

Sounds of happiness
now fill my ears so greatly
enjoy it or not


Poem 1
Spoiler:

Flowing ever so gentally
Why oh why
The birds they soar
They fly!

The nature
The love
the happpiness
Flying like a dove

Oh I wish I could fly
The bueatiful sound
But alas
I am here, stuck on the ground.

Haiku 2
Spoiler:

Your mind I will read
You will not stop me Hehe
I know all secertes

Haiku 3
Spoiler:

your poem is awesome
very great indeed I say
A wonderful poem

Haiku 4
Spoiler:

Completely sorry
About the gender mistake
Will call you a she

Haiku 5
Spoiler:
Another person
That Also writes in haikus
I am now happy

Haiku 6
Spoiler:
Yes I love Haikus
And then what does Exploited mean?
Haikus are veary fun

haiku 7
Spoiler:
Um It is spelled dude
And it is also dudette
Am I right or not?

Haiku 8
Spoiler:

Oh thats a good one
All about beatiful things
Nature is awesome

Haiku 9
Spoiler:
Finally found it
Because On this computer
Refreash button strange

haiku 10
Spoiler:

Uh tea or coffe
Will you choose tea or coffe?
And I like them both

haiku 11
Spoiler:
Okay AR K
What about akatsuki
or maby rocks hmm?

haiku 12
Spoiler:

Lol, hard work
you are not lazy I guess
Oops This is a poem

haiku 13
Spoiler:
No duh let us stop
We don't want to write too much
let's be nice to her

Haiku 14
Spoiler:

Fly butterfly go
I may never see you now
But you are happy

Haiku 15
Spoiler:
Yes 2,000 posts!
I am very happy now
Yay yay yay yay yay

Poem 2
Spoiler:
Peace
love
Joy
happiness

What is this fighting,
when will it end?
Can't there be peace.... Happiness?
I will fight to protect the ones I love
and mabey one day....
the hatred will end.

Poem 3
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The sound...
It's ringing in m ears
when will it end?

It sounds of pain misery.... what is causeing this
I try to block it out
But it dosen't work
What is wrong with me

Outside I look like a monster,
but inside me is a heart of gold
why...
oh why....
don't people accept me?

Haiku 15
Spoiler:
Why thank you so much
Rember I can help too
Writeing is so fun

haiku 16
Spoiler:
A rather sad poem
but it is still rather good
do not forget hope

haiku 17
Spoiler:
It's fine, i don't mind
Sad, happy, the Haiku is great
wich story is it?

poem 4
Spoiler:
I think anyone can join
I'm just sayin
You are a song writer?
I tried writeing songs this winter
They where crappy
so i'm not happy


haiku 18
Spoiler:
A shimmering star
I gaze upon your beauty
Makeing the night bright

Haiku 19
Spoiler:

Rose petals , soft, sweet
Darling soft and sweet smelling
wonders of a rose

Haiku 20
Spoiler:

Well I do not drink
I am not even of age
So I can't drink yet.

Haiku 21
Spoiler:

I do like coffe
Tea is ok, I must say
beautiful blossoms.

Haiku 22
Spoiler:

Think pink I must say
beautiful blossoms flowing
glideing to the ground

Haiku 23
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ding dong goes the bell
school is out, finally done
here comes summer break!

Poem 5
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The way the sun sets
The way it may rise
THe breeze in the air
the coulds in the sky
the bird glideding
ever so close

Oh how I wish
to be able to soar
Like those birds
they glide
Over mountians
plains
and seas

Oh I wish
A bird
I could be.

Haiku 24
Spoiler:
Now it is over
so I am not going back
Say good bye to them

Haiku 25
Spoiler:
I cannot write now
I cannot Think of a poem
I have poet block

Haiku 26
Spoiler:

I feel like writeing
Wich is quite normal i guess
but what to write though

Haiku 27
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I really love to write
I have many ideas
But I feel so sick

Haiku 28
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Away from the rest
it is quiet yet peaceful
now toubles are gone

Haiku 29
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all I see are squares
I cannot tell what it means
type normaly please

poem 6
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Why am I here
Where am I now
It's not the time to think
to worry
my fears are gone
but this ache in my heart
it won't go away
It's hurting me
so badly
so terrible....
I see things to happen
things to come
Why... Why must it be me
I am realizeing
I am rembering
The life i lived
I was mean.
selfish
I never knew where i was going...
but now.... I can't die like this...
I need a second chance
to live the life I always wanted.

