Unknown Betrayal

[takuya]

We are accepting people into this fanfic,but you must send us(Riku and I) a sample of your writing to showcase your skills to us.Edit:We already have the maximum amount of people we are letting for now.We may increase the limit in the future or if someone drops from the story we might take someone else in.
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It had been two years since that threaded event.Only Akira's cousin and him survived due to them being on a mission at the time.Their friends,their family,their home had all been destroyed.They only had each other."Akira,I'm hungry."said Shin.This was Akira's cousin,Shin.He had spiky brown hair and wore a plain back shirt under his white,zip-up vest that bore their clan symbol on the back.He normally wore his black shorts and keep his Hidden Tree Village headband on his forehead at all times.The white and black on him seemed to make up his light brown skin,which Akira never let him forget.They both had the same colored skin and light brown pupils,they even were the same age.

Akira was 5'9,only an inch taller than Shin.He wore a sleeveless red and white shirt,tannish,and black ninja shoes like his cousin,Shin,Ryuu being his last name and Sora being Akira's last name.His pure white hair was shaggy and reached his neck like his cousin's.Neither of their features were visible at the moment due to the black cloaks they wore to shield themselves from the heavy downpour of rain."I know."replied Akira."I'm cold too."

"I know."replied Akira again."I'm hungry also."said Shin,in an attempt to annoy his cousin."I know."replied Akira for the third time,starting to get ticked off."I want a warm bed to lay in too.""I know,d*mmit!"said Akira,finally whacking his cousin on the head."Just shut the h*ll up and keep walking."They continued to walk through the downpour until they discovered an inn."Finally."said Shin with a sigh."My d*mn feet are aching."The two cousins both sped off into the inn to rest their aching bones.

We're going to be using * until we find out what cuss words we can use without getting infracted and which ones need *.So how did you all like the intro,please comment.

[cherryflower]

cool, I'll send you and Riku a sample of writeing and a character person.

[takuya]

Okay,but you'll have to come in a bit later since we're only at the intro.We could have you come in now at the inn if you get accepted in.Also include your character's age,personality,clothing,height,weight(optional),a nd if you want them to be good or evil.

[cherryflower]

OK! I'll send in a discrption for a person who works at an inn. Also What's Riku's full user name because, it won't send it to a person named Riku.

[takuya]

Well your person doesn't have to necessarily work at the end they can be at the inn to rest or something so that they can have a little more action in the story.A person at the inn probably wouldn't be all that exciting.His full username is Sensei: Riku Arashi,put it in like that and it should work or give you a suggestion of users.

[cherryflower]

Okay, But I have an Idea. She could be an ex-crimanal who is working at an inn so she won't be discovered. or something.

[takuya]

Okay,we all can discuss it in pm if you get accepted so we don't spoil anything.Also if I allow you in it may take awhile for Riku to read your writing sample since I think he's away from his keyboard at the moment since his last activity was at 3:22 PM my time.

[Sensei : Riku Arashi]

Riku is back

[takuya]

Good,now all we need is for Cherry's writing sample to be send.

[Sensei : Riku Arashi]

The two cousins entered into the in, as they walked through lobby water dropped onto the floor. Shin moved to the front desk first," We need a room atleast for a day," said Shin, to the lady behind the counter. "Please sign this paper, and your room will be number 67," said the lady behind the counter. Shin and Akira signed their names, then they walked up the stairs into their room. Shin and Akira removed their cloaks and they began to lay on their bed.

[takuya]

"Hell no,we're not sharing a bed.""You idiot,there's a bedroom right through that door."said Shin,bearing a grin on his face.Akira swiftly picked up a pillow lying on the bed then threw it at Shin,hitting him in the face."Who are you calling idiot when I'm the leader of this group?"Shin left this question unanswered.After a few silent minutes the spiky haired teenager spoke."I'm hungry.""There should be a dining room downstairs."responded the other teen."I saw a bunch of people walking inside a room."

The pure white haired boy opened the door and bounded down the staircase;Shin followed at his heels.The two cousins mouths' gapped open at the sight of the spacious dining room.The floor was a sparkling gold with a light brown wall;potted plants running along its side.The ceiling stood 14ft above their heads with crystal chandeliers hanging down from the ceiling to provide lights.The ceiling was a dark brown with yellow strips crisscrossing along it.