The days move by slow
my hope getting smaller
What have I become?
What will I be?
I have had my second chance...
but I destroyed it
Along with everything elese that I love.
If I could redo it all...
This time,
This time for sure!
I will obey
listen
live
learn
I will be someone I always wanted to be no looking back
I will take the leap of a lifetime
a life full of joy
I will survive.

Ten years have passed
My life flashed Before my eyes
I tried to change
But it didn't work
... I am still the monster
This time I promise
This time I will!
but is it too late
to try again
Have I wasted my chance
oh the pain in my heart
the aches
the pains
I cannot help but wonder
If I made the right choice
If i had chosen the right path
mabey i wouldn't be in all of this pain
Maby i would live, love, be happy for once
but no,
I have made my choice
no turning back
I will try harder this time
to fully understand
who I am
and mabey just mabey
One day i will feel like a butterfly
Flying in the spring air
my troubles behind me
Like the day I have always dreamed of.

Haiku 30
Spoiler:
thank you naruto
need to belive in myself
but It is just hard

Poem 7
Spoiler:
freedom

I never agree with you
And I don't disagree either
I make up my mind
stick to what I think
even if others dissagree
I am myself
I make my own diecions
no one can control me
I control myself.

Poem 8
Spoiler:
My horrible rythemeing poem

oh i can not write a poem
so I drop my sharp pencil
and pick up a comb
And look in the mirrior

I comb threw my hair
wondering why my rythemeing
sounds like that of a bear
I cannot rythem

oh but I do not care
I can dance
I can eat a pear
while at the same time juggleing three scarfs

in that time
I will not think
of a rythem
or care

But I know
That my rytheing is bad
My hope on rytheming is low
but i continue

As you may know, I cannot rythem to save my life
Wich includes the fact that i cannot rap
you might as well stab me with a knife
for I cannot rythem

I feel like i'm the only one
everyone else can write these bueatiful poems that rytheme
and i just sit there and stare at the sun
wishing i had such talent as them

oh i wish I could rythem even if it's just cat and hat
but I cannot even think of a word to rytheme with
might as hit me on the head with a bat
Wait a minute... I just rythemed... I just wrote a rytheming poem on how I cannot rytheme... Irony

Poem 8
Spoiler:
Time

This world spins round and round
Sometimes we want to go back
But we are bound
to keep going forward
poem 9
Spoiler:

Spring comes and goes
the air was fresh
and gentale as a rose,
oh the many wonders of the world
poem 10
Spoiler:

teardrops run
down my frost bitten face
if only the sun
would come with it's joyful rays

The sorrow the pain
oh all of these troubles
Make me insaine
wishing for a better day

Days to come
Days that went
And now my heart feels numb
from all this sorrow and pain

All that's left is hope
I cannot do anything more
So I just sit in a corner and mope
What is left of my life?
poem 11
Spoiler:
silver running streaks
in the clouds oh so high
along the mountain peaks
In the fresh morning day

Glistening stars
past the high mountain peaks
as far away as mars
in the cold auttum night


Jenny's poems!
Spoiler:
Poem 1
Spoiler:

I have a dog
His name's Jerry,
He is all white
and harry

He is so sweet,
and so cute
Even though,
I wish he was on mute

He he were human,
i can only imagine,
what kind of personality,
He'll have in him

Jerry, Jerry,
All white
and harry,
Try not to get in any fights

haiku 1
Spoiler:
I'm not walkable
I'm not very gracefull,too
Falling is so me.

I tried..I'm not good at haikus to much...^^

haiku 2
Spoiler:
E.R.I.C.A. (this is each letter)
That is my awsome first name
I hate it so much

Poem 2
Spoiler:

~Bless Your Heart and Smile~

A smile, a smile
a beautiful gift
from upon ones face
makes anothers spirits lift

a smile is worth
a million dollars
its a sweet thing
and sometimes makes people hollar

bless your heart
it makes you shine
shine shine shine
like a star so fine

it gives a light
of pure enjoyment
a loving feeling
of a beautiful moment



Nābris's poems!
Spoiler:
Poem 1/Christmas poem
Spoiler:
Christmas is tomorrow.
Or, for some, it's today.
And we know this busy holiday
can cause unfortunate delay.

I shall be busy tomorrow.
Celebrating, certainly.
So will you accept my Christmas wishes
just a tad bit early?

Merry Christmas; Happy New Years; Happy Holidays to you awesome, awesome people.