The two sat down at a large,brown wooden table.A beautiful girl then strode over to them.She wore a light blue kimono with pink flowers scattered around the kimono;the kimono also had a neat gold trimming.The girl had a sweet face and long blonde hair that made he blue eyes gleam."May I take your order?"she asked with a sweet voice."My cousin and I both would like an order of lobster."said Shin,studying the girl's features."Coming right up."replied the girl.Shin's eyes were on the girl,but the girl's eyes were on Akira.After she went into the kitchen,Shin nudged his cousin in the elbow."I guess I just have that luck with girls."chuckled Akira."Damn you."

Even from their position at the table the two could hear the sound of someone yelling,"Ayame,take this order to those two at the far end of the table!"The voice sounded the same as the girl from before."I'm on it."responded an unfamiliar voice.A short girl appeared from the kitchen doors,bearing two plates in each hand.The girl called Ayame couldn't have been more than 4'7.She had very long,black hair that was kept in a ponytail with a few bangs hanging over her face.She wore a dark,purple kimono with black flowers decorating it."Here's your order."said the girl, sweetly as she reached their end of the table.Just as the girl was out of earshot,Akira whispered into Shin's ear,"Doesn't she seem familiar?"

The two caught the girl just as she finished her shift.She noticed them approaching as she stepped outside the dining room."Huh,what is it?"she said,sounding a bit annoyed;probably eager to rest for the rest of the day."Do you know a place we can train?"said the spiky haired boy."Yeah,I can lead you two to it."She motioned for them to follow her up a set of stairs.As they climbed the stairs they continued to talk."Mind being referee?"said Akira."I was hoping to rest,but okay."

"So your name's Ayame?We heard the blonde girl calling someone that then you stepped out from the kitchen."said Shin,trying to not to let onto anything."Yes,that's me."said Ayame,now becoming weary.She opened a door that revealed a brightly lit,bare room with white walls."So you're Ayame the thief then."said Akira,sounding so nonchalant.From a place that God doesn't even know where,the girl pulled out a poisoned needle and threw it at Akira's head.The two cousins then retreated to the other side of the room."You will not leave here knowing that information."said Ayame in a menacing tone."This place will be your deathbeds!"

[cherryflower]

I'm guessing I can post now.

Ayame was annoyed, and to belive Someone had actualy reconized her, But then again her shortness was easily reconizable. People had called her kid and brat because of her size. That had mad her temper veary short, and would not hesitate to kill. The black haired girl saw that he had doged the needle, just great she thought... Ninja. She had hated ninja, even though her parents were ninja, she always had hated the trained warriors they were the ones that had almost killed her, they were the ones that forced her to go into hideing.....

The inn worker then threw two groups of ten poisonous needles at each of the boys heads. She glared when they duo somehow doged them, makeing the needles covered in herbal posion fly threw the wall, as if it was nothing. AS the two doged seperate ways. now running opposite directions, Ayame just stood there, and pulled out a small fan. It was purple with black flowers on it. The dark blue eyed girl then fanned herself with the fan and waited until the two stopped in confusion after she said. "There, enough batlle pratice for today."

As the two cousion stood there, confused. Ayame removed a wodden part of the fan reveling a sharp metal blade, Covered in the same herbal poison and swung it at Shin. As the spikey haired boy saw the blade comeing twords him, he knocked her to the floor by leg sweeping her. "I thought you said you were going to kill us." one of the boys said. But Ayame did not know wich one, for she was looking down in defet.

The short girl looked up at the duo, towering over her. And glared. "What do you want? What did I do to you? All I want to do is get the h**l out of this Inn, But you can see there is a bit of a problem of me being killed or captured. unless your blind." she Sneered. still glareing at the two with her dark blue eyes.

Tell me if you want me to edit any thing out. Also can you send me a PM desribeing Arika and shin. With their attacks and stuff.

[Sensei : Riku Arashi]

"Hmm, that seems like a problem,but we have an idea," said Akira."What is ," asked Ayame. Her eyes glared at Akira, it felt that she was glaring at Akira's soul waiting for him to slip up." We can escape out of the Magma Country, and we can all escape to any other country, where you aren't known of.

"We are in the heart of the Magma Country, and you expect us to get out with, a known criminal," shouted Shin.