Otacon's poems!
Spoiler:
Frestyle poem 1
Spoiler:
Poetry is like a flower, lavender or rose
delecate or thorns, blood red in prose
spiteful or sincere, which one to hold close
to ones heart in the springtime, vibrant or morose
for as we go foward, we reap what we sowe
like a petal flowing slowly, from water to snow
and as we grow colder, do we frost on our soul
or remember that flower, what we had is what we know

haiku 1
Spoiler:
crescent moon I see
we can embrace in my dreams
vivacious it seems

haiku 2
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still water shines blue
a frozen lake cracks in two
shards of ice Haku

haiku 3
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A picture in full
is it worth one thousand words?
a haiku says more

Haiku 4
Spoiler:

burrow deeper friend
away from accusations
hiding is alright


akatsukirocks poems![SPOILER] Haiku 1
Spoiler:
Beautiful View

Watching blossoms fall
Under the starry night sky
A wonderful view

haiku 2
Spoiler:
dreams are reality
Reality are fake dreams
i can not tell which

Haiku 3
Spoiler:
this thread has transformed
its now a haiku tea place
would u like some tea

Haiku 4
Spoiler:
oh cherryflower
u can call me AR k?
ur fine with that right?

haiku 5
Spoiler:
i like tea better
what kind of tea do u like?
i like jasmine tea

haiku 6
Spoiler:
we are haiku fans
we say anything as haiku
wait this is a poem...

haiku 7
Spoiler:
thats was a haiku
i thought naru was a girl
i should stop for now

Poem 2
Spoiler:
More Darkness

lost in this world
my heart fades away
so much darkness
pain and sadness
why so insane?
the world's so warped
if this is the truth
the world is darkness

haiku 8
Spoiler:
unwavering heart
protect those who are precious
his shinobi way

poem 3
Spoiler:
Key To the Light Door

Hehe, it's all lies
The world is a shadow
Nothing but fakes
All will disappear
What is eternal?
Only what's hidden
I have a key
Open a door of light
Who is behind you?[/

Haiku 9
Spoiler:
Summer Festival

the festival's here!
the time to wear kimonos
ahh the ice cone's great!

Poem 4
Spoiler:
That Boy

Twilight
Shines for a moment
Won't leave my head
Sparkling eyes
Hurts more then death
Endless sorrow
Disappear in darkness

Poem 5
Spoiler:
Masks of People

Everyone wears mask...
they dont show their true feelings
they lie to themselves about what they think
i never told anything to my folks
i just pretend that nothing happened
but inside i,
Scream!
Cry!
but no one heard me...
the mask i put on hides my true self
selfish, wanted
is that truly how i am?
the mask people puts on
could it hide a deeper secret?[/

Poem 6
Spoiler:
The Sunset

The boy i met the other day
his hair was red and his smile was beautiful...
we met at a hill that showed the sea in the afternoon
the area was bathed in the Orange light
the water its burning with the color red
he smiled and said that he have no regrets...
its so beautiful
he could just stare at the scenery forever...
when i saw him i knew that he had a golden soul..

Poem 7
Spoiler:
the place is filled with despair
the souls of everyone here is dead
Kill! Destroy! Break! Rebel! Revenge! Money!
this is what they are thinking
everyone is!
i miss everyone!
the way they used to be!
Nice! Kind! Loving!
but now its changed...

poem 8
Spoiler:
when you feel like your trapped in enteral darkness
if you feel like your in a sea of sadness
even you feel like there's no hope...
don't ever give up!
the light of hope will appear though the darkness
the light of happiness will shine though the sea of sadness!
the light from your friends will show you that there is hope!
haiku 10
Spoiler:

The Star Filled Sky

The Starry Night Sky
It Glistens From Where I Sit
I'll Wish On A Star...

Haiku 11
Spoiler:
Sakura Blossoms
falling, landing on my hair
the sweet scent of it

Haiku 12
Spoiler:
ah drinking sake
under the cherry blossoms
its so refreshing

Haiku 13
Spoiler:
sigh so under aged
well u can enjoy tea too
under the blossoms

Haiku 14
Spoiler:
also agree
bout the beautiful blossoms
a nice shade of pink

Haiku 15
Spoiler:
seeing the blossoms
calms me every time i look
such a pretty sight

Haiku 16
Spoiler:
no its almost time
for me to say farewell now
i must go bye now

Haiku 16
Spoiler:
Crimson falling Leaves
Beauty it has in a place
Burning With Crimson

Haiku 17
Spoiler:

Go peace loving bird
you'll spread joy and happiness
To living thing now

Haiku 18
Spoiler:
Poet block is bad
i dont like that thing a lot
i can't read a poem

Haiku 19
Spoiler:
Whats ur favorite thing?
write about it. describe it
it will come up soon

Haiku 20
Spoiler:

True Beauty of Art
it depends on each person
For me, its a BLAST!

Haiku 21(this is in japanese)
Spoiler:
佐倉は活気付く
浮遊物私の為コップに
それはそれをよく味がさせる

Haiku 22
Spoiler:
Sakura Blossoms
Glides in my Sake Bottle
it tastes better now

Haiku 23
Spoiler:
We Really Don't know
its fun with other people
i just feel like it

Haiku 24
Spoiler:
Haiku is my life
the way this haiku goes now
its about something

Haiku 25(another japanese one)
Spoiler:
動揺しない中心
貴重である人を保護しなさい
彼のshinobiの方法

Haiku 26
Spoiler:

nindos are special
they tell us how shinobi,
live their life each day

Haiku 27
Spoiler:
The Samurai Blade
It Can Through Anything
Beauty Of The Blade

Haiku 28
Spoiler:

Dancing Samurai
Ha-Ra-Ki-Ri by yourself!
its a awesome song

Haiku 29
Spoiler:
Blue Lotus blossoms in
the the dirty unclear water
It shows hope to us

Haiku 30
Spoiler:

a haiku somehow
Captures the heart of people
poetic yet calm

Poem 9[SPOILER]
If it is what you desire
I can be like an obedient dog
With a cord, a rope, or a chain
I
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Poem 3...
Spoiler:

I feel down
I feel pain,
I cause so much
I'm going insane

I see what happened
I hurt my friends
I shall never
See this to thee end

It follows me
Like a monster
Causeing sarrow
I move faster

It doesn't help
I can't run away
I feel this pain
Every single day

I hurt you bad
It hurts me too
I broke everyone
now...I don't want to break you

Stay away,
I'm a curse
Your to innocent
I will leave the universe

I leave for it
To keep you safe
All I want is
To see your smileing face
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poem 3...

I feel down
i feel pain,
i cause so much
i'm going insane

i see what happened
i hurt my friends
i shall never
see this to thee end

it follows me
like a monster
causeing sarrow
i move faster

it doesn't help
i can't run away
i feel this pain
every single day

i hurt you bad
it hurts me too
i broke everyone
now...i don't want to break you

stay away,
i'm a curse
your to innocent
i will leave the universe

i leave for it
to keep you safe
all i want is
to see your smiling face
Y SO EMO LOL?
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Y SO EMO LOL?
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@ CCS: I write what I feel, I can't never change that...
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I liked them. They showed true emotion. Looks like you have quite a knack for writing poems. ^_^ Make sure to tell/show me any new ones you write.
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Poem 4
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Love is great,
So is like,
I see you happy
To my delight!

You say hello,
I say it back,
You tell me,
the things I lack

You are something special,
I can't tell what,
For some reason,
you understand that.

I found the word,
it fits you just right,
You are my friend,
For everyday and night

I think I'm needed,
cause you say so,
I'll stay with you forever,
now lets go


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Today is now,
tomorrow is if,
Yesturday is past
present is a gift.

I find it hard
to forget the past
because of the pain
that I make last

It's hard to see,
tomorrow and beyond,
because right now
is what i'm fond.

Today is now,
and it'll stay,
Because of the life.
We have every day

Present is of joy,
or of surprises and fun
because now is when
you remember everyone.

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Those are good poems!
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Those are good poems!
Thanks, I edited number five. ^^ I'm makeing six soon.
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These are pretty good, you show lots of potential.
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Oooh, they are soo cool. I like em, they're soo good...write more, please..^_^
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These are pretty good, you show lots of potential.
thank you.^^
@jenny: Thank you too. I will make more.
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I have some poems but not-as-long. I made a hilarious one about the bus once. xD
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I have some poems but not-as-long. I made a hilarious one about the bus once. xD
Thats cool. You can post them here if you want. I won't mind.^^ I might make this a club even.
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I might post some poems eventually
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May I join this club? I find your poems to be quite good. I'd love to hear some more.
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I re-named the thread.
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Thats cool. You can post them here if you want. I won't mind.^^ I might make this a club even.
lol Cool! I have this one poem, that's really funny! ^__^
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Add me to your Club. I can try to remake my bus one, but I have to find it again to really have the funny act.

Okay, here goes nothing.

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~Bad Bus~

I step into the bus
Paper airplanes everywhere
I don't wanna be stared
Like I really want to care

Big kids listening to iPods
Little kids eating some Dods (or is it Dots, ya little kids?)
People gonna steal your lunch money
Like I really think that's funny

How do I know all this
I hear them talk their dissy plan
And then there's this kid named Gus
But how would I know, because I DON'T RIDE THE BUS!


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lol Cool! I have this one poem, that's really funny! ^__^
Awesome, go ahead and post it if you want! I'll add you to the mamber list too!
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