"Yeah, you gotta better idea," blasted Akira."

"Fine its better than staying here forever," Ayame interrupted.

"Then we leave tomorrow night, we must travel at night so Ayame doesn't get caught," replied Akira.

[cherryflower]

Ayame, Looked at them. She wan't sure she could trusrt them, but it was her only chance. The black haired girl sighed. She had no choice.

"Okay, It's settled. One more day at this place, and I'm free." She then smiled at the two, stood up and walked out of the door. Ayame hurried to her room, she had a backpack already filled with all of her personal belongings incase she ever got the chance to leave. She also wouldn't have to wear this stupid uniform anymore she thought. Ayame then sat down on her bed, excited for the day she would escape.

[takuya]

The two cousins started up the stairs to their room."Are you sure we can trust her?"said Shin."Heh,I didn't know you got worried,Shin,you're more of the carefree type.As for trusting her,I don't know about that yet,but she might prove to be a valuable ally.Unlike you,when we fought her I was focusing on her battle capabilities."said Akira.

Shin hated when his cousin got like this."I was focusing!"claimed Shin angrily."On her breast don't count."said Akira as he twisted the doorknob leading to their room."What do you take me for,a pervert?"mumbled Shin as he stepped into the room."It was just a joke.Now get some rest."The two went into their respective rooms,settling in for the night.

Both Akira and Shin woke early the next day,to a knock on the door.A sleepy Akira answered the door,and stared bewildered at what he saw."How the hell-"started Akira."I work here,duh.I found out your room number from the woman at the front desk."Shin got out of bed to find a fully dressed Ayame."What are you even doing here so early?"said Shin,eyes half-closed and half-asleep."We're not going to travel until night."Ayame set her gaze on Shin.She looked at him look he had went crazy.

"Well I said I work here,but I quit.I'm going to spend all day learning about you two,I'm not going to travel with people I don't know.For all I know you might try to turn me in for the reward money as I sleep.Or you could try to kill me in my sleep.So we're spending all day together until we set out and that's final.Now get dressed."The black haired girl pushed the two into the room then stood outside the door.

[MasterOfPain]

Originally Posted by takuya

Okay,but you'll have to come in a bit later since we're only at the intro.We could have you come in now at the inn if you get accepted in.Also include your character's age,personality,clothing,height,weight(optional),a nd if you want them to be good or evil.

i'll do this

[takuya]

Originally Posted by MasterOfPain

i'll do this

Sorry,but we're only having four people right now.The fourth person already got accepted in.We might accept you in if one of us leaves or we decide to increase the limit of people.

[cherryflower]

Ayame leaned against the white wall waiting for the duo to get ready. The dark haired girl was glad she was able to leave this dreaded place, and go to the real world.... it was like a prision in the so called 'kind, good quality Inn' Ayame frowned, to make it even worse, she had to wear a uniform.... and the uniform just had to be a kinmono. The short girl was glad though because now that she quit working here she could dress how ever she wanted. No more stupid kinmonos she thought.

The dark haired girl looked down at her outfit, and was pleased with it. Much better than the uniform she was fored to wear. Ayame was wearing two dark purple earings in each ear, and the Kuni necklace she had gotten from her parents. She also was wearing a white tee-shirt with a v-neck collar. The shirt has a small black rose in the corner of it. She then had a dark purple jaket over it. Along with a grey mini skirt, with netting underneath, the netting going to her knees. She also was wearing regular, black, ninja shoes, even though she hated the ninjas. Ayame then looked at her finger nails wich were painted dark purple. They sure didn't allow that when she was an employee here. She thought.

After a few minutes The girl had grown tired of waiteing. "hurry up!" she shouted, annoyed by the two.

[Chidori stream]

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[Sensei : Riku Arashi]

The two cousins rushed at of their room when they heard Ayame annoyed roar."So where should we go first," asked Shin? "I say we should go to the ramen shop, then head to the nearest training field," Akira asserted.

The two cousins and the dark haired girl headed to the small hovel of a ramen shop. The all decided to order the average ramen. They soon learned this wasn't your regular ramen, it tasted as if the were royalty the sweet rich a creamy ramen ran down their throats. Shin felt he had gone to heaven, Akira thought he was in love, and Ayame felt she was in a palace.